NIBIR/SWARON STORY - A Valentine's Week (Completed)*2/1* - Page 52

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Thanks dear 😊
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Awesome anmol
Pool scene was really nice
Next time toh girls maan hi jayegi
You don't have interest in writing this phir bhi it was really awesome
Continue soon
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Originally posted by: rishita91

Awesome anmol

Pool scene was really nice
Next time toh girls maan hi jayegi
You don't have interest in writing this phir bhi it was really awesome
Continue soon


Thanks rishita 😃
Yes I really don't have any interest in writing updates specially of this story.🤓
But as I have made promise I'll complete every story of mine.
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Fantastic update
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Originally posted by: ananya2010

Fantastic update

Loved it
Continue soon
Thanks for the PM dear


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Originally posted by: poornima_15

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Unress 😃
Nice one anmol 😳 the pool scene was nice and the misunderstanding rose again ... Hope they sort out soon😊

And sorry for late comment 😕 and i know the reason for lost interest in updating the stories ... Not your fault ...
I can understand , going through the same ... I too have few incomplete chapters ready but never feel like completing them these days ... 😆 as u very well know my last update has only ur comment 🤣
Anyhow its good u are completing the stories ... M always ready to read nibir😳


Thanks poorni 😃

It's okay... Now I write for those who read... Who want to story have an end not left abruptly. I don't care about likes or comments now... But I am glad you liked it and comment too.

I was never interested to write it's extended parts... But someone asked me to do so I never deny anyone so got ready to write this. I know no one is interested. And so do I 😆

Thanks poorni again... For you and some other people, I'm continuing my stories 😊
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I know phir after long time 😛 so sorry for delay... Vo holiday weak tha toh main bhi holiday hi mana rahi thi.. fir new year... but it's celebration time finally this story is ends here. Thank you so much for your support and love ❤️
And happy New year 🤗

Breakup Day

Swayam... Will you hear me for a minute...??" Sharon asked nth time while following Swayam who was roaming around whole college in order to ignore her.

Swayam please... " Sharon shouted at the edge of annoyance

I'm not asking you to follow me... I just cleared myself and I don't want talk to you" said swayam still back facing her

But swayam main abhi gussa nhi hun... Tujhse baat hi toh karne aai thi main..." Sharon start but swayam cut her off

Toh maine bhi toh kaha mujhe tumse baat nhi karni..."

Okay swayam I understand that you are Angry with me but aise mat bolo... I love you..."

I loved you too... But now I need some space.. I am breaking up with you..."

Swayam please aise mat bolo... You're angry with me then punish me... But don't do this " Sharon holded his hand while sobbing, seeing her crying, tear also made their way in his eyes too, he felt like kissing her right now and taking her all pain but he need to be strong, first he looked at her then their surroundings. Hold her hand and take her into fire exit.
By closing door he immediately pulled her in a soft kiss cupping her face, which not last long. As swayam pulled his face but still their lips were in contact. He mumbled holding her close

"Bhout ho gaya sharon... Jo main kar raha hun shayd tumhe abhi acha na lage but ye zaroori hai aghe ke khushiyon ke liye... Tum hi Sabse jyada khush hogi dekhna... Ab nhi ho pa raha hai mujhse... Ab ye girlfriend boyfriend ka scene band karna hoga... " After a while he broke apart and smiled teary and mumbled bye as when he broke apart Sharon started crying and try to hold but he forcefully left her.

After previous day events, when coming back to nisha's room both Nisha and Sharon decide to talk to boys and end up all their fight as they were not able to live without them. And they were fighting with each other for some random person whom they shouldn't give importance. So both decide to talk to their respective boyfriend. When Sharon come to talk to swayam he directly asked her for breakup. On the other hand, Nisha too went to talk to kabir, he was late little so Nisha wait for him at parking only and they talked there only.

Nisha start a normal conversation but Kabir ruined by asking her for breakup.

