Nibir FF ~ Ajnabee (Part 3 - Page 15) - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
Very interesting start Piya
Welcome to the forum
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
welcome to the forums piya 😊
I m vaishu hope u enjoy here
about the update
interesting start 👏
kabir nisha ko dolly samaj kar le gaya 😲
well written 👍🏼
can u plz pm me next time 😳

P.S. I won't b able to comment on every update as m a bit busy with my boards preparation isliye advance ma sorry bt I vl read every part vl try to like it at least
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Very good start
Seems to be interesting
Will bw waiting
Jaldi continue karna
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Awesome concept of ur story
Can't wait for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Hii sweetie I m shanz real name sachi hai aur I loved the prologue
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Hello Piya... Welcome to the forum... A very interesting prologue..
Something new and fresh... Well I would love to receive PMs whenever you update 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Thanks for this overwhelming response guys
it means a lot
main itna accha nhi likhti phir bhi sabne itna appreciate kiya
I am so touched you all are very nice
Love you all
Part 1
Next day
ek andhere se kamre main
nisha apni aankhen kholti hai par usey andhera dikhta hai woh madad ke liye chillane lagti hai
Nisha - maa papa dolly di sukku kahaan ho aap sab (tabhi koi uspar zor se chillata hai)
kya hai tumhara ghar hai kya jo chilla rhi ho
nisha dekhti hai ki ek insaan uske saamne khada hai aur uske haath mein knife hai .wo darr jaati hai
Nisha - tum kon ho main yahaan kaisey main toh ghar par thi shaadi chal rhi thi phir phir kuch yaad nhi
Kabi - hamara naam kabir hai kabir sinha kya hai
Nisha - kabir sinha
Kabir - haan ji aur hum tumhe yahaan laaye hain kidnap kar ke
itna sunkar nisha dar jaati hai aur chillane lagti hai par kabir bhaag kar uske pass ata hai aur woh knife uski gardan par rakhta hai
Kabir - chup bilhul chup agar jaada awaaj nikali na toh kasam ganga maiyaa ki yeh jo chaaku hai na abhi tumhari gardan ke aar paar ho jayega aur tum yahan 2 minute mein tadapkar gangaa maiyaa ki god mein pohch jaogi
nisha dar kar chillana band kar deti hai aur puchti hai
Nisha - dekho main toh tumhe jaanti bhi nhi aur agar tumhe paisey chahiye toh main tumhe dungi meri family bohot rich hai jitna chahiye tumhe 10 laksh 20 lakh 50 lakh ya ussey jada bhi mil jaayenge par let me go plzz
itna sunkar kabir ko gussa a jaata hai aur woh uski gardan pakad leta hai
Kabir - paisa haan pta hai bohot hai tere baap ke pass par tujhe kya lagta hai paisa sabkuch hai
nisha rone lagti hai yeh dekhkar kabir ko bura lagta hai aur woh usey chod deta hai aur kehta hai
Kabir - dekho hum tumhare jaisey jaanwar nhi hain toh humein woh banne par majboor mat karo abhi chup baitho aur yeh khana kha lo
kabir wahaan se chala jaata hai par nisha ko kuch samajh nhi ata aur wo rone lagti hai aadhe gante baad baahar ke room mein koi ata hai
Kabir - adeel tum kahaan the aur charan kahaan hai
Adeel - bhaiya jaane do na ab tumhare maa papa ko samjhaane mein itna waqt lag gya ki tum busy ho aur charan newspapaer lene gya hai pta toh chale ki kitni bejatti hui un logo ki waisey woh Viren Gangwal ki ladki mili
Kabir - haan andar hai
Adeel - jara dekhein toh
Kabir - dari hui hain
dono andar jaate hain nisha ro kar so gyi hoti hai usne khana bhi nhi khaya hota hai
Kabir - bohot nautanki hai yeh rajkumari ki haumein paisey ka laalach de rhi thi.hamara dimaag kharaab ho rha hai hum bta rahe hain tumhe
Adeel uske pass jata hai
Adeel - waisey bhaiya iske baap ne viraaj bhaiya ke saath bohot bura kiya aur yeh
tabhi wo chaunkta hai
Adeel - yeh wo viren ki ladki nhi hai
Kabir - kya bakwass kar raha hai wohi toh hai dolly
Adeel - nhi bhaiya aapne gusse meon photo nhi dekha par hum dekhe hain yeh koi aur hai
Kabir - dekho aisa faaltu ka majaak mat karo yeh hi toh (tabhi usey kuch yaad ata hai) nhi nhi nhi humne dhyaan kyun nhi diya
Adeel - kya hua bhaiya
Kabir - arey hosh mein ane ke baad jab ye chillayi toh isne dolly di kaha ab agar yeh dolly hoti toh apna naam thode hi na leti iska chillana sunkar hamara dimaag bhi kaam karna band kar diya
tabhi charan ata hai
Charan - bhaiya gajab h gya woh woh
