Nibir FF ~ Ajnabee (Part 3

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Piyali Sharma

@Piyabaawri

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

Hello dosto

mera naam Piyali hai aap sab mujhe pia keh sakte hain

maine ek story likhi hai I hope aap sabko pasand aye

Ajnabee

(prologue)

(Gangwal house)

Gangwal house mein shaadi ho rhi hai unki badi beti dolly ki sab bohot khush hain

dolly ke room mein sab cousins aapas mein baat kar rahe hain

Kirti - dolly di aap bohot sundar lag rhi hain

Jwalu - haan dolly di you are looking very pretty

Sukku - aaj toh sumit jeeju ghahal hi ho jayngey (dolly thodi pareshaan hai)

Nisha ati hai

Nisha - sab plz dolly di ko pareshaan karna band karo aur jao yahaan se

sab chale jaate hain

Nisha - di aap thik hain

Dolly - haan nishu I am fine (mann mein -yeh nishu ko yahaan se kaise bheju)

dolly ke dimaag mein ek idea ata hai

Dolly - nishu tu ek second mera yeh lehenga try karegi

Nishu - di yeh toh kuch kuch aapke lehenge jaisa hai

Dolly - haan tu try toh kar

Nishu - thik hai di (woh change karne washroom mein jaati hai)

Dolly kisi ko phone karti hai

Dolly -haan saurav tum mujhe peechey waale gate par milo main a rhi hoon

dolly apna samaan lekar wahaan se bhaag jaati hai

nisha bahar ati hai

Nishu - dolly di main kaisi . yeh kahan gyi dolly di dolly di

tabhi useh peechey se koi sar par maarta hai aur wo beshosh ho jaati hai

woh insan usey dekhta hai aur kehta hai dolly gangwal tere baap ne mere bhaiya ko jail bhijwaya tha ab mein tujhe nhi chodunga apni jhoothi shaan ke liye usne mere nirdosh bhaiya ko jail pohchaya tere baap vakil hai toh usne galat faayda uthaya par mera naam bhi kabir sinha hai aur kabir cheezein nhi bhoolta

bada shauk hai na tere baap ko dusron ki zindagi ka faisla lene ka ab dekhta hoon kya karega woh jab uski beti apne mandap se gayab hokar banegi kabir sinha ki dulhan

Toh friends yeh prologue tha ab batao aake likhun

aur english itni acchi nhi hai toh hindi mein hi likha hai

first time hai maaf karna galti ho toh

INDEX

Prologue - Page 1

Part 1 - Page 6

Part 2 - Page 10

Part 3 - Page 14

Edited by Piyabaawri - 9 years ago

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Niyati Tiwari

@Niyati_T

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

Seems like we have a new member here.., welcome to the family Piya.. I am guessing thats your name! I am Niya, I assume you know me as I saw your comment on my thread😳

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Niyati Tiwari

@Niyati_T

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

Revenge story.. Dolly ko iss bare main pata tha kya? 😕

Kher chodo story continue karo.. prologue is interesting, I'll buddy you PM bhej dena for updates😳

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sujay kumar

@Sujayricky

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

Awesome prologue piya 👏
Continue karo

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Piyali Sharma

@Piyabaawri

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Niya_789
Revenge story.. Dolly ko iss bare main pata tha kya? 😕
Kher chodo story continue karo.. prologue is interesting, I'll buddy you PM bhej dena for updates😳

nhi niya ji dolly ko nhi pta tha

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Niyati Tiwari

@Niyati_T

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Piyabaawri

nhi niya ji dolly ko nhi pta tha

Dekho Ji mat bolo aunty wali feeling aati hai, everyone here calls me Mamma you also call me that its better than Niya Ji😆

Chalo phir story main air maza aayega 😳

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Piya

@Piya1199

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

Hello piya...am also piya😆

Awesome start...

Do continue soon

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Sameeha

@Sameeha151

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

Hey pia welcum to d forum..i m sameeha..

Prologue was awesome kya twist hai.. kabir is villian here?

Bechari nisha phas gyi dolly ke chakar mei lekin kidnapper kabir hai to ok

Pia all the best for ur first ff n update first part soon..waise kabir nisha se shaadi kaise karega?wo to behosh hogai na..okk i ll wait for nxt part..

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mansi

@mansi_as18

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

Are waah ek ur k khaandan ka member... chalo welvome kar dete h... to pia welcome here... and yes ur story seems interesting do continue... ab mea naam to mere username m h hi.. 😳

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Niyati Tiwari

@Niyati_T

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#10

Originally posted by: mansi_as18
Are waah ek ur k khaandan ka member... chalo welvome kar dete h... to pia welcome here... and yes ur story seems interesting do continue... ab mea naam to mere username m h hi.. 😳

Yes😆

And most probably my new Baccha😆😳

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