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Chapter-19

AA HI GAYA WOH DIN!

They got seated in the conference roo. After a few minutes Laura and Andrew also joined them.

Laura- Hello everyone! And congratulations once again.

Everyone smiled as a token of gratitude.

Andrew- Now let us spill the beans. The next competition is really tough. It is not difficult in the sense of tough but it is tough because of the time you got.

Everyone was confused.

Laura- Let's not be Dumbledore! The next round is tomorrow.

Everyone was shocked. They couldn't really get what they meant.

Andrew- Yes, the final round is tomorrow where you will have to give not only one but 2 performances.

Laura- Let me explain! Tomorrow we will have the 4 of you performing.

Andrew- And from the four of you only 2 will get to perform in the GRAND FINALE. I mean to say the final showdown.

Laura- The rest of the 2 will be runner ups.

Andrew- From the two in final showdown, only 1 will win. And don't make us tell you again what.

Laura- But for the preparation you have only a day and half. And you have to have a topic for the performances which remains the same but is depicted in a better way in the different performances.

Andrew- That's it! You know the rules already. So all the best guys!

And they went away. Nisha didn't look at Kabir and left for the shooting arena. Kabir also left for rehearsal hall.

IN Rehearsal hall

Priyal- Ek din mein? Pagal ho rahe hain kya?

Ka- We have no other option left. If we have to win this competition, we have to work hard. Get your seat belts on.

They started practicing.

IN Shooting Arena

Austin- Are they seriously mad? It is impossible. Two acts in one day!

Ni- I know Austin but this is why we came here. We have to fight. Are we ready guys?

Everyone- Yes ma'am!

They started practicing.

It was lunch time. Nisha's team decided to have lunch together to waste less time in collecting everyone and similar was the idea of Kabir's team.

The day went by and it was the final competition day.

IN EVENING

Nisha went to her team's green room. Nisha was wearing a black designer skirt and a plain shirt inshirted (LIKE IN KRPKAB)

Ni- So, everyone ready?

Everyone nodded but Nisha could see nervousness on their faces.

Ni- Look, today I am going to talk to you as a teacher and not as the owner. You all have done immense hard work and remember hard work always pays off. The amount of effort you have put in won't go away in water. Just keep your focus on.

She went to Nancy and put up the lace of her frock which she was trying since long.

Ni- Nancy, you have to show your anger but this time in a strong manner. Remember the thing that annoys you the most. You will hit bull's eye.

She went to Aria and helped her with her belly.

Ni- Aria, don't forget the steps of dance and don't feel nervous. We know you won't let us down. Just have the same confidence that we have in you.

She went to the other members and gave them some advices. She came and stood in the center.

Ni- Remember our topic, Love can conquer Hatred. We can do this. Do it for your loved ones. You parents, your siblings, your relatives, your friends, or whoever you feel is the most deserving but do it for them this time. I know we can. Who's with me?

She put her hand forward.

Nancy came up first.

Nancy- For ma'am!

Others also joined saying FOR MA'AM'. Nisha was overwhelmed by their gestured.

Ni-All the best everyone. I need to go now. But I will be around only. You can contact me whenever you want to. (to Austin) Austin stay with them and inform me about everything.

Austin nodded. Nisha was left.

Simultaneously Kabir went to his team's green room. Kabir was wearing a black colored 3 piece suit.

Ka- Everyone ready?

Everyone was confident because Kabir told them everything in the morning.

Everyone- Yes sir!

Ka- (smiled) That's like my team. And remember don't lose the expressions or we lose marks. Also don't forget the steps. If you feel like you are forgetting catch up immediately with the neighboring ones. I know you all can do it, can't we?

Everyone shouted- Yes sir!

Ka- Now we are talking. Aur ab kuch khaana peena mat karna or else you will have stomach ache after performing. I am going. If there is any problem you can call me.

Kabir also left. Nisha was already seated in the corner and the seat beside her was occupied. Kabir sat in the other corner. Mayank Sharma also came with Katherine. Nisha went to meet them and so did Kabir.

Ni- So you announced?

Mayank- Yes we did!

Ka- Congratulations guys!

Mayank- By the way Nisha someone told me that I was your crush once.

Ni- Trust me you are my crush even today.

They laughed.

Katherine- What about you two?

