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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: aNibirFan

Hi yashika, Amazing start! 😃😃

The four had a criss cross😆
Sounds to be quite intriguing ⭐️
Continue soon!
I'm thoda busy these days... so will be stalking your story updations as well😆😊

thanks by the way whats your name i'll defiantely like to wait for your reviews and would continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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index
chapter-1 pg 3
chapter2- pg 3
Edited by mkjr - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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sorry for late, here's the update hope you like it
chapter-1
a beautiful girl was sleeping peacefully with a pleasant smile on her face, when her brother came to disturb her sleep just like everyday, he sat next to her and shook her
"nishu wake up"
"hmm" she just hummed and turned towarda another side,
"nishu look if you won't wake up na then I won't show you your suprise so just wake up yaar"
"sukku just go and let me sleep"
"are you sure"
"sukku just go yaar" she pulled the qiult over her head, she was sure that he was jocking just to wake her up, now only last option was left with him. He took the jar from bedside table and emptied the whole bottle on her, she woke up with a jerk
"what the hell"
"good morning" he added more fuel to her anger, she stood up and threw the same jar on him but he ditched and their usual fights got started as usual. The girl was none other than nisha gangwal and the boy was suketu gangwal nisha's younger brother who is always there to tease her but is also the most caring brother, they were loast in their fight when they heard a sweet voice
"do someone need my help" nisha looked at the direction of voice to get the biggest shock of her life, a handsome guy was leaning on the door of her room with a sweet smile on his face, nisha was shock and happy both to see him and jumped off from the bed to hug him. Both hugged each other tightly, the guy was saurav raizada nisha's bestest buddy they were together since childhood as their father were childhood friend. They studied together till 12th class but then saurav went to london for further studies they cried a lot on the their last meeting,
flashback,
"pllease don't go sauro i would get alone" she sobbed
"i had to go nishu please don't cry" she was continously crying, he side hugged her and consoled her
"ok promise me after I will go, you will find a prince charming for yourself who will stand by side you when I will be not with you" she stopped crying and blushed a little, she was a dreamy girl who had always imagined about her dreamy prince cahrming and saurav would always tease her on this topic,
"that's like a good girl and now smile for me" she smiled and they hugged one last time,
flashback ends,
"i missed you so much sauro" she broke the hug and made him sit on bed
"i missed you too" he too excalimed,
"okk now i am going, my work is complete now, really she is 6th daughter of kumbkaran, i don't know why they all had to give this opportunity to me" he made faces
"so i can beat you" she throwed a pillow at him, he ditched it again and went away,
"you two didn't changed"
"but you are, you looked so different"
"after all we are meeting after complete 5 years"
"ya don't know how these 5 years felw away so easily"
"maybe because of your prince charming so do you find any" suddenly her smile got faded, he noticed the change of her expressions,
"what happen nisha why you look so sad"
'because i do got my prince but lost him too"
"what do you mean" suddenly she started crying letting her heart out, he got tensed and took her in his arms,
"nisha please be quite and tell me what happen" he patted her back,
"he left me saurav, he went away leaving me alone"
"who" he aske her making her look at him
"kabir" she took his anme with full love and care
tbc...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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i thought to update another chapter because of being late, so here's another chapter
chapter-2
"kabir" she took his nae with utmost love and care, saurav uderstood something serious was there, so he closed the room door and made themselves comfortable on bed.
" so tell me from starting" he leaned back on headrest, while she leaned on his shoulder and slid his arm around her
"it was the first day of my college, I was nervous as I was alone and you were not there to make me relax, i entered in college and my whole life got changed
flashback(5 years back)
Nisha went inside college, she got bit nervous to see the so much of students. She was all alone, she stood at the main gate of college which showed ' mithibai college' she was about to enter the college when she heard some noises, she turned to her right and saw a jeep approaching her. There were some guys in jeep who were shouting and making weird noises," must be seniors" she thought and entered the college, when one of the guy from that group called her, she turned back and got scared as the guy got off from the jeep and moved towars her, he looked drunk. She clutched her bag, the guy neared her
"new fresher" she just nodded
"which year"
"1st"
"hmm..so what's your name"
"ni..i.sha" she stammered while speaking, they other guys laughed at her reaction,
"so ni.i..sha you look good but.." he trailled off and neared her more,and tried to touch her but couldn't as another hand stopped his hand in midway, she looked at her left and was mesmerized to see the sight in front of her, a handsome hunk came in front of her becoming a barrier between her and that guy, she was just looking at his face having perfect features as if an angel standing in front of her. His eyes and his hair had her favorite color, those chocolate brown eyes and dark golden brown hair were making her dazzle, his hairs fringed up with some strands slightly falling over his forehead, an attractive chiseled diamond cut face with very slight hollow cheeks and cute dimples at corner of lips. The guy jerked that senior away,
"kabir what are you doing here"
"how many times i have said you not to drink and do ragging"
"you just stay out of it"
"don't forget i'm the head boy of this college i can make you resticate" the guy sighed and went inside with other while kabir turned back to get drowned in those beautiful black orbs. He was passing by when he saw those guys disturbing a girl, his heart got hitched seeinh tha beautiful angel being in trouble and like a hero hw came to become his saviour.
"are you ok" he asked coming back to his senses but nisha was still lost in him, he too got time to notice her briefly, she was looking extremely cute and hot at same time in that slacks and cute teddy crop top, he was checking her out shamelessly but it didn't bother her as she was in her own dreamland. A girl came pulling kabir with her,
"oh kabir you're here and i was finding you everywhere"she took him away but still there eyes were locke. he came back to senses when she was out of his sight
"so who was that girl"
"huh..who"
"whom you were checking out that too in middle road atleast thinka bout your reputation you the head boy of this college what will students think of you" he shyed a little at the mention of his encounter
"of my god somebody call ambulance i'm going to faint kabir, the kabir is blushing, you're in love bro"
"what rubbish i hardly know her"
"so what there is a thing called love at first sight, I can't believe my brother is in love"
"shut up rashi, kuch bhi bolti hai, i was jsut helping her and ya now we should go we're getting late" he pulled her to class but she kept teasing him, kabir kumar the famous guy of college as he is smart, intellingent, handsome also the head boy of the college, he's in third year and the girl rashi is her younger sister studying in first year. Every girl in college drools over kabir but he didn't pay any heed to them as they all are behind him just for his money as his father is the biggest business ticoon of the city, Rashi is a sweet girl and loves her brother a lot but sometimes gets irritated of him as her friends also kept requesting her to make them introduce to kabir.
nisha was still lost in the thoughts of that angel, when she heard her name called. She turned back and got happy to see her one friend running towards her,
"nisha i'm so happy to see you here" she hugged her,
"mee too ria" they both went to their class and took their seats, when rashi too entered in the same class as she was also in first year, her eyes fall on nisha and thought to sit beside her
"wah kay baat hai iska matlab ab to bhagwan bhi chahte hai ki yahi meri bhabhi bane par zara dekhu to ki yeh mere bahi ke layak hai ki nhi" she went to nisha and stood beside her,
"excuse me can i sit here" nisha looked at her and smiled,
"ya sure why not" nisha ddin't recognize her as she too was so lost in him that she didn't noticed her,
"hi my name is rashi"
"nisha, and she's ria" the trip shook ahnds and soon engaged in talks
"hmm, she's nice and sweet too just like my brother they will do amke a good pair, but inka mind bhi to jana zarrori vaise to mere bhai par sabhi marte hai so tension ki to koi baat hi nahi ahi" she was making plans to make them unite in her mind when the their chemistry teacher came in class and told them to come lab,
"yaar first day hi yeh lab mein experiments shuru karvayega kya"
"kya pata" nisha said sadly, rashi was happy because she knew that her her brother was also there as today his duty was in chemistry lab to take care of freshers so they won't found any difficulty,
"that's so good it means their chemistry would start in chemistry lab only ow how romantic" she squeled in happiness, getting the attention of bth girls
"what happen"
"nothing my brother is also there, i would introduce you both to him you will definatly like him"
"will see" nisha somewhere was wishing to see her saviour again, they all were moving in corridoor when nisha got so engrossed in telling the two about her that she started moving in frint of them with facing them when suddenly she banged with someone falling over her back, she closed her eyes with fear of hurting but she felt nothing, she opened her eyes and her became as big as socers, there was kabir beneath her holding her from her waist with utmost care and she holded his shirt ightly in her fist, they were lost again in their different world
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice part
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: LOVE.GOLD

