short SS :Meendum oru murai part 15(pg36) updated - Page 12

Originally posted by: Smiles-20

Suspense ending, wonder who it is, thanks Dovee!

Thank you so much smiles

Thanks for the suspense update dovee. Cant wait to know who is the girl. Please update soon friend.

ss: meendum oru murai (part 8)


karthik get shocked to see her . Kdad" yena da thiru thiru nu mulikrey " .karthik " hmm intha ponnu thaney ,appo yenaku kalyanam venam " . Kdad " yen vendam " karthik " pidikaley " .kmom " reason sollu accept panrom " . karthik " hmm kurumbu jasthi "


.Kdad " sellathu sellathu " .
karthik " yenaley mudyathu " .Kmom" oh apadiya aprom yenna seiya porey " . karthik " hmm yenaku ponna pidikaley " . The trio laughs Raji " hey reason ah sollu da na " . karthik " ne konjam alaga irukkey ,smart ah irukkey" .


Raji " adapaavi " .karthik" iva romba tease panra so marraige vendam "
Kdad " appo sari Raji vidu ivan vendam unakku " .karthik " yenna vachu comedy ah panreenga moonu perum " . kdad " aprom yenda itha maraicha" . karthik " dad past vendamnu ninaichen " .


Kmom " nalla sollu da ivaluku , ivlo early morning kilambi vanthu solura " .
kdad " yeppovo sencha thappu atha sariyum paniachu ,enjoy panratha vitutu yen Raji confuse panikurey " .


Raji " illey yen mansakuley oru nerudal irunthutey irukku " .karthik " sariyana santhega puthi unaku " . Raji "poda yen kavalai unaku puryaley " . karthik " purya vendam " . kdad "dei dei sandai yellam aprom podalam mothal ah drop panitu va"


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karthik " hmm nan maten nan kobam ah irukken " .Raji " romba alumbu panra da ne " .karthik " neenga moonu perum yenna tease paneenga illey so mudyathu " . Raji " avan ah vidunga uncle nan poikren , nan thaniya poikren " .


vishnu comes in saying " nan irukken Raji unaku " .karthik " kosuthollai jasthiya irukkey " . Vishnu " boss sandai aprom vachukalam ippo koopitu poren " . she goes from there .


Evening


Lakhsmi " yenama kalakurey ne " .Angel " hmm kalyanam athum lover koodavey all the best " . Lakhsmi " yenna achu innum kanoom " . Raji " bayama irukku lakhsmi " .Angel" yenna bayam " .


Raji " oye nethaney life la negative side um undu nu sonney " .


Angel " amam ,karthik parents ku ippovey vishyam theryarathu nallathu nu ninaichen ,appadi sonnen ,ippo yenna athuku " .Raji " Theryala adi manasu yetho solla varuthu" .Lakhsmi " athu appadi than yethavthu ularum ne enjoy pannu " ..


After few hours .


karthik and Raji exchange Rings .all gets happy.karthik & Raji moves to terrace.
Karthik" Raji yethum sollanum ah" .Raji " yenaku theryaley da ,yetho oru bayam irunthutey irukku" .karthik "appo yenna santhega padriya"


Raji "poda loosu ,namma marraige ku yetho problem varumnu thonuthu" . .
karthik" yenna achu nu sollu" .Raji " nethu oru dream " .karthik " hmm aprom" .Raji "nan unakaga stage ley malai oda wait panitey irukken ,ne varavey illey " .
karthik laughs out " ithuku than ivlo periyaa pulambal ah " . Raji " karthii" . karthik" ippove register marraige panikalam ah " .


Raji " athellam vendam ,namma marraige rituals oda oru oru moment um enjoy pananum da" . karthik"appo un dream ah maranthudu" .Raji" karthik,yeppavum ne yen kooda iruppa illey " .


karthik" mudyathu darlz , nan vera office ,ne vera office " .Raji " yen pulambal unaku comedy ah irukku illey" .karthik"sathyam ah comedy ah than irukku " .Raji comes to beat him.karthik runs from there.


