Deepa & Kailash FF - *COMPLETED* - Page 19

Apadiya vishiyam. 😉 Ipo no confusion. Thank you for clarifying.
Pat

lols! ok BK, now i understand why you have that avatar. well, i hate her and i will never insult my dignity by having anything in my siggie or avi that is related to her.😆😆😆 even if she looks 'Pretty'. 🤢🤢🤢

anyways, let's move on to better things. here is my latest chapter.

CHAPTER 31

deepa was hopping mad. ajay had forced himself upon her & deepa never fancied guys who used force against women. ajay had looked shocked as she slapped him. he managed to regain his composure. "deepa.. I'm sorry. please don't get angry." he pleaded softly. "get out. I said get out!" she shouted at him. ajay looked at her for a moment, pleading with his eyes but when he realised that deepa wasn't going to forgive him, he left with his head down. she picked up the phone & dialled his number. "kailash, I need to speak to you. NOW." she insisted & hung up.

kailash knew something was wrong because deepa sounded hassled. before he could ask her what the matter was, she hung up. not even wasting one minute, kailash rushed over to deepa's apartment. her apartment door was slightly ajar & kailash pushed it open. he found deepa sitting on her sofa looking irritated. "deepa, what happened?" he asked her worriedly. as deepa related the entire morning events to kailash, she saw his face changing. "why that scum! I am going to punch the daylights out of him!" kailash angrily prepared to leave when deepa stopped him. "kailash, why are getting so angry? calm down." she soothed him sweetly. kailash immediately calmed down & smiled back at her. "so will you treat me to breakfast? I have no mood to eat the French toast that ajay bought me." she shuddered at the thought. kailash happily obliged. "wait for me till I get changed." deepa told him. "are you sure you don't want me to come too? just for your safety." he winked at her naughtily. deepa smacked him & went into the room but she didn't lock the door.

later on in the car, kailash was itching to question deepa about the unlocked door. "why didn't you lock the door?" he asked her curiously. "because I turst you kailash. I trust you more than myself. that night when I invited you over to my apartment, you could have easily crossed your limits. instead you just held me & said that I would make a great mum. how could you do something bad?" deepa replied sweetly. kailash felt all warm & fuzzy that deepa trusted him to that extent. after breakfast, kailash dropped deepa back home & went on to his shop. to his surprise, he found someone waiting at the door for him. "it's too early for customers. who can it be?" kailash wondered seriously. as he came closer, he realised that the person was ajay. wanting to give him a piece of his mind, kailash hastily strolled towards him.

hope this chapter was good. if you guys don't want adhi to play ajay, can you all suggest another person for it? deepak? or how about srikumar? let me know all your suggestions.😃 thankoo!

~ leena 😉

Deepak would be fine with me. A chaper with good continuity and I liked it. I hope Kailash give a good punch to Ajay in the next chapter.

Thanks leena, you are doing great.

Pat

Originally posted by: patraj

Deepak would be fine with me. A chaper with good continuity and I liked it. I hope Kailash give a good punch to Ajay in the next chapter.

Thanks leena, you are doing great.

Pat

pat, u just gave me a wonderful idea! if deepak is ajay and he gives up his love in the end, i can make him get together with preethi who is kailash's friend! whohoo!

Great! Glad to be of help. Yetho enal mudinchathu ithan. Kallakunga ma.

Pat

Ada kadavule, ithu yen pa. Any reason why you don't like happy ending?

Pat

Oh yeah, I want Happy endings!!!!!
the est thing i like abt our fan fictions, it is good to read, pleasant unlike BORING Mega serials.
Jiggily (I like calling you that), don't listen to BK 😛 , Let us all be happy with "Living Happily ever after".

Way to go!! Good chapter.

Leena, beautiful chapter. Preethi and Ajay together is very nice too. I also like happy endings.

It was a good chapter Leena.

I aslo like happy ending 😳

Originally posted by: Wingy

Oh yeah, I want Happy endings!!!!!
the est thing i like abt our fan fictions, it is good to read, pleasant unlike BORING Mega serials.
Jiggily (I like calling you that), don't listen to BK 😛 , Let us all be happy with "Living Happily ever after".

