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Posted: 9 years ago
Part Three B -


Although, both were married now, it was not complete until they were legally binded. Karthik knew his father would have informed Raji's home about them not in the conference, which meant Manoj searching for them.

On the other side of the city, Manoj and his mother fumed knowing that there was a mishap occur, and was not sure of where Raji went. She was the pawn of their game and that meant, both of them were in danger until Raji was back in her room, locked. Karthik's parents started to worry about their whereabouts as well, hoping both would return safely. But Manoj couldn't let Raji out for long, and he started getting restless. He informed his mob gang to search every police station in the city to look for Raji.

Karthik's dad constantly kept calling him, but Karthik could not pick it up. They were actually safe only after legally signing those papers, and he couldn't let anything go wrong in the middle.

Both were stuck in the middle of traffic, and Karthik started get frustrated. "Raji namba seekiram register office kku poganum, or ellam waste aaiyudum... They started searching for us..." "Karthik is there no other way to get to the place? Ennaku bayam--" Karthik saw her freeze like a statue with fear evident in her eyes through his bike mirror. "Raji... Enna aachu? Ketkuren la, enna aachu?" "Ka-Karthik... The car on the right corner of us... Adhu Manoj oda mob leader... Nambala paarthutaanga naa, avalodhaan... Karthik they will kill us..." She started to get frantic. Karthik became more tensed, he couldn't think clearly. "Raji, nee kavala pa--" He saw the guy catch hold of them, he looked furious, and instructed something to his driver. "Raji get hold of me, fast" he screamed, startling her for a moment, but she clutched his shoulders tightly and with that Karthik zoomed off on his bike without waiting for the signal to turn green.

The signal to turned green and the guy ordered the driver to follow Karthik's bike. He called Manoj to let him know of Karthik and Raji. Karthik sped too far away for the car to locate them, but little did he know of Manoj and his influence in the city. There were several of his men around the city looking for them, and one of those saw Karthik and Raji enter the register office.

"Register office?" Manoj was seething in anger. Karthik's parents and his mom were confused from what he meant. His mother questioned him, "Register office ah? Enna register office? Edhukku?" "Amma, Karthik and Raji anga irukaradha information vandhu irukku... We need to go there immediately..." Karthik's parents told Manoj and his mother that they will come there in their car and Manoj left them to it.

"Whaaattt?" Karthik almost screamed at the front desk, he was restless, "Registrar innum varalai ah?"He was pacing up and down the aisle, tension building up on him. Raji was scared, she prayed every god she could think of, as she very well knew that if this doesn't work out then it will not only be her, but Karthik in big trouble as well. She hoped, in the worst case, Karthik would be safe as he was going through all the complications because of her.

"Sorry Mr. Karthik... It is my fault of arriving so late, I was stuck in traffic, sorry..." She saw the registrar running inside towards them, breaking her chain of thoughts. Karthik snapped back at him, "Enga, nelamai puriyaama ippadi late ah vareenga? Inneram yaaravadhu vandhu irundhaa enna aaiyurukkum? Ivalo irresponsible ah irupeengala? Innaiku morning unga veetukku vandhu sollitu ponnen la?" "I am so sorry Karthik... Unga nelamai ennaku puriyudhu, and not to worry as I have every document ready and in order... Verum neenga rendu perum sign potta podhum..."

Karthik went through all the papers and signed them first. It wasn't just pertaining to their legal marriage, but a lot of other transfers of Raji's current legal situation to his family as she was just 18. He handed over everything to Raji for her sign, and she was, Karthik was getting more and more restless. He knew they would be here any minute now, and Raji needed to finish fast.

She was still signing the last few papers, when Karthik heard a car screech to a stop outside the register office. He knew it was his parents and Manoj. "Raji fast, seekiram... They are here.." He rushed her, Raji came to the last paper to be signed.

She held her pen firm and signed her name, completing the all the formalities. Karthik felt a relief wash over him, just as she finished. She was truly Karthik's better half now.

"NOOO..." Manoj shouted as he and his mother came inside to see them both married. "No no no..." he looked furious. Karthik turned around to face him with a victorious grin on his face. "Too late dude... You lost the game..." Karthik looked as chill as ever, with a smile on his face. It irritated Manoj to heights, "You can never win... Manoj doesn't lose in front of idiots like you..." Right then Karthik's parents entered into the scene as well. It took them a moment to realize what had happened. They were beyond shocked to see his son in a register office, married to a girl.

