NIBIR/SWARON STORY - A Valentine's Week (Completed)*2/1* - Page 51

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Posted: 7 years ago

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perfume day very romantic


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This was simply amazing


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flirting day excellent


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Missing Day


Kya hua Nisha ??" Asked Sharon seeing nisha's reflection on the dressing mirror where Sharon was adjusting her self.

Huh ??" Nisha asked then nodded in no indicating nothing

Arey chill yaar nishu... Boys need to learn a lesson " said Sneha lying beside Nisha on her bed

Ummm I miss kabir " Nisha said slowly, knowing in next moment Sharon going to scold her

Nisha yaar I know... I'm also in same boat. We both don't want our boyfriend fight with each other all the time. We doing this only to bring them together na... Little sacrifice will give us huge amount of happiness... Trust me " Sharon come to Nisha and holded her hand tried to make her understand matter of fact.

All girls Nisha, Sharon, Sneha, Sharon's friends cum chamchi Priya and pihu come to nisha's house to just chill out. As last day events so much for both the girls so they come nisha's house to moral support.

Nisha nodded but looked down sadly while Sharon moved to balcony looking at her, she nodded in disappointment at Nisha's behaviour. Sharon turned around to take a look of outside view, to relax a bit as she was equally hurt and sad as she was too missing swayam, no matter how much they fight but end of the day he was there by her side. When Sharon turned to outside a chuckle escaped from her lips as right in front of nisha's house Kabir was sitting on his bike with shocked face.

Look love sick puppy is here " Sharon said and next moment she regret at her words

Kya kon ??" Nisha asked getting up from bed

Hold her girls hold her " Sharon said pointing at Nisha Priya Sneha hold

Kya Kabir aaya hai ?? Mujhe milna hai use... Mujhe chodo " Nisha struggled but both girls hold her tightly

No nisha..." Sharon said coming inside the room and closed the door with help of pihu, as Nisha struggled to open the door


On the other hand

Kabir was waiting for nisha to come to balcony, so he could talk to her. He saw Nisha come to balcony but he doubted she was Nisha or not. Soon that girl turned, he was literally shocked to see Sharon there. He thought Sharon was in her house as swayam also had Sharon house to pacify her. Then in next moment he saw Sharon went inside the room hurriedly and closed balcony door.

Kabir understood that Sharon was here at nisha's house to ignore swayam and she would definitely not let Nisha to meet him. Kabir called Swayam and told him about Sharon being at Nisha's house. Swayam said he is coming back till then Kabir can wait for him at his home. Kabir went to swayam's house and called Ashu and Tarun at swayam's place too.

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Yaar girls chahti kya hai ??" Asked swayam being confused, all boys were sitting in swayam's room

I don't know yaar..." Ashu replied

Teri wali yahan kya kar rahi ??" Asked kabir to swayam

How would he know that?? Teri wali ki tarha iski wali bhi naraz hai isse " said Tarun

Chodo iss baat Ko or ye socho ki kaise unse baat Karen ? " Asked swayam

They had come together for some purpose " Kabir mumbled thinking hard

Haan mujhe bhi yahi lagta hai " said Ashu, with that they all went silent and after few minutes they heard some noise

Did you hear that ?" Kabir asked eagerly, tried to listen to source of noise

Yes... But what was that ??" Asked tarun as he saw Kabir moving to source of noise

Kabir hearing carefully reached to window which opens in backyard of swayam's house.

Udhar swimming pool hai Kabir " swayam informed Kabir as he moved to that direction

Tere ghar me swimming pool bhi hai???" Asked Ashu being surprised

Not completely but yes..." Said swayam

Matlab ??" Asked tarun

Matlab mere dad ne or Nisha ke dad ne milke peeche backyard me swimming pool banwaya hai... We share that swimming pool. So yes " swayam explain, that when realisation hit them all run hurriedly to open window. All four boys mouth left hung open seeing scenario infront of them. All girls were enjoying in themselves near swimming pool.
Sharon was sitting on edge of pool, Nisha was clicking pictures of Sneha, Priya and pihu who was inside of swimming pool.

Sharon's outfit


Nisha's outfit

Boys were drown in girls beauty, all enjoying treat of their respective gf beauty. Swayam was not able to move his eyes from Sharon so as Kabir and tarun from Nisha and Sneha respectively. Ashu doesn't have any gf so he long gone back in side the room.

