NIBIR SS - A FAKE VALENTINE Chap 3 - pg 15[14/3/16](completed) - Page 10

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Posted: 9 years ago
#91
Ohh..to nisha j ho ri h..
Cute update
Plz update soon..ll
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Posted: 9 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: Soundharya_01

Nisha J ...!!

Cho sweet update ..
Update soon...


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Posted: 9 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: shrutigaur37

awesome..
nisha j of kiara...
poor kabir ab nisha ke anger ko jhelna padega 🤣


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Posted: 9 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: mishri0209

Ohh..to nisha j ho ri h..

Cute update
Plz update soon..ll


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Posted: 9 years ago
#95
Awesome update
Aw Nisha is jealous
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mika17

Awesome update

Aw Nisha is jealous


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 3

kabir was totally confused by nisha's behaviour

he tried calling her several times but she didn't pick

there nisha was jealous and angry

nisha(monologue)- samjta kya hai khud ko..duffer kahika...mai uski girlfriend ho bhale hi we are pretending but then too yaar...how can he check out kaira that too in front of me..but why am i getting affected..argh...kahi mai...no ways nisha...mai baat nahi karungi usse

kabir was getting tensed

kabir(monologue)- isse kya hua...na mere messages ka reply kar rahi hai na phone utha rahi hai..pagal hai...essa kya kiya maine...lekin tu kyu itna effect ho raha hai...wo teri real girlfriend todhi hai...par kya mai usse pyaar karta ho...par..

they were unable to understand their feelings

and Ritesh and Kaira were getting jealous

it was valentine's day morning

in college

kabir was in boys locker room

taking out his books

when nisha came

nisha - hi

kabir's head was still inside locker searching for books

kabir - hi..waise..

he stopped when he looked at nisha

who was looking breath taking beautiful

all the boys present were just looking at her

making kabir possessive and jealous

kabir - wow

nisha - kya tu kya bol raha tha

kabir first looked at his surroundings and then at nisha

kabir - chal pehle tujhe girls locker room tak chod ke aata ho

nisha -OMG Mr.Kabir Kumar mujhe chodne aayega wow

she taunted him sarcastically

nisha- pehle toh kabhi nahi aaya

she asked as they went out

kabir put his arm around her waist

pulled her close

and said- pehle itni beautiful bhi toh nahi lagi

nisha blushed

she was about to say something when

ritesh came

he was angry

R- nisha mujhe tum se baat karni hai

kabir was afraid that ritesh would ask her again to be his girlfriend

he mentally cursed nisha for looking beautiful

nisha - bolo

ritesh - akele mai

nisha -..

kabir cut her and

k - jo bolna hai yahi bolo

r - kyu koi reason

k - mai iska boyfriend ho

ritesh started laughing

nisha felt angry at him

nisha - tumhe jo bolna hai yahi bolo

ritesh - iss bandar ko chod do tum...

before he could say further

nisha spoke

n- wo toh kabka chod chuki ho

kabir was taken back

as generally nisha reffered him as a monkey

then did she still love ritesh

ritesh was going close to nisha

nisha stopped him

and clung to kabir's arm

nisha(to kabir)- chale

kabir just nodded

he thought he would ask her later

ritesh came from back

ritesh - agar chod diya toh mere sath chalo

kabir - teri girlfriend..

kabir questioned him sarcastically

ritesh - oh usse toh chod diya

he replied casually

nisha realised something

but thought to tell later

nisha - ritesh you are so sweet but not that much

ritesh - matlab

nisha - maine clearly kaha ke maine bandar ko already cho diye hai

ritesh - ha toh ye

he gestured towards kabir

nisha laughed a bit

making both the boys confused

nisha - kabir kaise bandar hua kya tum bhi...ye baat alag hai ke mai isse bolati hu that doesn't mean ki ye bandar hai..aur sabke liye toh bikul nahi sirf mai isse bulati ho...aur raha sawal chodne ka ..toh mai toh jo real wala bandar (gesturing towards ritesh) hai usse chod chuki hu..now if you will please excuse us

nisha pulled kabir aside

kabir was still in shock

nisha - kya

kabir - wo kya tha

nisha - tujhe chahiye ke mai tujhe chod du

kabir - ha obviously wo hi toh deal..

nisha - deal my foot kabir can't you see

kabir - what

nisha- do you still love kaira

kabir - obviously not usne mujhe choda ritesh ke liye ab usse choda kissi aur ke liye do i look mad

nisha- u look mad but you are an idiot

kabir - and why so

nisha - you are an idiot still i love you

kabir - ha

kabir said yes but realised what nisha said

and that she was in tears

kabir - hey stop crying first

he said while wiping her tears

nisha -mera jawab

kabir chuckled

making nisha frown

kabir cupped her face

kabir - pehle bata realise kab hua

nisha - 5 minute pehle

kabir - kya ...tu pagal hai

he said laughing at her innocence

nisha - actually kal jab tu kaira ko dekh raha tha na toh i felt jealous ki tu ese sirf mujhe dekh sakta hai kissi aur ko nahi aur specially kaira

nisha stopped when she saw him smiling

nisha - apne dath kyu dikha raha hai

kabir- first of all aaj bohut pretty lag rahi hai tu...roz lagti hai aaj todhi jyada...dusra tu rote hue bikul achi nahi lagti ..tesra...i love you too

nisha was shocked

but recovered quickly

she hugged him tightly

nisha - ab tu mere permanent boyfriend na

kabir - nahi

nisha broke the hug and asked

nisha - huh

kabir - mere matlab ki shaadi karegi na mujhse se

nisha - toh phir theek hai

kabir - i love you

nisha - i love you too


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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
Very nice update... 👍🏼
Loved it... But jaldi end kar diya 😒
Do write epilogue 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: Anmol333

Very nice update...👍🏼

Loved it... But jaldi end kar diya😒
Do write epilogue😊


Tysm
Maybe after exams I will write 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome ending sana 👏
Yeh toh ss se ts ban gaya 😆
I want epilogue please

I haven't got any pm

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