NIBIR SS Kismat Ka Lekh ch 3 pg 14 (7/5) - Page 6

Originally posted by: Anmol333

Wow fabulous update 👏 👏

Song selection and timing was perfect and beautiful...👏 Loved it 😳

Continue soon !!!

Originally posted by: Aha121

Wow
Kabir saw nisha☺️
Awesome update
Update soon

Originally posted by: Black_Maniac

Ohh.. This is really intriguing 😳
I am loving it.. First when I read the half chapterr I didn't know what story I am reading 😛
Then when Nisha was singing I got slight hint but still cldn't remember 😆
Finally when Kabir thought that Nisha trusts that he isn't dead I remembered it's the story where Saurav-Kirti were getting engaged (I hope it is that one 😉)
Now the update was nice.. It was so clear that Nisha was singing it for hee love.. But honestly if she was famous and everyone knew her hubby, didn't anyone recognize him 😕
But I trust you, so continue soon 😊

Originally posted by: mishrialways

singing audition not bad yaar

btw who was saying that she dont like her voice😆

for why kabir doing it you will get it in the next update

and yes i will pm

Originally posted by: Niha0606

ritika this is something which i loved the most among all ur other works even had tears in my eyes😭

why kabir is hiding all😕😕😕

now i am waiting for next update...please jaldhi karna😃

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ritu this is awesome
the story is really intriguing
it is beautiully penned I can imagine everything
the part where nisha starts singing and kabir remembers their moments was the best part of the update i could actually feel a kind of pain
she was still the same and beautiful but there was something more and something less. Less was her glow and happiness, the shine of her eyes, the brightsmile of her face and more was the pain in her voice, the tears in her eyes, the lonliness written on his face
@bold loved these lines the most
ritu this is just amazing 👏 👏
plz continue soonish

Originally posted by: Niya_789

Just trying luck that time 😆

Originally posted by: crazyvaishu

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Very nice update ritika!

Originally posted by: .vishrutha.

Very nice update ritika!

A very interesting one.

The mystery around Kabir's past was very well shown. 👍🏼

At first i thought Kabir really had a memory loss and his family had a hand in it! (i don't know why I felt this though 😆)

But, Kabir's monologue after he spoke with Viraj cleared my doubt to some extent.

Kabir's bonding with the family was portrayed well! That is how he did not believe in anyone anymore and was close only to Vira.

Liked how you brought in those unclear memories of Kabir when Vira was explaining about the case she just saw! 👍🏼

The family's confusion over Kabir's past life and present state was again well portrayed!

The next scene of Kabir remembering the moments he spent with Nisha, what she meant to him and how much he missed her along with that song as a background was wonderfully written! 👏

His observation of Nisha's pain and longing for him, his belief on her that she would not assume him to be dead though everyone els might was very nice!

Waiting to know the mystery behind his sudden dissapearence from Nisha's life and the murder he is investigating.

Please continue soon and thanks for pm 😊