Dekho kaise kutte ki tarha dekh rahe hai hume, jaise hum koi mithai or vo makkhi " Sharon commented looking at boys from corner of her eyes which make all of them laugh

Main guarantee deti hun thodi der me sab yaha aayenge " Sneha said confidently

Aayenge toh last maar ke bhaga denge hum..." Sharon said gritting her teeth



Mujhe lagta hai ye unki chaal hai ??" Swayam said

Kya bakk raha hai tu ??" Asked kabir not moving his eyes from Nisha

Because ye pool party inka plan nhi tha... Abhi Abhi ye log jaan bhuj ke aaye hai hume distract karne " swayam said

Aisa kaise bol sakta hai tu ??" Tarun asked

Kyunki inho ne jo swimming suit pehni hai vo sab Nisha ka hai " swayam replied

Tujhe kaise pata ?" Kabir asked with a frown

Kyunki hum logo ne kai baar yahan pool party ki hai " swayam said

Par... " Tarun was about say something but Ashu said in between

"Ye toh acha hi hai na tum log girls ki chaal me phaso... Girls tabhi khush hongi jab tum unki marzi ka kaam karoge "

Yeah he's right " Kabir said

No kabir... Vo kisi reason se ye sab kar rahi hai... " Tarun said

Kya reason ??" Kabir asked being confused

Jab hum neeche jayenge toh vo or nakhre dikhaenge... Or hume ignore bhi karenge" said Swayam thinking about probability

Vo toh hona hi hai... Tum dono Ko kya lagta hai iss baar vo dono aasani se maan jayenge... no ways! Last time toh warning di thi phir bhi tum dono ladte rahe " said Ashu

I know yaar... But I have an idea " swayam replied

Kya ??" Tarun asked to which all listened to swayam's idea and agreed with him.

Chalo jaldi change karo or niche cholo apni apni wali Ke pass " Tarun said

Haan chalo " trio boys replied in unison


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Nisha ask them get out..." Sharon said to Nisha who was sitting on chair near pool, as she saw boys approaching to them


Swayam's outfit


Kabir's outfit

Swayam wait..." Nisha stopped swayam

Nisha bata de sab ko... Ye swimming pool mera bhi hai..." Said swayam looking at Sharon

I know but... Abhi hum hai na yahan pe tu baad me aa Jana " Nisha asked him sweetly

Kyun... Mera jab mann karega main tab aaunga " said swayam

Haan toh jab mann kare toh aa jana abhi jaa yahan se "

Mera abhi mann hai..."

Tu kyun natak kar raha hai swayam ?" Asked nisha annoyingly

Marzi hai meri..." Said swayam

You guys are disgusting... Ek toh galti karte ho uper se natak " disgust Sneha looking at boys

Kya natak... Tum hi log enjoy kar sakte ho kya hum nhi ?" Kabir replied to her to which all girl and boys except Sharon grouped together and fight with each

Sharon stood up from her place in between the fight and went to near tap where pipe was also kept, she went there without coming notice of boys. Sharon gestured at girls to continue further. While she brought pipe towards boys in order to make boys wet. She started throwing water at boys, all of them turned toward Sharon to stop her not knowing intention of girls behind them. As all boys turned grabbing this golden opportunity, girls pushed them into swimming pool. Then laughed hard seeing boys expression.

Bhout hasi aa rahi hai na ??" Kabir Gritted his teeth angrily as swayam, Tarun and kabir glared at their respective girlfriends

Knowing well something is coming for them, sharon, Nisha and Sneha run to different directions only to be traced by their boyfriends. First one was tarun who got grip of Sneha, he catch her by holding her waist then throwed her in swimming pool. Next one was swayam, Sharon had ran toward swayam's house direction. In order to catch her they both fell down. Swayam chuckled seeing her struggle in his arm, he grabbing this opportunity as everyone was busy at Sneha - Tarun's show. He kissed her lips softly, which frozen Sharon, then he got up picked Sharon in bridal style and throwed her in pool. The last one was nibir as Nisha was champion in running, so she was running here and there. It took little time for kabir but got the hold of his lady and bring her near pool and pushed her but nisha's grip was so tight on his shirt that he too fall along with nisha. In this whole scenario, Ashu, pihu and Priya just laughed at all the couples, and whenever someone comes into the pool Ashu splash water at them. When kabir fall along with Nisha all present there laughed out so hard like there is no tomorrow.

Inside the pool sharon, Nibir, Sneha and Ashu were splashing water at each other, seeing them laughing together and enjoying swayam and Tarun along with pihu and Priya jumped in pool. They all splash water at each other, then after a while started singing loudly together and dancing at different songs. They were actually having fun after long time.

