SS: NINAIVELLAM NEEYE - Part - 10 (Page No.24) - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: SushK16

Just now read both the parts back to back...

Superb writing Devi... 😃

The emotions are shown clearly... 👍🏼

Dialogues laam apt ah irukku...

Simple and awesome... 😃



Thanks sush ma...

@bold, indha serial ah yendha alavukku paarthurupenu paarunga 😉


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Posted: 10 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: Ramya05

Devi.. enna ippadi oru shocking update... Exccellent writing skills...

Please... update soon...




Thanks ramya...

Kandippa pandren pa 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: shiningstar77

Devi sis...ennama eluthareenga...awesome!!!...👏👏

KA bonding n talk...very nice...athukum mel ashwin romba nallavana irukan...angel romba koduthu vechava...ivalavu poratam nadantha appauram than angelku marriage aairuku...hehe...super..

that's baby...so cute...

angel karthika maatha mudivedukaral..aana lastla ippadi aaiduche...rendu perum poitaangale...so sad...😭😭

pavam antha baby...inime enna aagum??...KR kulla thirumbavum prechanai varuma intha babya vechu??..

sema tension...update soon..😊



Thanks a lot bro...

unga comments laam padikum bodhu, yenaku innum nalla kudukanumnu thonudhu, kandippa try pandren...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: Smiles-20

Wow Devino! Unexpected episode, I'm still trying to process everything that happened. Totally never expected this. Waiting to see what happens next. Thanks for the update.



Thanks smiles 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75

PART - 4

Before 6 hours...

Karthi bike la vegama poitu irukkum bodhu, dhideernu oru car vandhu idichu, bayangara adi and blood loss aagi mayakkam pottu keela vizhuraan,

Nooo nu kathitu raji kanna thorandhu bayangarama azhuvuraa, udambellam ore padapadappu, bayangarama moochu vaangi rumba bayandhu poitaa

Yenna ippadi oru kanavu, idha maadhiri mattum nadakkave koodadhu, kadavuley Karthi ku yendha problem mum vara koodadhu pa. Yennoda karthi yen kooda illanaalum, avan yeppavum nalla irukkanum, yenaku yennamo bayama irukku avanuku yedhavadhu aagidumo nu, ippadiye rumba neram bayathula thoongama muzhichite, pazhaya nalla vishayangala yosichikite appadiye thoongitaa.

Morning 7'o clock...

Meesai: Raji ma, raji ma

Raji: didn't reply

Meesai: yenna innaiku rumba neram thoongura, oru vela innaiku leave ah, appadi yedhuvum sollalaiye

Raji yezhundhiru ma

Raji: Kashtapattu kanna thorandhu paartha

Meesai: time aayiduchu ma, udambuku yedhuvum sari illaiya ma

Raji: illa pa, konjam lesa thalai valikudhu

Meesai: iru ma, naan coffee potu varen

Raji: neenga irunga pa, naan poduren

Meesai: nee konja neram iru ma, appa idho vandhuduren

Raji: Night rumba neram muzhichitu irundhadhala, bayangarama thalai valikudhey

Annaiku night vandha kanava ninaichu paartha, yedho thappa nadakura maadhiri irukkey, yennadhu dhideernu ippadi oru ketta kanavu, karthi ku call pannalama, vendam, kaalailaye yedhu phone pannanum, office la poi nerlaye paarthudalam

Meesai: indha ma raji, idha mudhala kudima

Raji: rumba kashtam kudukerena pa

Meesai: idhula yennama irukku, yenaku mudiyalanu nee yevvalavu thavichu pona, yenna yeppadi laam paathukita, adhuku munnadi idhellam onnume illa ma

Raji: rumba thanks pa

Meesai: naan onnu sonna thappa yeduthuka koodadhu

Raji: sollunga pa

Meesai: idhuku dhan ma unna kalyanam pannika solren, ippa appa irundhen udane unaku oru coffee potu kuduthen, idhuve naan illana yaaruma unna paathupa

