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Posted: 9 years ago
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Abi jaldi update nahi mili toh I won't comment😈
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome👍🏼
loved it❤️
update soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Niya_789

Abi 🤗

PM bhej deti kitna dhundhna pada story ko🤔
Update soon please

chikki !! 🤗🤗
I didn't send pm ..sorry ..
I'll update soon !! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Niya_789

Abi jaldi update nahi mili toh I won't comment😈

I will update soon ! pakka ! 😉
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Originally posted by: ...Shibu...

Awesome👍🏼
loved it❤️
update soon😊

Shibs ! 🤗
Thanxie ...will upate soon 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -abz-

chikki !! 🤗🤗

I didn't send pm ..sorry ..
I'll update soon !! 😳

Compensation ke taur pe jaldi se update de do 😳
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Originally posted by: Niya_789

Compensation ke taur pe jaldi se update de do 😳

ok I'll update then
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This one is for Niyu ...mera update hogaya ..now I need comment or else I'll delay in my next update 😈
Part 2

The name taken seemed to be too much destined that both of them couldn't keep their eyes off each other. His eyes speaking volumes and her eyes speaking infinity. The way she was selfless to help the kid of course turned him head over heels with in a fraction of second as he was already blazed by her entry of calling him sweetly. He was baffled by her eyes so much to the extent ;made him scared to look into them with his own which hid a lots frustration and hence he didn't give the answer to the her question . The cute look of hers with a cap and a bag , her heart filled questioning , made him awestruck . What made him even more amazed was her understanding to keep calm. The way she played with the wind was something which brought in a bloomed feeling and he stood there watching the miracle that happened to him suddenly.

Her name sounded so much perfect for him and her voice seemed so much peace giving that he wanted to hear it again and again. With a feeling of Deja vu, may be that of a dream, he gaped at her endlessly as she was carrying the little boy in the car taking care of him so delicately , with so much love ; he was just taken away by such a supremacy . Bringing him back from his trance was her loving voice . " ..He is Jai Avasti ...he lives in my orphanage " she replied with concern . " Ok ..please finish with the formalities " the nurse took her along to the reception to finish with the payments and other stuff .

He was walking past the ward to and fro waiting for her to come back . He looked around the environment which seemed to be a rushed and hurried one . People praying for their loved ones to be safe. Some with joy of happiness that their dear ones being back to life , some being desperate to get a good review . The place seemed to be tensed and critical . Life being brought and life going away . People having faith and people who sit like a rock whose belief are being snatched away. All of them had someone to take care of. Here, inside the ward, there was no one for the little boy, but Nisha seemed to be a support for him . How much lovable can that be? He thought. His deep thoughts were broken by a phone call .

The caller id made him back to his range again , he picked up the call not wanting her to show up here . " yes Kaira " . " Where are you ? We are getting late ! " she exclaimed heartlessly . He felt anger boiling inside him . What did she mean by getting late ? How heartless ? he thought while looking at Jai with oxygen mask over his face and his head covered with white band through the ward glass . " I'll see you tomorrow " he said cutting the call rudely . The moment he finished with the call , the doctor came out from the ward .

" The patient will be absolutely fine , had not the first aid measures done , the child would have been critical ... As soon as the forms are up , we will continue with the other treatment measures " The doctor assured . " Thank you " He replied politely . How much he was happy that a boy was saved indirectly by him . The feeling was heavenly . Peeping through the glass , a small smile rendered across his face . The boy had chubby cheeks and was little short sleeping with a frown , may be that of pain .

A smile crept his face slowly and fully . The content of saving a child gave a feels of his own . Having being in the hands of fame and money ; he never was this content as much he was right now . Thanks to the girl he was with today and thanks to the miracle that happened to him . An angel came in front of him as if she was sent only for him .
" How is he ?" the mellifluous voice stroke the chord of his heart again . " he is fine ..thanks to you , he is fine because of your safety measures ..just few more hours and he will be back to the live world" he said .She felt her breath back . How happily she was enjoying the wind around and how suddenly this thing happened . She just couldn't match the situation up . Till he was taken into the ward she never thought of anything else , as soon as he was taken , she prayed for his well being . And she took her breath in finally .

" Thank god ! ...this boy ..he keeps running here and there ...how much times I've told him to cross the road properly !! " she said frustratingly scrunching her nose and puffing her cheeks . " Thank you ...if you weren't there ...I don't know what would have happened .." She said with a glowing smile and pain as she found Jai at peace slumbering, but with pain. He nodded his head . " Are you a doc ? " he asked .

She turned to him with a questioning look . " Why do you think so ? " She asked in a sarcastic tone with a smile . He made faces as he was questioned for his question for the first time . "Aah ...you were doing those first aid stuff ..and you know the nurse's name too " He said not looking at her . She smiled seeing his shyness .