Hearing this noise nisha and swayam's parents do check on them but from distance, they were happy to see their children were having fun, but one more unwanted person also come out hearing such noise. Kavya! As she lives beside nisha's house but there was boundary wall, not like NiYam houses which were joined.

Kavya stood at her window, she saw that all of them were having fun which upset her, on top the thing hurt her was sight of nibir being together. Kabir had hugged Nisha from behind, roaming his hand on her bare stomach, same with nisha's her back was touching his bare chest as he had kept his shirt button open. Seeing them together was hurting her and the sight they were kissing eachother cheeks in between bring tears in her eyes.

Sharon's eyes randomly laid on kavya. At first she ignored then in next moment she looked at her clearly, then followed her gaze upon nibir. Seeing them she was awe at them. But again in next moment she remembered about being angry with boys.

Stoppp " Sharon shouted to which all looked at her in shock

Nisha let's go... " Said Sharon while going near to Nisha and pulled her out from kabir's grip

What happened Sharon ??" Kabir asked as he protest but Sharon continued pulling her until he give up as it may hurt his Nisha only.

Come Nisha let's go..." Sharon repeat again while coming out from pool still holding nisha's hand

Sharon what happened?? " Swayam asked her

Sharon kya hua kuch bol toh " Tarun asked her again but Sharon ignore all the questions just pull Nisha with her

Girls come out of pool let's go inside " Sharon said to remaining girls

While going inside nisha's eyes too landed on kavya, which make her remember about she being angry with kabir. When other girls were going out of pool swayam also notice the reason of Sharon's leave abruptly.

Kya hogaya achanak se ??" Ashu asked when all girls left

Kuch nhi bas unhe sab kuch yaad aagaya " swayam said still glaring at Kavya

Kaise mujhe toh laga tha ki vo log ab mann jayenge..." Tarun replied

Vo dikh gaya unhe " swayam said pointing at Kavya

As soon as Kabir saw kavya, he got angry and almost went forward to shout at her but Tarun and Ashu stopped him. Seeing kabir's anger Kavya went inside closing the window.

They 4 went out of pool. Kabir couldn't hold his frustration he started cursing Kavya for disturbing them.

Kabir relax... Girls ne humare sath enjoy Kiya matalb vo adha maan gayi hai... Pura vo kal Maan jayengi " swayam said to calm down to Kabir

Kaise...???" Kabir asked with hope

Kal hum kuch aisa karenge jise vo Maan bhi jayengi or bahar walon ka muh bhi band ho jayega " swayam said with small winning smile on his lips

Huh ??" Kabir asked in confusion

I have an idea! " Swayam said

To be continued...


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Again after long time 😛 I know this time it's completely my mistake! I actually forget about writing the update as I was busy in my personal life.. and most important thing is that I totally lost my interest writing stories especially this one... I really don't have interest in writing this one. The person for whom I have extended this story is not showing her interest and more over thinking more than what I had imagined. But I any how complete my promise to complete all ongoing stories.


Edited by Anmol333 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Thanks dear 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
Loved it Anmol dear
Awesome update
I really enjoyed the pool scene
Girls ko manana boys me me liye aasan nahi hai
Girls and boys enjoyed beautifully in pool
I feel is baar baat aur bigad gayi hai
Let's see how they patch up
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
loved it
awesome
thnx for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Res 😃
Unress 😃
Nice one anmol 😳 the pool scene was nice and the misunderstanding rose again ... Hope they sort out soon😊

And sorry for late comment 😕 and i know the reason for lost interest in updating the stories ... Not your fault ...
I can understand , going through the same ... I too have few incomplete chapters ready but never feel like completing them these days ... 😆 as u very well know my last update has only ur comment 🤣
Anyhow its good u are completing the stories ... M always ready to read nibir😳
Edited by poornima_15 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: LOVE.GOLD

Loved it Anmol dear

Awesome update
I really enjoyed the pool scene
Girls ko manana boys me me liye aasan nahi hai
Girls and boys enjoyed beautifully in pool
I feel is baar baat aur bigad gayi hai
Let's see how they patch up
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊


Thanks Goldie 😳😳
Yeah that will be not easy for boys to pacify their girls this time but it wouldn't be that difficult too 😉
You'll get to know soon how everything will get settled 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Tumpa12

loved it
awesome
thnx for pm
cont soon


Thanks dear😊

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