Next Day


Evening
Raji walks in her room .she saw a pendant her mind goes back to collage days


#collage days


Raji hurriedly runs on the steps . she slips and about to fall.Karthik catches her in arms. Raji "Good Good lover na ippadithan irukanum superb catch da,un kanu kooda pesuthu".karthik " yenathu lover ahh nooo am just your friend " leaves her suddenly


Raji falls down and shouts"adapaavi,yenda kela vita,ah en idupu".karthik"moov thadavu sari agidum". Raji 'athukum ne than da thookitu poganum,kai ya kodu da"
.karthik lifts her up.


Raji"nijam ah than da,oru second un eyes um,en eyes um meet panuchu illa, un kanula thousands of words da,una kanna parthave pothum,yena ninaikra nu sollidalam".Karthik"hey loosu ,poi solrathukum alavu undu".


Raji "kandu pidichutiya da mama". Karthik " sari yenga ivlo vegam ah porey " . Raji" music class da " . karthik " sari sari nan kilambaren " .


Raji stops him and asks "karthiii".karthik"yena venum unaku". Raji"vera yena ,vera yena vendum , nan nallathaney paduren ".Karthik"patu nalathan irukku,ana ne padrathu than sagikala".


Raji" yen voice ku yena kuraichal".Karthik"athu nalathan irukku,ana intha shruti,layam yellam than odi poidtanga,avangala koopitu vantha sari agidum".


Raji beats him playfully and says "poda,ne antha judge ah vida mosam".Karthik"antha judge thaney ,yeppo paru shruti ya koopitu varala,sangathi ya serthukala nu,yethum sollitey irukanga ". Raji"sari vidu da,ne sollen nan intha competition la win panuven ah".


karthik "adipaavi unna encourage panna sonnen ,yenaku music pathi onnum theryathu " .Raji " please da , i lost my energy " . karthik" boost kudi energy varum " .Raji gives an angry look. karthik" appo horlicks " .


Raji " poda am tensed .karthik"antha judge yena solrathu,ne than winner nan solren,un friend solren u going to rock.".
Rajii'dei ne yellam sona,cup koduka matanga".karthik"just be confident ,get focused ,venumna paren,win panalanalum,third runner up avathu vanguva"


.Raji'adapaavi,athulayum fourth place ah " .karthik " Raji oru vishyam sollanum " .Raji " yenna" .karthik" vara vara unna romba pidichurku , i love this friendship" . he goes from there. He places a pendant on her hands and says " all the best " .he moves from there.


Raji " omg ivan vera love paniduvan pola irukkey ,yen kutty brain yevlo shock than thangum " .


#collage days

karthik phones raji. Raji " yenna karthik" .karthik" innum disturbed ah irukkiya " .Raji "solla theryaley " .karthik" unaku oru surprise " .Raji " yenna athu" .karthik " shock sweet shock" .



Raji " yenna athu" .karthik" namma project presantation rendu perum sernthu seiya porom " . Raji gets happy . karthik " hey aprom inoru vishyam " .Raji " yenna da" .karthik " next weekend sangeet funtion irukku as you wish ,semmaiya enjoy panalam " .



Raji " presantation irukkey da" .karthik" yeppadyum koushik & sushan kurai solratha vida porathu illey so no tention " . Raji " ne irukkiye " .karthik " good night darlz ,lakhs koopidra in second call " . Raji " love you karthik" .karthik " love you too" .



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Karthik calls Raji. Raji" hey sunday athum ah yenda ivlo seekram disturb panra".karthik"adipaavi,ippo time yena aguthu theryum ah". Raji"yena time ah iruntha yena,innaiku sunday so ,thookam vara varai thoonganum ,ithan yen policy".Karthik"nala policy".



Raji"sari da,ippo ethuku koopita".karthik"bore adikuthu,outing pogalam ah". Raji"yenda friends yarum kidaikliya".Karthik"illa,ippo ne vara poriya illiya". Raji'sari da,ana yenga". Karthik"coffee shop ku va ". Raji"sari". Raji walks in coffee shop.Karthik'appadiye left la irukra hall ku va ".



Raji"ethuku da,anga ".Karthik'solren ne pesam ah va". Raji steps in,rose petals starts to fall on her . she starts to enjoy.she walks in Balloons starts to fly and the whole room decorated with color papers,balloons ,with beautiful flowers.