Adeel - kya hua
Kabir newspaper leta hai aur padhta hai
Adeel - bhaiya hua kya
Kabir - yeh viren ki nhi uske chotey bhai ki beti hai Nisha Gangwal aur dolly aur nisha dono gaayab hain sabko lagta hai ki dono ka kidnap hua hai
Charan - bhaiya par dolly kahaan hai
Kabir - abey humko kya pta
Adeel - bhaiya ab kya karenge isko waapas kaisey bhejenge
Kabir - wapas kyun bhejna . hai toh unke parivaar ki hi beti na dolly ho ya nisha humein toh issey shaadi karni hai aur iske tauji se apne bhaiya ka case ladwana hai bas
Charan - par bhaiyaa woh dolly se shaadi ke liye toh hamare pass plan tha ki hum uske aur uske BF ki photo newspaper mein publish karwa denge toh woh darr ke shadi ke liye haan kar det isey kya bolenge
Kabir - humein pta hai
Adeel - par kya bhaiya
2 ghante baad , nisha ko hosh ata hai aur woh teeno ko dekhti hai
Nisha - dekho mere pass mat ana
Adeel - bhabhi aapne khana kyun nhi khaya
Nisha - woh mere man nhi .ek second bhabhi abey oye bhabhi hogi tere bhaiya ki biwi
Charan - bhabhi woh wohi bola
Nisha - matlab
Adeel - bhabhi hum aapko vistaar se batate hain dekhiye yeh jo hain
Kabir ko gussa a jaata hai
Kabir - tum dono usey tuition dena band karogey koi kuch nho bolega
Charan - toh bhaiya ji kuch ki jagah kya bole
Adeel - haan yeh badi pareshaani ho jayegi bhaiya
Nisha - stupid fools . I don't believe such kind of people still exists
Charan - bhabhi ji aapne humein phool ka
Adeel - sach mein bhabhi
Nisha - yeah matlab haan chameli ka phool stupid fools they dont even understand english
Kabir - tum dono chup karoge
Nisha - hey even you are a fool
Kabir - and you are oversmart just because they ain't understanding toh jo tumhare man mein ayega bolegi . mind your tounge princess
Nisha - you know
Kabir - yep princess i am not a fool but you are insensitive . no doubt you are a gangwal
Nisha - hey don't you dare . you don't have any right to insult my family and my upbringing
Kabir - and you think you have a right to insult them just beacause they ain't understanding
Nisha - listen you
Kabir - come on princess cut the crap i m not interested in your stupid and insensitive talks . shall we talk something else
Nisha dar jaati hai
Kabir - shall we (gusse se dekhta hai)
Nisha - hmm . mujhe kyun laaye yahaan and wait who the hell is bhabhi why these morons
Kabir usey gusse se dekhta hai
Nisha - matlab why these decent people called me bhabhi
Kabir - we are getting married
Nisha - ohh congratulations. wait we.hey you and who
Kabir - you and me princess
Nisha - dekho bakwass band karo yeh koi majaak nhi hai aur main tumhe jaanti bhi nhi so stop kidding
Kabir - really.look at my face princess
nisha usey dekhti hai
Nisha - what
Kabir - you still thinks that am kidding
Nisha - (rone lagti hai)mainey tumhara kya bigaada hai aur main tumse shaadi nhi karne waali tum mujhe maar bhi do tab bhi nhi
Kabir - chalo phir maar dete hain par tumhe nhi tumhari dolly di ko
Nisha - what do you mean
Kabir - ohh what did I mean haan . well i meant what I said lemme tell you again I said that we are getting married aur agar tumne yeh baat nhi maani toh tumhari dolly di bhagwan ke pass jayengi
Nisha - di kahaan hai
Kabir - adeel isey newspaper dikha
adeel usey news paper dikhata hai nisha padhti hai ki gangwals ki do beti kidnap hui hain
Nish - you bloddy moron. how could you
Kabir - now stop abusing me aur ek decision lo asap warna kahin tumhari pyaari di
Charan - par bhaiya
Kabir - chalo yahaan se and yeah you have 1 hour so think fast
woh teeno wahaan se chale jaate hain and nisha rone lagti hai
(here is the first part so tell me kaisa hai and friends my english is not that good still i have tried my level best so please ignore my grammatical mistakes)
Edited by Piyabaawri - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Gajab...maza aagai padhne main... Ganga kinare ka chora aaye hayee 😉
Humko toh bada maza aaya padhne main.. Aage ka likho😉
Vaise maana padega Kabir ko... Dimag wala banda hai😆
Edited by Niya_789 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Awesome update piya 👏
Kabir ke mooh se kasam ganga maiyaa ki 🤣
Really loved it
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Nice update!
Kabir in revenge mode for a change 👍🏼
Waiting to see Gangwals' reaction to Nisha and Dolly's absence.
Continue soon 😊

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