NIBIR SS - The Journey Of Love (Epilogue part B up pg 95)*10/1* - Page 11

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shrutigaur37

awesome update.
had she climbed on wrong train..
update soon


Thanks shruti 😊
You will get know about it in next update 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Anmol333


May be next update clear your doubt 😳

Hmm update soon den 😉... Nd like button isn't working... Trying frm yesterday 😕.. Wen it'll work I'll like ur update 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: plaksha2002

Hmm update soon den 😉... Nd like button isn't working... Trying frm yesterday 😕.. Wen it'll work I'll like ur update 😊


Okki will try to update soon😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello everyone..!!!😊

Main kal (tomorrow) update karne wali thi.. But I m not feeling good.. Mera tabiyat theek nhi hai.. Toh main update likh hi nhi pa rahi hun.. So you guys have to wait little.. Jaise mujhe acha lagega main likh ke update kar dungi..!! hope you understand... 😊

Sorry for making you wait.. Sorry 😊


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Posted: 9 years ago
Get well soon dear...
And update it soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Iss story ko index mai bhi update kar do 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sujayricky

Res vo bhi raaz wala res 🤣

Unres but 50% wala raaz pata chala hai 😉

Awesome update

Nisha ka emotional moment was nice 😉

But vo dada dadi kon hai 😲 aur vo ladka kon hai 😲

Nisha kahi wrong train mai toh nahi hai 😉

Waise nibir ka romance kab start hoga 😈


P.s- Sorry for late unres but mobile mai game play karte karte bhul jaata tha sorry 😉 and get well soon with asanskari romantic scenes 😈


Thank u sujay 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sujayricky

Iss story ko index mai bhi update kar do 😉


Kar dungi jab story thoda aaghe bhad jayega 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 2



Ye S5 seat no 23 hi hai na ?" Nisha asked to that guy

Yes " he said

Toh sorry Mr ye meri seat hai " said nisha firmly

Excuse me miss ye meri seat hai " said guy then turn toward his grandparents and yelled " aap dono ne kuch bola q nhi isse jab meri seat pe aake baith gai "

Vo pata hi nhi chala beta.. Umar ho gai hai na kuch dhang se dikhta nhi mujhe laga tu aake baitha hai" said the old man adjusting his specs

Dikhta nhi hai " guy mimicked then turn toward nisha

Dekho madam vo mera seat hai... Aaa...aa dadu chipkali" said guy pointing toward his legs..
His dadu immediately pulled his legs up and looked at there wide eyes.. Realizing it was prank he byte his tongue.. While two boys laugh.. The lady put hand on her mouth to suppress her laugh and dadi rolled her eyes on them.. Nisha give mixed expression confused and amused..

Ab kaise dikh gaya " guy asked angrily glaring at him

La kachori de " dadu asked the guy extending his hand toward him

Main kuch puch raha hun " said guy

Arey tu latak jhatak ke mere liye garma gram kachori laya toh vo thnda ho jayega na " said dadu

Arrrgg u miss utho meri seat se " said guy pointing his finger at nisha

Arey main kyun uthun.. Ye meri seat hai.. Tum jao yaha se " said nisha pointing finger back at him

Acha chalo mujhe ticket dikhao apna.. Main bhi dekhu toh " said the guy

Vo.. Meri ticket papa ke pass hai, humne pura couch book karwaya tha " said nisha

Lo naya bahana.. Ohh aap ne pura couch book karwaya tha.." He said sarcastically then continue " mere mathe me pagal likha hai Jo tum kuch bhi bologi hum maan lenge.. Kahan hai tumhare papa ??" He asked

Wahi toh mujhe bhi samajh nhi aa raha yehi seat hai phir bhi kahan hai sab.. And Mr. Humne sach me pura couch book karwaya hai meri shadi hai Mumbai me samjhe." Said nisha

Guy face palmed on that he open his mouth to say something when his dadu interrupt him

Arey meri kachori toh de do " dadu cried

Lo lo thoosn lo " said guy and give him packet that he was holding

Okay I believe you.. Tabhi tum meri seat pe hi baithi ho " said the guy

Arey bade ajeeb ho tum, bolte ho you believe me phir bhi meri seat ko apni bata rahe ho " said nisha

Offoh tumne bola na tumhe Mumbai jana but ye train Banaras ja rahi hai or ye meri seat hai, now get up " said the guy

Wh.. Wh.. Whaa.. Ttt???" Nisha asked in shocked

Meri shadi hai... " she said to herself looking at front and tear of fear immediately make his way from her eyes to cheeks
In front of nisha guy's dadi was sitting.. Saw nisha that she started crying bitterly... Dadi instantly held nisha hand and try to console her..

Beta ro mat kuch nhi koi nhi.. Hum kuch na kuch hal (solution) nikalte hai tum ro mat beta " said dadi

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Arey abhi tak station nisha me nhi aaya " said a hyper lakshmi

Lakshmi relax me.. nisha station me nhi aai " said ramesh

Haan chachi aap jayada tension mat lo sukku or Umesh Bhaiya gaye hai na bahar nishu ko dekhne " said kirti

Mujhe pata tha, nishu ro rahi hogi wahan pe... Nisha ko akele nhi bhejhna tha " said a sad dolly.. Everyone agree with her

Papa " sukku come inside and called ramesh

Haan beta kya hua " asked ramesh

Chachu nisha scooty parking me hai matalb vo aagai hai par hai kahan?? " said Umesh in frustration

Arey matalb " asked aman

Matalb vo station aa gai hai par kahan hai pata nhi" said Umesh making everyone hell worried

Arey call karo usey pucho kahan hai " said viren

Haan tauji wahi kar raha hun par vo phone nhi utha rahi ring toh pura jaa raha hai " said sukku still dialing her

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Now dadi and old lady with nisha sitting at one side trying to console her and dadu along with guy and 2 boys sitting another side and enjoying their kachoris..