The lights starts to glow. Raji softly says "karthik". Karthik "come on ". Raji steps towards the table which kept in the centre. Raji walks in the dim light,she moves nearer ,she goes near with a smile.Karthik standing seeing the wall.she moves towards the cake .


Raji'thirumbu da, semma build up kodukra ne ".Karthik"ne candle blow panitu,cake cut pannu,apuram than thirubuven". Raji "yethuku da intha surprise yellam".Karthik"solren sei ".Raji lights up the candles and cuts the cake saying "Karthik i love you".The guty turns around, Raji get shocked and faints down


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Raji wakes up screaming"nooo". she takes the water and drinks. Raji thinks"yenachu yenaku,oru varusathuku apuram avan pathi yenaku yen kanavu varanum". Raji walks in fear"marupadyum vanthuduvan ah".



Karthik calls Raji . Raji "sollu da".karthik"yena Raji,ivlo low va irukku voice" . Raji " athu vanthu " .karthik" hmm nan oru madayan , ne thooka kalakathula irukkey "


Raji " amam athan nalla thookam " .karthik " ne dream la romba disturb panrey athan call panen " . Raji " hmm sari " .karthik " ithu sari illiye" . Raji " yethu" karthik" hmm ippadi sonathuku ineram ne thitti iruppa ,un reaction doubt ah irukkey "



Raji " dei pesam ah phone ah vai thookam varuthu" .karthik" ithan yen raji ". He kisses the phone & keeps down.

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Raji feels "yena ithu avan ah pathi ippo poi kanavu varuthu,ithu pathi veetla sollalam ah,vendam ah, kadauvleyyy yen avan yenaku nayabagam varan,avan yen life la varavey koodathu".


Next Day

Lakhsmi" seekram da".karthik"wait lakhsmi,yen bike makkar panuthu". Lakhsmi" bike makkar panala,un manasu than makkar panuthu,un bike ilana ,car eduthutu va da,enaku time achu"



Karthik"romba kodumai paduthara ne " .Lakhsmi"two minutes than wait panuven".karthik jumps "wow apuram kobichutu poiduviya ".


Lakhsmi"ninaiputhan polapa kedukuthu da, nan rendu bike tyre um puncture pani vituduven".Karthik gets scared and runs inside to take the key.


In shopping mall


Karthik drops Lakhsmi saying'sari,ne mokkai podu,nan suthi parthutu varen".Lakhsmi"olunga mobile ah nala vai,silent la irunthchu,theryam ah switch off agidchu nu kathai vita nu vai,apuram"


karthik'sariya ana ratchasi,unaku friend ah irunthu nan padra kastam irukkey".vishnu comes and says "nan iruken da unaku,un kastatha thangi ka ,nan irukken macha".


Lakhsmi " yena kolupa rendu perkum".Karthik"illiye nan colostral less food than sapidren ippo yellam,sathyam ah nambu ". Lakhsmi " mokai joke ah stop panu". vishnu "sari da macha, va coffee sapidalam". Lakhsmi"ila shopping pogalam".karthik'ethuku inaiku meeting"



vishnu "yetho gift vangitharen nu sona da,yen birthday varuthu ila".Karthik"oh sernthu select panreengla,sari sari seekram select panitu yena koopidunga".



karthik walks from there. vishnu"dei yenga pora".Karthik"coffee shop la irukken macha,shopping mudichutu koopidu". vishnu 'sari da,vera yengavthu pona sollitu po da".karthik says okay.


Lakhsmi and vishnu goes in to select the gifts. Karthik walks to game center.karthik hits a guy accidently. Karthik'sorry boss".The guy gives an angry look.Karthik"sorry nu sonnen".


The guy"athellam sollitey illa,apuram yena pesam ah,veliya parthutu poda". Karthik gets surprised and starts to walk.The guy turns and looks at him angrily.


Next day


karthik comes with a gift. Raji "wow karthi ,gift yaruku yenaka". Karthik smiles"amam unakey than ". Raji "wow nijam ah yenakaga vanguniya". karthik " ,unakaga oru oru kadaiya ,yeri iranga parthu parthu vangunen theryuma". Raji"ana ippo en birthday kooda illiye,apuram yethuku'.



karthik"birthday ilana yena, intha diwali,pongal ippadithan gifts kodukanum ah,lovers na ,reason ilama ah kooda kodukalam,thappu ila,nanum apapdithan".


