NiBir SS || You Complete Me || ( Chp 10 - pg 60) *23/3* COMPLETED - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
#81
Thanks😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Black_Maniac

I love it Niyu🤗

It is so cute... Viru getying jealous haan.. Well the adorable part was Nishu getting J 😆
And Kabira got emotional... What happened? This isnot fair... You are leaving me in suspense 😔
Continue soon... This is too cute you know 😳

Thanks Krishi 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: Sirat711

Awesome update
Continue soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mansi_as18

So the awwwing session is over... 😆 i freaking love this kn relationship... chuck it i luv every relationship in this story be ot laxmi kabir, or cousins or anyone except for viraj... i know m judging here but i cant help it

Thanks Mansi, finally comment kiya tumne 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Fareesha

Awwwee so cute..loved it

Aww Nibir childhood friends ha 😳
Kabir ne kya entry maari dushoom dushoom👏😆
Aww nibir hug
Caring kabira😳
J viraj😆
Aww car scene was so cute
Nibir and cousins scene was too good
Kabir k past me aisa kya hua tha🤔
Update soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Niya_789


Thanks Mansi, finally comment kiya tumne 😆

der se aae par durust aae hai ki nhi 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88
Chapter 3 already😲
Ok I am glad to see some new readers here, it is a request to you that if you want PMs for future update of this story please Buddy me😳
Also, I am converting this story into a SS as I get new ideas with every new chapter I write and have to cut it because it becomes to lengthy 🤣 Not proof read as always 😛


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Chapter 3

Nisha followed Kabir but his phase was too fast for her to follow, she reached the terrace and as she thought he was standing on the reeling leaning on it, she went from behind and hugged him from side cuddling to him, Kabir involuntarily wrapped his hand around her and that is how Viraj saw them when his car moved ahead from the gate from the rear view mirror, he had several emotions in his mind pain, anger, frustration, confusion and what not but he ignored all of them!


Here, Nisha was apologizing from Kabir for her mistake

"I am sorry Kabir, main tujhe hurt nahi karna chahti thi..." she said genuinely and cutely, even in his saddest state Kabir had a tiny smile on his face due to her adorableness

"Tu chaha kar bhi mujhe hurt nahi kar sakti Nisha, tu janti hai na yeh?!" He said as he rubbed her arm slightly in assurance!

"But anjane main toh kar diya na?" she again said cutely as she snugged into him more, Kabir broke the hug and cupped her face

"Nisha" he called her sweetly "Tu kyun blame kar rahi hai aapne aap ko? Tune mujhe hurt nahi kiya, main toh bas aise hi chala aaya" he tried hiding his pain but he forgot that the person he was talking to could always sense his pain!

"Abh tu mujhse jhut bhi bolega Kabir?" she asked looking at him sternly and hurt

Giving up on his emotions Kabir pulled her in a bone crushing hug and started sobbing

"Aise kyun hua Nisha, kya galti thi meri? Maa ki? Di ki? Kyun kiya bhagwaan ne aisa?" Kabir said between his sobs and Nisha rubbed his back while thinking what she should reply but failed to make a logical answer to be told to him, she just let him cry in her arms as she roamed her hand on his back calming him down...

After a few minutes when Kabir's cry subsidised he broke the hug

"Andar chale, sab wait kar rahe honge" Nisha said as she didn't know what else she was supposed to do, Kabir nodded his head and both went inside. The cousins were waiting out for them to come back, seeing Kabir's face everyone understood that he had been crying, they came forward and took him in a group hug

"Guys, koi mujhe bhi dekh lo yaar" Nisha said in the similar way as Kabir said a few hours ago and mimicked him

"Tu kitni J hai Nisha" Kabir said as he chuckled slightly and pulled her in the hug too

Dadaji who was passing by saw them all and smiled, Dadi came to him and placed a hand on his shoulder

"Aapne ke laage hai? Je samay theek hai?" she asked him

"Haan Saroj, yehi samay theek hai" he replied eyeing them all with a smile, Dadi returned the smile and they both left from there

The gang broke the hug and smiled looking at Kabir smiling at them

"Chalo abh main chala sone, itna lamba safar kiya hai, neend aa rahi hai" Kabir said faking a yawn and stretching his arms

Everyone knew that he is lying and just wants to be alone but they respected his feelings and let him go, they wished good night and retired to their respective rooms.

Nisha tried sleeping but sleep was far away from her, she went to Kabir's room and sneaked inside, she tip-toed to his bed and sat next to him on the floor, she looked at his face reading it, she could see the fresh tear marks on his face and didn't realise when she herself had started sobbing, she didn't want to disturb his sleep she moved to the balcony.

She leaned on the wall as she sat there adoring the moon leaning on the wall, she closed her eyes and let the tears fall from her eyes, she remembered what happened 3 years ago, when they had got a call from Mumbai which gave them the worst news of their lives

*Flashback*

Kabir and his family had shifted to Mumbai after his sister Aradhayaa had got married to the person she loved and since Kabir too wanted to become a dancer he had to go there to fulfil his dreams in the city of dreams, but he didn't stay with Aradhayaa instead took a room on rent in the same society. Vasundara had to go when she came to know that Aradhayaa was expecting her first baby!

Everyone was excited for Aradhayaa and wished her they all had visited Mumbai when Aradhayaa gave birth to a beautiful Princess but her husband was missing, they felt it weird but Aradhayaa covered up saying that he had gone out of city for some business meeting.

