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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
Semaya poguthu story...its just awesome👏...
pls cont soon,dovee...
waiting for next part😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi Dovee,

First of all I am super happy that you started writing again after your previous OS!

As I started reading your story, I was a little confused since the pairings were different and I wondered who Raji's pair if she were to get one would be. Then I found it interesting how you paired KVRL. As the story progressed it got deeper and deeper and the past story is super interesting. When Karthik was reading the letter, I started getting a little emotional also and got attached to the story. I love the concept and the flashbacks with Karthik and Raji, I can totally picture this as a 2.5 hr movie. Including Angel, Gautham and the idea of both companies working together is awesome!

Can't wait to see what happens next!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
Different story line 👏
Next yenna nadakumnu guess pannave mudiyala pa
waiting for the next update 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Lekha96

superb update dovee, bore aa irukanu kekadinga super aa iruku story😊
difrnt aana storyline,good try dovee.
Waiting 4 next part


Thankyou so much
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: shiningstar77

Semaya poguthu story...its just awesome👏...
pls cont soon,dovee...
waiting for next part😊


Thnk u
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Smiles-20

Hi Dovee,

First of all I am super happy that you started writing again after your previous OS!

As I started reading your story, I was a little confused since the pairings were different and I wondered who Raji's pair if she were to get one would be. Then I found it interesting how you paired KVRL. As the story progressed it got deeper and deeper and the past story is super interesting. When Karthik was reading the letter, I started getting a little emotional also and got attached to the story. I love the concept and the flashbacks with Karthik and Raji, I can totally picture this as a 2.5 hr movie. Including Angel, Gautham and the idea of both companies working together is awesome!

Can't wait to see what happens next!


Thk u so much [>:D <]
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Devino

Different story line 👏

Next yenna nadakumnu guess pannave mudiyala pa


waiting for the next update 😊



Thnx a lot
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
Thx fr d wonderful support friends [>:D <]
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Meendum oru murai(part 4)


Raji wonders " karthik yenna pathi ippo romba thappa ninaichurpan ,nan yenna panrathu " .she keeps on walking in conferance room. Kowshik shouts" stop it raji" .Raji quickly stops and turns back .



kowshik" work time ley wat u doing here" .Raji" kowshik athu vanthu" . Kowshik" Look raji unaku kodutha module ah innum four hours ley finish pani report varanum puryutha" .Raji nods . Koushik asks" ippo un cabin ku poga poriya illey ingey dream contnue panratha idea va .Raji murmurs " ivan thollai thangaley " she moves .


Raji 's gets a call from Lakhsmi . Lakshmi "hey Raji innaiku evg outing pogalam ah rendu perum" . Raji"athu vanthu" .Lakhsmi" vanthu poi yellam illey sharp ah 6 .30 ku varuven " .she keeps d phone down.Raji gets confused again " iva vera ,ippo marupadyum karthik ah meet pananumey " .




vishnu comes to raji .vishnu" yenna raji disturbed ah vey irukkey" . Raji " oruthar ku namma mela kobam iruntha yeppadi katuvanga" .vishnu " thituvanga unna mathri " . Raji" kindal panam ah serious ah answer pannu" .vishnu " unaku ippo yenna venum" .Raji " illey yen friend ku nan oru thappu paniten ,ana ava ippo yethumey nadakatha mathri iyalpa irukka" .



vishnu " onnu bayangra kobam ah irukkum ,illen ah she just forgived u & moved on " .Raji "ana vishnu" . vishnu " Raji thevai illam ah confuse panikatha ,karthi lakhsmi nama pudhu friends so avanga engagement ku nama superb gift ah vangi asathanum " .


Raji replies " please vishnu ne ithellam parthuka" . vishnu " un selection than yeppavum super ah irukkum , so seekram decide pannu ,evg porom" . Raji sits and thinks .


#collage days



karthik yenga Raji koopitu porey".Raji "shopping ".Karthik"oye anga vanthu venumney lovers thara gift
ah vangi koduka vachutu,yena kalaika koodathu".Raji"ilada,yen birthday varuthu illa,athan please oru
saree select pani koden".karthik"yena poi saree select pana soluriye,unaku yethum arivu irukka
,illiya".Raji"athu yellam select pana varum da,ne pesam ah va".Karthik"un birthday anniku ne alaga


irukanum athuku yena poi select pana soluriya nyayam ah".Raji "pulambam ah vada".karthik"nala
ketuko nama friends than,thevai ilam ah apuram tease pana kodathu".

