Nibir FF : **BreakUp Party**(Index on page 7)

hey guyzzz...Dis FF is written by TASYAM...one of d member of our k khandaan...It is christmas gift for us from her side...I m posting on behalf of her...uska laptop...uske sath chemical locha krra tha...dats y she asked me to post it...it was her verry first attempt of writing...so guyzzz plz boost her confidence wid yr likes n comments...😊

BREAKUP PARTY

PART 1

A boy in mid twenties was standing near sea was about to jump into sea when a girl was of same age hold his hand
girl-sucide karne ja rhe ho??..
boy-nhi fishes ke sath sea party karne ja rha hu jau
girl-chale jana lekin kya tmhara bhi girlfreind ke sath brekup hogya kya ??
boy-tumhe kya krna ??
boy(monolougue)-waise ise kaise pta??
girl-waise yhi soch rhe hona ki mujhe kaise pta maine toh sirf guess kiya tha kyunki ajj mera bhi mere boyfreind ke sath brekup ho gya *laughed in pain*
girl was about to fall in sea when he hold her hand tightly *small eyelock* boy help her to stand straighte
boy-oh miss tumhara bhi sucide karne ka plan hai kya ??
boy smells the smell of wine
boy-ek minute tumne drink kiya hai??
girl-yes, mai sucide nhi karungi per pehle maine socha ki hang garden ja kr kisi beautiful corner tree per hang ho jau per phir socha ki my family loves me then why should i sucide for such a silly, donkey, monkey, duffer, idiote boy isliye maine ajj pehli bar drink ki
boy-oh i see waise tumhari family hai??
girl- ha hai sabki hoti hai kyu tumhari nhi hai kya??
boy- nhi sabki nhi hoti meri nhi hai
girl- isliye tum sucide kar rhe ho
boy- pta nhi per ab mood nhi hai waise tumhara nam kya hai??
girl- mera nam nisha hai nisha sharma aur tmhara??
boy- mera nam kabir hai kabir sharma
girl- wow tum bhi sharma mai bhi sharma dono ne ek doosre ko dekha aur sarmaye
kabir giggled on her silly antic
kabir- waise mai soch rha hun mai bhi drink kar loon
nisha- nhi hum na ek brekup party rkhte hai usme jitne logo ka brekup hua hoga utne logo ko invite karenge fir milkar brekup party krenge
kabir- good idea aur background music hoga ajj maine brekup ki party rakhli hai
both laughed madly...

Waiting for yr feedback...

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Superb OS tasyam👍🏼
Different concept 😊

Talli nibir🤣
Fish k sath sea party krne aaya hu🤣

Kabir suicide krna cancel kr dia😉
Sharma sharma sharma gaye🤣

Breakup party😉

Do write more😊

Break up party 🤣 sharma sharma mil ke sharmaye 🤣 tasyam u cracked me up totally... awesome

Awesome
Amazing
Superb
Beautiful update Tasyam
Do write more 😊

Break up party 🤣
Awesome os tasyam 👏
Do write more

Hilarious awsm 🤣
Mood nahi hai 🤣
fish k saath party 🤣
sharma's Sharma gaye 🤣
luved it.chota cute os 😆

awesome os yaar 🤣 🤣
sharma sharma sharmaye 😆
do write more yaar

Haha...awesome theme "breakup party"!🤣

Wow yaar 👏

Tasyam welcome to the writerd club