"Dei Karthi... Enna da idhu?" his father questioned him. "Appa naan solradha konjam--" Manoj interfered, "You don't need to say a crap... Just let her go... Raji ah anupidu..." Raji was frightened, and out of instinct she clutched Karthik's arm from the side. "Mudiyaadhu... She is my wife... Do you hear me right? We are legally wedded, and she is my wife now..." Karthik replied calmly at the same time with a tone of firmness in his voice... Manoj was boiling in anger, he stormed up to Karthik and was about to punch him when someone grabbed him from behind. Manoj turned around to see the police who caught him. He was way too shocked to react. "Raji nee Inspector kitta statement kudu and I will be back..."

Karthik went up to his parents who stood near the office door. "Appa, Amma... Konjam en kooda vaanga... I will explain everything to you..." He took them to the car and explained everything from start to end. He told them about Raji, Manoj and his mother, last night when Raji told him everything, and how they got married today, up until his parents came into scene. "Idhukku melaiyum naan thappu senjen nnu neenga nenaicheenga naa, ennaku enna punishment venaalum thaanga... Anaa Raji ah mattum vittutu vara sollidadheenga... I have the utmost respect for you as my parents and if in any way you feel that I have shattered it, then I am sorry... Enna manichudunga..." Karthik looked down, not knowing what to say.

"Ippadiyaa Karthik naanga unna valathom?" his dad questioned him. "Nee yosichadhu unnakku sari nnu pattudhu naa ennaikkum thalai kuniya koodaadhu... Not even in front of your parents... Enaa enga paiyyan ennaikum thappu panna maatan nnu engalukku theriyum... But today... You have made us proud my son... What you have done today is not easy for anyone in your place, but you faced it willingly... Karthik, be confident in your decision, as it is the most correct one..." Karthik's mom was too lost for words, instead she gave a motherly kiss on his forehead. Karthik felt too overwhelmed to react. "Thanks Appa, Amma... Neenga idha eppadi eduthukuveenga nnu theriyaama I was really worried... But you are truly the best parents in the world..." They all smiled together. "En marumagal ah welcome pannanum... Vaanga polaam..." His mom was too excited that she hurried back inside with Karthik and his dad following behind.

"Mr. Manoj... You are under arrest for public violence... Come with us..." The inspector took him outside as Karthik and family came in. Karthik grinned widely at Manoj who glared at him. His mother was cursing Raji for ruining her son's life, she stared at all of them in hate and walked away.

Raji turned around to see Karthik's parents standing there. She couldn't figure out what happened outside, or what their reactions were. She looked at Karthik with a puzzled face to which he smiled wide and blinked at her reassuring everything was alright. That was all needed for her to understand that everything was alright and she smiled back. "Raji vaa maa... Namba veetukku polaam..." Karthik's mom held her and brought her outside while Karthik finished up everything at the register office and walked out. He silently sent a thank you' up to God, for taking them through the hardest part of this pursuit.

To be continued...


Author's Note -


Hey Again Guys 😃

I just have to mention a few things more...

First of all hope you all liked the double update... I know it was full of drama, and there was so much going on... I really hope it was at least readable and somewhat okay 😛

I was really elated in reading all your comments... Thank You so much !!! 😃

Sorry sorry sorry for updating so late... It was just that I couldn't get my head around the right words, to make it flow... I am not sure if it does, even now... 😕

I will make sure the coming parts are good and actually enjoyable, maybe with not so much going on like the first few ones... 😛

Again... I am too lazy to color the update, so if you Guys wish for it then let me know and I will...

Finally... Thanks to Gaya3 for being so patient with me and my laziness the whole day today as you were waiting for me to finish... You are really awesome, and no naan ice vaikkala... 😆 Nandri PIC... 😛

That's it... And... Leave me a comment, at least a like won't hurt to do... Thanks 😃


-- Sush 😉
Edited by SushK16 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part three A
Adipavi nee irukra paaru twist vachi ye yenna galli panniduva

Coming to the update so Karthi is doing this out of humanity and not love... will love blossom between the two? Waiting to find out

Raji I feel sorry for her she's entering a marriage of mere convenience to escape from the torture and its not a love marriage or there's no love in their relationship

I wonder how everything will turn out you have left me guessing which I like so will wait and see

Karthi pavum his parents aren't there and he feels sad... he wants to be friends with raji hope soon they will fall in love and hope Karthis parents accept raji and that doesn't cause any problems...