Okay..." Nisha replied after hearing him

Okay ???" Kabir asked being shocked he expected fight, or slap from but okay that too easily, he didn't expect

Yeah okay... " Nisha repeat

Just okay ?" Kabir asked

What do you want ? How should I react ??" Nisha asked back seeing his reaction

No I mean it's easy for you to just end this relationship ? We were together for more than one year..." He asked

One year and seven days..." Nisha said ting of sadness in her voice

Yes exactly! It's easy for you to just breakup with me??" Kabir asked looking at her hopefully

Look... I was mentally prepared for this... I know who are you and what you can do?? So I was prepared one day you'll definitely leave me... I first thought, when I saw you with Kavya... I know she'll break our relationship..." Nisha was saying he cut her off

For god sake nisha... Kavya is no where, she's not that important in my life..." Now Kabir started but Nisha cut him off

Look... Tumne jab bola maine tumhari puri baat suni... Now I'm speaking so let me complete first then speak or else I should leave... I'm not here to hear everyone out..." Nisha said leaving from there being frustrated

Okay okay... I will hear you first... Come back and complete..." Kabir stopped her, she come back and continued

But later I realised that she's indeed not important in our life... But fear inside me was always there... That you'll go to London school of dance and because of you nature you'll get new girl there who will be more sexy, hot and beautiful than me or any blonde there and you'll leave me... And most importantly, you are the one who is asking for breakup not me... So it is easy for you to forget our love..." Nisha completed

Nisha... You never trusted me... I have loved you so much then also you think I'll leave you... I changed myself complete... I lost myself completely for you but..." Kabir said

Only you have changed yourself ?? I did nothing for this relationship to work ?" Nisha asked furiously

Nisha mera vo matlab nhi tha... " He started

Jo bhi matlab tha... Tu bol chuka... Mujhe tune ye saaf saaf Bata diya ki main kya maniye rakhti hun teri life... I'm nothing to you... Nothing..." Nisha said and paused for a to pull back tears which were ready to come out while kabir too looked teary eyed but said nothing he knows whatever he is doing now is giving pain to both of them but it's better for their future. "Okay I guess tumhare pass bhi nhi hai kuch bolne ke liye or main ab apni feeling tumhe or nhi bata sakti... So here we end our relationship and this conversation... get lost..." Nisha said, Kabir sighed deeply and left from there as tear beamed his eyes.

Nisha controlled her tears hardly, after Kabir left she went to basketball court which was near parking lot and cried hard.

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She was damn upset..." Kabir said sitting on desk waiting for teacher to come

Meri wali bhi..." Swayam replied as he was sitting beside him

Ye sab karna zaroori hai kya ??" Kabir asked being all sad

Bhout zaroori..." Swayam replied, that when a message pop up. It was nisha's message, she told him about her breakup in that swayam replied

"I know... Kabir told me "

"When ?" Nisha asked

"Just now" he lied, before Nisha can text him something he give her another shocking news

"I too broke up with sharon"

"What? Why?" Nisha asked

"She's so dominating" swayam replied

"You guys had planned something... Tell me swayam what is it ??" Nisha asked because Kabir too had given same reason for break up

"Why are you saying like that.. I'm not able continue this gf bf relationship that's why I want to end this..." Swayam text

"Ohh I get it"
"You guys had planned something and you're not going to tell me"
"You're giving importance to him not me... Great swayam" Nisha replied

"Why are you saying like this... You're always my priority over Kabir or Sharon " swayam told her truth

"Let it be swayam I don't want to talk to you... Please don't me call now for sometime" Nisha said and end their conversation

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Sharon I guess kuch gadbad hai... Dono boys aake same time pe break-up kar rahe... That's strange..." Nisha said leaning on wall of basketball court

But what they are upto.? I thought they must be doing lots of thing to pecify us but..." Sharon said thinking hard about boys plan

After talking to swayam, Nisha called Sharon to basketball court urgently, but without coming in boys notice. Sharon did what asked, she told her friends that she's going to washroom as Swayam's eyes at Sharon only. So she told her friends and leave her bags there only and went out alone and call Nisha at washroom.

You know what Nisha if boys want to play with us then let's the game begins... I have a evil plan..." Sharon said and smirked

What plan ??" Nisha asked

Listen..." Sharon told her plan to teach boys a lesson for messing up with girls

No ways I'm not going to do this... Kabir Ko bhout bura lag jayega..." Said Nisha hearing Sharon completely

Come on Nisha... It's all will be fake..." Sharon tried to convince her but Nisha was stubborn and disagree with her and it ended up Sharon will play nisha's part and Nisha will do Sharon's part.

