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Prologue

Two friends
Nisha and Kabir
Kabir comes to Nisha for help in studies
He gives her a promise to fulfill any one wish of hers
Nisha takes him
On a weekend trip
Only on a deal
To fool her siblings
Share a same room
Will they fall for each other ..?

Character sketch

Kabir...the chocolate boy of college..barely knows Nisha
Nisha the Tom boy...big sister of Kirti
Kirti her sister
Dolly ...Kirti's and Nisha's cousin
Sukketu...Dolly's small brother and Kirti and Nisha's cousin brother
Rupan ...nisha and kirti's mother




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PART 1

kirti, dolly and sukku were thinking how to convience Rupan

so they can go to weekend picnic

dolly- i don't thinks ki chachi ha bolengi

kirti - di

sukku - di kabhi toh positive baat karo

dolly - dekho chachi aa gai

Kirti- ma

rupan - ha bolo

dolly - chachi yaha betho na


rupan found something fishy

rupan - kya chahiye

dolly - permission

rupan - kaisi

the three told her about their plan


Rupan - fine...lekin agar nishu tum logo ke sath aai toh
Kirti - maa

Rupan - toh mat jao

saying so she left

dolly - nisha nahi manegi

Sukku - aur khas kar ki jab waha tum dono ke boyfriends ke sath

just then they heard a scooty coming

kirti - nishu aa gai

they all ran out

nisha removed her helmet

nisha - kya hua

Kirti - humare sath chalegi

nisha - kaha

dolly - weekend party par

Sukku - please

nisha - no ways

All the three made cute faces which she could not resist

nisha - ok fine

she said making an irrited face

dolly - thank you nishu

saying so she hugged her

nisha came inside the house

nisha - ma

rupan - kya hua kyun chila rahi ho

nisha - aap humesha mujhe phasa dete ho yaa

rupan - unn donoo ko akele thode bhej sakti hoo

nisha - par maa

rupan - tu bhi tere boyfriend ke sath ja

nisha - mera boyfirend

Rupan - koi hai...nisha ye sab kya hai

nisha- arre wa app un dono ko kuch nahi bolte aur mujhe bolte ho

rupan - koi hai kya

nisha was hell frustated

nisha - ha hai...aur mai usse trip pe bhi le jaongi

saying so she ran into her room


Next day in college

Kabir was running behind Nisha

Kabir- Nisha yaar please sirf ek write up hi chahiye

Nisha - no

Kabir thought for a while as she moved ahead

Kabir holded her legs

Nisha- Kabir mera pair chod

Kabir- nahi jab tak tu ha nahi bolti tab tak nahi

Nisha- Kabir uth sab dekh rahe hai

Kabir- Nisha please tu jo bolegi mai wo karunga

Nisha- ok fine

Kabir got up

Kabir- thank you

Nisha (monologue)- ye perfect rahega weekend trip ke liye

Kabir- bye

Nisha- bye

That afternoon

Kabir- kya ...mai aur tera boyfriend

Nisha- only acting

Kabir- please mujhpe itni sari ladkiya marti hai aur tu meri

Nisha- abey o duffer sirf acting do din ke liye warrna write up bhul ja

Kabir made a face but agreed

They went to the farmhouse

Where they met the gang
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Chapter 2

They met the gang there

Dolly - nishu ye kon hai

Kirti- di ye nishu di ka boyfriend hai kyu

She said teasingly

Nibir looked at each other awkwardly

Sukku - aao mai tum dono ko tumhara room dikhata hoo

Nisha - tumhara room matlab ye alag room mai rahega

Sukku - di wo actually ek hi room hai Baki do rooms hai ek dolly di aur kirti share kar rahe hai aur doosri room mai aur Kirti ka boyfriend

Nisha- Sukku ke bache ruk

Sukku ran from their before Nisha could catch

She looked at Kabir angrily

Nibir went to their room

Nisha- I can't believe ki I have to stay with you

Kabir- toh mujhe konsa yakin ho raha hai

Nisha- tu sofe pe soyega

Kabir- kyu

Nisha - hum sach mai date nahi kar rahe hai ki we shall sleep together

Kabir came close to her

Kabir- aur agar kar rahe hote toh

They were very close

Nisha was looking into his eyes

They had an eyelock

Kirti came to their room

Kirti quickly closed her eyes

Kirti - maine kuch nahi dekha

They came out of trance

They looked here and there except at each other

Nisha- Bol kya kaam hai

Kirti- a..umm ..wo dinner ready hai aajao

She left

But she came again

Kirti - agli baar na romance darwaza baadh karke karna

Saying so she ran

Nisha- kirti...