Nibir looked at each other with pain in their eyes.

Ni- The competition is going to start. Why don't you join us?

Mayank- Sure!

They went and sat on the seats allotted to them. The teams started performing. It was the time for performance of Target Locked. Nisha was excited. They started performing. There were devils who were shooting when the angels came down and tried to stop them. They did arial act also. Just then Kabir got a call. He saw the caller id.

Ka- (whispering) haan Priyal!

Priyal- Sir, there is a big problem. We need your help right now. Please!

Ka- Okay I will be there.

Kabir went to the green room. Nisha looked at his tensed face but she ignored it because right now her students needed her.

IN THE GREEN ROOM

Ka- What happened Priyal?

Pr- Sir, Ananya ki dress fat gayi. It is almost torn.

Ka- Oh god! What are we gonna do now? Ours is the last, the ongoing performance is the last third. We have got 10 minutes to fix it.

He knew he cannot handle it and he cannot call Viraj inside because no one is allowed in the green room section. Kabir got only one name in his mind. He texted Nisha,

Hi Nisha, I know that we are not on talking terms right now but there is some problem with my team. I would be really obliged if you come and help us. Please!

Nisha saw the text. She first of all thought of saying no but she thought rationally and replied,

Okay! I will be there.

Nisha went. She reached the green room. Kabir explained everything.

Ni- (tensed) Kabir this is net. No one can fix it.

Everyone got even more tensed.

Ni- wait! I have got an idea! (To Hardik)Hardik can you please get a double sided tape from the reception? A long one please!

Ka- (annoyed) Nisha are you mad? We cannot fix it with a tape.

Ni- Look you have called me so you need to believe me and whatever I do.

Ni- Priyal please bring some roses from outside.

Kabir didn't say anything after that. Nisha took the double sided tape and placed it on the places where the net was torn. She took the roses from Priyal and broke off the stems. In the process she hurt her finger.

Ka- (out of concern) Nisha!

He took her finger.

Ni- Later! (she released her finger)

She put those roses on the double sided tape.

Ni- Finally done!

Everyone looked at the girl's dress.

Pr- Beautiful ma'am. But do we also have to do this with our dresses?

Ni- If you have time you should.

Har- Thank you ma'am.

Ka- Thanks Nisha!

Nisha left without saying anything. Kabir knew that Nisha won't talk now. Just then he got a call from his mother. He saw the caller id and got angry. He wanted to trash that phone right now but he knew it was important for the trip. He cut her call. Vasu tried again. He cut it yet again. It was time for their performance. He went back to his seat. The final performance of Kabir's team was over. The result was to be announced after 15 minutes and so it was a break. Nisha saw Gaurav and Viraj along with their wives and Kj. She went to them. Kabir also saw them. Viraj gestured him to come but he just smiled from there. Except for Viraj no one understood it. Nisha didn't reach by that time and so didn't see it.

Ga- Well done! Beautiful performance.

Ni- Thanks Gaurav! Vaise tum log kab aaye?

Ga- thodi der pehle.

Gaurav saw one of his friends (jisne jugaad lagaya tha).

Ga- we will be back.

Gaurav took Shanaya with him.

Kj- Mb aapne aaj perform nahi kara?!

Ni- Kj today the performance was of the team, not the owner.

Kj- OH!

PRECAP: KAIRA GETS TO KNOW THE TRUTH AND FINALE

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Author's Note
I know that many would be having a thought that what serial have I written, it is very bad as compared to the previous season, it is like a Saas Bahu Drama or We have been been waiting for the suspense for so long and this is how it comes to us. But trust me friends, this is the truth of the society. I am not sure if Saas Bahu soaps show this but I have really heard about it.
Many people actually try to trick other people for money. This is what the future teller over here did. And sometimes people get so much into all this that they destroy everything they have. That is why I made Nisha leave because this is what such people who believe on other people more than their family deserve it. I wanted to show that if anyone says so much about you then no need to stop for relation because such relations are useless. I talking here about VASU AND NISHA.
And the whole world knows about the lives of famous people from some sources or the other. So anyone can predict rubbish about the person then. This is what happened with Vasu. The future teller gathered information about them and told them rubbish just to earn money.
PLEASE DON'T BE OFFENDED IN ANY WAY. THIS IS WHAT I FEEL. I DID NOT MEAN TO HURT ANYBODY.
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Originally posted by: 357159pikachu


@bold Finally i decided to focus of the REAL NIBIR.
@blue Thanks a lot. the words mean a lot. Tumhe senti updates zayda pasand hai kya Anmol?
@red You know what? I wrote the parts and the saw your comment. You know i felt an urge to change it and let the suspense be for some more time. 😆🤣 This is reality. I am not joking.


