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Part - 7

In Chennai, one Sunday morning...

Raji: karthi, yelundhiru pa, time aagudhu

KK: yennama innaiku Sunday dhaana

Raji: adhuku

KK: konja neram thoonguren ma

Raji: time yenna aachu theriyuma

KK: ok, naan yelundhukiren, appuram

Raji: yenna da, yedhuko adi podura maadhiri irukku

KK: naan onnu ketta yenna thitta koodadhu ma

Raji: appo yedho perusa ketpa nu ninaikiren, ok sollu thitta maaten

KK: amma, yenga school la next week picnic poraanga ma

Raji: mmm

KK: naanum pogatuma

Raji: yenga poraanga

KK: Bangalore ma

Raji: Bangalore ah, ok, yethana naal

KK: three days ma, next week Friday holiday va, adhanaala adha plan panni, poraanga ma

Raji: 3 days ah, nee yeppadi thaniya iruppa da

KK: maaa, naan thaniya irundhupen, neenga dhaan irukka maateenga

Raji: appuram yenna vittutu poren nu solra

KK: please ma, indha oru time yenna anupunga ma

Raji: konjam kashtam dhan, ok unakaaga anupuren

KK: thanks ma, amma na amma dhan, I love you so much ma

Raji: ok, ice vachadhellam podhum, yethana per poreenga

KK: motham oru 50 peru porom ma

Raji: ok, yedhula poreenga

KK: train la dhaan, bus na comfortable ah irukaadhu nu, train book panna poraanga

Raji (MV): yennadhu train ah, adhuvum Bangalore, karthi unna indha train dhaana yen kitta irundhu pirichichu, ippo ivanaiyum yennala train la anuppa mudiyadhu, mudiyave mudiyaadhu

KK: yenna ma yosikireenga

Raji: no way, nee poga koodadhu

KK: yenna ma ippo dhaana poga soneenga, adhukulla vendamnu solreenga

Raji: naan sonna nee ketka maatiya

KK: ketpen, but yedhuku venaamnu solreenga

Raji: silent

KK: I hate you ma

Appuram KK yelundhu garden la poi utkaandhu kitaan, raji yum pazhaiya sambavangala ninaichitu rumba feel pannitu irundha. Appo Vishnu raji veetuku vandhaan

Vishnu: hi Karthi, good morning

KK: hi uncle, bad morning

Vishnu: ppaaahh semma kovama irukura maadhiri theriyudhu

KK: naan yaar koodayum pesa maaten

Vishnu: ippa yen kooda pesitiye (smile)

KK: stares

Vishnu: yedhuku kovamnu therijikalama

KK: naan dhaan pesa maatenu solren la

Vishnu: appo ok, naan new va market la vandhurukka game vangittu vandhen, but yenna pandradhu naane yeduthukuren

KK: sandhoshathula oodi vandhu, uncle

Vishnu: pesa maatenu sonna

KK: neenga nalla uncle, so unga kooda pesuven, yenga CD uncle

Vishnu: yemandhutiya, naan chumma sonnen, nee yenna panrenu parka

KK: neengalum amma maadhiriye irukeenga, rendu perum friends dhaaney appadi dhaan irupeenga

Vishnu (MV): oh appo raji mela dhaan kovathula irukaana, ok ok

Vishnu goes to raji's room

Vishnu: hi raji

Raji: hi Vishnu, yenna dhideernu

Vishnu: illa chumma indha pakkam vandhen, adhaan unga rendu peraiyum paarthutu polaamnu

Raji: coffee saapidureengala

Vishnu: kuduthaal kudipen

Raji: oru nimisham

Raji: calling her servant maid

SM: sollunga ma

Raji: Vishnu ku oru coffee konduvaanga, appadiye Karthi kum boost kuduthudunga, avan yedhuvum saapidala

SM: sari ma

Vishnu: yenna raji, karthi kochitu irukaana

Raji: aama Vishnu, yenkooda dhan kochikitaan, avan kovathulayum thappu illa dhaan