Both looked here and there

They felt good when Kirti said their Romance

Nisha was blushing

They had their dinner

Nisha and Kabir were stealing glances

But both were blushing

Dolly noticed it

And thought to tease them

Dolly- aree tum dono blushs kyu kar rahe ho..(surprised) nishu tu bhi...Kabir tune toh isse pura badal diya

Nisha- esa kuch nahi hai..aur mai blush nahi kar rahi hoon

All chatted for a while

And went to their rooms

Nisha and Kabir were thinking what to do

Nisha- tu sofe pe so

Kabir- tu so na mai kyu

Nisha- mai ladki hoo isliye mai bed pe

Kabir- tu ladki

He laughed

Nisha felt hurt

Nisha- tujhe pata nahi hai kuch toh bol mat

Kabir- acha kya nahi pata bol

Nisha was on the verge of crying

Nisha- tu bed pe so mai sofe pe so jaungi

Kabir was Confused

That night both slept

Nisha on sofa

And Kabir on bed

Kabir was continuously thinking about what would have happened that changed Nisha

There Nisha was confused whether to tell Kabir or not

It was midnight

kabir was still awake

Kabir's patience was over now

He wanted to know what was behind her becoming tomboy

Kabir went to Nisha

He sat on his knees

He saw her sleeping peacefully

Kabir (monologue)- ye dekho meri need uda ke khud chain se so rahi hai ...but bohot cute lag rahi hai

He giggled at his own thoughts

Her hair had covered her face due to wind

Blocking his view

Kabir slightly and softly tucked it behind her ear

So he could she her properly

He knew he was falling for her every passing second

He leaned in to kiss her cheek

He closed his eyes

Nisha felt something

And opened her eyes to see

What was it

She was shocked to see him

Kissing her cheek

She reacted nothing but was blushing

She immediately closed her eyes as soon as she saw Kabir opening his eyes

Kabir got up and went to his bed to sleep

He thought not to disturb her beauty sleep

And ask her tomorrow

Nisha turned to the other side

That means her back facing Kabir

She blushed hard

She didn't knew why

Why she allowed Kabir even to come near her

If it would have been someone else

He would be in hospital right now

Was she falling for him

She thought


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PART 3
next day

all were in the lawn

chit chatting

nisha was sitting alone

she was in deep thoughts

kabir was clicking random pictures of everyone

when he moved his camera to nisha

he saw her lost

he went and sat next to her

nisha was so lost she didn't even realise when he came

kabir was getting impatient now

he wanted to know the truth

kabir - so...

nisha came out of trance

nisha - huh

kabir - kya soch rahi hai

nisha - kuch nahi

kabir - acha..toh kaunsi baat hai jo tujhe itni sata rahi hai ki usne tujhe ladki se ladka bana diya

nisha was surprised that she didn't tell him about her past than how come he knew

nisha kept quiet

kabir - yaha batayegi ya...akele mai

nisha holded kabir's hand

and took him to their room

she closed the door

kabir's mind struck an idea

kabir came close to her

she made a weird face

kabir - irada kya hai madam

nisha blushed a bit

but was stern to show an angry face

kabir smiled sleepishly

nisha - wo actually mai aur dolly di ...

she told him about the pillani incident

she was almost crying

with tears in her eyes

as she reached the worst part

kabir too was crying

he could not see her like this

nisha realised that kabir too had tears

nisha - arre dekh maine tujhe bhi rula diya ...pagal ho mai

she tired to make the situation light

kabir chuckled a bit

nisha smiled seeng him like that

there was a eyelock between them

nisha broke it and

'umm...thx..'

kabir - kisliye

he asked her being confused

nisha - wo actually...mere dil ka bhoj halka karne ke liye

kabir - anytime...aur ha pechili baato ko bhul ja kehte hai bure kaam ka fal bhi issi janam mai milega ..so relax...aur agae esa kuch nahi hoga coz i am with you

she smiled

and they had an eyelock

kabir - chal ab jate hai hai warna sab samjenge ki hum dono romance kar rahe hai

saying so he went

nisha smiled


*after a few hours*

all were standing

nisha made an irritated face

nisha - i can't believe ki we are playing hide and seek

kirti - how blah nishu kaabhi kabhi chalta hai

it was dolly's dine

dolly- 1...2...3...10

she started counting closing her eyes

all went to hide

sukku hid behind the staircase

nisha hid in store room

kabir came there

not knowing that nisha is too there

kabir - tu yaha kya kar rahi hai

nisha- garba kar rahi hoo... karega

kabir was face-palmed

kabir - tu ja yaha se

nisha - mai yaha pehle aai tu ja

kabir - tu ja

they were fighting

when dolly found sukku

now she was coming with him

towards them

kabir saw it

and pulled nisha inside

kabir got hurt

and was about to scream

when nisha placed her hand on his mouth

kabir was seeing her

he was looking at her lovingly

nisha was looking out

she turned her face towards kabir

and saw him looking at her

both had an eyelock

kabir removed her hand

he traced his hand on her hand

making her blush and sacred at the same time

he caressed her cheek with his hand

he held her by her waist

and pulled her closer

nisha closed her eyes

they were about to kiss

when sukku and kirti entered

kirti - padkad liya...