@pink no I love realistic story... Which can be correlated with real life. What generally happen but I too love happy happy story 😊😃

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Actually main aaj free thi so wrote some more. So I thought why not post it? Here it is. Iske liye plz koi pm kardo. please!
Bonus Chapter

Vi- Kabir wahan kyun khada hai, call him also na?

Ni- (angrily) Why don't you? Teri toh vaise bhi usse bahut pat ti hai, mujhse bhi zyada!

Viraj understood what she meant but Kaira and Kj couldn't.

Kaira- Nisha, what do you mean?

Ni- Kj, will you please get me a glass of water dear?

Kj nodded and left. Kaira looked questioningly at Viraj. He was himself confused whether Nisha was talking about the same.

Ni- (not too loudly) I know everything Viraj. Why did you help Kabir in all this? You were the one who gave him such an idea?! Viraj you knew that I loved Kabir sometime, didn't you? Then why?

Vi- How do you...?

Viraj couldn't speak further.

Ni- Mr. Rathore day before yesterday when you were talking to Kabir, he kept the phone on speaker and that too in the balcony. Anyone standing in balcony in the neighboring room would know.

Viraj blamed Kabir's stupidity for this. He knew that he cannot explain himself for this. He thought that maybe in this way they will start loving each other and end up being together.

Kaira- What are you talking about Nisha?

Nisha told everything to Kaira. Kaira was shocked. Why did Viraj do such a thing when he knew that by the end of the day, it would be Nisha who would be hurt? Moreover Kaira also knew that Nisha loved Kabir. Kaira looked at Nisha expressing her feelings.

Ni- I need to go. Result will be announced soon. (she wiped the lone tear that dropped)

Everything was so complicated right now. The more they try to solve it the more it gets complicated. Here, Kaira didn't talk to Viraj knowing what he did to his sister like friend. On the other side, Nisha was broken from inside being betrayed by the two people she loved. Kabir, on the other hand, was broken by being betrayed a divine figure, his own mother. Where were their lives taking them? No one could decide. Even god couldn't decide for who the culprit was and who the victim was. But this time all of them were wrong and all of them were right, or were they?

Chapter- 20

Edited by 357159pikachu - 8 years ago
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Would unres after my exams get over


I've read everything though
Couldn't handle much suspense😆
Finally!!! poora pardafash hua

There were some subtle points that instantly caught me😉
KRPKAB has become an epitome for description nowadays🤣 I love the way Erica gets dressed😳
Chaalopanti of Kabir in brackets was fun😆
Needed God's advice but couldn't get it🤣

All the chapters were Amazing!👏👏
I was glued to the screen to read the story until you wrote Precap. Reading everything in a go casts a totally different picture altogether in mind😃
My guess was same as the one Anmol commented after previous update. And am glad it was somewhere near😆

Chalo I'll finally unres later
I keep stalking the forum btw and would wait for the next update


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Posted: 8 years ago
sooo much of suspense..and nibirs emotional thing was just so superb..
hope they ll come to each other with a bang soon..
all the chapters were just mind blowing!!
it was more like a film...
and special thanks frodating this much chapters at one time.
you re really sumthing else..
very very very eager to read the next part...pls cont the soonish
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Posted: 8 years ago
Finally finally 🥳
Sab pata toh chala or mere guess bhi Sahi the 😆😆
Maine starting me hi bola tha mom se related hai kuch 😃😆
Nisha influence ho kar hi ghar se gai hai 😕
Vasu pagal hai yaar puri
But Nisha ne sab ki life barbad kardi..
Ye mera point of view, I'm not saying you're wrong it's just my point of view Nisha ko humiliate kiya gaya, okay and she took decision to leave Kumar's house okay. But she forget that this decision will hurt beyond to the person, who is love of her life. No explanation, no fight, no reason, no talk she just left.
Now when kabir tried something from which he atleast get to know about truth and now Nisha is saying she's hurt. Why she's hurt, when she left kabir without speaking a word, and hurt him who was not at fault.
I think Nisha don't had right to be angry on Viraj or whether kabir also. She's the one who had hurt kabir alot.

