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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
theatre romance😳😳😳
only Nibir can do it😆
AWESOME MANSI
do write more
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
Theatre romance. Hmm nd jo shuru kiya hai wo lhatam karna pafega.nd thanx yeh osk loye sach meim bahut sad os they aaj kal nd. Gifu kabir k saath movie date
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
res...
unres

Mansi superb OS yr😊 dont u dare call yr writings bakwaas😡 sys😈

nibir inne din se bechare alag alag reh rhe the😔

dolly ki excitement for watching movie in theatre

bunty kabab me haddi🤣

sukku nazaro ka war🤣🤣

loved k romance of nibir❤️

it was superb yr😳

do write more😊
Edited by itznimi003 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
res 😭
vl b able to read it after exams
unres
finally pad hi liya
superb os wifey 👏
theatre ma romance ☺️ ☺️
jo shuru kiya usko khatam karna padega ☺️ ☺️
kabira kis such a k
blush blush blush ☺️ ☺️
Edited by crazyvaishu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Amazing os Mansi. Nibir bhi na 😆
Aap aise hi likhte jao aur hum parte jaenge 😉
Thanx for d pm...luv u
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
Awesome mansi di
Finally ek happy wala os
Nibir romance 😳
Loved it
Thnks fr d pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
res karne ki himmat nahin rahi mujh mein🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28

sach mai yei log kanhi bhi shuru ho jate hai awesome yaar app sirf likhte raho aur par par ke blash hote rahe...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: arviabhigya

