Nibir ts - **CINDERELLA** epilogoue on page 15 [completed] - Page 3

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

kabse realised h bus remind karate rehte h k's mjhe 😆

Originally posted by: ...Shibu...

Awesome😳
Kabira aur uski cindrella
Continue soon😉

Originally posted by: Aha121

Princess is Nisha na!
😊
Awesome blowsome 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Amina...

<font color="#009900" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="3">WOW !!! Another Mindblowing Story Mansi ...!!!
The Concept Is BEAUTIFUL ...I Am Feeling Like I Am In A Dreamland Right Now ...!!!
And The Way You Have Written It , Its Amazing
Just Loved It So So So Sooo Much❤️❤️❤️
Please Continue Soon😊😃😊
Thanks For The PM😳</font>

Originally posted by: sujoyricky

Awesome mansi 👏
Really it is amazing 👏
Kabir monologue was awesome
Kirti 🤣
Princess 😳
Update soon but after destined together please 😃

Originally posted by: .vishrutha.

Another wonderful story from you!

How do you think of such brilliant concepts mansi?

Coming to the update, a lovely start!

A frustrated and tensed Kabir yelling at the dancers for perfection, and his monologue that followed was too good!

His will power to win the investors funds was portrayed really well.

Also liked how you showed Kirti to be sly but not an arrogant girl with attitude and how she was hardworking.

A suspense element in the form of watchman's words?😉

Your description of the dance was amazing!!

Loved the way you introduced the mystery girl and Kabir's description of her beauty and dance steps was absolutely wonderful!

What I loved the most was their convo in between the dance, the way she said 'she's his better half', kept calling him prince and exited asking him to find her!so beautifully written!❤️

Kirti tied to a chair in a storeroom and Kabir chuckling at her state was funny😆

A perfect closure with a determined Kabir wanting to make the unknown princess as his' forever. Overall an amazing update it was!👍🏼

Please Continue soon and thanks for pm😊