NIBIR SS Kismat Ka Lekh ch 3 pg 14 (7/5)

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hi all
this thing just came in my mind and couldn't restrain from posting so here you go another torture of mine
exams mujhe torture kar raha hai and mein tumhe😆

THANKS NIYU FOR THE TITLE🤗

NIBIR SS- Kismat Ka Lekh

Laxshmi rushed upstairs and called Nisha

"Nisha quick we will get late otherwise"

"coming mom"

Nisha took a photo frame placed near the bedside table and placed it in her bag, it belonged to the person most close to her heart no to the person who was her heart.

Lashmi, ramesh and Nisha got into the car and the driver started the car.

Ramesh was in the passenger seat while Nisha and lashmi in the back seat.

As they began the journey Nisha asked

"mom has kriti left"

"yes she left n the morning saying she needs to look the best today and she needs time"

"hmmm"

The car stopped at a signal a magazine seller rapped the window asking them to buy one. Nisha lowered the window and took one magazine, she would have needed it for her 2 hr journey to kriti's engagement venue.

Nisha scrolled through the magazine when her eye caught something which prevented her from turning further pages. She brought the magazine close to her to resd the entire article.

The article stated in bold letters

WILL KRITI FACE THE SAME FATE AS HER SISTER NISHA

The gangwal sisters Nisha and Kriti are toady recognized all over the country for their talent and hard work. Nisha gangwal the singing sensation , the nightingale of india , people know her for her sweet and melodious voice the emotions she touched with her songs. Kriti gangwal, younger sister of Nisha know as the rsing star of fashion industry, known for her unique and crisp designs.

Today is kriti's enagaement with her long time boyfriend Sourav jain. We wonder will she fae the same fate as Nisha.

Nisha gangwal definitely has been immensely fortunate in her career but not in her love life. she got engaged to her love ACP Kabir kumar , special task force 6 months ago but after 2 months Kabir was declared missing by his department. All their searches didn't have any result and he is still missing. Many even say he is killed to death by the person who was responsible for the cold blooded murder to actress Sanya Aggarwal and business man Tarun Gupta. Everyknows that STF was about to crack the mystery but the unfortunate happened and their officer got missing. We wonder if kriti too has the same fate as even Saurav belongs to the same department.

A tear escaped from nisha's eyes and then the trail followed.

"what happen Nisha are you alright?" asked a concerned lashmi

"yes mom"

Lashmi took the magazine from her hand and se it

"oh so this is the reason. Nisha don't you think it's high time four months child, if he had to come he would have came i suggest you forget him and move on and you might not know but boys will agree at an instant to marry you"

"yes Nisha yester day only Mr sehegal's son's alliance came for you. Ritesh is smart and not to forget this alliance will br very good for our business." Said ramesh

"so what say Nisha shall we" asked lashmi

"shall we right now only focus on kriti" answered Nisha angrily "and as of me Kabir is the only person i ,ove i cannot even think of anyone else marriage not a question"

"but Nisha he is missing for 4 mnths we don't even know whether he is dead or alive"reasoned lashmi

"mom if i am if i am sitting right here living, breathing, alive then he has to be alive coz he is my heart and no one can be alive without their heart"answered Nisha.

"but..." lashmi begin but my cut off by Nisha

"mom plz enough"

"ok at least smile it's your sister's engagement after all" said lashmi

"don't wrry i know how to put up a fake smile i have been doing it for past 4 months"

Lashmi didn't say anything anymore.

The rest of the journey was silent

Once they reached the venue Nisha wore big goggles so no one sees her swollen eyes. After greeting and meeting everyone from sourav's family, she rushed to her room and closed the door and started crying and slowly sliding by the door she sat on the floor hugging her knees weeping uncontrollably saying these words

"plz come back Kabir plz come back i need you plz i need you"


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mansi_as18 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res

Unres...

Yay 1st comment are are khush hone ki hi baat h it happens one in a blue moon when i comment first... 🤣

Now coming to the story... its really a good start and i know it will be an awesome journey... i liked the concept and about the title i ccantsuggest as i dont know the actual idea of ur story... only u can give an appropriate title 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb story
awsome start dear
ineresting concept ... cont soon

thnks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mansi_as18

Res

Unres...

Yay 1st comment are are khush hone ki hi baat h it happens one in a blue moon when i comment first... 🤣

Now coming to the story... its really a good start and i know it will be an awesome journey... i liked the concept and about the title i ccantsuggest as i dont know the actual idea of ur story... only u can give an appropriate title 😳


thanks mansi
btw mera kafi updates pe tera first comment hai😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: anu012

Superb story
awsome start dear
ineresting concept ... cont soon

thnks for pm

thanks anu glad u like the concept
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome concept
Nishu😭
Kabira aa jayega na wapis?
Nice start
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aha121

Awesome concept
Nishu😭
Kabira aa jayega na wapis?
Nice start
Update soon


thanks sana
kabir haan aajayega
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb start ritika 👏
Really looking forward to it
Nisha 😭
Ramesh and laxmi 😡
Saki ki jodi 😆 dosa tumko maaf na karega 🤣
Please update soon

P.s- A one man army bet in love or love for life you can give this name
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sujoyricky

Superb start ritika 👏
Really looking forward to it
Nisha 😭
Ramesh and laxmi 😡
Saki ki jodi 😆 dosa tumko maaf na karega 🤣
Please update soon

P.s- A one man army bet in love or love for life you can give this name


thanks sujoy
mujhe saki zyada pasnd hai so meri har story mein whi honge and jodi bhi unki hi hogi 😉

thanks for title suggestion 😊
i will consider them
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mishrialways



thanks mansi
btw mera kafi updates pe tera first comment hai😆

eesekab hua 😕 lagta h i was sleep stalking 🤣

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