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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: plily

Papom yena Ramya sis kudukaporanga nu.



neenga enna nallaa purunju vachirukkeenga Lily 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry for the late comment,sis...
caught with last 3 chapters...

really u have written it very well...

raji ivalavu seekaram othukuvaanu ninachu parkalai angel avanga homela thanguradhuku...

antha innoru vishayam,enna?...karthik enna maraikaran rajitta irunthu...

angel onnum problem create panna maatala KR naduvula?...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Kaadhal Enum Maaya Valai



Part 7 :

One day, when Raji was crossing the room where Angel stayed, she hears her talking to somebody..

Raji just peeps through the window where she saw Angel talking to herself...

But no.. She then got to know that Angel was talking to her mother by holding her photo..

'maa... yen maa ippadi panneenga? paavam Karthi.. ungalukku sathyam panni kuduthadhaala..', she says..

Raji just hears it silently and many things go on her mind..

'avan onsite ku family oda poittaan nu kelvipattu dhaane inga vandhen... adhuvum avan area va vittu innoru end la irukkura idam., kannla pada chance illa nu nambi vandhen...' Angel continues..

Raji is thinking about how they led to on-site and within few weeks they returned back as the project didn't kick off but was shut down... Likewise the new home they bought in this area and shifted recently...

'aanaa neenga sonnadhula oru vidhathula enakku sandhosham... enakku nu yaarum illa ngra feeling konjam kuranjirukku... oru safe aana feeling...'

'aanaa koodiya seekkiram paappaa va paarthukkura ammaa thirumba vandhadhum.. eppadiyaavadhu kelambidanum...'

Raji moves away from that place...




Next day :

She was at home on Saturday... But was deeply thinking about Angel... She began building up some kindness towards her and decided to make out something just to make her life happy...

On Sunday., while Angel was about to leave somewhere..,

'Angel.. oru nimisham.. naanum unga kooda varren..', Raji..

'illa.. naan church ku dhaan poren', she replies...

'yen... Church ku naan varakoodaadhaa? ' Raji.

'not like that... you are most welcomed..'

It was at a walkable distance...

Silence prevailed till they reach.. After the prayers., they both sit along a bench outdoors...

'hmmm... sollunga Raji..'

'enna sollanum? '

'edho pesanum nu dhaane vandheenga..?'

'yes.. u r right..'
she says...

Raji then starts to talk very casually asks sorry if she had hurt her...

'Lets be friends.. You are part of our family..'

Angel doesn't know how to react to this...

'enna dhideer maattram nu nenaikkureengalaa? ', Raji continues... 'utkkaarndhu yosichen.. '

She inquired did Karthik told anything for which Raji said about the promise he made to her mother..

Angel made it clear by asking what exactly he told and felt relieved that he said only partly...

'Raji.. if you really think me as a friend, that's fine... But now I think, you are just showing sympathy towards me... And then I consider this friendship won't be a real one ..
' Angel..

'adhilla Angel...'

'neenga sonnaalum sollala naalum.. appadi thaan...'

'fine... but I would say there won't be any trouble from my side..'


They return back home.. Angel was lost in thoughts about what Raji spoke...

Karthik is also surprised to see Raji's behavior towards Angel...



Sunday :

It was Sunday evening while everyone were relaxing., someone knocks the door..

Angel went to open the door..

There was a smart looking young man who kept staring at her...

'yaaru Angel? ' Karthik asks from inside..

The guy asks for Raji...

Angel opens the door fully and he came in..

Raji excited to see him after a long time and welcomes him..

She introduces him as her classmate and childhood friend to Karthik...

'Hi.. I'm Kamal'

'aal address eh illaama kaanaama poitta... ippo eppadi? by the way., how did u know I'm here?

'not a big deal... oorukku ponen... ungappaa kitta kettu address vaanginen'


Karthik went inside excusing himself, allowing the friends talk freely...

Kamal asks, 'Karthik... If you don't mind.. shall I stay here for a week? have an important work here in Chennai..'

Before he could answer 'there won't be disturbance... morning ponaa... varra night aayidum..'

'No problem boss..'

'Thank You..' 'happpaaa room edukkura velai micham...'
, Kamal.

'sariyaana kanjoos daa nee.,' Raji..

'sari... ketkanum nu nenachen... who is that beauty? ', asks naughtyly...

'yaaru? '

'adhaan paa... door open pannadhu...'

'she is our guest... Karthik's friend...'

'staying here? '

'ya... As a paying guest..'

'hmmm...'




During his stay, Kamal tried to utilize every chance he got to talk with her..

But Angel just gave a one word answer and moved away...

He simply liked her from the day one...

And now, it's time for him to leave as the work for which he came is done ..

Before he goes from there, he called upon Raji and opens the matter...

'Raji... Veetla romba naalaa marriage pathi pesitte irukkaanga... naandhaan thalli pottutte vandhen...'
, Kamal

'yendaa... yaarum sikkalayaa? '

'yes... but ippo ennoda dhevadhai ya paarthutten...'
, he says with some shyness,,,

' you mean Angel? ' Raji asks

He is surprised to know that she caught what was in his mind...

