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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: muthucheenu

Dear Anitha ma'am, thanks for a superb update. The way you maintain suspense is amazing, you are revealing the past in very small bits and pieces, more like jig-saw puzzles. You make a nice thriller/detective story writer! Evvalavu dhooram suspense ippadiye maintain panreengannu pakkalaam! 👏


Thank you..and Please call me Ani alias anitha..No Maam Plz...Suspense..cant be shown in a episode...koncham konchamaaa reveal panren..😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Rajee71

Anitha, super a irukku pa unga story

sema Suspense - Vijay avvalo ketavana.. very cheap attitude😡
Raji's father had told about Vijay to Karthik ? he knows these things before marriage or after marriage - seekiram reveal pannunga pa ...


Thanks Raji...Karthik knows what...What he never know...and when he comes to know..how he will react...answers will be known in next episode..😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Episode 11

Past:Raji's Room...Raji is unconsious...

Karthik:Athaaa..Enna achu raji kku...

Raji's Amma:Theriyalaa paaa...suddenaaa mayangi vilundhutaaa..

Messai:Mapillai irungaaa naaan poi Car ready panraen..Hospital ingaaa irundhu 10kms dhaan..

Karthik goes to raji...and touches her hair and says...Raji...Naaan iruken..Onnum ilaaa...

Messai:Vangaaa...hospital kku polaaam..

Karthik:Mama...neenga irungaaa...naaan rajiyaaa thokittu varen..

Messai:Mapillaai..adhu vandu...

Karthik:Mama...ungalukku nambikkai irukulaaa.naan raji kalyanam pannipennu..

Messai:Nambikkai irruku mapillai..

Karthik:Mama...endhaa situation layum..appidi raji melayae thappu irundhalum...naaan avalaa vittu pogamataen..

Raji amma pleades karthik with her two hands and says her daughter is very lucky...

Hospital...

Doctor:Ingaaa Raji ooda parents...koncham ennoda roomkku vareengala..

Messai:Mapillai neengalum vaangaaa..

Doctor:Ivaru Raji ooda husbandaaa..

Karthik:Yes Doctor..We are going to get married in 10 days..

Doctor:Ok Fine..Take ur seat..

Mapillai:Doctor en ponnuku enaa achu..

Doctor:Sir..i dont want to hide anything..Raji is suffering from severe Skin problem..Please frankly tell me what happened..otherwise we can never do anything..

Messai:Doctor..adhu vandu...

Karthik:Mama...please bayapadamaaa..sollunga...edhuvaaa irundhalum pathukalam..

Mapillai:Doctor oru 6 months kku minnadi...raji avaa classmate college laaa vijay nnu oruthanaaa..eve teasing panni...avakitaa misbehave panaaanu..complaint koduthutaaa...Anaaa avaaan jail laa irundhu 2 months laayae vandutaaan...6 months kku minnadi...raji avaaa perimaaa..ponnu simandhadhu kku pograppo...edho injection pottu taaan nnu raji sonaaa..andhaa second laaa irundhu..raji adikadi..unconsious agi..room laaa ukaandhu azharaaa...treatement..doctor nnu sonnalae...sucide pannipennu..sonaaa..adhaaan..naanum onnum sollalaa..

Doctor:What...What the hell you are telling..See Mr.Karthik..I cant understand..Even though she said..Dont you have any sense...You know what has happened to raji now?Are you aware of Raji's Condition?

Karthik:Doctor Please raji kku enaa achunu sollunga..

Doctor:See Mr.Karthik..Vijay nu raji appa sonnarae...He is so clever..He has forcibly injected an injection called "Cortisone Injection"..Adhu oru slow poision madiri...And on the top of that raji not knowing seriousness...she has delayed the treatement..Andhaa injection koncham konchaam skinsaaa affect pannum...Seri...indhaa incident nadandhu evalavu masaam agudhu..Please tell me sir...Dont cry...We need to face the fact..