Sharon run back to class immediately, as they want to create any doubt in boys mind, Nisha will join them from next class.

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1st class was over Nisha come to class, and went to her seat where Kabir was sitting alone and in same row beside him swayam was sitting alone. Nisha looked at swayam and asked "aur ??"

Kuch nhi " swayam replied

Nisha rolled her eyes at him and sit beside Kabir, at her seat, as soon as Nisha sit Kabir got up and went to sit with Ashu and tarun. Nisha felt little bit bad by his behaviour but said and show nothing. The bench was small for trio, so Tarun got up and went behind sir with Nisha as he feel bad for nisha. There was always 15 break for every class. So some went out and sone sit in class. NiBir, SwaRon and along with Ashu and Tarun stayed at class only.

Nisha... Maine Suna tera break up ho gaya?" Sneha asked coming to Nisha as it was part of their drama

Haan... But tujhe kisne bataya ?" Nisha asked

Tere status... Welcome to single gang nisha... Ab hum phele ki tarah khub Masti karenge... " Sneha said to which Nisha hmmed in response

Arey tu khush nhi hai kya apni azadi se ? Tujhe pyaar me kaid rehna hai kya ?" Sneha asked

Kya ab kuch bhi ho sakta... Main Kabir se kuch nhi bolne wali... I respect his decision and point of view like he do for mine..." Nisha said looking at Kabir

Offohh Kabir ka baat kon kar raha main toh in ladkon ka baat kar rahi Jinja chace Kabir ne mara tha... ab unka number lagega "

Tu kya bol rahi hai...??"

Arey... Thoda hat toh tarun..." Sneha said and sit beside Nisha "arey dekh jab bhi main WhatsApp me as status humre pic dalti toh mere friends har baar tere baare me puchte..." Sneha stopped seeing Nisha laughing hard

Seriously Nisha tujhe lagta hai ye joke hai ?" Sneha asked as all other at all ears at them only

Nhi... Haan... Koi hoga ajeeb se dikhne wala... Akhir vo tera dost hai or mere baare me puch rahe " Nisha said and laughed more

Chup kar... Ek ka bhi photo dikhaungi toh marr jayegi "

Haan hoga ek se badhkar ek namoona "

Chup kar or ye dekh..."

Nhi dekhna mujhe"

Dekh toh " Sneha forced to see her friends pic

After seeing her friend pic Nisha was all silent, her eyes for the first time capturing such a handsome face. Kabir was eager as her silence means she is definitely checking out someone, she do same with actor whom she loves or sometimes random guy, she completely ignore Kabir and curse him for being her boyfriend as she missed opportunity. But he always know she'll never cheat on him or this relationship.
Her silence make her eager and Sharon's comment add fuel on his eager.

"Aisa kiska photo dikha di sneha... Nisha itna ankhe phad ke dekh rahi" Sharon commented

Due to eagerness Kabir turned, due to sudden move of Kabir, Nisha dropped phone. Looked at Kabir with all innocent eyes to which kabir glared at her.

Arey nisha kya Karti hai... Now you're single tu kyun darr rahi hai Kabir se..." Sneha said picking up her phone, Kabir frown upon her sentence and asked her

Tu kab se single ho gayi...?? " Kabir asked Sneha

Abe main hamesha se single hi hun.. tera hi friend hai jo mujhe ilu nhi bola... " Sneha replied

Toh kya hua tu sab jaanti hai na... Or tu Tarun ki gf hai..." Kabir replied

Arey ajeeb jabardasti hai "

Haan hai toh ?" Kabir said and started fighting with her for Tarun and showing picture to Nisha, completely ignoring swayam's and Tarun's gesture to stop him while Ashu and Nisha enjoyed the show. Slowly all started coming back to class and started enjoying sarcasm fight between Kabir and Sneha.

Sharon was irritated with their fight so she stood up and went to back seat but in between, her leg got twisted with bench and she fall down or it was a drama.

Ouch... " She screamed in pain, swayamgot up immediately to help her but stopped infront of her nor he help neither he ask how's she but just look at her. While other too surrounded her.

Sharon are you alright ?" Kabir asked with concern but Sharon's ears wants to hear swayam's concern.