Raji: gets angry

Meesai: yenna ma onnume solla maatengura

Raji: yeppa paaru kalyanam kalyanam nu yenna thondharavu pandreenga, yenna nimmadhiyave irukka vida maatengala, ippa dhan divorce aachu, adhukulla innoru kalyanama, yen pa ippadi pandreenga

Meesai: adhukilla ma

Raji: neenga onnum pesadheenga pa, yenna konjam thaniya vidunga

Meesai: onnume pesama veliye poitaar

Raji: naane yedho thappu nadakura maadhiri irukenu kashatapattutu iruken, idhula ivar vera

Konja neram kalichu, mind relax aayitu, naama yedho tension la appava thittitome

Raji: appa appa

Meesai: yenna ma, office ku kilambitiya

Raji: appa yen mela ungaluku kovama pa

Meesai: yedhuku ma kovapadanum

Raji: sorry pa, naan yedho tension la appadi pesiten yenna mannichidunga pa

Meesai: adhellam onnum illa ma, appa ooruku kilamburen ma

Raji: appo ungaluku yen mela kovam dhan, illana udane ooruku poveengala

Meesai: illa ma, inga yenaku oru maadhiriya irukku ma, ooruku pona yedhavadhu velai paarthutu neram poradhey theriyadhuma

Raji: yenaku theriyadha yennoda appa va pathi

Meesai: therinja nee ippadi irukka maata ma, yeppavo naan solradha keturuppa

Raji: Frustration la, sari pa neenga yenna mudivu pandreengalo adhuku naan sammadhikiren, unga ishta padi seiyunga

Meesai: raji ma, idhu nee yenakaaga sollailaye

Raji: ungalukkaaga dhan pa sonnen, inime yellam unga ishtam dhan, nan office poitu varen pa, evening pesalam

Meesai: sari ma paathu poituva

Raji (MV): mudhalla office poitu karthi ya paartha dhan nimmadhiya irukkum, yennoda instinct yedho thappave solludhu

Half an hour la office reach aayitu, nera karthi room ku pona, avan anga illa, oru vela late ah varuvaan pola, sari appuram vandhu paarpom

One hour kalichi thirumbavum vandhu paartha appavum varala, avalukku manasu yennovo pola irundhadhu, ok innum konja neram wait pannuvom

Raji room ku poitu, pazhaiya vishayangala yosichikitu irundhaal

Kamal: ulla varalama

Raji: va kamal

Kamal: yenna yedho yosanaila irukura maadhiri irukku

Raji: illa, morning la irundhu mood out adhaan

Kamal: yenna yedhavadhu problem ma

Raji: aama

Kamal: yenna aachu, yaarala

Raji: unnala dhan

Kamal: hey raji, naan ippa dhan unna vandhu paakuren, appuram naan yeppadi kaaranama irukka mudiyum

Raji: nee innaiku vandhadhaala illa, indha office ku vandhadhaala

Kamal: puriyara maadhiri sollu

Raji: yellam, yen neram, yenaku divorce aagum bodhu dhan, nee inga vandhu seranuma

Kamal: question mark koda paarthaan

Raji: appa, unna kalyanam pannikka solli orey thondharavu paanraaru

Kamal: oh adhuva, idhula unaku yenna kashtam

Raji: kovathoda oru murai muraicha

Kamal: hey cool ma, naan chumma unna kalaichen

Raji: marubadiyum muraicha

Kamal: avar kitta naan pesikiren, nee kochikaadha

Raji: illa kamal, innaiku kooda kaalaila appa va thittiten

Kamal: yedhuku avara thittura

Raji: naane mood out la irundhen

Kamal: yenna problem unaku

Raji: night oru kanavu vandhuchu, adhula irundhu manase sari illa kamal

Kamal: yenna kanavu, kanavu la naan vandhena

Raji: unaku vilaiyada nerame kidaiyadha

Kamal: sari sollu, yenna kanavu

Raji: illa karthi ku yedho thappu nadakura maadhiri irundhadhu

Kamal: yenna dhideernu karthi mela oru akkarai, avana nerla paakum bodhu appadi thittura, pinnadi kanavula laam paakura

Raji: please shut up kamal

Kamal: sorry raji

Raji: naan yevvalavu serious ah pesuren, nee adha purinjikave maatengura

Kamal: puriyudhu raji, naan kooda unkitta onnu sollanum

Raji: yenna marubadiyum yedhavadhu kindal panna poriya

Kamal: illa naanum serious ah dhaan solla vandhen

Raji: seekiram sollitu kilambu

Kamal: nethu karthi yenoda cabin ku vandhaan...