Raji gets dreamy. karthik"yena vanatha parkra,anga yaru irukka". Raji"unaku avalo pasam ah karthik, enakaga gift kooda select panitu vanthurka". Karthik" gifts yellam kodutha than un mela priyam ah irukeen nu artham ah,gift kodukalan ah,kammiya love panren nu artham ah,what rubbish ".


Raji "haiyoo ,kobichukatha,oru flow la solliten,gift eh kodukalanalum,ne yen mela vachurkra priyam enaku theryum,yarum sola vandyathu illa karthik".


she looks at him. .He smiles Raji"sari yena gift nu sollave illiye".



karthik "partha suspense poidum,,so neeya guess pannu". Raji "oru ring".karthik'athuku yethuku da,ivlo periya box". Raji "appo yena nu neye solen".



.karthik"guess pana kooda mudyatha ,somberi ". Raji "sari nan somebri ponnu ,attu ponnu ,porupu ilathava ippadi yethu venalum vachuko,enaku problem illa,ana ne yena nu solen please". karthik"kandipa sollanum ah ".


Raji in pleading tone"yes sollen please,enaku gift ah parkratha vida,un vayala solli atha ketkrathu than romba pidichurku".



karthik smiles"you are so cute ".Raji "amam thirtathu yellam thititu so cute ah".karthik"nan yena panrathu,una matum than galatta pana mudyum,vera yaravthu poi seiyya mudyum ah",



Raji "yepadi karthik ippadi yellam yosikira".karthik"athu yellam thana oru flow la varuthu ". Raji " sari yena gift nu sollu". karthik" solla mudyathu". Raji " yen mudyathu". karthik" athu appadithan".



vishnu comes and asks "yena karthik correct ah parthu thaney vangun ah". vishnu snatches gift from him saying"un kaila irunthu vangunthu therincha ,apuram ne select panaliya nu ketu othaipa".


Raji "adapaavi,appo ithu enaku illiya".karthik"illiye". Raji "appo ivlo neram sonathu". karthik gets up and says "athu onnum illa,poluthu pogaliya athan konjam neram pesitu irukalamnu".


He runs from there ,before she replies. vishnu gets confused . Raji explains . vishnu "aha semmaiya kalaaichutan ah " .Raji " collage days la nan tease panuven , ippo yrnna vida kedi agitan " . vishnu laughs .


Karthik walks to his car. He gets shocked to see the condition of his car. He reads the note which kept near his vehicle .

" stay away from Raji ,else i will make you to go away forever" .


karthik crushes the paper and utters " coward fellow ,nerla pesa thairyam illey ,cha ithu vera raji ku therincha innum bayapada arambichuduvaley,presantation vera irukku pavam ava " .He thinks.


The same guy whom karthik met in coffee shop keeps on looking at karthik from a distance with intense anger in his eyes.


Friends hope i didnt bored you all .Thx fr ur support

Hmmm... Enada ellam smootha poguthaeynu parthen... Vandhuthan villan


Whom ever it may be... I am sure karthick won't let down raji for any reason...

Originally posted by: JPriyaK

Hmmm... Enada ellam smootha poguthaeynu parthen... Vandhuthan villan


Whom ever it may be... I am sure karthick won't let down raji for any reason...

Thx priya [>:D <] standing togather & facing probs is the theme here 😊 .hope i didnt bored you all

Originally posted by: dovee

Thx priya [>:D <] standing togather & facing probs is the theme here 😊 .hope i didnt bored you all

Boring???? Not at all. Increasing the eagerness in reading the next update is the success of the current one.

In that way you are excellent.

Good going. Continue...

Waiting for another good chapter...

Nice update... Jovial k is nice to see:)

Achucho... Villain entry has happened?

Wow curious to know more about this villain!

Oh...dovee...very nice update...

athana,villain varalayenu parthen...seri enna aanalum enaku kavalai illai...athan karthik irukanla.😉

intha karthika enaku romba pidichuruku..😳...

great job,dovee...

u simply rocks,👏

continue...waiting😊

Dovee, Kalakkureenga neenga..