sukku - o toh yaha romance chal raha hai

kirti - pehle bata dete hum yaha aate hi nahi

nisha and kabir blushed

kirti noticed nisha blushing

nisha never blushed

kirti - di you are blsuhing

she said being surprised

nisha signalled her to keep quiet

the day went by teasing nibir

*at night*

nisha and kabir entered their room

nisha knew she was in love with him

kabir also knew about his feelings very well

nisha - umm...kabir

kabir - hmm

nisha - yaha aa

kabir came to her

kabir - kya hua

nisha kissed him on his cheeks

making him blush and surprised

she ran to the sofa to sleep

she was blushing hard at her actions

kabir was standing there dumbstruck

'good night...aur sone se pehle lights band karna'

nisha shouted to bring him to reality

kabir hurriedly went to bed

both were blushing by their actions of morning and now








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PART 4
next morning they had to go home

sukku, dolly and kirti were to go in their car

kirti thought of teasing nibir

kirti - nishu chal na humare sath

nisha - umm..nahi meri scooty akeli reh jayegi varna

sukku - scooty ya kabir

nisha was angry but blushed

so did kabir

nisha - jao

after they went

nisha - chal tujhe drop karti hoo

kabir - nisha mai bike chalao

nisha smiled and handed him the keys

he got to excited and hugged her

nisha too hugged him

but after sometime

kabir realised their position

and broke the hug

there was some silence

kabir started the scooty

nisha sat behind him

the drove off

nisha was a bit uncomfortable

as she never allowed someone to ride her scooty

that too a boy

and she had to sit behind him

was a task for her

they reached a signal

kabir - mujhe koi allergy nahi hai

nisha didn't get what he meant

nisha - huh

kabir - i mean tu mujhe pakad ke baith sakti hai..its fine...

nisha laughed at his stupid sense of humor

she held him

she kept her hands on his shoulders

the ride was beautiful for both of them

soon they reached kabir's house

nisha wanted to confess him that she loved him the most

so was the same with kabir

kabir got off

kabir - umm...nisha

nisha - hmm

kabir - tu kissi se pyaar karti hai

nisha knew what he was to say

so thought to tease him a bit

nisha - ha

kabir had little hopes

kabir - kisse

nisha - ma se, dolly di se..

kabir was damn frustated

kabir - nisha ...nisha...

nisha stopped

kabir - mera matlab tha tera koi someone special

nisha - ha hai na

kabir - kon

nisha -mai kyu batao

kabir - tang mat kar

nisha - pehle tu bata

kabir- sawal pehle maine pucha

nisha - jawab pehle tu dega

kabir- kyu

nisha - ese hi

kabir - mai nahi dunga

nisha - theek hai toh mai bhi nahi dungi

saying so she started her scooty

kabir stopped her

'acha ok ok meri ma...bataata hoo'

he said a bit nervously

kabir - tera phone de

nisha - kyu

kabir - de na

nisha - mere phone mai uska number kaise hoga

kabir - lekin photo toh hai

kabir opened the gallery

nisha - kabir kya kar raha hai tu

kabir - ruk ja thoda

nisha was confused

kabir opened her photo

and showed it to her

nisha was surprised

kabir - kaisi hai...duniya ki sabse khoobsurat ladki

nisha - hmm...achi toh hai

nisha smiled widely

so did kabir

kabir - toh ab

nisha - ab kya

kabir - jawab toh de

nisha - pehle wo teen words to bol

kabir - ring nahi hai

nisha - uske badle ek promise de dena

kabir - ok done

kabir took her hands

kabir - Ms.Nisha Gangwal

nisha was too curious for the next part

kabir - i love you

nisha - i love you too

kabir hugged her

she too reciprocated

nisha - mera promise


kabir - bol

nisha - tu mujhe kabhi chodke nahi jayega

kabir- arre itna aasan nahi hai mujhse peecha chudana

nisha - chudwana bhi nahi hai

both smiled while still hugging

kabir - nisha tu tension mat le mai baki ladko jaisa nahi ho ki tera fayada uthake chod do...humesha sath rahonga

nisha- i trust you

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Interesting story sana 👏
Please update soonish can't wait
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Plz continue Sana... Waiting for it
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Congo shongo [:D/] sana for one more ss..nice story different concept..oh my god cant wait for next epi*too excited*
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do continue soon sana...awesome character sketch
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Originally posted by: mishrialways

Looks interesting

Cont soon




Originally posted by: sujoyricky

Interesting story sana 👏
Please update soonish can't wait
Thanks for pm



Originally posted by: Zamiahurain002

Plz continue Sana... Waiting for it



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