" ...I have learnt some safety measures from college and school , and I know a working intent here , Rishika, my best friends sister ..so I come for the visit of my orphanage kid's check up frequently ..I know the nurses too ..." She said smilingly . He wanted to smile , but his ego was not giving him . Her smile making him melt like a wax . She was a doll of her own kind .

" Wait a second ..." She paused . He looked at her with bemuse . " I forgot to give my intro ...I'm Nisha ..Nisha Gangwal " She forwarded her hand . He stared like a frog . The feels were like that of an interview ." oh ...I'm Kabir Rathode " she shook hands with him . " As if I don't know " she said laughingly . "You know me ? " he questioned ,surprised that she knew him . " Of course I do ...You are the famous singer and dancer right ..along being splendid business tycoon " She said .

He was once again amazed by her nature . The way she never asked him for something , the way she didn't go crazy around him just brought a different feeling all along . The feeling of him being a human grew into him as for a while around , he saw the nurses and others looking at him . " Yeah ...so you know this much about me ...you also know about me being rude and hard hearted too ...aren't you scared ? " He asked raising his brows . She looked puzzled . " Why should I ? ..Secondly , a person who saves a life and smiles on his act of saving can never be a hard hearted one ..." she was genuine. He stared , being whammy of what he heard .
To others , he was hard , but why not to her ? He was dazzled by his own act , he just couldn't understand the level of her understanding . She was different. " You don't smile do you ? " she asked . He turned his gaze away . He so wanted to smile , laugh , be happy , why was he not being able to express ? He was ubber perplexed by his own behavior ,he couldn't think of any other lovable act of smiling around . " Hey ..its ok ..I know I'm a stranger to you ...It's just that , I saw you smiling seeing the little boy at peace ..so may be I had expected that to me too " she said .
He was speechless . How much he wanted to say that she was no a stranger , may be yes , but he didn't want her to be just a stranger .

"Ok Mr Grumpy , you don't laugh ..but don't tell me you don't get hungry ..." She said as they were sitting on the bench beside the ward . They waited for like three hours or more . He was not willing to move out . He nodded in a yes . " I'm taking that as a yes , that you are hungry , lets move to the canteen ...Its already 12 , we'll have something before Jai wakes up .." she said and moved forward . He was sitting there watching her moving . Not finding him beside her , she turned back to find him sitting there without any movement . " What ? come on...I know you are hungry , you look very pale ...lets eat something and then be back ..." she said . He stood up from his place and moved towards her .

Having something to energize them , they were back to the ward to find Jai up from his unconscious state . Nisha entered in like a happy kitten . " dida!! " Jai screamt happily . "Jaiii !! " she hugged him making sure that he is not hurt . " Kitne baar kaha hai tumse ..road theek se dhek liya kar ! aur tum high way pe kaise pohche ? " Nisha behaving like a mother hen made Jai chuckle . " Uffo dida ! ..You forgot your mobile ...ab pata nehi kaha hai ! " He pouted . " Accha ? uss keliye itna bhaaga ..socha bhi hai kya hua hoga ? " her eyes turned moist . " I know na ..My dida will never let anything happen to me ! " he hugged her again . " Zyaada maska mat lago ! ...Next time iss tarah bhaaga toh mein tumse baat nehi karoongi ! " she warned him . " Ok !! fine ! ..now dida will smily smily " he said cutely that made her aww . "Yeh kon hai ? " Jai saw a tall guy next behind her ,he scrunched his nose trying to get through the lines . " Kabir !! oh my god !! " Jai jumped up from the bed . " Jai ..aaram se " she was frantic .

" ...Dida ...you found Jiju before me ? " Jai looked at her while she widened her eyes , so did Kabir .

" Aaah ..Nothing like that ...naughty boy ! " she remarked . An unknown feeling went past Kabir as he was called *jiju* . But then shoving away the thoughts he went beside Jai and sat next to him . " I hope you are feeling better ..." he gave a warm side hug . " Yes ...I'm better ..I will be the best ..I'll get an autograph and a selfie " Jai requested with puppy eyes . " Ok .." he agreed . on giving an auto graph , he took out his mobile for a selfie and gave a pose whe Jai intruded in the middle , " Dida ..you too join us ". She nodded in a no , but Jai was adamant . Making him sad at this critical hour didn't go well by both Nisha and Kabir , so Kabir made a nod to her for joining in .

------------------------------------------------------ Hogaya mera ...
two more parts to go , I'll try to make it lamba ..if not , it will go for three parts ...
Edited by -abz- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Abi I love you baby 🤗
It was cho cho cho cho cute
Jai ... I have fallen for him ☺️
Kabir kya multi talented Banda hai yaar😲👏
Nisha is so full of life 😃
But Jai is my hero of this stor😳
P.s I am book marking this story 😛
Edited by Niya_789 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww... mele cutie nibir awwwing over them... jai baby... he was flawless.. jiju ha... ☺️ good one jai...

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