Everything I have, is You||Nibir TS||CHAP 3 page 22||last page-29 - Page 13

Jaldi jaldi update dena
Agar possible toh please aaj dedo

Originally posted by: sam_premc

wait...likhne to do!🤣

😆

Both the updates wer too good 👏

nice update annie

Awesome prologue and the two part also awesome!!
Third part h na?? Kab milega??
Abt the story..
Nisha .. WO sab bhool gyi .. Apni khud ki identity tak!! 😲
5 deaths 😲
And reason was kabir...
I was like aisa kya hua hoga??
Kirti ,bunty , jwalu , umesh n aman is no more .. Means dolly di h!!
Sabko laga k nishu b nhi rahi and sabne kabir se rishta tod liya!! Kabir b khudko blame kar ra and planning to go away wen nisha will b alright?!
Pagal.. 😡
Nisha hate kyu karegi usko??
Maana ki wo drive kar ra tha but break b to kam nai kiya na!! He tried his best to save everyone...
But failed...
Agar koi aur b drive karta nishu ya umesh to b accident ho sakta tha!! And unke wajah se agar kisi ki b death hoti to kya nishu n umesh se b rishta tod dete?? Sab ne ekdum se kabir ko paraya kar diya!!
Mere hisab se to sab se zyada agar kisi ne saha h to wo kabir hai!! Uske pas to koi sahara b na tha!! Jiske kandhe pe wo sar rakhke ro sake!! He was all alone!! Aur apna dard chhupa ke bas muskurata rehta...
OK ab bas ... warna me sach me to dalungi agar ek aur word likhi to ...
last scenes was super awesome

awesome story... ❤️
do continue soon...
waiting...

Originally posted by: vishruthaLN

Both the updates wer too good 👏

Kabir's pain and guilt is portrayed so heart wrenchingly well!

The family's anger towards kabir is justified too.

Loved how you have subtly shown Nisha feeling the safest in Kabir's arms while the family thinks otherwise.

The pacing of the story is really good and the flashbacks were very well written!

Waiting for the next part

Please continue soon 😊

Originally posted by: ammu4u

nice update annie

ek galti sab bigad diya

felt bad 4 gangwls and Nibir

Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786

Awesome prologue and the two part also awesome!!
Third part h na?? Kab milega??
Abt the story..
Nisha .. WO sab bhool gyi .. Apni khud ki identity tak!! 😲
5 deaths 😲
And reason was kabir...
I was like aisa kya hua hoga??
Kirti ,bunty , jwalu , umesh n aman is no more .. Means dolly di h!!
Sabko laga k nishu b nhi rahi and sabne kabir se rishta tod liya!! Kabir b khudko blame kar ra and planning to go away wen nisha will b alright?!
Pagal.. 😡
Nisha hate kyu karegi usko??
Maana ki wo drive kar ra tha but break b to kam nai kiya na!! He tried his best to save everyone...
But failed...
Agar koi aur b drive karta nishu ya umesh to b accident ho sakta tha!! And unke wajah se agar kisi ki b death hoti to kya nishu n umesh se b rishta tod dete?? Sab ne ekdum se kabir ko paraya kar diya!!
Mere hisab se to sab se zyada agar kisi ne saha h to wo kabir hai!! Uske pas to koi sahara b na tha!! Jiske kandhe pe wo sar rakhke ro sake!! He was all alone!! Aur apna dard chhupa ke bas muskurata rehta...
OK ab bas ... warna me sach me to dalungi agar ek aur word likhi to ...
last scenes was super awesome

awesome story... ❤️
do continue soon...
waiting...

Originally posted by: sam_premc

areee waah...itna bada comment...thankoo so much nehuu😳😳😆

emotions phoot phoot ke bahar aa gye 😕 🤣

update soon...

Baba ji 😡 😡
Update please 😃