nibir ff- playfull kiss- part 3 -updated - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aha121

Interesting
Please continue
Thx for pm



thanks and welcome...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sam_premc

kabir as baek seung jo❤️☺️

M in the place of kim hyun joong...both are my favorite...my jaans!❤️☺️☺️
nisha as oh hani☺️🤣
saurav as baek eun jo🤣🤣
riteish as bong joon gu🤣🤣🤣
my favorite korean series!❤️thankoo for writing it!🤗
waiting for their kissey saga to continue🤣

P.S.humorous title " kiss ka karnama"🤣🤣🤣




yes...I am also excited for first kiss part... it is amazing... I hope jaldi se vaha pahuch pavu...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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chapter -1

At mumbai,sunflower high school.

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ek ladki school ke garden main bench par bethi hai. and you can guess who is she!

she is nisha.


And suddenly hava zor se behne lagti hai. patte hava main bavandar ki tarah udne lagte hai. Nisha ka scaff bhi udta hai aur samne se hero aata hai nisha k karib.


Nisha ka bahot zoro se dhadakne lagta hai... dhak... dhak... dhak... dhak... dhak... dhak...


hero is none other than kabir... (Mr. K).

Kabir (nisha k pass jakar)-ye tumhara scaff???

Nisha (blushing) -thanks...

Kabir (with sweet voice) -no need to say thanks. Thanks to anjano ko bolte hai.. aur hum... to...


Nisha (cutting his statement) -hum kya???

(monologue) -kabir mujhe aisa kyu lagta hai tum mujhe abhi propose karoge.?? I can't wait for that.

kabir (with chocolaty mood) -tum sahi soch rahi ho. hum achchhe dost nahi ban sakte bcz humara rishta usse kahi badhkar hai.. my sweet heart..my life...

[Kabir write down on one leaf, Nisha loves kabir and kabir loves her too much. ]

[and kabir came more nearer to her,and about to kiss. and nisha was having the same position ]

and suddenly nisha fall down on loanand open her eyes...and took a leaf from loan.

Nisha-oychh..

(monologue) -kass yeh sapna na hota.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update 👏
Nisha ka sapna 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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very well portrayed!
awesome update!
do continue soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice prologue
sounds interesting
waise pm mein aisa kyun kaha ki yeh tumhari last story hai😕
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nisha kabir ke sapne dekh rhi hai
Cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome concept spruha
read in one go
chapter 1 was lovely
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sujoyricky

Awesome update 👏
Nisha ka sapna 🤣



thanks... you will get many moments like this..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sam_premc

very well portrayed!

awesome update!
do continue soon!



thanks... we both like playfull kiss... I will try to give justice this story...

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