Raji"sari sari,tese pana maten ne
va".
Karthik" gets shocked".Raji"yenda ippadi oru reaction kodukurey".Karthik"yenathu saree select
pananum ah".Raji"oru saree thaney select pani koduka sonne,nan yenomo saree kadiye vangi koduka
sona mathri feal avura".Karthik"illa ithu yellam thappu". Raji"yaru sonna".karthik" Madhan
sollirkan,intha ring,dress yellam lovers matum than gift panuvanga nu".


Raji"un manasula onnum ila
thaney".karthik"amam,analum". Raji"yena analum,appo un manasu light ah vila arambikuthu".karthik
smiles and says "irukalam". Raji gets tensed.Karthik"hey yena achu". Raji "pina yenada neyaaa
pesunathu".

karthik smiles"oye yena ne matum than otivuya,nangalum seivom".Raji"athaney parthen,ne
yeppo da,intha love yellam sola porey".Karthik"sari va select panuren". she says okay.karthik takes a
saree"ithu okay ya".Raji"sucks".Karthik"ithu". Raji"sumar ah irukku da".karthik"ne yethu katunalum
appadithan iruppa".Raji"select panu".karthik takes a light blue color saree and asks "ithu yeppadi
irukku". Raji jumps and says "hey yenoda favorite color,also superb design da,selection superb".karthik
smiles and replies "inky pinky ponky potu parthen".

Raji comes to beat him.Karthik escapes . Raji"superb
ah irukku da,ithu yenoda favorite color,analum athigam use pana maten".karthik"theryala Raji,saree
select panumbothu,nijam ah ,oru thrill irukku,superb feal irukku,yena va irukkum".
Raji gets
tensed.Karthik"love paniduven oh". she gets shocked.Karthik"yena ne ippadi shock kodukra". Raji
smiles.Karthik"sari va,kilambalam nama verum friends than".Raji"athaney neyum love
sollitalum".Karthik"neyum sonathum oru nala reaction koduthutalum".Raji "mothal ah sollu apuram parkalam " .

karthik " apadiye oru cofee sapidalam ah " .Raji " ne thotutey irukkey da friendship line ah thandurey" .karthik " ithu yellam aniyayam friends sernthu coffee kudika koodatha" .Raji laughs
# collage days


Raji comes out of her thinking mode . Raji thinks "appo puryaley ana ippo karthik ah parthathum something wrong with me , avanoda engagement ah parkra sakthi yenaku illey " .she was disturbed by a call . Raji thinks " yenna ithu unknown number ah irukku " .


Raji says " hello" . karthik " Raji" .Raji gets shocked " yen number yeppadi unaku" .karthik " periya secret lakhs kita keta solura" .Raji gets annoyed hearing lakhs .mindvoice " athu yenna lakhs , lakhsmi nu sollamatan akum"


karthik " Raji ne yenna parthathum disturb agurey , past is past , atha nama matha mudyathu ,athu pathi yeppavum yarkitayum sollamaten , Madhan um sollamatan , so ne yeppavum pola be happy dont think too much about d past , i moved on " .he keeps the phone down without waiting for her reply .


Raji gets surprised .she thinks " athu avlo easy illey karthik , namma rendu perkumey kastam ,parkatha varai easy ippo yenna agumnu yenakey puryaliyey " . Raji holds her head and sits on d chair



karthik keeps the phone down and sits . Madhan" ithu nijam ah" .karthik"yethu" . Madhan"i moved on nu sonniye athu" . karthik" unmaiya sollatum ah " . Madhan"sari sollu" . karthik"aapove raji ah parthurntha sandai potrupen ana ippo athu yellam seiya thonaley, ana intha manasu yetho miracle nadaka koodatha nu thonuthu" .


Madhan gets shocked .karthik " yenada yosikrey" .
Madhan " lakhsmi kita yeppadi solrathu" . karthik"ava yeppavum yenna thappa ninaika mata" . Madhan "lets see" .


karthik gets call from vishnu .vishnu" machan are you free" . karthik" illa da yen " .vishnu " appo terrace la utkarnthu yenada panitu irukkey " . karthik turns to see vishnu standing with a smile.

karthi" illa macha ivan kooda busy ah pesitu irunthen nu solla vanthen " .vishnu" hmm chumma intha pakkam vanthen pudhu friend veedu inga thaney irukku athan surprise visit .

Karthik " superb" .

Karthik takes vishnu to his room. vishnu takes albums and continued to see pics . karthik gets a call frm sushan .he starts to talk. Madhan comes in asking" karthik vishnu yenga ponan" . karthik " inga than album parthutu irunthan " .

Madhan takes the pic and gives to karthik. both get shocked .



friends hope i didnt bored you all .
Thnx fr d support
Edited by dovee - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow!! a very interesting, different story line. Great job, keep writing. Looking forward to the next part. 👏

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