After a week when Aradhayaa came home everyone had welcomed her and her princess in a grand way at her house and then the day after they all left. She requested Vasundara and to go along but she refused to go till Aradhyaa's husband came back.

Two months passed when he came back and Kabir had taken the baby to his academy as his friends were eager to meet the baby, he somehow managed to convince Aradhyaa and Vasundara

He was really happy when they agreed and came back home with the baby after some hours but he was surprised to see almost all the neighbours outside his house, he asked them what happened but none replied, he peeped in from the ajar of the door and what he saw left him in shock would be an understatement.

He pushed the door open and what he saw was blood all over the place. He pushed the door open and went inside with lots of courage and taking tiny steps. The inspector who was inspecting the crime scene came to him


"Aap kon hai?" he asked Kabir

"Main, main..." Kabir was not able to say anything as words refused to come out of his mind he looked as the constable lay the dead body of Aradhayaa's husband.

"Yeh Kabir hai sir, yeh iski behan ke husband hai" the secretary of the society informed the inspector. Kabir finally managed to compose himself and was about to ask something but he saw two more dead bodies being bought out of the room, he feared that what he thought shouldn't be true but he knew that it was the fact

He sat on the ground as the constables placed the bodies next to the first one, he sat on the floor emotionless looking at the dead body of his entire family.

"Sir, yeh phone main koi recording hai" one of the constables informed the inspector and he asked to play it

"Kabir" hearing his name Kabir looked up with tears in his eyes, it was Aradhyaa, he could sense the fear in her voice

"Kabir, shayaad yeh recording tumhe milne tak main zinda bhi na rahun, ya shayaad ki zinda na rahe, mere husband ek maafi ke gang ke shikar hogaye the, unhe continuously threats aa rahe the, main janti thi ki kabhi na kabhi vo hum tak pohnchke hume maar denge kyunki mere husband unke samne jhukne wale nahi the, main nahi chahti thi ki tumhe ya Maa ko kuch ho issliye tum dono se wapas jane ke liye keh rahi thi.. aaj subah unka phone aaya tha, issliye jab tumne Princess ko leke jane kaha maine tum haan kar di..." there was a vase breaking sound from back and Vasundara's scream was heard after a gun shoot

"Kabir" she continued as she sobbed and her voice shivered "Princess ka dhayaan rakhna Kabir, unse Mama banke nahi par uske Papa banke, use kabhi mat batana ki vo tumhari beti nahi hai Kabir, kabhi nahi.. aaj se abhi se vo tumhari beti hai, yaad rakhna..aur..."

The next thing they heard was a gun shot and complete silence after it, Kabir shut his eyes tight as he cried, he looked at the small baby who was just 2 months old in his arms and was sleeping peacefully, he hugged the small figure and cried harder. He felt a hand on his shoulder and turned to find Lakshmi there, the Gangwals were informed by Vasundara the previous day when she came to know about the matter and Ramesh, Lakshmi and Nisha had decided to come to Mumbai the very next day but they were too late.

"Maa..." Kabir said in a broken voice and just hugged Lakshmi, Ramesh came and sat next to him and started soothing his hair, they had been standing on the door right from when the recording had been started to be played.

"Humne sab suna beta, hume maaf karde, hum samay se yahan nahi pohuch paye" Ramesh said but Kabir had not even heard what he spoke

"Hume dead body post mortem ke liye leke jani hai, humne sare evidences collect kar liye hai, aap main se kisi ko paper work ke liye humare saath chalna padega..." the inspector told and Ramesh decided to go with him.

Lakshmi had called the family and informed them about the situation, Nisha came to Kabir and hugged them, they broke the hug when the Baby started crying, Nisha took the baby in her arms and she became quiet immediately, Kabir too kept his head in Nisha's lap and started crying again. Nisha had controlled her tears very firmly as she knew she couldn't break down now.

After performing all the rituals everyone including Kabir came back to Jaipur and they decided that Kabir shall stay with them here after.

Soon Kabir and Nisha started coming closer due to the little Princess, the entire family noticed it and so did Nisha and Kabir but till their princess was happy they didn't mind anything.

*Present*

Kabir woke up due to thirst and saw Nisha sleeping leaning on the balcony's wall, he smiled at her weakly and went to her, he picked her up in his arms and laid her on the bed, he had some water and made himself comfortable on the couch and slept. He had a smile on his face when he slept this time because he knew why Nisha was here! Soon they both were sleeping peacefully with the moon light brightening the entire room just like their life was about to be brightened up once again pretty soon!

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Edited by Niya_789 - 9 years ago
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That was... beautiful... it is purely ur style... one moment u make me smile huge going aww over them n the next u make me feel proud on them for the strength they have... their pain inflecting in me.. m such an emotional fool i tell u 😆

Ok so enough of emotions... so who m i going to resemble... cute little princesss??? 😉
Edited by mansi_as18 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mansi_as18

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That was... beautiful... it is purely ur style... one moment u make me smile huge going aww over them n the next u make me feel proud on them for the strength they have... their pain inflecting in me.. m such an emotional fool i tell u 😆

Ok so enough of emotions... so who m i going to resemble... cute little princesss??? 😉


Thanks 😳
I am infected too 😆
Yup, shayaad kal tak tumhari entry ho jaye iss story main that too a grand one 🤣

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