~NiBir FF - Shandaar~ Teaser Updated *31/1*

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Krishi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: sujoyricky
Awesome update

Thanks😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#132

Wow Krishi... amazing update. Bechara confuse Kabiraa. Ye cousins pakka kuch bada plan kar rahe hai. Kahi iye sab NIBIR ki setting to nahi karana chahte?? I'm very very excited for the nxt part. Continue soon. Thanx for the pm.

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mishrialways

@mishrialways

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Posted: 9 years ago

#133

Ch 3

nice update

Shrey was cute

kabir sleeping and his ringtone

cousins ne kuch khichdi pakai hai

ghar mein ghumne ke liye car

palace kabir jaw dropped

thanks for pm

sorry for late reply

ritika

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Anamika sharma

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Posted: 9 years ago

#134

awsome update dear...

plz pm me

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mishrialways

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Posted: 9 years ago

#135

Lovely update

kabir ka pov bahut accha tha

bunty daar kyun gaya ghost hai kya

Cousins are definitely up to something

can't wait

update soon

Ritika

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janvi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#136

Awesome update and thanks for the pm...''

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vaishnavi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#137

awesome update 👏
kabir is so confused 🤣
cousins ka plan kya h...m super excited n curious 😃
continue soon
thank you for the pm

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ammu4u

@ammu4u

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Posted: 9 years ago

#138

read both d parts togethert

lovely update

cousins kya plan kar rahi hai nisha se chup ke LOL

waitng 4 d nxt update

thnx 4 d pm

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Krishi

@Black_Maniac

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Posted: 9 years ago

#139

I am so sorry for not being able to give an update even now. This is just a teaser to assure you that you'll surely get an update in this lifetime 🤣

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Teaser 1 (For Chapter 5)
"Andar aa jao" Nisha said after much thinking.

"Thank you" Kabir smiled.

Nisha made way for him to come in while she herself headed to the window to close the curtains.
Suddenly she heard a 'click'. She froze for a moment and then turned around only to be totally shocked. Kabir had closed the door and even locked it with the high latch.

"Kya.. Kya kar rahe ho tum?" Nisha stammered.

"Badla le raha hun" Kabir answered back.

"Kis cheez ka badla?" Nisha continued stammering.

"Iska" he said and pointed on his t-shirt.

"Dekho, tum galat kar rahe ho.." Nisha so wanted to stop stammering and beat him but something inside her wouldn't let her to.

Kabir removed his T-shirt, showing off his hard, well-shaped body. Nisha gulped and started backing off. She moved a step behind, while he moved a step towards her. This continued till Nisha ran into the wall. Panic built up her throat. She hadn't thought Kabir would do something like this. Kabir didn't stop at this site. He reached where she was standing. He moved even closer, more than what Nisha was comfortable with.

"Mujhe kaha gaya hai ki tumhe logo se jaldi dosti karne ka shauk nahi hai.." He said huskily.

"Toh?" Nisha closed her eyes gradually.

"So I want to be in your 'close friends' list soon." Kabir tried with all his might to sound even huskier.

Nisha was already loosing herself in his voice. Kabir moved closer to her ear, moved the lock of hair that was covering her eye, taking in the scent of her still fresh perfume.

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Hahaha... I know it us very confusing. Waise wasn't it an actual Teaser, teasing all your NiBir feelings. I am sure you are going to want to break my face for what I make of this in a chapter (Not a dream PAKKA)
Sorry for no PMs. 😔

Edited by Black_Maniac - 9 years ago