Nibir's Ghotala(a unique story)CS UPDATED *11/10*

Posted: 8 years ago
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hello guys!!
I m here with one more story 😆
This is one is specially for ANMOL (as a gift)
I know have so many ongoing stories but kya karu my mind keep thinking new plots every single day 🤣
kis kis ko ignore karu ab 😆
SO...
this is going to be very unique story coz I m writing it on two forums together!! 🤣
This is something which I wanted to write from so many months !!! finally I m doing it 😃
This is combination of two shows (nauc &Bdsah)
so let's start!!!

something abt the story
Nisha and kabir have shifted to a new colony named sunshine colony!!
There were 4 families already living in that society
Ghotala family , Dsuza family , Bhatt and Ojha family

and nauc se sirf nisha and kabir hi hain isme 😆

Hope u all like this story!! 😳
do like n comment give reviews plxz 😃

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Let me tell u something abt the characters before we start

There are 3 people in this family
A girl , her bother & brother's wife


Anna(The girl) : she is sweet n simple , most intelligent among her family , loves sharad ghotala and her fav dialogue is "OH MY GOD , I DON'T BELIEVE THIS!!"



Ronny dsuza(brother) : He is good at heart , has a helpful nature but he always get stuck between words while saying something than say weird things !! 🤣
His fav line is "Tum samjha na men!" 🤔 (u will understand his role when I write the story 😆 )

Liza(brother's wife) : a sweet lady , caring n loving. she is mostly at her maternal home🤣 so will rarely see her in this story!! her fav lines which she repeats are "seriously Ronny?" and "arre baitho .. baitho na men!!" she says n start telling them stories (gossip queen she is 😆 )


There are also 3 ppl
manav ojha , his father and his mother
son & mother need no description as they r normal but Mr. ojha urf OJHA UNCLE is unique piece 🤣

Murlidhar Ojha(Father) : His other name is rajhisthan express. he loves praising Rajasthan so much that har baat me wo rajisthan ko ghusa hi dete hain🤣
and he loves praising himself also saying "made jaisa mahan , gunkari etc etc etc " . he can start eating anywhere and everywhere and other fav dialogue is "to nikalo 501 rupee ka shagun" he is big ksnjoos never uses his things and always take others(like money or mobile to make call etc) 😆

A couple(bhadresh & bhairvi) , 2 kids(mitesh & pritesh) and head of family mother/MIL of couple Bhawana bhatt

Bhadresh: he is a aalsi raam. he never any work by himself. always dependent on others (his mom & wife specially)
He spent most of his time sleeping only. His fav line is "Tumhi kardo , same maja ayega" which says if someone ask him to do some work and mother n son have a dialogue n reply
when in any convo with anyone he says "ka ba" to a reply came in air from nowhere "ha baba"



bhavna bhatt: she loves his son knowing that his aalsi she never scolds him , She is a big pheku 🤣
she will say something impossible then dheere dheere reduce it till the possible things 🤣 (ye b dialogue ayege to zyada acha samjhega 😈
When she says "ka baba" in any ongoing convo with anyone always a reply came "ha ba" from air 🤣
(this is the funniest thing abt the mother son dou 😆)
Bhavna aunty and his bahu's bonding is also very interesting 😃
Her fav lines "phone rakhde Ben wrong number hai" which she says to her D.I.L She scolds her saying "Lohipini, dakan etc. etc.😆but loves her most
she is Gujarati so saying something in it n then start explaining it forgetting the situation around 🤣

Bhairvi : sweet n innocent girl . she do every work giving to her without any complains. take care of her husband always but there is only one problem with her she very very very innocent I tell u 🤣 (u will understand its meaBing soon🤣 )
her fav lines "Matlab bad me samjhane ka kya MATLAB" & "Toh barobar"


Last but not least... the GHOTALA family 😈
There are five ghotala's here 😆
A husband n wife(Vasant & Varsha) , their two kids(Hemant & shishir) and husband's brother(sharad)
This family is totally diff... they r likes from some other world!! (u can subtract the 'Like' word from this line also 😈 )
Inki harkaten I can't describe 🤣
Still I try... ummm


Vasant:
Vasant is the head of the Ghotala Family.He is a loving and caring husband,brother and father.
Caring helpful innocent he is.
His superpowers comprise of lifting heavy things, turning into inanimate objects, swirling like a toranto & running in super sonic speed. He had a special power in his hands that opens a blackboard in air & he can write anything on it.He mostly use this blackboard to correct Hemant's mistakes may what the situation be.

