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Gayathri30

@Gayathri30

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#301

Thank you akka for the update...:)

nalla surprise

coming to the update... i liked it but did not like nisha's character... liked karthi's past character ... strong character... the way he reacted to how nisha was playing with raji and changed her dressing sense and then when he saw raji and his outburst... yennaku puditcha dialogue...

his description..."Yenna azhagaa? not too tall or too short,perfect height ..thin dainty frame . .. flawless milky soft looking skin ,giving fantasies how it would feel under my touch.. curly dense hair wavering in air tempting me to run my hand over it...off mounted crescent on ur forehead, bow shaped dark brows,.., eyes fringed with long eye lashes fluttering my heart by the way of them flickering ... dark big eyes deeper than the ocean I am inclined to lost in the depth irrevocably ...pert cute nose,waiting for me to nuzzle with mine..rounded ,up tilted chin,smooth soft cheeks..my hands are dying to feel that softness under it..petal like pinkish lustrous lips..itching me to kiss them breathless.."

you know i could imagine it... thats how wonderful you have written thank you...

and then nisha😡😡😡 no comments literally

raji her feelings were portrayed beautifully... ellame super about her... in the past... and then the fiasco caused by nisha and raji feeling hurt and then karthis anger👏👏

karthi holding raji when she was about to fall😳 making sure she is okiee glad he cares about her

vicky looks like a dodgy character dont like him😕 and raji ippo yethuku ivaluku intha theivalatha velaa just because angel told karthi to come she is going cinema illaa theriyuma kekuren ippadi avasara paduthu mudivu yeduthu naaliki pinn vilaivu irukum... paapom how you are going to portray this innu :)

waiting to know karthis reaction to raji going... but he is funny he cant take her laughing without anyone else loool

ithula the way you described vishnu and rajis relationship the way vishnu feels about raji was really nice i liked that thank akka

missed lakshmi though :(

angel seems only like a friend aana ithula ulkuthu iruka innu therila :/

thank you for the long update akka 👏

waiting for next one😳

Edited by Gayathri30 - 10 years ago

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Smiles-20

@Smiles-20

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#302

Thanks Kala for the update.

Woah this Nisha is one character for sure, she seems to not give up on insulting Karthik! Raji coming in a skirt and a tank top lol oh my goodness she is very gullible. Really liked the past portions and especially the way Karthik said things whether it's his mind voice or out loud. With the present, it's interesting to see how things will move forward now that Vicky and Angel are here. Another thing I liked was the little VR potion that was nice and sweet to see.

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Abinaabi

@Abinaabi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#303

Hi sis.. Thanks for the updates... Ippadi suprise kuduthuttinga... Ennala nambave mudiyala...

Coming to the update...

Love , caring,comedy, jealousy ippdi mothathaiyum orey update la kuduthu asathitinga... Big hug to u sis🤗

Nisha 😡 Enna ponnu iva? cha😡 Indha raji loosu um ava sollura mathiri adikittu irukka...

Ayo raji ivalo innocent irukkale... Ava azhagu avaluke theriyala... Karthik mindvoice superr... Ennama raji ya varunikkiran... Avan sonnadhu unnmayi dhan... Raj vekkapadura😳

omg first raji condition parthone bayandhutten... Ana udane karthik harsh sound ketta udane peru moochi vittuten... Ivalo cheap nadandhukura indha nisha... cha..😡 But karthik give her nicely... Nalla venum avaluku...

KR door scene lovely scene😳😳 Karthik oda caring, love ellame raji ku mattum dhan...

Ava eppdi iruppa? Ava dhan vanathula parandhu kittu irukkale... Idha vida sandhosham avaluku enna irukkum?

Present

Paavam raji romba kaduppa agura... VR scene so nice... Loved it... Vishnu ivlo anbu akkaraiyum vechi irukkan raji mella... VR combo ve oru thani dhan...

Vicky raji scene so funny😆 Avanga dialogues lam romba pudichi irunthuchu... Vicky partha nallavana dhan theriyudhu... Ana neenga eppdi nenaichi irukinga nu theriyalaye😆

Karthik party ku porana? angel kudiya?😲 omg😲 Adhuku mella raji vera yaetti ki pootiya seyiura

Vicky kuda movie ku porala... Sutham... Sis oru doubt kandippa karthik ku party kum raji movie kum povangala?

Ayyooo ennnaku adutha update ippave padikkanum pola irukke...

Totally unga update semma👏⭐️

Sis ungaluku en mella kovam irunthallum thaniya pm la thitti vittudunga ana update mattum late akkathinga😆 plzzz... Kind request...

Waiting sis...

Edited by Abinaabi - 10 years ago

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Nandhakishore

@shiningstar77

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#304

Sorry for the late comment...oruvela neenga kudutha surpriseaala athirichi adanchuten pola...lol😆

seri ippo updateku varen...this update...super duper.👏

Past

startinglaye nisha...grr...she testing my patience too much..the way she asked some questions to raji...enna kandravi ithu?...chee...oruvan ippadi iruntha avan gay va?...stupid girl..😡

raji...oh..god...iva athukumela...ava solradha appadiye ketpala?...that too wearing that kind of suits...😆...raji going towards karthik n hearing his phone convo n her expression...FIRST CLASS👏👏😆

karthik rajiya apadi paartha udana,avan moonchi ponna pokka paarkanume...hahaha...super.😆.n this line..

