NIBIR FF-THE LITTLE LOVE BUGS part 4-page 20

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hiiee kamino here I am with a new FF...I know meri ek aur story abhi incomplete h bt ma kya karu I can't stop myself from writing on nibir...plz bear it aur batana jarur ki should I continue it or not

THE LITTLE LOVE BUGS
PROLOGUE

MUMBAI STATION
A girl in her early-twenties was impatiently walking here and there waiting for her train to arrive she had a wide smile on her lips and glittering eyes her heart was dancing in joy
"Nishu shaati se baith jaa na bacha tere yu yaha se vaha ghumne se train jaldi nhi aa jayegi" said laxmi
"Maa mujse baitha nhi jayega...bas yeh train aae aur mujhe uda ke jaipur le jaye" replied nisha
"Ooaa madam train h aeroplane nhi ki tujhe uda ke le jaye"
"Sukku tu chup reh...tu nhi samjhega ma kitni khush ku...pure 5 saal baad jaipur jaa rahi hu"
"Haa toh ye yaha se vaha vaha se yaha karne se sirf pairo ma dard hoga...tu jaldi jaipur nhi pohchegi...nhi ruk tu ghumti reh accha hi h...yu ghumne se tere pair dhukege aur waha tu ek room ma baithi rahegi aur ma sukoon se shaadi enjoy kar pauga"
"Sukku ke bacche kaisa bhai h tu...ruk abhi batati hu tujhe"
Sukku started running for his dear life n nisha ran behind him
"Diya lakar dhundegi to bhi aisa bhai nhi milega"
"Haa...tere jaisa kamina bhai kabhi nhi milega"
"Are bacho hum station pe hain ghar ma nhi...kya kar rahe ho tum log"said laxmi
"Rehne do laxmi yeh dono nhi rukege " replied ramesh
IN JAIPUR

"Vo aa rahi h...vo sach me aa rahi h...mujhe samaj nhi aa raha ma kya karu man kar raha zoor se chilau aur sabko bata du ki vo finally yaha aa rahi h pure 5 saal baad...haa ma jaanta hu sirf teen dino ke liye hi aa rahi h bt in teen dino ma bohot saari nayi yaadein bana lunga...aur kya pata is baar use aapni dil ki baat bhi bata saku...ab tak to train ma baith chuki hogi aur kal subha Jaipur... ma use pure 5 saalo baad dekhuga...pet ma itni titliyan naach rahi h ki ma kya batau...ab bas vo aa jaye
Par kabir kal tu usse milega toh karega kya...kya bolega use...use tu yaad bhi hoga ya nhi...nhi nhi jarur yaad hoga...par agar usne mujhe pehchana hi nhi toh...toh kya apan intro de duga phir jarur yaad aa jayega use...oh god ma kya karu abhi ye haal h to jab vo mere samne hogi tab kya karuga...usase haath milau ya sirf wave karke hiiee bolu...ek kaam karuga haath milauga vaise bhi vo kitna waqt se Mumbai ma h waha toh sab aise hi milte hoge na...haa haath hi mila lunga...aaj toh ma excitement ke maare pagal hi ho jauga"
He was busy writing his diary when he heard his mom calling him he closed the dairy n went to her mom
"Ji mom kaheye kya hua"
"Kabir aapke bhai ki shaadi h aur aap ha ki apne aap ma hi khoye hue h... umesh kab se bula raha jakar dekho kya kam h"
"Maa umesh hi toh h...kyu itni Chinta karte ho"
"Aaj vo aapke dost umesh nhi saurav ke saale banke aaye h...ladki wale h vo aaj"
"Accha thik h ma dekhta hu"
He went to umesh
"Haa bol umesh kya hua"
"Kabir vo na mujhe tere help cahiye maa ne sab guests ke liye gift laane ke liye kaha tha aur ma..."
"Ma tere saath koi gift kharidne nhi chal raha hu...tu ek gift select karne ma hi ek ghanta laga dega"
"Tujhe puri baat sunane ki aadat hi nhi h na koi baat nhi...mana toh socha tha ki nishu ke liye gift tu suggest kr Dena par thik h"
"Nisha ke liye??...ma bhi chal raha hu"
"Are par tune to abhi mana kiya na"
"Haa toh mood change ma bhi chal raha hu"
"Nishu ka naam sunte hi mood change...chal thik h tu bhi chal"
"Aisa kuch nhi h bas aise hi...tu ruk ma ready hoke aata hu"
IN TRAIN
Train was running at it's full speed bt It wasn't enough for this crazy excited girl she wanted the train to run even more faster n reach Jaipur only within few seconds
She looked out of the window with a cheerful smile the grin on her face was enough to explain how happy her heart was she closed her eyes n let the passing air kiss her face n her hairs dancing with the wind
Nisha-(monologue) wow ma kal subha tak waha pahuch jaugi kitna maza aayega dolly di aur saurav ki shaadi...umesh bhaiya kirti jwalu saara cousins ek saath honge aur Kabir bhi toh hoga waha ...uske bina maza thodi hi aayega...pata nhi vo abhi bhi pehle jaisa pagal hoga yaa phir badal gaya hoga...kitni masti kiya karta tha vo ab pata nhi kaise hoga...ma use yaad rahugi bhi yaa nhi...kya pata kal kya hoga bt m sure kal ka din bohot accha hoga

part 1-page 5
part 2-page 10
part 3-page 16
part 4-page 20
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silentredr89 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome prologue
Please do continue soon
Cant wait fr their meeting
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Posted: 9 years ago
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new story... 🥳
awesome prologue vaishu le badi wali jhappi... 🤗
ab isko jaldi update karna
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Posted: 9 years ago
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super duper prologue vaissy😊

nishu ko jaipur jane ki jaldi h😊

loved nishu sukku nokjhok😉

dosa wedding❤️

kabir nishu k aane ki khushi me pagal ho gya chhora bawla ho gya🤣

wha kabir soch ra ki nisha ko wo yaad hoga ki nhi aur yha nisha soch rhi ki wo kabir ko yaad hogi ki nhi

nibir ek dusre se milne k liye kitne bechain h❤️

plz vaissy continue soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sujoyricky

Awesome prologue please continue

thank you ricky 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mansi_as18

new story...🥳

awesome prologue vaishu le badi wali jhappi...🤗
ab isko jaldi update karna

thank you mansi 🤗...jab tak chuti h tab tak jaldi jaldi update milega
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: itznimi003

super duper prologue vaissy😊

nishu ko jaipur jane ki jaldi h😊

loved nishu sukku nokjhok😉

dosa wedding❤️

kabir nishu k aane ki khushi me pagal ho gya chhora bawla ho gya🤣

wha kabir soch ra ki nisha ko wo yaad hoga ki nhi aur yha nisha soch rhi ki wo kabir ko yaad hogi ki nhi

nibir ek dusre se milne k liye kitne bechain h❤️

plz vaissy continue soon😊

thank you niju 🤗
I will continue soon...next update shayad kal ya parso tak mil jaye
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: tanya119

Awesome prologue

Please do continue soon
Cant wait fr their meeting

thank you so much Tanya 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow vaishu loved it 👏
Plz plz first part jaldi update karna 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Samaira81

Wow vaishu loved it👏

Plz plz first part jaldi update karna😊

thank you sam...I vl update fast 😊

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