Messai:Doctor oru 6 months agirukkum..

Doctor:i Have diagnosed raji very well..She is very strong woman..i have never imagined..Indhaa injection ooda beautyae...koncham konchamaaa velayaaa kamikkum..If you would have delayed some more months..Raji would have died too...

Karthik gets emotional...
Karthik:Doctor...ingaaa treatement koduthaaa..will everything be alright..
Doctor:Karthik..I understand your concern..In Medical Science everything is possible..Raji nalaaa Will power ulaaa ponnu nu i think..She has withstand all the pain she would have got in this skin problem..I mean to say..Day by day...koncham leg pain irundhirukkum..Injection potavaaan..heavy dose podalaaa...Adhunalaaa..Nothing to worry..But Karthik i want to talk to you personally..Sir koncham neenga velilaaa wait pannungaa..

Messai:Edhuvaaa irundhalum..enkitaayum sollunga doctor..

Karthik:Mama...naaan iruken laaa..naaan appram maaa solren..neengaa reception laaa wait pannunga..

(Mute conversation going on between karthik and doctor) and finally karthik says...

Karthik:Doctor..No problem..I will take care and as you advised we both will live accordingly until the treatement is over..

Doctor:Karthik...Raji is really lucky to have you...and another thing..Raji semaa thunichalanaa ponnu..

Karthik:I am lucky to have raji doctor..

Present:

Karthik opens his eyes and it is morning...he searches for raji but she is not there...

Karthik shouts...raji...

Raji:Karthik...naaan ingaaa iruken...

Karthik:Ingaaa enaaa panraaa...

Raji:Karthik morning laaa irundhu...rombaaa ichingaaa iruku...

Karthik:Engaaa raji...idhaaa enaaa eluppi sollradhukku enaaa..

Raji:Karthik...legslaaa ichingaaa irunduchu...adhaaan andhaaa oinment podalam nu..

Karthik:Unmaiya solludi...Nethi..andhaaa red colour capsule saaptiyaa ilayaaa..

Raji:Karthik...marandhuten..

Karthik:Hey looosu...erumaaa...

Raji:Eppo edhukku enaaa thitraaa...
Karthik:Thitaa maaa..enadee idhu...last treatement kku innum konchaaa naal dhaaan iruku...neee eppidi tension pannadhaa please dee..seri eppo iching irukaaa..

Raji:Eppo illadaaa...
Karthik:Nejamaaa...
Raji:Satiyamaaa...

Karthik:Indhaaa sareeaaa kattikoo...

Raji:Karthik adhuvandu...

Karthik:Ennadee mulikuraaa...

Raji:Adhuvandu...ennaku saree katta theriyadhu..

Karthik:Appo namaaa marriage anniku yaaru kattivitaadhu..

Raji:Enga amma dhaan eppavum kattividuvaanga..

Karthik:Adi pavi...unnaku vekkamaa ilaaa..kalyanam agi saree katta theriyadhunu solraaa..Seri seri..andhaaa sareaaa edhu

Raji:Edhukku...

Karthik:Naan katti vidren..edhu dee..time agudhu laaa..

Raji closes her eyes with her two hands and says "Ennaku vekkamaa varudhu" karthik...



Karthik comes near and says her to just close her eyes and he will make her wear this beautiful and her favorite colour..Slowly he touches her skin...she gets mesmerized and suddenly stops him in the middle..

Raji:Hey iru...unnaku eppidi saree katta theriyum...adhaaa first sollu..

Karthik's(Mind Voice):Evaaa maraavae mataaa..

Raji:Enna silentaaa irukaaa..soldraaa..illanaaa..naaan unaaa..

Karthik:Hey...unnaku saree kataaa theriyadhu nnu enna minnadiyae theriyum..adhaaan Google panni..eppidi kataaanumnu..2 days kku minnadi..trail enakae uduthi pathukuten..udanae..unnoda karpanaaa kudurayae...odavidadhaaa..

