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Posted: 11 years ago
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PLOT

This will be a merge of Office and Kana Kanum Kalangal Kallooriyin kadhai (K5) with few scenes from the serials and the rest being my imagination.

HOPE YOU ALL LIKE IT.

KRVL same characterization . Karthik and Raji fell for each other but still playing the hide & seek game and call it as FRIENDSHIP.





Venue : Fantastic Four in canteen

Laksh : hey.. apparam oru vishayam... solla marandhutten.. innum konja naalla .. namma

office ku pudhu pasanga varaanga...

Vish : naanga join panni konja naal dhaan aachu... adhukulla innoru batch ah ?

Laksh : adhula oru ponnu unga college nu pottu irundhadhu.. peru kooda edho

ANGEL nu irundhadhu..

Karthi and Vishnu : (shocked and sees each other)

Laksh : enna Vishnu.. oru reaction num illa.. eppadiyum andha ponnu unakku

therinjirukume...

Vish : adhaan yaara irukum nu yosittu irukken...

Laksh : sari.. yenaku vela irukku.. vaa Raji polaam.. (both leaves)

Karthi : ava yenda inga varaa.. naan inga irukkennu avalukku theriyum la

Vish : theriyum nu dhaan nenkiren... Raji ku ava un ex' nu theriyumaa ?

Karthi : illa da... but munnadi oru love break up aanadhu nu theriyum.. yaaru, eppadi

nu theriyaadhu...

Karthi : adhaan ava Chandru voda US la settle aaga ponaala... ippo yennavaam da...

Vish : ennakku eppudi da theriyum... adhu avalaa irukkaadhu.. namma college la

ava mattum dhaan ANGEL ah ?

Karthi : dei... jayalakshmi na kooda common name da... aanaa Angel nu vera yaarum

irundhadhaa theriyala...

Vish : aamaa appadiye ivarukku ella theriyum...

neeye break-up aanadhuku apparam depression la suthittu irundha...

apparam paadhi naal college ke varala...

Karthi : (morachifies)

Vish : moraikaadha da... unma dhaane...

Ok.ok. ippo enna adhu un aala illaayanu theriyanum... naan ennoda influence

use panni kandu pidikiren..

Karthi : onnum thevai illa.. moodittu velaiya paaru da.. varrappa paathukalaam...

Vish : indha Vishnu oru dhadava mudivu pannitta avan pecha naane

kekkamaattaan...

Karthi : ennavo panni thola ...

-------- thodarum -----------

Edited by ramyvijay - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Nice attempt ramya...
Seekram next part update pannu😉😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
So the story is starting from here!!! Next enna nadakum'nu wait panite iruken. Update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
hey twinnie superb attempt da 🤗
k5 with office nice
update next part Asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice part ramya...🤗
.merging k5 and office sounds good...both are my favorites..

jayalakshmi nu solran..angel num solran...kulapudhae...jaya and angel ore person ah???
awaiting the next part..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice part ramya...
update next pat ASAP...!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow another FF for Office yay. Lots of great writers we have here.

Nice start Ramya with Angel coming soon and everything, looking forward to reading all the chapters.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update ramya.
Ithelayavathu Angel ah late panname sirikram kutitu vanthudu ma.
Waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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CHAPTER TWO

After a week..

Venue : KV in cubicles..

Vishnu (mind voice) : ivan endha mood la nu theriyalaye...

Karthik : (happily sings a song)

Vishnu (mind voice) : happaadaa.. nalla mood la dhaan irukkan.. Raji vera seat la illaadhadhu nalladaa pochu

Vish : ennadaa.. paattellam balamaa irukku.. kushi mood la irukka pola

Karthi : yen irukka koodaadha... enna matter-u sollu..

Vish : illadaa.. adhu vandhu...

Karthi : nee pammuradha paatha edho vishayam irrukku... sollu

Vish : machaan... annikku sonnenla... details segarichutten da...

Karthi : enna details...

Vish : ennadaa adhukkulla marandhuttiyaa..

Karthi : sari... needhaan sollen..

Vish : Angel yaarunu confirm panren nu sonnen la..

Karthi : Angel ah ?

Vish : adhaan da un aalu Jaya

Karthi : (morachifies)

Vish : illada... namma Jaya..

Karthi : (again morachifies)

Vish : seri... namma class ponnu Jaya.. last year la Angel nu peru maathuna adhe Jaya dhaan...

Karthi : (remains silent)

Vish : ennadaa.. onnum solla maattra..

Karthi : naan solradhukku enna irukku... sarida sollittala.. kelambu..

Vish : illadaa... adhu vandhu...

Karthi : kaduppethaama kelamuriya...

Vish (blinks) : oru doubt machaan..

Karthi : Kettu thola

Vish : ava edhukku da pera maathunaa ?

Karthi : adha yenda enkitta kekkura...

Vish : unakku therinjirukkume nu...

Karthi : enakku laam theriyaadhu... unakku venumnaa neeyum pera maathikko...

Vish : adhukilla da... oru general knowledge dhaan..

Karthi : adhu avanga personal vishayam... edhaavadhu sentiment ah irukkum.. AR Rahman kooda thaan per mathirukkaaru...

Vish : dei... ippa edhukkuda avaroda compare pannura... seri avar per maathunadhu ku oru kaaranam irukku... ivlukku enna reason ah irukkum... ? (thinks) oru vela kalyanathukku per porutham sari illaayo... ? no no... irukkaadhu... adhaan ava porandha podhe nitchayam pannittaangale...

Karthi : (morachifies)

Vish : moraikkaadha da... ne yenda.. ivlo kaduppagura.. un melayum thappu irukku la...

naan essu aguren... naan thaniyaave yosichukiren...

Vish (mind voice) : unakku unmai enna nu therijichina.. avala nee ivlo verukka maattadaa..

(he then leaves from there)

Karthi : leans on his chair and closes his eyes ( proposal and break up scenes flashes in his mind)

Karthi : Sorry Jaya

Jaya : illa karthi.. namakulla sanda varalaam.. aana sandhegam varakoodaadhu... indha alavule pirinjiduradhu dhaan rendu perukkum nalladhu...

Karthi : sari... lovers ah irukka vendaam. Atleast friends aavadhu irukkalaam la

Jaya : friends ah irundhu lovers aanangana.. purinjittu serndhirukkaanga nu artham.. lovers ah irundhu friends aananganaa.. seramudiyaadhunu purinjittaanga nu artham... bye karthi.. thanks for everything

Edited by ramyvijay - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yenna Ramya twist vachurukinga...?.
Vishnu mind voice is mysterious about jaya...

Next part ASAP...

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