Way to go!! Good chapter.

thanks for ur comments wingy. lots of people like to call me jiggly. u can call me that too, no problem.😃

thanks a lot for ur comments pple! deepak shall be my new ajay.😃 BK, why do u fancy sad endings? at least in this fanfic let there be happiness.😃

CHAPTER 32

before kailash could scold ajay for what he did that morning, ajay cut in. "listen to me first kailash. I know deepa probably told you about what happened today morning. I just couldn't help myself. please apologise to her for me." he pleaded with kailash pitifully. kailash felt his anger residing, it seemed like ajay was truly remorseful. kailash invited him into his shop. "look man, I hope you aren't taking me wrong." ajay told kailash with a tinge of embarrassment. kailash assured him that it was all cool between them & ajay left with a smile on his face. kailash realised that now he had a more tougher job of convincing deepa that ajay was truly sorry.

"why did you ask me out for lunch? missed me so soon?" deepa teased kailash with a smile on her cute face. kailash took a deep breath & related ajay's meeting with him at his shop. deepa's smiling face changed into that of pure irritation. "kailash are you actually supporting ajay in this matter? he forced himself upon me. and ur taking his side??" she almost shouted in anger. "cool down deepa. I was just trying to.." kailash started but deepa cut him off. "please kailash. I don't want to listen to you right now." she stalked out of the restaurant. kailash sighed tiredly, deepa could be really difficult when she wanted to. the entire afternoon kailash tried to reach deepa but she had switched off her cell. "such a stubborn girl! I wonder how much her husband is going to suffer?" kailash wondered to himself & burst out laughing.

deepa was angry with kailash. he was supporting ajay instead of her. in a way deepa felt a little annoyed that kailash wasn't angry at ajay. "does that mean that he is losing interest in me?" she thought seriously. deepa knew that kailash would try to call her but she switched off her cell. she had to make him suffer a little for annoying her. in the evening when she switched on her cell, there were more than 60 messages from kailash. deepa thought of replying back to him but her ego stopped her. her mood totally spoiled by the day's happenings. as she reached her apartment she found kailash talking to her next door neighbour. sandhya was not exactly the kind of girl a woman would like talking to. deepa was wary of her cos sandhya loved to snatch women's guys away. seeing kailash talking to her made deepa angry.

sandhya was dressed in a really short dress & the manner in which she was leaning towards kailash irked deepa. she was openly trying to seduce him & kailash also seemed to be enjoying those flirtatious gestures. "hi deepa!" sandhya greeted her in a breathy voice. the voice that she used to trap males in her net. deepa nodded stiffly & got even more annoyed when she realised that kailash was ignoring her. she went into her house & slammed the door real hard. deepa could hear giggling in the hallway. feeling that she just had enough, deepa threw open the door & marched over to where kailash & sandhya were flirting away. she didn't say a word, she just grabbed kailash's arm & pulled him into her apartment.

"what do you think you're doing? do you realise what kind of woman sandhya is? she is openly trying to seduce you & YOU? you are also flirting with her!" deepa screamed at kailash. "well you didn't want to talk to me, the only way I could make you talk to me was through this." he laughed at her & her cutely jealous expressions. deepa was still angry, "why you fraud! you tricked me!" she shouted & started smacking him. "deepa.. deepa! deepa don't hit me! it hurts!" kailash retorted back & ran away from her.

she chased him all around the house trying her best to hit him.

kailash turned around & grabbed deepa after a few mintues of running. "deepa, why were you so angry with my flirting with sandhya? are you jealous?" he teased her lightly. deepa blushed deeply but didn't reply. kailash bent down & lightly kissed deepa on the lips. deepa didn't respond at first but slowly she warmed up & put her arms around his neck. they stood together for a long moment & then deepa broke away. she refused to meet kailash's eyes & was still somewhat blushing. "deepa.. can I ask you something?" kailash questioned her softly. deepa was about to reply when her doorbell clanged shrilly.

whew! took me ages to type this chapter out!😆😆😆 hope it was good. comments & suggestions are welcome.

~ leena 😃