'hey.. eppadi Raji..? ,
Kamal

'dhevadhai naa Angel dhaane ?'

'vilayaadaadha Raji',
Kamal

'adhaan un moonjilaye ezhudhi ottirukke... nee avala paartha paarvaiye sollume..'

'thappaa edhuvum illa...'

'ya I know.. I got it... Actually naane yosichittu irundhen avaloda life pathi...'


As he gave a questioned look, Raji briefs about her..

'ippodhaikku avalukku naanga mattumdhaan... Let me talk to Karthik about it...'

Raji calls Karthik and Angel there and she tells her friend's proposal having Kamal beside her...

Both showed a shocking reaction...

'Raji...' Karthik drags...

'kavalapadaadha Karthik... I know about Kamal.. I'm sure Angel's life will be happy with him...'

'ippa adhu illa problem..'

'then... inga paaru karthik... naama dhaan nalla life uruvaakki kodukkanum.. naan enna pannalaam nu yosichittu irundhappa dhaan.. ivan thannoda viruppatha sonnaan..'
Raji

'adhellaam ok... did you think if Angel will agree to this? ' Karthik..

'needhaan pesi sammadhikka vaikkanum Karthik.. you should take that responsibility..'

'naamale pesittu irundhaa eppadi... Angel silent ah ve irukkaanga... sollunga.. what do u think? '
Kamal asks...

Angel still maintains silence...

Raji speaks up... 'Angel evlo naal ippadi iruppeenga? I think Kamal is the best choice... OK nu sonnaa... seekkirame kalyaanam..'

'No Raji.. adhu mudiyaadhu..'
Karthik says...

'enna olarra Karthik... yen mudiyaadhu? '
Raji asks...

'because.. she is .. ' while he was saying Angel shouts 'Karthik...'

'enna.. ? ava unnoda first lover.. adhaane? so... ava yaarayum kalyaanam pannikka koodaadhaa? '
Raji..

Kamal, 'Raji... enna solra nee? '

'aamaa... '

Angel walks away from that place...

Kamal also takes leave saying that he'll contact Raji later to discuss around this...

'unakke idhu sari nu padudhaa? nee marriage pannittu settle aayitta... ava mattum unnaye nenachittu irukkanumaa? adhuvum namma veetlaye..' Raji questions..

'oh... adhudhaan un prechanai.. ? adha neradiyaa sollaama... akkarai irukkura maadhiri pesuriyaa? ' he shows his anger.

'appadiyum vachukkulaam.. endha pondaatti dhaan ava purushanoda munnaal kaadhaliya kann munnadiye vachippaa? sollu Karthik...'

While they were speaking Sara starts crying loudly and Angel was trying to calm her down...

Raji walks fast and grab the child from her saying, 'nee onnum en kuzhandhaiya paarthukka thevai illa'

As she pulled her fast, the kid, which grabbed hold of Angel's chain got stuck with its hand...

Raji is shocked to see that it is a 'Thaali' chain.

Angel immediately puts it back inside her dress and about to go..

'nillu.. enna idhu? badhil sollittu po' Raji asks...

'Sorry... That's my personal..' saying so Angel walks off

After making Sara sleep, Raji has thought for a while..

'Kalyaanam aanadha yen marachu vaikkanum.. ? adhaan closed neck wear panraalo ?'

'oru vela Karthik kum theriyaadho? adhaan avan yaarum illa nu solraan pola..'

'I better tell this to him..'


She decides and goes and stands in front of Karthik

'Karthik... naan oru vishayam sollanum... kettaa nee shock aayiduva...' , Raji

'Shock aagura maadhiri appadi enna solla pora? '
he questions

'Angel is married... I saw her thaali.'

She looks on Karthik and he didn't show any reaction

'enna Karthik.. ? oru reaction um illa.. ?'

'pudhusaa kettaadhaane react panna... shock ah illayaa nu? '

'you mean? '

'yes... enakku yerkkanave theriyum'



-- to be continued...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi Ramy, nice twist. Intelligent thinking connecting Kamal's character with Angel. Angel is already married? Great going ma'am. Please break the suspense soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ayayo yen ippadiyellam suspense vakkireenga ok suspense quick ah mudichi vidunga
Nice part suspense than thanka mudiyala
Waiting for your update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very nice, raji iva nallava ilaa kettavala? I dont understand her attitude
omg angel married 😲 suspense thangalaa please break it soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fantastic!! Loved every little part! 😛


Super Super Ramya! 😃


Have you took a Literature course in college? Do u like reading? Writing?


Nice thought to bring Kamal in here... Staying with the wave huh? Cool! 😛


Update SOON! 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Gayathri30

Very nice, raji iva nallava ilaa kettavala? I dont understand her attitude



She is just like any other normal girl...

enna.. ellaathukkum udane react panniduvaa... as how our office Raji used to be earlier in the serial., slapped Karthik without knowing what happened actually...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sema twist, Ramya... Super update...

Oh Kamal also here... Very nice... Very nice..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ennappa... Ippadi oru shock? Seekiram clear pannungappa...

Great writing

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