Bhout pain ho raha hai" Sharon replied looking at swayam

Okay Sharon try to get up... " Ashu said ignoring her words

I can't " Sharon said after trying to get up

Come on Sharon... You can do it!" Ashu tried to cheer up

I can't... " Sharon cried

Okay... Let me help you then..." Kabir said and picked her up in bridal style. Nisha and swayam's jaw dropped. Both were burnt out of jealousy.

Nisha come with me..." Said Sharon holding Kabir tight

Yeah " Nisha said and picked both her and Sharon bag and went along with them to medical room, Swayam frown and he too left the college.

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Yaar ye boys react hi nhi kiye" Nisha frowned hard sitting on Sharon's car.

Yeah ab kya karna hai ?" Sharon asked as she was driving.

Seeing that boys didn't responding to there efforts both decide to head back to home so Sharon decide to drop Nisha.

Ab kal sochenge... Abhi kuch khate hai ghar jaake..." Nisha replied casually

Tujhe hamesha khane ki padi rehti hai na..." Said Sharon

Haan khana hi Jeevan hai behen " Nisha replied

Chalo jaao kuch kha lo..." Sharon said as they reached at nisha's house.

Arey tu bhi chal... Ek cup coffee peeke jana na"

Arey nhi..."

Chal na kuch sochenge hi... Chal" Nisha forcefully take her inside only to get shock. As she thought electricity is not there as her living area is pitch black.

Arey ye light kaise chala gaya... Maa... Sukku... Papa " Nisha called out

Surprise..." Whole croud screamed as soon as light turned on only to scare both the girls

What ??" Both girls shouted and looked at everyone in shock as nibir as well as swaron parents was there full on ready as if they were going to attend someone wedding.

Then theirs eyes halted at their love. As they both slowly approach to them.

Swayam's outfit

Kabir's outfit

Aaj maine kaha tha na Nisha aaj hun apne gf or bf wale rishte Ko end karenge... Ye sab usi ke celebration ke liye hai..." Kabir said

Haan aaj se hum gf bf nhi ek dusre fiance or would be khelayenge " swayam completed only to bring tears in both girls eyes.

Sharon started crying and beating swayam together for hurting and hiding this from her.
While Nisha cried silently looking down as her morning word rang in her ears and she feel guilty. Kabir understand her better so he hugged her tight. Swayam too holded Sharon's hand and hugged her.

I'm sorry " NiYam said together

Shut up nisha... Mujhe teri baaton ka bura lagega come on give me a break... I love you and today I promise to be yours forever" Kabir said breaking the hug and cup her face which bring small smile on her face

It's alright baby... " Sharon replied to swayam

Arey jaldi tayiar ho tum log nhi toh Hume aise hi sari rasme chalu karni hogi warna Baad me mat bolna ki hum apni engagement me kaise dikh rahe the..." Tarun commented, everybody laughed at him

Both girls rush to upstairs where there dresses are kept. They got ready in jiffy but Sharon took little longer time than Nisha as Nisha come downstairs fastly after getting ready.


Nisha's outfit

Making everyone waiting for more than one hour Sharon also come.
Sharon's outfit

Both the boys couldn't take their eyes off from the girls. They just kept looking at girls only. Whole ritual performed by them in daze only. They both were lost in their dream world.

Kavya is not important person but her family was also invited only to shut their mouth again nisha.
All parents were happy to there children happy.

Nibir and swaron sit on one large couch. So they decided to capture this moment in a photograph. First Sharon and swayam poses for picture while nibir took side and wait for their chance.

Nisha looked at swayam and smiled happily seeing happiness glinting in his eyes. Just one year ago this guy never thought that he could be her boyfriend now getting engaged with her. According to him she's a moon and he's not even an astronaut who can touch the moon. But when destiny with you a commoner can go to moon.
And the guy who was standing beside her holding her through waist. He was a dream for her. The guys whose one look is enough to stop every girls heartbeat was behind a town boy girl. Who hadn't touch makeup in last 23 years but he come to her life and changed it completely. Now she can do that things for him which comes as a surprise for herself. She can go any extend which she herself don't imagine.
Nisha got overwhelmed by her thoughts and placed a kiss on kabir's cheeks. He blushed and kissed her back.

Our turn Nisha... Let's go " Kabir said and they went for the photo session of the beginning of their new life.


The end

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Edited by Anmol333 - 7 years ago

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