Vishnu: yenna aachu, yenna problem

Raji: avanuku Bangalore poganumaam, avanga school ah picnic kootitu poraagalam

Vishnu: idhula yenna irukku pogatume

Raji: appadi dhaan naanum ninaichen, but avan train la poraanam

Vishnu: ok, train dhaana comfortable

Raji: yenna Vishnu neengalum puriyama pesureenga, idhuku munnadi yenna nadandhadhu nu ungalukku theriyaadha

Vishnu: neenga yedha solla vareenga

Raji: karthi ya pathi dhaan solren, avan train la ponadhaala dhaan andha sambavam nadandhadhu, ippo ivanum poraan nu solraan, yenaku yennamo pola bayama irundhadhu adhan poga koodadhunu soliten

Vishnu: yenna raji neenga, innum chinna pullaiya irukeenga, veliya mattum bold ah pesureenga, but ullukulla innum andha pazhaiya raji pogala pola

Raji: adhu vera idhu vera Vishnu

Vishnu: yellam onnu dhan

Raji: neenga yenna sonnalum yennala anupa mudiyadhu

Vishnu: yenga daily um yethana peru train la poitu varranga, avangaluku yellam yenna nalla dhaana irukaanga

Raji: adhu vandhu

SM: indhaanga ma coffee

Raji: thanks ma, karthi ku yenna kudutheenga

SM: avan yedhuvume vendaamnu solraan ma

Raji: sari ma neenga ponga naan paathukuren

Vishnu: paavamga paiyan

Raji: karthi nu peru vachavanga yellam ippadi than irupaangalo, adamant ah

Vishnu: irukalaam

Raji: ippa yenna pandradhu, oru idea kudungalen, but train vendam

Vishnu (MV): yendha alavuku karthi ya love pannirundheenga na, train nu pecha yeduthaaley ivvalavu kova paduveenga, yellam ponadhuku appuram dhaan gnanam varum pola

Raji: sollunga Vishnu

Vishnu: ippadi pannina yeppadi, neengalum KK yum Bangalore ponga, but train vendaam, unga car la ponga

Raji: nalla idea dhaan, but office la work irukkey

Vishnu: naan yedhuku iruken, naan pathukuren

Raji: neengalum vandha nalla irukumey

Vishnu: illa raji, rendu perumey poita vichu sir ku konjam kashtama irukkum, so I will take care

Raji: thanks Vishnu, ippadi dhaan chinna chinna vishayathula mudivu yeduka theriyama muzhikuren

Vishnu: aanaikum adi sarukkum raji

Raji: idhuku dhaan ungala maadhiri oru friend koodave irukkanum

Vishnu: sari raji, naan vandha velai mudijiduchu, naan kilamburen

Raji: ok bye Vishnu

Vishnu: karthi, unaku oru good news

KK: stares

Vishnu: next week yaaro karthi nu oru vaal paiyan avanga amma voda Bangalore poraanaam

KK: sandhoshathu kudhitu vandhu, Vishnu va katti pidichikitaan

Vishnu: ippo ok va

KK: amma kooda ok, but unga kooda pesa maaten

Vishnu: y da

KK: neenga game CD vaangi tharave illaiye

Vishnu: unga prachanaiya theerka poiyee, yenaku aapu vachikitene, ippavum naan dhaan out ah

In Bangalore office ...

In canteen, Karthi coffee kudichittu irundhaan, appo anga arjun and avanoda friend jolly ah pesikite coffee ya enjoy pannitu irundhaanga

Karthi (MV): Thinks about vishnu. naan rajiya yendha alavukku miss panreno andha alavukku unna miss panren machan, indha ulagathula yaaru venumnaalum illama irukkalam, but oru friend illa ma irukkave mudiyadhu, really I miss you so much da.