Varsha:
Varsha is the wife of Vasant and mother of Hemant and Shishir. She is a mother figure to Sharad. She is too innocent like Hemant and too emotional like Sharad. She has flexibility superpower by which she can become too tall or too short & she can also strech her hands till far away. She is little biased towards Hemant and doesn't like when anyone corrects/scolds him. She gets irritated whenever Vasant corrects Hemant's hindi and calls him Professor Vasant Ghotala angrily.

Sharad:
He is Vasant's younger brother . He is a logical thinker & can shut anyones mouth with his logical answers. His other name is Logical Ghotala too. He has the superpower of mental telepathy, mind reading, hypnotism not only on humans but also on non humans. He can also transform & take any human's form. He loves Anna and starts 'Yaya-ing' Whenever he thinks of Anna or anybody mentions her name . He starts saying "yayayayayaya" everytime wen there is something about Anna.His brother vasant calls him banyan getting irked by his antics. He is very caring as well as sentimental.

Hemant :
He is innocent, pure hearted , caring & helpful but have a defective brain🤣
He loves his parents & family and consider Bhairvi as his Elder sister. Loves to give company to ppl & things. Always speaks wrong words or mixed of Hindi&English or other weird mixtures of words he do🤣& His father correct him always & calls him genda being irritated.Actually he has his own style of speaking.😆

Shishir:
The youngest ghotala. He chubby & cute but most intelligent among all.He uses his computer eyes to look for information or to view a place live.



And the main couple of story...
Nisha & Kabir


Ab inka intro dene ki zarurat hai kya? LOL
Ye wahi hain jo show me the!! Ladte jhagadte but they Love each other alot! Its been almost two year to their marrige now!!


And I forget to mention... There is one more character!
Heera moti :
She is door ki cousin of bhairvi 😃 (if u want me to explain then listen... Wo bhairvi ki mami ki maa ke nanand ki saas ki behen ke Pote ki beti hai 😆)
She is sweet n innocent like bhairvi only!! Actually us se b do qadam agey🤣 ye chalti phirti question mark express hain 😈


The five ghotalas have came to earth to search for 2015(who is eldest son vasant&varsha) 2015 is his alein name actually they all have name is numbering only(like vasant is 9211 & varsha is 1721) but they changed their names in human names to live in human world. Finding their son is the only aim which bring them here. The 3 families which I mentioned knows that ghotalas are aliens and they are different and doesn't know many things about human world but...
What will happen when a new Family(nibir) join them?
What will happen when someone came to live in the house next to ghotalas? How will they Hide their reality? To know more stay tuned 😉



Ok so i have described the whole cast of my movie now 🤣
so Lets start the story now!😳
Hope u all will like it..
Will update soon😉





Edited by RoshniVdian786 - 8 years ago
Posted: 8 years ago
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I really missed this 😆
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I would love to read this story please complete this first 😆
Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anmol333

I would love to read this story please complete this first😆




ok I will try 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786




ok I will try 😆


Try wry nhi karna hai phele yehi story complete honi chahiye 😡
Or else mujhse bura koi nhi hoga 😛
Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anmol333


Try wry nhi karna hai phele yehi story complete honi chahiye 😡
Or else mujhse bura koi nhi hoga 😛


😲 😲😲
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786


😲 😲😲


Hwww nhi bolo phele isse hi complete karogi..😛
Posted: 8 years ago
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But tere siwa no one is reading this story Anmol 🤔
Atleast 5 log b ho to I will update it regularly!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786

But tere siwa no one is reading this story Anmol 🤔

Atleast 5 log b ho to I will update it regularly!!

Sujay , main or needu hai Na or PM kar na log padhenge koi nhi aata hai forum me 😆

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