Bapre kya kya likh di main. 😆
Sorry if you don't like it.. it's just my point of view and nisha's behaviour with kabir make me write this. Although Nisha had gone through same condition which kabir had, this all done by Vasu I agree but Nisha too choose to make their life hell.

All update were awesome, btw by god back off why didn't he helped kabir. I know Godji bhi pareshan ho Gaye hai kabir se 😆😆
Kabir is stupid by birth bichare viraj ko bhi phasa diya 😆
I really like the way Nisha is trying to being strong 😊 and the way she help Kabir's team really loved strong Nisha 😊

Continue soon...
Edited by Anmol333 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Finally raaz khula.
That was so emotional.
loved it so much.
update soon😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: 357159pikachu

Author's Note

I know that many would be having a thought that what serial have I written, it is very bad as compared to the previous season, it is like a Saas Bahu Drama or We have been been waiting for the suspense for so long and this is how it comes to us. But trust me friends, this is the truth of the society. I am not sure if Saas Bahu soaps show this but I have really heard about it.
Many people actually try to trick other people for money. This is what the future teller over here did. And sometimes people get so much into all this that they destroy everything they have. That is why I made Nisha leave because this is what such people who believe on other people more than their family deserve it. I wanted to show that if anyone says so much about you then no need to stop for relation because such relations are useless. I talking here about VASU AND NISHA.
And the whole world knows about the lives of famous people from some sources or the other. So anyone can predict rubbish about the person then. This is what happened with Vasu. The future teller gathered information about them and told them rubbish just to earn money.
PLEASE DON'T BE OFFENDED IN ANY WAY. THIS IS WHAT I FEEL. I DID NOT MEAN TO HURT ANYBODY.

we really don't think that way infact i'm happy you wrote such a good plot i loved it actually it was really good issue to be picked up and it was as good as first one may be more good than that because of it's suspense it was so good i loved it specially the last two parts i felt really bad for both of them and how cruel mother she was i understand that becuase my own grandmother is like that and he had done some with my mom nd my mom is still suffering becuase she couldn't left as she loves dad a lot but still she's fighting and dad is with her and i felt relieved to read ti that there's one who understand that all mothersa r not alike soem like my grandmother olny thinks about themselves in this vasutdid bcoz of his son sake but she does only for her sake nevere mind please update the fianle soon this time sooner can't wait now please please please
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Originally posted by: Anmol333

Finally finally 🥳

Sab pata toh chala or mere guess bhi Sahi the 😆😆
Maine starting me hi bola tha mom se related hai kuch 😃😆
Nisha influence ho kar hi ghar se gai hai 😕
Vasu pagal hai yaar puri
But Nisha ne sab ki life barbad kardi..
Ye mera point of view, I'm not saying you're wrong it's just my point of view Nisha ko humiliate kiya gaya, okay and she took decision to leave Kumar's house okay. But she forget that this decision will hurt beyond to the person, who is love of her life. No explanation, no fight, no reason, no talk she just left.
Now when kabir tried something from which he atleast get to know about truth and now Nisha is saying she's hurt. Why she's hurt, when she left kabir without speaking a word, and hurt him who was not at fault.
I think Nisha don't had right to be angry on Viraj or whether kabir also. She's the one who had hurt kabir alot.

Bapre kya kya likh di main. 😆
Sorry if you don't like it.. it's just my point of view and nisha's behaviour with kabir make me write this. Although Nisha had gone through same condition which kabir had, this all done by Vasu I agree but Nisha too choose to make their life hell.

All update were awesome, btw by god back off why didn't he helped kabir. I know Godji bhi pareshan ho Gaye hai kabir se 😆😆
Kabir is stupid by birth bichare viraj ko bhi phasa diya 😆
I really like the way Nisha is trying to being strong 😊 and the way she help Kabir's team really loved strong Nisha 😊

Continue soon...

i agree on that sorrry i don't want to offend the story you wrote but still she don't have any right to be angry with them she should be grateful that he still loves her afterall what she did to him

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