NIBIR SS - The Journey Of Love (Epilogue part B up pg 95)*10/1*

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I was thinking about writing an os but suddenly this story pop up in my mind.. Please let me know how it is.. Please do like and comment 😊

Prologue


Wow vo chudi ( bangles ) dikha na toh " said a mid 20 girl who was looking bangles for wedding

Nahi dolly di ye wala theek rahega " said another girl who was early 20

Nopes ye wala acha hai" said dolly showing the bangles to girl

How blah dolly di ye wala us pink wale lhenge ke sath acha rahega " said the girl

Nopes ye wala I saids na " dolly said

Offo dolly di nopes nhi nope and saids nhi said " corrected a girl in specs and continue " kirti or dolly di aap dhulhan se hi puch lo na akhir use hi ye sab phena hai "

Haan bilkul shi kaha jwala tumne " said an another girl who was sitting there watching their fight

Toh nishu bata na tujhe kon sa pasand " asked kirti

Nisha who was sitting on her room window lane and was so lost in her inner battle didn't listen what kirti asked.. Why not she was going to marry within a 10 days.. She is not ready for marriage its not like she want to do something.. Or something else.. She herself want do marriage.. Lots of gifts, jewelry, dress, etc like every girl want to do.. But her heart was not feeling that happiness which she was dreaming from childhood.. She did what she want always no one stopped her.. She was not feeling good.. Why this she unable to understand..

Kya hua nisha?? Darr lag raha hai ??" This question took out nisha from revive

Pata nhi aman bhabhi " said nisha genuinely

Aman smile on her nervousness and said " nisha sab ko aise hi darr lagta hai "

Ek naya rista jud raha hai tera thodi toh ghabraht ho gi hi " said dolly

Humme pata hai nisha tu iss rishte ko bhi ache tarike se nibhaegi.. Apne love wale magic se sab ko apna bana legi " said kirti side hugging her..

Or Maine toh tujhe khana banana bhi sikha diya hai toh tere magic list me ek or cheez shamil ho gai " said Umesh entering in the room

Or haan koi panga ho toh ekk call karna main aajaunga tere pass or hum dono bhai bhen mil ke Sab ko band baja denge " said sukku kneeled in front of nisha

Haan nishu tu bas ye shoch ke apne Mr. Rathoor ko kabu me kaise rakhegi " said dolly to lighten the situation

Or haan aap hume bhul mat Jana nishu bro/di apne Mr. Rathoor ke chakkar me " said jwala and bunty unison

Kabhi nhi " said nisha and opened her arm asking them to hug her they all immediately hug her and shared cute emotional cousin moment

Chalo ab bas Karo rona dhona tum sab " said lakshmi entering in room with saurav and dadi as they watch all this from outside

Phele aap toh band karo maa " said nisha

Chalo ab sab jaake so jao kal subha hi train hai Mumbai ke liye" said saurav

Haan gud night nisha " said everyone and retire to their rooms

Only dolly stay there as she had to pack again nisha's luggage.. She started packing it..

La main bhi teri madat karta hun " said saurav to which dolly smiled and let him help her

Kya hua hai thare ko nisha " said dadi sitting on bed as nisha was adoring DoSa

Dadi pata nhi kyun main utni khush nhi hun jitni dolly di apni shadi me " said nisha

Offoh nisha hummari toh love marriage thi na or Teri arranged marriage " said saurav

Haan nishu teri arranged marriage hai iss liye tu nervous ho rahi hai " said Lakshmi

Nisha mhari bacchi tu darr mat sab acha hoga tu sab smbhal legi " said dadi

Haan nishu " said dolly assuring her on which nisha give a warm smile

Dekh na nishu dadaji or dadi ka shadi bhi arranged tha na or unsey acha koi couple hai kya " said saurav

Haan nishu shadi ke baad pyar ho hi jayega tu chinta mat kar " said Lakshmi

Haan nisha tu ye soch honeymoons me kaha jayegi " said dolly teasingly

Which irked nisha as she was not sure for this relation

Dolly di ho gai packing ab aap jao.. Mujhe akele rehna hai" said nisha which make everyone laugh at her

Acha hum jate hai or tu so jana apne iss nayi journey ke bare me mat sochte rehna " said lakshmi as everyone leaving the room

Nisha closed the door and sigh then moved toward her bed..

New journey of life... Hmmm interesting " said nisha and slip into the slumber to start new journey of her life next day..

To be continued...
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INDEX

Prologue - Above

Chapter 1 - page 8

Chapter 2 - page 17

Chapter 3 - page 25

Chapter 4 - page 35

Chapter 5 - page 41

Chapter 6 - page 50

Chapter 7 - page 58

Chapter 8 - page 66

Chapter 9 - page 74

Chapter 10 - page 80

Epilogue - page 95

Edited by Anmol333 - 8 years ago
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Mera bhi res 😈

Ab unres bhi hogaya 😉
Superb start 👏

Mujhe kyu lagta hai yeh arrange marriage pe story nahi hai 😉

Nisha and cousins scene was nice
Specially sukku ka dhamki wala scene 😆

Mr rathode mai kuch toh gadbad hai 🤣

Ab tu bas update kar de i am ready 😈
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Pehle yeh bata kaun hai mr rathode tabhi unres hoga 😉
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Originally posted by: Sujayricky

Pehle yeh bata kaun hai mr rathode tabhi unres hoga 😉


Sab abhi bata dun story kon pahdega phir 😛

Or haan ye dhamki toh Dena hi mat warna main update nhi karungi 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congratulations for the New Story.
Interesting Prologue.
Continue Soon.

Oye Sujay tu kab update karega stories??
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Originally posted by: 92Sara

Congratulations for the New Story.
Interesting Prologue.
Continue Soon.

Oye Sujay tu kab update karega stories??


Thanks sara 😊

And sujay pagal ho gaya hai sirf res Karna aata hai use 😆😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow to the concept.. loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice prologue...nd i hope mr rathore kabir hi h...as ye nibir story h...n i can guess d story lil bit...but mai aapka maja kir kira nahi krungi..u carry on writing ur story

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