Avanga rendu peraiyume rumba neram paarthute irundhaan, adhula lakshmi vandhu utkaarnadhadha kooda gavanikala

Lakshmi: kaiya aaati, hello karthik yenna aachu

Karthi: konja neram kalichu dhaan realize panninaan, hi lakshmi yeppo vandha

Lakshmi: naan yeppo vandhenu kooda theriyama appadi yenna yosanai unaku

Karthi: adhu onnum illa lakshmi

Karthi andha direction la paathute pesum bodhu, lakshmi yum anga yaar irukaanu paartha

Lakshmi: yedhuku arjun ah appadi paakura, idhuku munnadi paarthadhey illaiya

Karthi: appadilam illa lakshmi

Lakshmi: mmm ippa puriyudhu, nee Vishnu va nichitu irukiya

Karthi: silent

Lakshmi: naan solradhu correct dhaana

Karthi: aama lakshmi, avanga rendu peraiyum paarkum bodhu, yenaku Vishnu niyabagam dhaan varudhu, gets emotional

Lakshmi: aama neenga rendu perum yevvalavu close nu yenaku theriyadha

Karthi: annaiku raji ya kooda tv la paarthuten, but Vishnu va parka kooda mudiyala, adha ninaicha dhaan kashtama irukku

Lakshmi: feels bad

Karthi: avan school, college appuram office yeppavume yen kooda dhaan iruppan, yenakaaga yevvalo help pannirukaan, naan kashta padura time la yellam avan dhaan kooda iruppan, yen yenga amma appa kooda andha alavu yenakaaga vittu kuduthathu illa

Lakshmi: puriyudhu karthi

Karthi: ippa kooda paaru, yenakaaga raji ku yevvalavu support ah irukaan, avana maadhiri oru friend yethana jenmam yeduthaalum kidaika maataan

Lakshmi: yenna karthik chinna pulla maadhiri azhuvura

Karthi: sorry lakshmi, unaku yedhuvum kashtam illaiye, Vishnu va pathi pesuradhu

Lakshmi: appadilaam onnum illa karthik

Karthi: unaku avan mela kovam poiducha

Lakshmi: vandhaa dhaana poradhuku

Karthi: yenna solra lakshmi

Lakshmi: yenaku avan mela kovam la illa karthik. Avanga appa amma pannina thappuku avan yenna seiyvaan sollu, yennala vera yaarkittayum kaata mudiyala adhan avan kitta kovapattu tu vandhuten

Karthi: nijamava

Lakshmi: illa na, innum avana ninaichitu irupena sollu karthik

Karthi: avan mela innum love irukka

Lakshmi: oruthar mela vacha love yeppadi karthik pogum, unnala raji ya marakka mudiyuma

Karthi: kandippa mudiyadhu lakshmi

Lakshmi: appo naan mattum yeppadi karthik marapen

Karthi: appo nee yen avana innum contact pannala, naan venumna yedhavadhu help pannatuma

Lakshmi: illa karthik, naan marubadiyum pona, avanukum avan parents kum thirumbi sandai varum, yedhuku

Karthi: unaku vishayame theriyadha

Lakshmi: yenna karthik

Karthi: explain

Few years before...

Vishnu: amma amma yenga irukeenga (kovathudan)

V amma: yenna da yedhuku ippa kova padura

Vishnu: innum yenna nadakanum, adhaan yellam mudinji pochey

V appa: ippa yenna aachu nu ippadi thaiya thakka nu kudhikura

Vishnu: poita, lakshmi yenna vittu poita, inime ava yenaku kidaikave maata

V amma: stares

Vishnu: neenga pannina kaariyathuku, life full ah naan dhaan kashta pada poren

V amma: nee yedhuku da kashta padanum

V appa: andha ponna vita vera ponney illaiya yenna

V amma: yennoda annan ponnu rumba azhaga iruppa, niraiya seer seiyvaanga

Vishnu: yaaruku venum unga seeru, lakshmi maadhiri oru ponnu kidaipaala

V appa: appadi yenna da ava kitta irukku

Vishnu: yeno dhaano nu irundha yenna oru nalla manushana ava dhaan maathuna

V amma: ippo nee yenna dhaan solla varra

Vishnu: indha jenmathula yenaku kalyaname vendaam, appadi yedhavadhu neenga thittam potta, naan inga irukkavey maaten

