Those Moments With You.||nibir FF | chap 8- PAGE 37||index-page 1| - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
#81
unres ed my first comment on pg 6🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82
I liked the icecream part

J kabira wow 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: SaruSenan

Annzzz🤗 Finally Saru is here with her Superlate Chotu Comment😆🤣

Read 4 chapters in a row...🤣

My first comment on this Story🤣

Sab se Pehle Jhappi le 🤗 4 writing new story...😛 & Spl Jhappi🤗 4 waitiing so much patiently 4 my comments😳 Sorry yaar 4 making u wait soo long😳

Excellent title...👏👏👏

Toh Abt update😳

Chap 1:😳

Kabir & Nisha in college...😲 dat too like STRANGERS😲 Annzz teri DIMAAG kidher hai re...😆 I want to touch it & take aashirwaad.. Kamal ka stry plot banaya hai re...👏

Kya baath hai Kabiree.. Nishu ke saath more moment mile toh doing Phd...
🤣🤣🤣

NiBir KISS☺️ Kinni possesive hai Nishu😆🤣 Kabira bach ke...🤣

Chap 2:😳

Annzzz😆 Loved it yaar...😃

NiBir Nok-jhoks be Professor...🤣🤣🤣

Phd karne aaye hai lad rahe hai nursery bachom ki tarah...🤣🤣🤣 NiBir were Perfectly identified by their Professor🤣🤣🤣

Intro was funny tooo🤣

BB=Bataktha Bhoot🤣🤣🤣 4 Others 😉& 4 NiBir BB=Baby🤣

Kabira aur uske female fans🤣🤣🤣

Nishu ko headache bcz of Studies🤣🤣🤣 ya bcz of that girls?🤣 Someone is J🤣

NiBir Kissing at College🤣 Kahi pe bhi shuru ho jaaathe hai yaar Yeh kabiraa.. Kinna K hai... aur ab Phd bhi karega K par?🤣🤣🤣

@PINk Most Hilarious K dialogue🤣

Nisha: kabirr...yee college hain...ghar nahi...

Kabir: wo bhi dheere dheere bana hi denge...!!

Chap 3:😳

Annzz...😆 Tune Ek Chipkali ka sahara lekar KYA KYA KYA kaant karaya yaar...👏

@PINK Bestest of this chapter🤣

Kabir: ( in nisha's ears, when no one was seeing them ) : ye tujhe kabse chipkali se darr lagne laga nisha..??

Nisha: (in a slow voice) : jab wo chipkali ...wallet kholte hi ..uske andar se nikle to kisi ki bhi waat lag jaati hain kabir..!!

Kabir: matlab ye humaare ghar ki chipkali hain...jisko tune mujhe daraane keliye paal pos ke badaa kiya hain..??

Nisha: ab mujhe kya pata meri parvarishh mein kaha kami aagayi ki wo mujhe hi daraane lagaa..??

Kabir: tu aski maa jo thehri...aise shock to milne hi hain...!!

Nisha: hain to tera hi na..!!

Kabir: aaaeee ye mera bachcha nahi hain...mujhe kya pata tu isko kahan se laayi..??

Nisha: kabir how ridiculous you are...mere bolne ka ye matlab tha ki tere hi ghar ka hain...k kahinka..!!

Kabir: ohh...aise bolna..!!

Paal poskar bada kia chipkali🤣

Nishu ki parwarish mein kami...🤣

Kabira ko apne Bachom ki padi hai jab Nishu was saying abt CHipkali🤣 K khahikaa🤣

Piku😆 Naam toh kinni funny hai🤣 lekin karnameee???😡


Kabira ko maaar padi.. 🤔awww...😳 usne Nishu ke hisse ka dard khud le lia

So Piku has a past😛

Kabira ki gussa kaise door karegi Nishu?🤔 Felt bad 4 NiBir🤓

PS: tere update par ek typo error hai😆 @BOLD dekh😉 yahan "Rohan" hona chahiye tha nah?😛

Shivam and kabir immediately went towards kabir and dragged him inside the classroom while piku dragged nisha with him.