Wonder what Manor reaction will be whatever it is I'm glad that KR are married :) hopefully no more torture to raji paarpom

Finally they are married yayyy I'm happy and hope it turns into love soon from friendship..

Karthik such a nice person to save raji from her tortured life just hope all works out well :)
Edited by Gayathri30 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Paahhh oru mini action packed movie scene mathiri irunthuchu hahaha
Super Sush really loved this part...

Manor aiyaa jolly I'm dancing right now serves him right silly person tortures an innocent person and hints he will get away with it

Glad he has been arrested Karthi super planning happy about that :)

The whole scene to the register and the signature happening it was nerve racking for me... suu sush u love to do this to me hahahaha I enjoyed it though... thrilling and kept me anticipated to know what will happen next

Karthis parents wow wow no words to describe their nature absolutely brilliant and im so happy that they accepted raji without any hindrances :) extremely elated for that

The dialogues between Karthi and his parents simply superb especially the bit when Karthis dad said don't bow down your head if you know your right... such true words :)

Raji I'm happy for her she will be free form the torture for a while because knowing you there will be more to it haha

She can finally start a new life hope she is happy and they look after her well :)

Sush all in all very happy with this update and action packed for me hahahaha well done da :)
Edited by Gayathri30 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update teddy made us wait so long
Thank you for the PM did kart hiking did not love raji?
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Posted: 9 years ago
Super update... Mini mission impossible partha santhosam... KR married yehhh😉 romba santhosam but not love but humanity hmmm 😭 pavam pa raji kasthapaduthathe avale... Raji santhosama irukonam next update le ok va... Konjam inthe SS se sekirum update panna nalla irukonam... 😃 Thanks for the cute and adventurous update👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
Dear Sush ma'am, thanks for the fantastic updates!! Your descriptions brought the tensions, emotions alive in front of our eyes! It was just so unique to see K asking Raji straight, do you trust me? R doesnt know him enough yet to trust him...but she made her decision intuitively. K's parents response to his decision was simply awesome! This is our hero K...we missed this big time in the serial. Thank you so much for the update and looking forward to the next! 👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sushk, awesome updates! It felt like I was watching a film with all the suspense around the marriage and getting it registered, your story was written really well, I pictured everything in my head clearly like a film. Karthik has such a good heart!!! His parents are very sweet, calm and understanding as well. Now that Karthik and Raji are married, looking forward to the next updates and how their relationship goes.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Double damaka for late update , KD Sush 😈 😆
Part 3 A

Yena marriage yaruku KR ka is it ? 😲 . Na Karthik love a soluvan thinking .. 😆. Karthik , great human being , just to make Raji's life better he want to marry her . Super character , Sush 👏 .

Raji such a gem, she can grab the opportunity to escape from the hell of torture but she think about Karthik and what he will go thru of this marriage . Hero vitha thaney , just love his determination.👍🏼

Raji acceptance make Karthik speechless 😆 .

Hey Karthik Raji marriage , even nobody is around , they have God blessings .

Sush dear , lovely update ⭐️


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Posted: 9 years ago
Sush na misson impossible parthuruken ana intha maari parthathu illa ma .. Its a power pack action update Sush ma 😎 .
Part 3 B

Karthik , I like his character more now, thinking very pratical . Have to register theri mariage to make it legal 👏 👏

Story speedle pogathu, sema .. Manoj get to know their whereabouts 😲 . Paiyan tension agithan registra illanu . Luckily she came on time , paah hero yelam pre-planned a panirukaru 😎 . Sign vaikarathukula sema tensiona iruku .. oru movie parkule feel 😆 . Police arresting Manoj

Karthik's convo with his parents is awesome . It shows the trust they have in him and so proud for what he has done . Accept Raji as their daughter in law. Happy for the new couple.. ⭐️

Next update yeponu keka mathen , I know you will update but dont know when 🤣

Super update dear. Love it just love it ❤️


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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update... ore tension pa... first kalyanam nadukkuma nu appuram Register office la enna aagum nu...

Full ah tension... last paper la sign podara varaikkum tension...

happa... Superb narration dear... 👏 👏

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