V appa: yenna da solra

Vishnu: indha veeta vittu poiduvenu solren

V amma: idhukaagava da unna pethu valarthom

Vishnu: pethu valartha mattum podhuma, yennoda aasaiya niraivetra vendama

V appa: unakaaga yellathaiyum panninome da, indha oru vishayathula yenga pecha nee ketka koodadha

Vishnu: naan select pannina ponnu thappa irundhu neenga adhuku othukalana kooda parava illai, but lakshmi maadhiri oru thangamaana ponna vendamnu sonna naan yeppadi ketpen

V appa: kadaisiya nee yenna solla varra

Vishnu: yenaku kalyanam vendam, adhaiyum meeri sonneenga naan indha veeta vittu poiduven

V amma: onne onnu kanne kannu nu pethutu unnaiyum vita yengaluku vera yaaru irukka, yengala mannichidu da, inime nee yaara kai kaaturiyo avalaiye unaku kalyanam panni vachidurom pa

Vishnu: aama, avaley poitaa inime naan yaara kai kaaturadhu, yellam nadandhu mudinjadhuku appuram sammadham solli yenna prayojanam

In present...

Karthi: idhu dhaan nadandhadhu

Lakshmi: cries

Karthi: azhadha lakshmi, avan innum unna dhaan ninaichitu irukaan theriyuma

Lakshmi: nijama

Karthi: aama lakshmi, appuram office la manimegalai nu oru ponnu vandhaa, but oru situation la avan purinjikitaan, nee dhaan avanoda life nu, adhanaala avan unakaaga dhaan wait pandraan

Lakshmi: ippa yenna pandradhu karthik

Karthi: seekirame avana contact panni, avan kooda serrura valiya paaru

Lakshmi: mmm

Karthi: mmm nu sonna pathaadhu, seekirama oru step yeduma

Lakshmi: thanks karthik

Karthi: thanks mattum dhaana, treat laam illaiya

Lakshmi: kandippa, indha weekend pogalaam, K Raji oda ok va

Karthi: ok sure, yenaku oru important meeting irukku naan varen

Lakshmi: bye karthik

Yenakaaga ivvalavu sandai pottu irukiya Vishnu, appo innum nee yenna love pannitu dhaan irukiya, appo yenna theda vendiyadhu dhaana, ippadiye irundhaa naan kidaichiduvena. Unaku naan I love you nu solradha vida idha sonna dhaana pidikum

"FRAUDU"...


THODARUM...

ADUTHU...

Important meeting with Arjun - Karthik - Lakshmi

Karthik - Lakshmi (orutharukku sandhosham orutharukku thayakkam)...

Raji - KK in Bangalore...

Edited by Devino - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Devi romba azhaga you have scripted this one i say
Kutti karthik appidiyae karthik..thaan pidicha muyalukku no leg pola

Loved Raji concern and finnaly L realized..

Cant wait for KR meeting😛😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
Super o super update devi ka
Lakshmi Fraud statement dhaan classic..😳😳

I am vigorusly waiting for KR meeting with KK and KR😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Devi akkkaaa🤗
Loved kk raji and vishnu scene to the core...
Evlooo azhaga irundhadhu theriyuma... Vishnu semma..raji ku true frnd... Avan solra mari k ponadhu Peragu r feel panra...

K l scene dat we equally good akka... Apdiye k moolyama v pathi solli arumai... Sooperaa kondu poreenga love ur story akka...

Precap yaruku sandhosham yaruku thayakam... Devi akka dhivya Waitinggg plz update soon 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thnks 4 the update devi sis...

Wonderful Part... 🤗 liked tat canteen scene to the core... 😳

Kk- raji scene & Vishnu-KK soo cute & romba realistic aa irundhudhu 👍🏼

Kk- raji in Bangalore.can't wait 2read,plzzz update soon Akka...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very nice update Devi
the way you have portrayed KK reminds me of karthi in the early stages of office serial ditto karthi hahaha so cute and his stubborness everything =D

miss KV being together and finally lakshmi knows everything waiting for VL to talk

KKR in bangalore waiting for all to meet please update soon =D

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