Nibir ts - **CINDERELLA** epilogoue on page 15 [completed] - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

kabse realised h bus remind karate rehte h k's mjhe 😆


tu bhool gayi ki hum pagal hai toh ghor anarth ho jaayega naa😲
anyways, unresed on page 1😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Hayee Prince n princess wow yaar...😳👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
Awesome start
Loved the dance steps
kabir too stressed for his d ream
I don't know why I felt ki the Cinderella is ghost
me and my pagal dimaag
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Loved it mansi 😳
Let's see what happens 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Amazing update mansi ... 👍🏼
beautifully written ... loved it ❤️
cont soon

thnks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: ...Shibu...

Awesome😳
Kabira aur uski cindrella
Continue soon😉

thank u shibu beti
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: Aha121

Princess is Nisha na!
😊
Awesome blowsome 👍🏼

thanks sana
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: Amina...

<font color="#009900" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="3">WOW !!! Another Mindblowing Story Mansi ...!!!
The Concept Is BEAUTIFUL ...I Am Feeling Like I Am In A Dreamland Right Now ...!!!
And The Way You Have Written It , Its Amazing
Just Loved It So So So Sooo Much❤️❤️❤️
Please Continue Soon😊😃😊
Thanks For The PM😳
</font>

thanks ami 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: sujoyricky

Awesome mansi 👏
Really it is amazing 👏
Kabir monologue was awesome
Kirti 🤣
Princess 😳
Update soon but after destined together please 😃

thanks sujoy... how many times i have to tell u ki mai updte apni marzi se hi deti hu
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: .vishrutha.

Another wonderful story from you!

How do you think of such brilliant concepts mansi?
Coming to the update, a lovely start!
A frustrated and tensed Kabir yelling at the dancers for perfection, and his monologue that followed was too good!
His will power to win the investors funds was portrayed really well.
Also liked how you showed Kirti to be sly but not an arrogant girl with attitude and how she was hardworking.
A suspense element in the form of watchman's words?😉
Your description of the dance was amazing!!
Loved the way you introduced the mystery girl and Kabir's description of her beauty and dance steps was absolutely wonderful!
What I loved the most was their convo in between the dance, the way she said 'she's his better half', kept calling him prince and exited asking him to find her!so beautifully written!❤️
Kirti tied to a chair in a storeroom and Kabir chuckling at her state was funny😆
A perfect closure with a determined Kabir wanting to make the unknown princess as his' forever. Overall an amazing update it was!👍🏼
Please Continue soon and thanks for pm😊

thank u vishru 🤗 i have an over working khali dimag... who gives me these type of horrendeous ideas every now and then... 😆

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