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Originally posted by: crazyvaishu

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awesome update nishi 👏
nishu ne kabir ko vj ko maaf karne ke liye manaya...this scene was beautifully written
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vj's letter was amazing
loved it
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Originally posted by: Roopsha_98

Super duper awesome update 👏

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mishrialways

Awesome episode

wouldh have luved to see this in the show
nibir scenes I was awing all the time
vj ghar chod ke chali gyi
hope Sab thik ho jaye
thanks for pm
ritika


thank u so much meri bichdi behan 😆 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: star.angel

Loved update 😳

Nibir scene was beautiful 😳
Loved their caring 😳
Vj scene was beautiful 😃
Her thinking about nisha
Kabira b maan gya 😃
But vj GI
Ab kia ho ga 😕
I hope SB theek honl jy ga 😳


dear don't take tension sab accha hoga 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Great update naina
Kabir ne maa ko maaf kar diya .nibir conversation was nice.
Maa ke emotions letter per achi terah se describe kiye.
Update soon

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Originally posted by: nitika4

Great update naina
Kabir ne maa ko maaf kar diya .nibir conversation was nice.
Maa ke emotions letter per achi terah se describe kiye.
Update soon

thanks nitika 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello guys...
iss baar bina kisi msg k update kar rhi hu 😆 😆
wait karne k liye thanks
n thanks for all the beautiful comments.. 😉


PART 11

After 15 mins

Nisha - (kabir ko aawaj lagati hui bedroom se bahar ati h...) kabir...kabir... abhi itna cheekh rha tha.. ab mai aawaj lga rhi hu to pta nhi kha chala gya h... kabir...kabir...(irritated)

Nisha - (irritated) kabir... kabir... Kha hai yaar ?? (awaaj lagati hui kitchen m ati hai ) ka...(mug m chai bhari dekh k )(monologue) ye chai aise chod k kha gya...(tensed) kabir... kabir... Dekh agar ye tera koi nya prank hai to tu soch le... Tu aaj bht maar khane wala hai... Kabir...(tensed) (monologue) maa k room dekhti hoon kya pta unse hi bat karne gya ho...(maa k room m jati hai...n she sees n empty room) maa... maa... kabir...kabir... (worried) maa bhi nhi hai kabir bhi nhi hai ye dono subh subh kha chale gye... (bahar jake dekhti hoon...)(when she was about to go... Uski nazar floor pe pad ek paper pe padti hai...) (confused) ye kya hai ?? (paper ko utha k ) maa.. ka letter...(n she reads the letter...after reading the letter) iska matlab kabir maa k paas hi gya hai... chalo finally kabir aur maa k beech k sari problems khatm ho jayengi... N I think iski wajah se kabir ko apni puri family mil jayegi... (smiles)

Viraj's Pent house

Vj sofe pe baithi hui...viraj aake vj k paas baithta hai)

Viraj - maa aap subh subh...hme bula lia hota humaa jate apko lene...

Vj - beta hamara plan achanak bna...(sad) to...humne socha k subh subh tumhe pareshaan karne se accha hai hum khud aa jate hai...(smiles waekly)

Viraj - maa ye aap kaisi bat kah rhi hai... aapke liye kuch karna humare liye kabhi koi pareshaani ya kaam nhi hai...

Vj - (smiles lightly)(viraj k cheeks ko sahlati hai)

Viraj - (vj k face ko dekhte hue...confused)m...maa... sab theek hai na ?? (vj k hath ko apne hath m lekar) aap kuch pareshaan lag rhi hai ?? (concerned) k...kuch hua hai kya ??

Vj - (tears starts forming...apne tears ko chipane k liye dusri taraf face turn karti hai...) n..n..nhi beta... w..w..wo to bs..

Viraj - wo to bs kya mom ?? (vj ka face apni taraf kar k )

Vj - wo...hume tumhari yaad aa rhi thi islie bs...(smiles weakly)

Viraj - (vj k face ko cupped kar k ) maa... aapse humse jhoot nhi bol sakti... aap janti hai hum aapki hasi se samjh lete hai ki aap hume dikhane k liye has rhi hai ya dil se has rhi hai..

Vj - (viraj k bat sunkar...tears rolled down from vj's eyes)

Viraj - ( hugs vj...)... Par maa aisa kya ho gya ki aap aise...

Vj - (cries)..(vj pichle raat ki puri bat viraj ko batati hai)

Viraj - (vj ko calm karte hue..) maa aap roiye mat... kabir ko thoda time dijiye wo aapko maaf kar denge... unke lie aapko maafi dena itna aasaan nhi hai... unhone apne pyaar ko khud se door jate dekha hai... wo khayaal hi shayad unko aapko maaf nhi karne de rha.. par hme pura yakeen hai ki kabir aapko maaf kar denge...

Vj - ( cries) hm us intzaar kar lenge...

Viraj - (vj k aansu pochte hue) ab aap fresh ho jaiye... aaj humsath m breakfast karenge...

