NiBir TS- When Destiny Brought us Together Again (Part3-Page 14)

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oh nakhrewaali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: Black_Maniac
A short sweet ending, but beautiful ❤️
I loved it Shibu ;)
You took the story well :D

Thanks Krishi😳

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oh nakhrewaali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: gymty
Finally destiny brought them together.I was eagerly for your update. Thanks for the update loved the way u ended it.

Thanks😊

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MetaphorMaggy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#123

It was cute shibu..

Luvd it!

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oh nakhrewaali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: _A-Hopeful-Ray_
It was cute shibu..
Luvd it!

Thanks maggu😳

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oh nakhrewaali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: arviabhigya
Part 2- Nice update😃
Firstly, love the shayari in the beginning of the chapter👏👏👏

"most romantic couple of the college"- Loved this line❤️

Nisha's message and Nibir breakup

Kabir's personal RH has Nishu's picture😳😃😃 Just shws how much he values her😃😳
Glad to knw ki Kabir ki life mein abhi bhi Nisha is an integral part😃😉
Dadaji was against him

I love the fact that in 2-3 lines u are able to give us the backdrop of the story so well👏👏👏

Kabir sensed her presence and shouted, "GET OUT! GO AWAY!"- He sensed her presence
Nisha-Sir, woh actually... (she moved closer to him)
Kabir- What is it?
He stood up and walked closer to her, and she, in fear started taking backward steps. She felt her back hit the hard wall, so looked at Kabir, whose eyes had anger blazing in them.
Kabir- Woh actually kya?
Nisha- (stammering) Event...ready...venue...
Kabir- I don't give a damn about it...about you..- Loved Nibir's intensity here😃😃😃
Waise no matter what he says, his actions convey that he still affected by her and he still cares for her😳😉
She closed her eyes as she felt the hatred in his voice, but her tears trickled down her cheeks. Kabir wiped them. She felt his warm fingers on her cheeks so opened his eyes and looked at his eyes, which were now milder. She touched his cheek. He held her hand in his and caressed it.- This part was lovely Love how no matter how much he tries to stay angry at her, he cannot see her in pain or tears Love the way he almost unconsciously wiped away her tears😳😳
Nisha felt her breath faster as he caressed her hand, just like the old times.- This was so adorable😳😳
He said in his mind, but his anger was nothing compared to his guilt for injuring a man, so forced Dadaji to get in the car. - Love this quality of Kabir😳😉
Dadaji had accepted their relationship😲
Loved the last part😃 Kabir kya hum sab bhi kaafi confused hain😆😆 So the good thing is she didnt marry Shekhar😃
All in all, a pleasant read😉

Thanks a lot Mihu☺️

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arviabhigya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#126

So sorry this was supposed to be your Christmas gift but main bhool gayi😆

sorry😭

ple maaf kar do😊

Ab Christmas nahin par naye saal ka gift samajh lo😆😉

Chapter 3- A delightful update😳

So finally Kabir put the pieces together and realized that Nishu still loved him😳😳😳

You could literally imagine Kabir screaming his lungs out at his fate and their situation !

So our loverboy decides to confront Nishu and put an end to all this😎

Loved Kabir's firm, no nonsense avtaar 😃😎

She didn't know when she walked away from him, closed the door and sat on the sofa. She didn't realize when Kabir came and sat on his knees infront of her, holding her hand. Love the way u described Nishu's response👏

The last part was my fav😳 She hugged him and cried her heart out. Kabir too hugged her back, as tears escaped his eyes. He was now happy. This two years were like death for him without Nisha, and finally he found her, and she was in his arms. - Nibir hug Simple yet beautiful😳

Nisha had faltered in making a decision, but his Love didn't falter... that's why Destiny had brought them together- Loved this line Shibu👏👏👏 So deep Sach kahoon toh when you write statements/ things like this, I really wonder where you get this maturity from and whether this is still the paagal school going ladki I know😳😆

All in all, a lovely chapter with the last line being the highlight of this chapter and the story for me😉

Now I m doubtful whether this comment was worth the wait or not😆 but thanks for waiting🤗😊

Edited by arviabhigya - 8 years ago

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oh nakhrewaali

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Posted: 8 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: arviabhigya
Chapter 3- Nice update😃

thanks Mihu😳
is a big review coming😳, yaa isi se kaam chala lu?😕

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arviabhigya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: __shibani__

thanks Mihu😳
is a big review coming😳, yaa isi se kaam chala lu?😕

Nahin issi se kaam chala lo 🤣 🤣

just kidding😆😆

Uss din mera comment IF ne delete kar diya tha toh maine decide kiya ki isse pehle ki mera comment phir gayab ho I will update it in parts. And kyunki main janti hun ki tujhe mera comment pm se pehle hi dikh jaayega, I decided to write not much so that u don't read an incomplete comment😆

Don't worry isse bhi bahut jald complete karti hun😳

Waise do u knw how much I missed u😃

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oh nakhrewaali

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Posted: 8 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: arviabhigya

Nahin issi se kaam chala lo 🤣 🤣
just kidding😆😆
Uss din mera comment IF ne delete kar diya tha toh maine decide kiya ki isse pehle ki mera comment phir gayab ho I will update it in parts. And kyunki main janti hun ki tujhe mera comment pm se pehle hi dikh jaayega, I decided to write not much so that u don't read an incomplete comment😆
Don't worry isse bhi bahut jald complete karti hun😳
Waise do u knw how much I missed u😃

I missed u too😭