Chap 4:😳

Awww... NiBir finally patched up😳 The song added more emotional effect to it..👏👏👏

Nishu ko bhi chot lag gaya🤔 Well NiBir hi ek doosare ke liye marham ba gaye

Sahi kehtha hai Kabira... Har koi NiBir ke beech aatha hai😡 Sahir😡 Shivam😡 Gadhom doosarom ke BIWI ko ghoodna band kar...🤣 I m waitiing 4 dat Day When Kabira will admit shoutingly dat "Aree Voh Meri WIFEY hai..."🤣 "Main kuch bhi karu tum sabko usse kya??" Kab aayega voh din?

Kabir: (monologue) : kabirr beta...phirse wifey aur tere beechme koyi aa gaya..!!! bhagwan ji, aap apne iss bachche se bilkul pyaar nahi karte na...kyun baar baar kisi na kisi ko meri life mein entry ke free passes dedete ho..wo bhi mere aur nisha ke beechme aane keliye.


@BOLD🤣

Aur voh Risha...😡 Doosarom ke Pati ke saath zyada chipko math😡 Waiting 4 dat day When Nishu will admit shouting "Yeh Mera Kabira hai mere hubby ko ghoodegi toh teri aankh nikalke rakh dungi bahar"🤣

Nisha: (monologue) : gharr chall beta...aaj tera pan pe bithaake hot na kardiyaa na...tu bas ghar chal.

Kabir: (monologue) : kabir betaaa...tu kahan...nisha aur risha ke beechme phas gaya..?? aaj to ghar mein tera keema hi banegaaa...sochlee ...plan banaa...!!

@PINK The Bestest Till Now👏 Annzzz maan gayi tere Dimaag ko👏👏👏

LSA - Love Siddh Adhikaar☺️

Cousins +NiBir scene was Nice & Cousins Teasing them was treat to watch esp when Kabir was letavofying on Nishu's Lap & Nishu Caressing his hair😆🤣

So Kirti hai Voh AIR 😆(All India Radio🤣) Walky Talky ne sab tak khabar pahuncha diii🤣

Finally...😎 Finished My FIRST COMMENT🤣

Thanks Annz 4 The PMs...🤗 Sorry again 4 late no no superlate Comment😳

Yeh pehli baar hua hoga ki Chapter 3 & 4 ka comments Un chapters ke pehle wale posts par hai..!!!!!!🤣 Saru's UNIQUENESS...🤣

Do write More🤗 Q k DMM🤣





Thankyou so much for your super chotu comment...waited for it a lot...for a moment I thought that may be you aren't interested in reading my story...😆

Comments bhi bht kam aarahe the..so I thought that my story wasn't good too..!!

I just love your comments..!!😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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@Annzz Aaj keh dia😡 phir kabhi math kehna ki Saru dont Love NiBir stories 😛 I love NiBir stories & If U refer my first official chotu post on IF (Jiska link neeche hai) U wl get to knw How Silent saru Beum Violent & Kissne iss CHAMATKAAR kia...😆🤣 SYS???😈🤣

Its just dat mere UNRES list is lamba & vo rukne ka naam nahi le rahi hai🤢 & Time kam hai..🤢 upar se KSEB & BSNL NET & Heavy rain ne meri BBB nikalke rakh diya hai...😡🤣 siliye late comments aathe hai.. waise Saru dont like to make u writers wait bt ITS MY MAJBOORI🥺🤣 Sorry😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
Thanx fr d pm 😃 😃
Sorry fr late cmmnting
Amazing thought totally diff concept beautifully written 👏
3rd chap padke mujhe Rona aka gaya 😭
Soo touching nibir k gusse me concern.awww loved d way u portrayed d emotions 👏 👏
Nibir j 😉
N ne chipkali ko paal poos k bara kia.parvarish me kami rah gayi hogi 🤣 🤣 class dialog 🤣
Luved it 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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@saru baba ...I am sorry baba...!!!
@thankyou shats baba..!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sam_premc

@saru baba ...I am sorry baba...!!!

@thankyou shats baba..!!



LOL Annzzz 😛 Link Maine dia nahi...🤣

Yeh Le Link... 😆

Link


Ab isse Padh den SORRY bol phir se...🤣


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Posted: 9 years ago
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plz pm me or update soon.plz.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sorry for making the updates so late..will update soon...either in this weekend or mon-tue.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sam_premc

Sorry for making the updates so late..will update soon...either in this weekend or mon-tue.

please update ek deewana tha also

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