Vj - (smiles)

Vj n viraj was abt to go to their rooms...tabhi door bell bajati hai...

Viraj - ram singh dekhiye kaun hai ?

Ram singh - (opens the door) ji kahiye...

Viraj - kaun hai ram singh ??

Ram singh - wo..hukum..(n he opens the door fully )

Vj n viraj (shocked)

Viraj - kabir aap ??

Kabir - (hesitantly) ha... mai..mom se...

Viraj - h..ha..bilkul ...(vj ki taraf dekhte hue) maa...

Vj - (kabir k taraf badhti hai)...

Kabir - (vj k taraf jake k use hug karta hai tightly) s..sorry mom... I m really very sorry...

Vj - (cries) don't say sorry jojo galti humari thi... Aur bas uski saza hi hme mili hai...

Kabir - (cries) n..no..mom.. aapne galti ki fir aapne maafi bhi mangi but mai hi tha jo apko maafi nhi de paya... mom I m sorry meri wajah se aapko bht dard sehna pda...(still hugging)

Vj - jojo (cries)

They both crying hugging eachother for sometime

After sometime

Viraj - (with tears) ab to sari problems solve ho gai... ab rona band kijiye aap dono...

Vj n kabir hug break kar k...

Kabir - (sees viraj...n starts moving slowly towards him with serious look)...

Vj - (sacred)..j..j..jojo...

Viraj - (confused)

Kabir hugs viraj..

Kabir - (still hugging) sorry ...BHAI... jitni bhi ladaiyaan , marpeet k hai un sab k liye...

Viraj - (kabir k back ko caress karte hue) sorry to hame bolna chahiye... apko bina matlab ki takleef deter he hai hum ab tak... ab hum bas yhi chahte hai ki aap aur nisha hamesha khush rhe aur ek sath rhe...

Kabir - (hug break karte hue...) aisa hi hoga BADE BHAIYA (giving pressure on bade bhaiya)

Viraj - (smiles)

Vj -( smiles... with tears...seeing her sons talking )

Viraj - maa fresh ho lijiye... Kabir breakfast kar k jaiyega...

Kabir - (smiles ) ok bade bhaiya... mai nisha ko phone kar k ata hoon.. jaldi jaldi m use batana hi bhool gya ki mai kaha jar ha hoon...

Vj - ha... khamakha tension le rhi hogi...

Kabir - (apna phone nikalta hai) yaha to network hi nhi aa rha... mai bahar jake phone kar leta hu..

Viraj - ha...

Kabir - (main door k taraf badhta hai...n sees nisha standing at the door) nisha...

Vj n viraj turn towards the door...

Nisha - (smiles) mujhe dekh k khush nhi hua...(n she was about to enter inside the house)

Vj - (shouts) Nisha ruk jao...

Nisha , kabir n viraj (shocked)

Viraj - (confused) maa... ye kya hai ??

Kabir - (confused) mom... Aap use ander kyu nhi ane de rhi...

Vj - ( viraj n kabir k baton ko ignore karte hue nisha k taraf badhti hai...angry look k sath)

Nisha - (confused) m..m..maa...(in low voice)

Vj - (angryily) tumhe kya lga hum aise hi tumhe hamare ghar m ane denge??

Nisha - (shocked)

Kabir - par mom nisha...(vj cuts him in middle)

Vj - (angrily) jojo chup... (proudly) ye hamara ghar hai... yah ape faisle hum lenge...

Viraj - (shocked) maa... ye aap kya kah rhi hai ??

Vj - (angrily) shi to kah rhe hai... ye hamara ghar hai... yaha kaun ayega kaise ayega aur kyu ayega iska faisla hamara hoga...

Nisha - (sees kabir with eyes full of tears)

Kabir - (nisha ka face dekhkar...)(irritated)ma...(nisha holds his hand n use eyes se ishara kar k behas na karne k liye kahti h)

Vj - (sabka face dekh k man m smile karti h...) viraj ye hamara ghar hai na ??

Viraj - (angry) maa par...(vj cuts in middle)

Vj - ha ya na

Viraj - ( confused + lil angry ) ha...

Vj - to ye nisha ka sasuraal hua ya nhi ??

Viraj n kabir (confused)

Viraj - (confused) ha...

Vj - to hum nisha ko apne samne pahli bar iss ghar m bina Grahpravesh karwaye kaise ane de sakte hai...(n starts laughing)

Viraj , kabir n nisha (take a breath of relief)

Viraj - maa aapne to dara hi diya tha...

Kabir - meri halat to na hi pucho to theek hai... (smiles)

Nisha - (smiles with tears)

Vj - viraj aap hamare sath aaiye... kabir aap nisha k paas jaiye aur bina hamare bole ander mat aaiyega...

Viraj n nisha (laughs)



hope you guys like it..
pasand na aye ya koi mistake ho to batana 😉
waiting for ur likes n comments 😉

Ps - saru sissy waiting for u...😃

Edited by naina.majik - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow finally sab theek hogaya..btw vasu ka style acha tha 😉

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