In Kamal cabin:

Karthi: excuse me

Kamal: yes

Karthi: konjam free ya irundha unga kitta konjam pesanum

Kamal: mmm sollu sollunga

Karthi: adhu vandhu

Kamal: solla vandhadha seekiram sonna nalla irukkum, official na mail anupunga

Karthi: illa idhu personal, adhan nerla vandhen

Kamal: oh sollunga

Karthi: neenga raji nijamave love pandreengala

Kamal: stares karthi

Karthi: ammava illaiya

Kamal: adhu ungalukku yedhuku, ungalukum raji kum dhan yedhuvume illaiye, neenga yedhuku raji ya pathi ketkureenga

Karthi: yengalukku divorce aayirukalaa, but raji yenaku yeppavume oru nalla friend, adhan andha akkaraila keten

Kamal: aama naan avala manasara love panren, avala naan dhan kalyanam pannika poren, but unna maadhiri paadhiyilaye vittutu poga maaten

Karthi: no reaction

Kamal: avalukaaga yenna venumnaalum seiven, yaarukaagavum avala vittu kudukka maaten

Karthi: yenaku idhu podhum kamal

Kamal: yenna periya thiyagi maadhiri pesura

Karthi:yenaku ava nalla irundha podhum, neenga avala nalla paarthupenu namburen, naan varen

Kamal: karthi oru nimisham... (sollumbodhu karthi nikkama veliye poitaan)

Present (In raji room)

Kamal: yenakennamo avan thirindhitaano nu thonudhu raji

Raji: adha yen kitta yen solla maatenguraan

Kamal: adhu dhan yenakum puriyala

Raji: sari innum konja naal paarpom, nee avana innaiku paarthiya

Kamal: illaiye raji, nethu oru mail anupirundhen, adhuku kooda innum reply pannave illa

Raji: naanum avan room ku poi parten, but innum valanu ninaikiren

Kamal: nalla thanniya pottutu thoonguraan pola

Raji: nee konjam kilamburiya

Kamal: yenna dhan divorce aanalum, avana onnu sonna yeppadi kovam varudhu paaru

Raji: stares kamal

Kamal ponadhuku appuram, pazhaiya ninaivugalai yosithu paarthaal






Dhideernu avaloda phone ring aachu, yeduthu paartha Vishwanathan sir calling nu vandhuchu,

Raji (MV): sir mobile la yedhuku koopiduraaru, office ku varalaya

Raji attend the call and stand like a statue in shock...

THODARUM...

ADUTHU...

In Railway station Vichu console raji, but azhuvuradha niruthave illa...


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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
Nice devi raji still loves karthi and getting angry if someone talks about marriage or if kamal talks bad about karthi

pavum raji.. aana appo vaiya thoranthirtha intha perchana vanthurkuma?

Kamal 😡 no comment his character just annoys me now

kadisila yenna achu ippo thaan rajiku vishiyam therinjicha? Vichu sir yenna sonnaru

Eppadi muditchitingale, seekrama update pannunga please
Edited by Gayathri30 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
Great Update again Devi 😃

This part focused more on Raji...

Raji oda mindset ah clear ah explain panni irukeenga...

As usual... Very natural and apt dialogues... 👍🏼

Kamal is Kamal... Correct ah kaamichu irukeenga...

I think Raji thought that Karthik was inside the train which blasted...

Waiting to know of how Raji will come to know all the truths... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
Thanks for the update, Devi...

Ungha Rajiya enakku rombha pidichurukku... Theliva irukka...

Nice update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
Thanks Devi for the update. Waiting for the next one seeing your precap. Curious to hear the convo between Karthik and Raji when they see each other there.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
Thanks devi superb part
excellant portrayal of all characters

curious to know what happens next

update soon da

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