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sujay kumar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#221

Ansh update chhaiye
Come soon

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Anshika

@TASYAM

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Posted: 9 years ago

#222

Originally posted by: mishrialways
Nice updates
sorry for late reply

thanks buddy 😃
and dont take tension late bhi chalta hai😊

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Anshika

@TASYAM

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Posted: 9 years ago

#223

Originally posted by: sujoyricky
Ansh update chhaiye
Come soon

update na february me milega na january me milega march ke last mai shayad

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Anshika

@TASYAM

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Posted: 9 years ago

#224

Originally posted by: janvi0513
Awesome story

thanks buddy😃

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Anshika

@TASYAM

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Posted: 9 years ago

#225

CHAPTER-7b

S(monologue with helpless face)-what matlab ate wakt bhi hume no...no...no mujhe nisha ki driving jhelni padegi hai bhagwan jaise tu t.v. serials mai bechari bahuo ki raksha karta hai usi prakar apne ish bhakt ki raksha krna

at one side someone was pleading with god on the other side someone was in his dreamland

K(monologue or we can say in his dreamland)-maine toh socha tha ki kal meri aur ishki akhri mulakat hogi but ab chatah hu ki humari kabhi akhri mulakat na ho ae kabire kya soch rha hai khin tu pagal toh nhi hogya kyunki sab log kehte hain jab kisi ko pyar hota hai toh vo pagal ho jata hai shut up kabir agar ek min bhi tu chup to phir pakka pagal ho jayega kyunki log yeh bhi khte hain ki jo inshan apne ap se baat krta hai vo bhi pagal hota hai

N-sorry guyz for disturbing your (point towards saurav) pleading with god (pointing towards kabir) and your thoughts in your dreamland

S(monologue)-what ise kaise pta chala chalaki mai bhagwan se prarthana kar rha hu oh god agar ishe pta chalgya ki mai ishke driving ke bare mai aisa vaisa bol rha hu toh pakka yeh mujhe kacha chba jayegi

K(monologue)-what ishe kaise pta ki mai apne dreamland mai hu agar ishe pta chalgya ki mai humare bare mai kya kya bol rha tha toh phir maira kya hoga yeh toh mujhe bhi nhi pata

N *with smile*-bohot hogya saurav and kabir band karo bhagwan se plead krna agar bhagwan thak gaye na toh phir tum dono ki wish puri nhi ho payegi

S-tujhe kaise pta ki mai bhagwan se wish mang rha hu??..
K-aur mai apne dreamland mai hu??..
N-chill guyz maine sirf guess kiya
saurav and kabir take a releaf breathe
K(in dramatical tone)-tu guess bada acha krti hai re
S-chup kar kabir ishne mujhe disturb kiya hai

suddenly car stops

S-sorry nishu sorry really tu bohot acha guess krti hai
K-wah beta pehle mujhe chup krata hai phir khud tarif karta hai dekhli teri dosti
S-shant reh kabir aur samajh apne ish priy mitr ki bhawnao ko
K-kuch jyda hi pure hindi nhi hogai
S-kya kru thodi problem hai
K-kha problem hai khi tujhe washroom wali problem toh nhi haina
S-shut up kabir aisa kyu bolta hai shubh shubh bol piku mai dekha tha amitabh bachan ki kitni buri halat ho gai thi
K-sahi bol rha hai maine bhi paso raat ko hi piku dekhi thi
N(irritated)-shut up you two fools and get out of the car
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next update in march😉 i know update chota hai but abhi keliye ishse hi kaam chala lo😃
waiting for your likes and comments...

Edited by TASYAM - 9 years ago