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Technically I should write this comment later and finish updating my comments on other stories par kya hai ki this story is relatively shorter iss liye iss pe pehle comment karungi kyunki i m very lazy 😆😆</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Firstly thank you for writing this story cz it really changed my mood🤗</font>
<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Coming to the OS- Fabulous work👏👏👏
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<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">A sweet, cute, romantic and equally passionate OS❤️</font>
<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Loved it thoroughly🤗</font>
<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Kabir got settled in a corner seat and gestured nisha to come and sit next to him. Nisha smiled and was just going to sit with him when bunty jumped in between and sat next to kabir making him frown. Nisha's smile too faded as she sat beside kirti who was busy ogling at the boys in front row. " bunty k bachhe... tjhe to mai dekhta hu baahar jake" kabir frowned and muttered. " Kuch kha jiju" bunty asked. " nhi bunty... tu movie dekh na" kabir said grinning- <font color="#990066">This was hilarious😆😆😆Bechara Nibir🤣Cousins inhe akela hi nahin chodte🤣</font></font>
<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Nisha looked at him as she felt his gaze on her. She signalled him to watch the movie not her. Kabir gestured that he was movie is not worthy if he wasn't with her.- <font color="#990066">hayyee😳so romantic😳</font></font>
<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">They were talking to each other through eyes and gestures when sukku shouted " are tum dno ye nazro k waar band karoge... taki hm movie dekh le". Kabir and nisha looked at him confused but soon understood as they saw everyone staring at them.- <font color="#990066">Sukku 😆😆😆 Kabhi toh humare Nibir ko akela chod do😉</font></font>
<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Nisha sat straight and tried hard to not look at him. Kabir made a cute puppy face as he knew she was watching only him through corners of her eyes. Nisha suppressed her smile knowing he was still looking at her intently while his gaze was burning her insides in the dark too. She felt her heart racing just by his mere look. She wanted to go kiss those eyes and hug him tight ignoring all these people around them. Kabir was just looking at her. His heart, his mind all revolving around her and there she was busy in ignoring him. He felt so miserable .. more miserable then the past few days. Because he knew she was right here still he can't talk to her or held her close or admire her soft lips or what not. " it's really hard to be in front of u and still away from u nisha... u have made me insane... " he thought. " u have became my habit my essence kabir... how can I live without u" nisha thought.- <font color="#990066">Loved the aankhon hi aankhon mein ishaara❤️The longing for each other was brought out beautifully👏👏Loved the intensity of the emotions😳The cuteness, adorable and lovable quality of Nibir which sets them apart from the other couples is again highlighted very well😳😉</font></font>
<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font color="#333333">As soon as the gang left kabir pulled nisha out of her seat and placed her next to his. She was shocked at the sudden transition. " Kabir tu ye kya..." she was silenced by him as he placed his finger on her lips slightly rubbing them. She shivered as she felt the sparks arising in herself. " chup chap yhi baith samjhi... ab ur door nhi rh sakta mai tjhse" he said in a husky voice. Nisha looked at his hazel brown eyes which were burning in her longing. They were lost in the moment when they realised someone staring at them.- </font><font color="#990066">Loved the intensity of the emotions and their desire to be with each other</font></font>
<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font color="#333333">" aap dno bhi na khi bhi shuru ho jate ho.. kyu nishu bro" teased jwalu-</font><font color="#990066">Bechara Kabir, yeh Nishu ke bhai-behen unn donon ko akela hi nahin chodte😆🤣</font></font>
<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">jwalu pls apni jagah p baith ja ur mjhe movie dekhne de" scowled kabir. Nisha tried to suppress her laugh seeing kabir so impatient. Jwalu made a face at him and sat on her seat- <font color="#990066">Kabir's impatience and restlessness to be with Nishu was really cute😳😳</font>
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<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">"Nisha knew that her k husband was in full k mood today so she tried to remain steady. he was making her insane through his antics. nisha tried to pull her hand back but this time kabir pulled her with such a force that she landed at his chest. kabir took full advantage of the opportunity and held her there... more close to himself. " kabir... hm theatre m h... ghar m nhi..." she whispered. " mjhe koi farak nhi padta..." kabir whispered back in her ears so close that she can actually feel his breath on her earlobe. the tickling feeling arising in her was now very hard to suppress. "kabirrr..." she literally moaned his name.finally she gave in and rested her head at kabir's chest while he wrapped his arm around her waist and cherished her presence in his arms. "how much i missed u nisha..." he said. "not more than me.." she said looking in his eyes. kabir hitched a sharp breath as he saw his fire burning in her. " bilkul chup rehna.." he said coming close to her ear and placing a kiss on her earlobe. nisha closed her eyes and was engulfing the sensation when she felt herself pulled again<font color="#333333">.- </font><font color="#990066">Nibir romance☺️Hayee 😳 mai mar jawaan☺️Mansi u time and again prove why I have refer to u as the Queen Of Nibir Romance😳Romance and intensityoverload☺️</font></font>
<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font color="#333333">" chal..." kabir said and literally ran outside with her. as soon as they were out of the hall, nisha stopped and pulled kabir too stopping him. kabir looked at her questionably when she crushed herself into him. i missed u kabir... i missed u so much..." she said. " i missed u like my breath.. nisha" kabir said pulling her more, making her feet up in the air. finally they let go of each other when they realised that they are still in public.- </font><font color="#990066">Adorable😳</font></font>
<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">kabir took nisha to their house. "kabir... tu mjhe yha kyu le aaya... sab hme dhund rhe honge wha..." nisha said. "dhundne de... ab mai ur tjhse door nhi rh sakta... ab mai tjhe nhi jane dunga.. chahe dolly bole chahe dadaji" he said making a baby face as if someone has snatched his fav thing from him. nisha chuckled but realised he had tears too in his eyes. " kabir... mai tjhe chhodke khi nhi jaungi ab... chahe koi bhi bulae.." she said taking his face in her palms, his tears reflecting in her eyes. " sachhi???" he asked. " muchhi" she said. he embraced her tightly again as she felt like she is home after such a long time. she softly placed a kiss on his nape out of her emotions and realised she did a mistake as he tightened his grip on her and swept her feet off the floor. " kabirr..." she couldn't complete as he sealed her lips in his. " we have to finish what we started nisha..." he said before he closed her lips again for a long passionate kiss pouring his longing his love through it. nisha lost herself in him again and clutched on him to never let g<font color="#333333">o.- </font></font><font color="#990066"><font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Absolutely loved the intensity here Mansi👏👏The plethora of emotions from the pain of being away from each other to the attraction and love felt has been conveyed so beautifully👍🏼The kiss☺️Their romance was just heavenly</font></font>
<font color="#990066" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Great job😉</font>

awww mihu thanks yaar... ☺️ ☺️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Well written..Loved how Nibir was longing for each other..

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