See... this is a tuition class not any fashion parade..to hang around like this. ..go and change to something decent..and don't forget to wash the paint on ur face as well."

ennala siripa adaka mudiyala...especially that last line..paint a?..🤣aiyooo...

the way he describing her beauty...awww...naan asanthuten😳...sema narration👏..

next nisha...evalavu cheap ideaso athalam select panra.😡..karthikum avala pidichutan..but next second...Bravo!...his outburst...perfecta irunthuchu..👏but ithuku naduvula rajiya maranthutene...ava than azhugaiya start pannita..but karthik pesinatha ketu,ava vaanathala parakara...avalum vizha poitala?..pinna ippadiya irukarathu?...atlast karthik caught her in his arms...so sweet...loved his concern towards her😳

Present..

VR convo...romba azhaga iruku...vishnu vishnu than..

Vicky...ivana enaku pidikala...ippa ethuku cinemakulam koopidran?...thevai illama...😕

karthikum angeloda porana?..rajiyum vickyoda poithan aanuma?...etiku pottiya?...nadathunga...

karthik reaction ennava irukum ithuku??...hehe...angel nalavala ketavala?...onnum puriyala...

solla mudiyathu rajikoda antha partyku varalam nottam vida...lol...

Thanks for this surprise..u know,neenga kudutha surpriseaala keralala mazhai kotti theerthuruchu...ippa paarunga naan boat la irunthu than comment panren...avalavu vellam...😆athukunu next update a late a kodukatheenga...solliten aama...😆

Edited by shiningstar77 - 10 years ago

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Nandhakishore

@shiningstar77

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#305

Originally posted by: sivania02
finally a sincere thanks to u aka my vocabulary is improving these days lol ..i'm always learning so many cool new words from u!! Thank u for that

U r right...me too learning soo many words...kala sis oru nadamaadum dictionary pola..hehe...

eppudi ivalavu words sakatameniku varuthu ungalku kala sis?...really great than...👏...doubte illai ithula

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kalabhas

@Hanamisuki

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#306

Originally posted by: AnithaRam32
Kala akka...naan eppo dhaan pakuren...will read and comment..enna😆

yennadhu akkavaaa????😲😲😲

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kalabhas

@Hanamisuki

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#307

Originally posted by: sivania02
Thank u for the long update ka.. I like the way u bringing the story.. Vishnu's part of this chapter was so good he's just so real and nice and sweet to raji as a brother..and my fav part was when karthi tried to save her from falling off hehe it's so romantic!! Ending le anthe twistu superrr hope karthi won't go plsss! And finally a sincere thanks to u aka my vocabulary is improving these days lol ..i'm always learning so many cool new words from u!! Thank u for that :) please don't make me wait too much longer for the next one plss! Take care :)

hi sivania

glad that u liked the part..

about new words,naanum ippa dhaan neraiya new words kathuttu iruken..😃

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Abinaabi

@Abinaabi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#308

Originally posted by: kalabhas

hi sivania
glad that u liked the part..

about new words,naanum ippa dhaan neraiya new words kathuttu iruken..😃

Naanga ungallta irunthu kathukittu irukkom... Unga punniyathulla naa neriya words kathukitten... Solla pona naa padikkum podhu neriya words parukkum podhu unga story dhan nyabagam varum...

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Ramya05

@Ramya05

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#309

Thanks for the super cool update... Happy the Raji heard his convo with nisha... There is Jo scope for. Assumptions.

Raji is always jerky in reaction... Y can't she say a no and stick to it... What is going to be k's reaction?

Pls do give us pleasant shocks:)

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kalabhas

@Hanamisuki

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#310

Originally posted by: Gayathri30
Thank you akka for the update...:)
nalla surprise

coming to the update... i liked it but did not like nisha's character... liked karthi's past character ... strong character... the way he reacted to how nisha was playing with raji and changed her dressing sense and then when he saw raji and his outburst... yennaku puditcha dialogue...

his description..."Yenna azhagaa? not too tall or too short,perfect height ..thin dainty frame . .. flawless milky soft looking skin ,giving fantasies how it would feel under my touch.. curly dense hair wavering in air tempting me to run my hand over it...off mounted crescent on ur forehead, bow shaped dark brows,.., eyes fringed with long eye lashes fluttering my heart by the way of them flickering ... dark big eyes deeper than the ocean I am inclined to lost in the depth irrevocably ...pert cute nose,waiting for me to nuzzle with mine..rounded ,up tilted chin,smooth soft cheeks..my hands are dying to feel that softness under it..petal like pinkish lustrous lips..itching me to kiss them breathless.."

you know i could imagine it... thats how wonderful you have written thank you...

and then nisha😡😡😡 no comments literally

raji her feelings were portrayed beautifully... ellame super about her... in the past... and then the fiasco caused by nisha and raji feeling hurt and then karthis anger👏👏

karthi holding raji when she was about to fall😳 making sure she is okiee glad he cares about her

vicky looks like a dodgy character dont like him😕 and raji ippo yethuku ivaluku intha theivalatha velaa just because angel told karthi to come she is going cinema illaa theriyuma kekuren ippadi avasara paduthu mudivu yeduthu naaliki pinn vilaivu irukum... paapom how you are going to portray this innu :)

waiting to know karthis reaction to raji going... but he is funny he cant take her laughing without anyone else loool

ithula the way you described vishnu and rajis relationship the way vishnu feels about raji was really nice i liked that thank akka

missed lakshmi though :(
angel seems only like a friend aana ithula ulkuthu iruka innu therila :/

thank you for the long update akka 👏

waiting for next one😳

thanks gayu for ur lengthy comment.. ,after the great deal of effort i had given for this update...it felt nice that my readers are appreciating my work..😃

dodgy character??/😲

oh god,

as a writer i shouldn't have revealed it earlier..but can't help.may be i have developed some liking towards that character..

for me vicky's character is very genuine one..he is a very nice,friendly,easy going ,harmless person..don't think bad of him..😃