NiBir TS || Jeena Jeena || (Part 3 -pg 13) *11/6* - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
This was soo good... Kash show me bhi ayese hi hota .. kabir accepted nisha's proposal and ramesh ko bhi maana liya kabira ne ... 😊 update soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Ha! love you for bringing back the old memories of NiBir - It has always been pleasure to treasure their moments!
Kabir is ecstasy to a new level - The way he sorted things with Ramesh, I loved the bonding as it was much more beautiful than the RaKa scene onscreen (though that scene had it's own beauty, this one made me so happy). I seriously wish that this could have happened, but not a problem as we are lucky enough to cherish it even after an year of the show!
Coming to the update ;
I love the way Nisha confessed her love -just like her character in show, she is too precious to shed tears!
The beauty of Kabir confessing his love was cherry on the cake.

Jeena Jeena - made me to read this, beautiful title, they are each other's jeena now 😳

Claps to you chikki! 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
Its wonderful that you took the brother route and didnt make them share hate for each other.
The first part seems compelling and intriguing, look forward to the next installment.
You're a phenomenal writer 👏👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Amina...

Beautiful Start Niya ...!!!
Loved It ...!!!

Thanks 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shats

Sooo happy to c dis vrsn of dt scene
Dr confession 😳
Kabira ne bhi iss time confess kardiya yaayyy [:D/] at least yaha toh dono ko akal aayi 🤣
Loved d ramesh part 😆
Loved it ❤️

Thanks😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: mishrialways

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niyu this is nice👏
nisha confessed and that too with out wasting time😳
kabir too spoke his feelings😳
ramesh fooled by kabir😛
hope everything goes well😃

Cont soon😆

Thanks Ritika😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: Roopsha_98

Wow Niya it was so beautiful😳...Nishu ne confess kar dia❤️...Kabiraa ne bhi kar dia🥳... aur ye dream bhi nahi tha😆...Ramesh ko bhi kitne smoothly Kabiraa ne handle kar lia😉
Sab kuch perfectly ho gaya😳
Kash show main bhi aisa hota
Luved it❤️...continue soon & thanx for the pm🤗

Thank you so much😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: .vishrutha.

Lovely start Niya!

Glad that it was Nisha's dream but reality!
Nisha's confession, Ramesh's outburst and Kabir's reasoning were all well written! 👍🏼
How smoothly did Kabir handle the situation? So clever of him!😆
Both sleeping in eachother's embrace with their own individual content thoughts was again a very nice moment! 👍🏼
Continue soon and thanks for pm 😊

Thanks Vishru🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: zaara610

Loved it Niyaa..waiting for your next update..😊

Thanks Bhabhi ji😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: poornima_15

This was soo good... Kash show me bhi ayese hi hota .. kabir accepted nisha's proposal and ramesh ko bhi maana liya kabira ne ... 😊 update soon 😊

Thank you😃

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