Nice part

Continue soon 😊

thanka a lot
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice parts... And nibir had a cute meeting ...
Plzz post next parts soon ..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome updates... And nice start too
Well Subha uthna na bhout mushkil hota hai specialy jab lambi chuti ho 😔
Poor nisha...
Saurav and nisha's reunion, jab apna bestie dur jata hai na toh bhout dhukh hota hai vo Saurav toh Nisha Ko smile karwa bhi diya par Aisa ho nhi pata 😒
Kabir and nisha's meeting was too good...
Or Nisha phir kabir ke bhaon me hi giri 😆
Lagta hai rashi honeymoon ka bhi planning kar legi 😆
Continue soon!

PS mujhe pm bejhna hai kya ?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anmol333

Awesome updates... And nice start too

Well Subha uthna na bhout mushkil hota hai specialy jab lambi chuti ho 😔
Poor nisha...
Saurav and nisha's reunion, jab apna bestie dur jata hai na toh bhout dhukh hota hai vo Saurav toh Nisha Ko smile karwa bhi diya par Aisa ho nhi pata 😒
Kabir and nisha's meeting was too good...
Or Nisha phir kabir ke bhaon me hi giri 😆
Lagta hai rashi honeymoon ka bhi planning kar legi 😆
Continue soon!

PS mujhe pm bejhna hai kya ?

thanks yaar jaldi uthne ki taleef to har kisiko hai aur rashi to chahe woh bhi kar sakti hai after all she is kabir's sister who can do anyhting
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Posted: 8 years ago
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nice one
loved it
thnx for pm
cont soon

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