Raji:Sorry Chellam..

Karthik:Aiyaaa..asaduvaliyudhu...thodaaa..

Karthik slowly starts opening the saree and keeps his hand in her waist it is as soft as peacock feather...and raji gets goosebumps throught her skin...Karthik unable to control and kisses her waist...Raji slowly goes near karthik and hugs him tightly..

Raji:Karthik...

Karthik:Hmmm...

Raji:Dei sareeae kaatividu daaa...

Karthik slowly takes the pleat and segregates it properly and align the pleats and now he takes the saree pin and pin it in the blouse further..He takes the fashion jewellery and put a matching earing on raji's ear and Kiss her ear it is as sweet as Rasagulaaa...😳😳..raji gets awkward and emotional too..

Raji:Hey edaallam eppo daaa vangunaaa...

Karthik:Eppayooo...namaaku marriage agrathukku minnadi..

Karthik put the lays and back zip of her blouse and kiss on her neck twice..

Raji:Karthik...mudinchidaaa..

Karthik:iru main matter...bindi edhukuraen..

Raji:Appidiyae andhaaa kumkumathayum edhudaaa..

Karthik applies sindoor on raji's forehead and kiss her forehead and both stays in each other embrace for a long time..

VL knocks the door...KR opens the door...VL starts laughing..

Vishnu:Karthik Sir...ennapa idhu..

Karthik:Edhu...

lakshmi:Unnoda Favorite blue shirtaaa andhaa dressing mirrorlaaa paaru..raji ooda kumkumam otti iruku...Asadu valiyadhingaaa..kelambalamaaa..

Vishnu:Hey iru iru...Idhu yaaru raji yaaa...naan edho kalyanaa ponnunu nenachaen..

Karthik:Ennoda pondati melaaa kannu vekaadhaa daaa..En chellam..vadaaa polaaam..

Lakshmi:Ellam planning ooda dhaan nadakudhaaa..

KR in chorous says :Yes...

Vishnu:Lachu..Please vaaa..ingaaa ennalaaa nikaamudiyalaa..ennaku mood vandirum..Dear Husband and Wife..romanceaaa night continue pannunga..Temple kku time agudhu polamaaa..

Precap:

Present:KR in temple..Karthik gives annadhanam to the poor people in temple and does archanai in name of raji..

KR lovable and romantic temple visit with VL..Dont miss it..

What happenes next..Dont miss for another romantic and lovable temple KR love...on friday..
















Edited by anithu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Semma update... And suspense..semmaya pogudhu...

Lovely..:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow... nice update Anitha...
So problematic disease.. unimaginable... but felt happy that it is in curable state..

loved this Karthik and Raji - understanding pair..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Ramya05

Semma update... And suspense..semmaya pogudhu...

Lovely..:)


Thank you Ramya..Ya more unexpected twist and turns waiting for all in KR life and VL too😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Rajee71

Wow... nice update Anitha...

So problematic disease.. unimaginable... but felt happy that it is in curable state..

loved this Karthik and Raji - understanding pair..


Thanks Rajee...Ya it happens...Some injection may cause our life too..😭😭

KR yaa understanding Pair..But soon..Raji the great kovilpatti veralakshmi you will see...hehe
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Posted: 11 years ago
Super update anithu but doctor didn't revealed ddoctorsinstruction this too bad .when is next update ammu waiting
🤗 This is for your flawless update and by the romantic too

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Posted: 11 years ago
Very lovely and romantic update dear. Karthik understanding on Raji condition is super pa. Loveable couple 😳 ❤️ . PMku nandri anithu sis.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ammukuty

Super update anithu but doctor didn't revealed ddoctorsinstruction this too bad .when is next update ammu waiting

🤗 This is for your flawless update and by the romantic too


Thanks Ammu...haaa...ippodhaan 50% suspense break agirukku..innum sila palaa episodes aagum...Next update on friday

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