Kabir's Diary || Thread 2|| UPDATED 17/5 PG 29 - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Great updates Annie👏
Loving the story😃😃
Frankly speaking I dont think your writing has gotten rusty😆
It still seems the same😳😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: arviabhigya

Great updates Annie👏

Loving the story😃😃
Frankly speaking I dont think your writing has gotten rusty😆
It still seems the same😳😳


Thankoo mummaaa 😳
@BOLD it hasnt changed so much, but yeah, it was easier writing before, but now i have to cross check dictionaries and stuff after every line. My vocab and english is also not proper. I don't have ideas, but yeah, i am trying. I'll work for it. 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thankoo mummaaa 😳
@BOLD it hasnt changed so much, but yeah, it was easier writing before, but now i have to cross check dictionaries and stuff after every line. My vocab and english is also not proper. I don't have ideas, but yeah, i am trying. I'll work for it. 😃

Well I can imagine😃 Plus when u r in practice, it just flows😆 telling u from experience now😆 I tried writing a fic recently and god it is hard to describe stuff in fiction😆
I d rather write simple stuff than stories😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: arviabhigya

Well I can imagine😃 Plus when u r in practice, it just flows😆 telling u from experience now😆 I tried writing a fic recently and god it is hard to describe stuff in fiction😆
I d rather write simple stuff than stories😆


@bold very true! 😃😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Haha😆
Have written something and will share it with k khandan too😆
Btw my comment was incomplete but posted it ki kahin IF poora comment na uda de😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: arviabhigya

Haha😆

Have written something and will share it with k khandan too😆
Btw my comment was incomplete but posted it ki kahin IF poora comment na uda de😆


Do share soon mihumaa😆😃
To complete karo naa😳😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I think niya di sahi keh rahi hai.. you love this secret love wala game 😆
And I love Kabir's diary!
And I did not expect Nisha's feelings to be like that but wow,
surprised but I enjoyed every bit of it 😉
Continue soonish 😭
With love, you know who 🤣
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Ye Jo Kabir ke saath hua vo har ladke ke saath hota hai 😆
Salman ki language me bole toh main Karun toh sala character dheela hai 😆
Anyways nisha seems to be so confusing, what she wants. Or it's her lust 😆
They had advanced to their relationship, finally Kabir's longing comes to end.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Sometimes what we see is mirage in our eyes, this part disclosed the irony of Kabir's situation. He got her yet she's not his completely.
I felt pity on both. Nisha was not confused but feared to lost him. Very nicely expressed.
Their bond is cute. And romance at different level 😆
Then an obvious thing that giving bribe to peon, hope he don't create much problem!


Btw both updates are amazing!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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They both getting closer but everything we see we feel is not what it is like ...
Loved how they expressed their emotions and still have same feelings for each other 😳
Edited by poornima_15 - 7 years ago

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