Nisha all of a sudden stopped crying and say " main next station pe utar jaungi "

But ye train duranto ( I don't know aisa koi train Varanasi tak chalta hai ke nhi but its fiction bear it ) hai " said guy

Duranto ??" Nisha asked

Duranto matalb dur plus turant matalb ye train ek station se start hoke last stop pe hi rukta hai " explained guy

Toh Jaipur me kaise ruka ??" Nisha asked

Vo 6 ghate baad ek stoppage hai jahan driver change hota hai " said guy adjusting his specs as it was falling down

Listening this nisha again started crying and this time more bitterly.. Seeing this all six become more tensed..

Okk okk miss stop it stop " said guy

Beta aap ro mat hum aap ko wada karte hai aap ko aapki mazil tak pahucha denge " said guy's dadu

Haan beta ro mat aap Banaras chalo phir next train se aap ko Mumbai chod aayenge okkk " said dadi

Maa... Papa... Mujhe... Mujhe... Caa... Call... Kaa... Karna.. Hai " said nisha and started searching her phone in Lakshmi's bag only that thing she was carry.. And then something strike her she remember that she put her phone at her scooty's dicky.. She again started crying..

Kya hua di kya hua " one of the boy asked

Mera phone scooty me reh gaya" said nisha while crying and cover her face

Lo mere phone se baat karlo " said guy and give his phone

Haan beta main baat kar leti hun tum no. Bolo " said dadi took phone from guy

Lo tum ye pani piyo " said another lady who was sitting there
Nisha nodded in no but lady anyhow make nisha water then nisha told her father no.

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Kahan hai nisha tu.." Said ramesh searching for her
His phone rang seeing an unknown no. He cut the call as he was very tensed and he don't want to talk anyone unknown this time..
He again got call with same no. He again cut the call and search here there for nisha.. On third time when his phone rang he picked it up..

Hello " said ramesh

Hello ji aap ramesh bol rahe hai nisha ke papa " said a lady

Ji aap kon or nisha ?? " ramesh asked

Ji main janki varma.. Vo aapki beti nisha abhi humare sath hai " said dadi

Kahan hai aap or nisha kaisi hai vo theek toh hai na.. Aap bataiye main abhi wahan aajata hun " said ramesh

Vo nisha galti se Varanasi ke train me chad gai hai..." Said dadi cut off by ramesh

Kya vo duranto ??" Ramesh asked in shock

Ji haan usime... Aap chinta mat kariye vo humare sath surakchit (save) hai.. Hum usey Mumbai phucha denge.. " said dadi

Ji sukriya.. Nisha ?? " asked ramesh

Haan ye lijiye baat kijiye.. Lo nisha baat karo beta " said dadi and give phone to her

Hello Papa.." Said nisha

Hello nisha "

Hello papa..?"

Hello awaz nhi hai.. Hello "

Haan papa ab awaz aai ??"

Haan beta.. Dekh tu darr mat kuch nhi hua.. Sab theek hojaega.. Theek hai ??"

Ji main.. "

Shh kuch kehne ko zaroorat nhi mujhe pata hai kya hua... Beta tere pass lakshmi ka bag hai na usme paise hai zaroorat padne par use kar lena theek hai...??"

Hmmm.."

Or tu yahan ki chinta mat Karna main sab sambhal lunga tu bad apna khayal rakhna.."

Haan papa "

Acha samey samey pe call karna.. Abhi main jata hun sab ko bata deta hun kya hua "

Abhi tak train nhi aai "

Haan vo 1 ghanta late hai "

Theek hai papa aap bhi apna khyal rakhna or sab ka bhi main aa jaungi Mumbai "

Haan beta "

With this ramesh hang up the call and go back to waiting room to give information about nisha...

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Nisha had come to gate area of train as inside didn't get network so she can talk to her father smoothly guy took her there

She was leaning on door.. She give back phone to guy and still she was crying..

Listen apna face dho lo.. Or mat ro jab baat karna ho main apna phone de dunga" said guy leaning on handle (which we use to climb upper Berth) and staring at her

Umm?? Hmm !!" Nisha said and move toward washbasin.. And wash her face while this time guy notice enchanting beauty of nisha which he failed to notice before as he was angry that time..
Small small droplet on her face making her more beautiful... She use her dupatta to vipe her face and again lean on door try to control her tears which was impossible for her now.. While the guy looked at her heart on his mouth as wind was caressing her face and hair..

Koi rasta nhi hai iss problem ka " asked nisha

Hai ek solution hai " said guy moved closer to her

Kya ??" Nisha asked looking at him

Tum yahan se kood jaao " he said and pushed nisha by holding her arm

Nisha screamed in fear and "thud" like someone fall...

To be continued...

Edited by Anmol333 - 9 years ago
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Awesome... and yaaayy.. I'm first

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