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Posted: 9 years ago
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wait typing part 1
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice Character sketch ...
Will love to read further ...
Waiting for the first part ...

And sorry for not replying to your pm , i just now saw your msg and i came here to check the thread ... and the answer to your question , Yeah you should make this one a fan fiction as this is an Awesome and A Different concept, will surely love to read this ff 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Amina...

Nice Character sketch ...
Will love to read further ...
Waiting for the first part ...

And sorry for not replying to your pm , i just now saw your msg and i came here to check the thread ... and the answer to your question , Yeah you should make this one a fan fiction as this is an Awesome and A Different concept, will surely love to read this ff 😃


thanks dear 😃
just in 5 minutes updating part1
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
CHAPTER-2
N-NISHA
K-KABIR

N-chalo kabir bait kar bat karte hai
nisha was about to fall again when again kabir hold her hand again and again stand her straight
K-ya its needed
they sit on sand giving back support to big stone
K-toh tera bf kon tha
N-ritesh aur teri gf ??
K-shruti ek minute tere bf ka poora nam ritesh gangwal hai ??
N-ha aur dont say that ki teri gf ka poora nam shruti mishra hai??
K-jo nam tune bola wahi meri gf ka poora nam hai satya ko juthlaya thodi na ja skta hai ??
N-iska matlab??
K-ha tu jo soch rahi hai wahi hai tere bf ne shruti ke liye tujhe chod diya aur meri gf ne mujhe
both started laughing madly about thinking this co- insidense suddenly kabir feel wait on his shoulder what he saw made him mesmerize
K-oye ye toh sleeping mode me chali gai ab mai kya kru mujhe toh iska ghar ka addres bhi nhi pta nhi toh mai ise drop kar deta ab kya kru
he tried to wake her up but no use she was not respnding suddenly he saw her i-card on sand he pick up her card and get her addres
K-hush iska addres toh mila chalo isko drop kr deta hoon yeh maharani uth toh rhi nhi hai
he slowly scoop her in his arms and take her to his car and adjusted her on backseat and he sit on driving seat adjusted car's miror by which he can whatch her
K-chalie maharani sahiba apko apke ghar drop kr de
and he droved his car to her sweet home destination while driving in every 30 second he watch her and smile
after such a sweet drive of 30 minutes they reached nisha's sweet home he opened backseat door and again scoop her softly in his arms he again smile as he saw her face again and her take to the eterance door of the house he rang the bell
laxmi shouted-kon hai
K-excuse me please open the door
laxmi open door smiling and when she saw nisha in this condition her smile faded
K-namste aunty can you tell me were is nisha's bedroom
laxmi being tensed - namste beta please come in *she said in tensed voice*
kabir entered in house
laxmi - stairs se left corner room
laxmi followed him kabir placed nisha on her bed and they left the room
laxmi-beta nisha ko kya hua hai *in tensed voice*
K-aunty relax wo sirf so rahi hai usne drink kiya hai mornig mai uko hedache hoga toh app uska dhyan rakhna
laxmi-yeh ladki bhi na waise beta isne drink kyu kiya because never before she drink
kabir(monolougue)-ab kya btau aunty ko ki unki belove daughter ne is liye drink kiya hai kyunki uska brekup hua hai nhi boldeta hu ki mujhe nhi pta
laxmi-kya hua beta tell me
K-aunty wo mujhe nhi pta acttualy nisha ne mujhe nhi btaya
laxmi -acha thike
K-aunty i think i should left as it is quite late for me
laxmi-ya you should leave waise thnk you so much beta nisha ko drop krne ke
K-your welcome aunty



HUSH LO KAR DIYA UPDATE AB JALDI SE LIKES AUR COMMENTS DO
AND HA NOT PROOF READED TOH GALTIYA MAAF HO 😆


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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
both chptr & cs r awsome 👍🏼
update nxt soon

thnks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: anu012

both chptr & cs r awsome 👍🏼
update nxt soon

thnks for pm


THANKS ANU 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47

THANKS DEAR 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
INDEX
CHAPTER-1 PAGE NO.-1
CHARACTER SKETCH PAGE NO.-6
CHAPTER-2 PAGE NO.-7
CHAPTER-3 PAGE NO.-11
CHAPTER-4a PAGE NO.-15
CHAPTER-4b PAGE NO.-18
CHAPTER-5 PAGE NO.-21
CHAPTER-6 PAGE NO.-25
CHAPTER-7 PAGE NO.-29
CHAPTER-8 PAGE NO.-35
Edited by TASYAM - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Awesome update 👏
Update soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
awesome update tasyam!
do continue soon!

thanxiee for the pm!

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