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Superb Annie
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Update soon Annie
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Thankyou so much sana!
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Originally posted by: mishri_darling

Eagerly wating for the next update...!!!!


hehe...you'll defo get it after 9th!!😃😆😆
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Ek update ki keemat tum kya janno Annie babu...
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Hum jaante hain ek update km keemat baba...even I lub writing! :-D
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Nisha and Kabir got seated in the bus...nisha sat beside sneiha as sahir settled with kabir...risha was sitting in the front row of nisha along with her friend, ashiya, while shivam sat with rohan, in the front row of kabir. Although, risha insisted kabir to sit with him but he did not. All the boys in the bus, kept staring at nisha, as they were so awestruck on seeing her in that red half length dress for the first time.

Yaarrr...kya lag rahi hain..."said a boy from the front row staring at nisha.

Mujhee nahi pata thaa...ye itni beautiful hain...warna to main isee hi apni girlfriend banaaleta.' Said another.

The boys started hooting seeing nisha, and kabir was at the extreme levels of his anger, he just wanted to kill them for looking at nisha, like that. Nisha felt so uncomfortable from that nefarious behavior of those boys. She would have never worn that dress, if it wasn't gifted by kabir on their special day.

Kabir stood up, from his seat, glaring at the boys, he almost walked further to shut their bloody mouths off, but was stopped by nisha. As the boys saw kabir staring at them, they behaved as if they were busy in some work.

Shivam kept looking at nisha through the corner of his eyes, he was not like the other junk of boys, he liked nisha but that does not mean that he should too misbehave, he was a nice guy, he felt like beating those boys off. But he had a reputation in the class, of being the most decent guy, why would he damage that.

After sometime, The temperature cooled down a little in the bus, as the boys got busy in some other work,

Ravish entered the bus,

Guys...so everyone is here right..!! Please fill these sheets with your correct information...and please hand me over your NOCs.'' He said passing some forms to the students. So, guys, we are about to start to pratapgarh, our college has a good reputation so, maintain that there too. There would be some other interns from Australia too, who are highly qualified, so better you learn something from them, understand the way they work, if I get any complaints regarding anyone of you, I won't even think once before rusticating you, so better you be aware of your deeds. It's almost a 3-4 hour journey; so, please keep the environment in here cool, you would be given tents for your stay, you would have to share it with another person, and the pairs are already decided. Those would be told once we reach there. Be calm, and fill these sheets correctly, attested with your NOCs'' continued he.

Everyone filled up their forms, attested their NOCs and handed it over to ravish. The bus started within a few minutes, ravish sat on the front seat, to keep an eye over those boys.

After about half an hour, everyone was getting bored, some of them were sleeping...some were busy in their phones... But kabir and nisha were looking each other lovingly, recalling the days moments, they never wanted to get separated from each other today, they wanted to be in each other's arms, loving each other to the extremities, they wanted to forget everything else in this world, just they both. "they were in each other's trance, there was no light at all in the bus, as they had switched it off due to the night time, kabir was holding nisha's hand lovingly as no one was able to see them in that darkness, nisha looked at kabir, although they both couldn't see each other, but they both could feel the other's presence. They both were in trance of each other, completely lost in each other, when their trance was broken by a loud voice.

Ideeeaaa...'' said that voice.

The lights were switched on immediately, to see the owner of the voice, kabir and nisha settled back in their seats , the owner of that voice was none other than rohan, all the people kept staring at him with an angry look.

Aree...aise kya ghoor rahe ho mujhe...??baitho ...baithoo...idea aaya hain.'' Said rohan.

Aisa kya idea aaya hain rohan tujhe raat ke 8:30 baje..??'' asked shivam, throwing daggers at him, as his sleep was disturbed.

Shivamm...kya yaar...8:30 baje kaun sotaa hain...??'' asked rohan.

Achchaa...chal idea sunaa...kya hain..??'' asked shivam.

Waise bhi sab aise dead bodies ki tarah padee hain...isse achcha to let's enjoy na...let's do something interesting." Said rohan.

Abee oyee..iss time pe tujhe kya interesting karna hain...??'' asked shivam getting irritated.

Rohan kept his finger on his chin...and acted as if he was thinking.

Truth and dare..??'' exclaimed rohan.

Aayeee paagall...chalti bus mein tujhe truth and dare khelna hain...agar tu yahan bottle spin karega na bottle seedha bus se baahar jaayegi.'' shouted shivam.

Yeaahh...point..!!'' said rohan .

Tooohhh...soch kuch aur..!!'' shouted risha.

Antakshari...??'' asked ashiya, eyeing at shivam.

Ashiya liked shivam a lot but, he never looked at her even once. It's not that she wasn't beautiful, she was, but the only thing wrong in her was, that she is his sister's friend, so he thought of ashiya as a sister too, the four, rohan, ashiya , shivam and risha have been together since childhood. Same play school, same school, same college...everything same. Shivam and risha were twins, while rohan and ashiya were twins too, they were exact carbon copies of each other, except for their behavior. shivam knew that ashiya liked him, but he didn't, he never looked at her like that.

Antakshari...??huhh...yeaahh good idea." Said shivam stealing glances.ohh..kayy...so teams..??' asked he.

Main bhai ki team mein...!!'' said risha , as she wanted to be in kabir's team. she took an excuse of shivam, and settled herself beside shivam.

Aur...main behn ki team mein..." Said rohan sitting beside aashiya.

Everyone giggled at this swap of places.

Bhai-behn ka pyaarr...aayyee haayee!!" shouted a boy.

So,theek hain let's start the game...lekin game mein thoda sa change hain..we usually sing the songs from starting right..?? to hum iss baar, uss gaane mein se kuch lines gaayenge... jo gaane ki starting ho sakti hain...ya phir beechmein se kahin se...poora gaana nahi gaana hain...and it's not necessary to sing the song with the word where it last ended..aise to mazaa bhi aayega...and variety bhi ho jaayegi songs mein...kyunki usually log struck ho jaate hain ekk jagah aake and we start finding it boring.and one more thing songs romantic hone chahiye. So, now, let's start the game..??'' asked shivam.

Kabir who was lost somewhere...in his k world, was startled when someone shook him...

Haann...??'' said kabir coming out of his dreamworld.

Abhi tak kahan khoye hue the janaab..??kaun hain wo...??? Asked sahir. Kabir smiled cheekily at him.

So let's start the game, humaara team A hogaa n tumhaara team B 'said shivam pointing at rohan.

So, sabse pehle team B sing karegi.. ..so start ..!!

Lekin hum kyun...??'' shouted the team B.

Tum logon ka time khattam ho raha hain jaldi karo..!!'' said kabir looking at his watch.

Team B panicked...they didn't knew what to sing...they looked at each other's faces, when nisha started singing closing her eyes.

Main jaan ye waar dun,

Har jeet bhi haar dun,

Keemat ho koyi tujhe,

Beintehaa pyaar dun,

Har safar, har jagah, har kahin ban gayee,

Mantee the khudaa,

Aur haan wahin ban gaye ho.

Kabir smiled seeing her face... she was singing too beautifully...so lovely her voice was...he knew that she was singing that song for him...nisha slowly opened her eyes to see a smiling kabir. She blushed a little.

Now time for team A ' team B hooted.

Yaar...maine bol to diyaa lekin mujhe koyi romantic song to aata hi nahi hain..''thought shivam.

Kabir was about to sing when, shivam started with his song,looking at nisha.

Dehleez pe mere dil ke,

Jo rakhkhe hain tune kadam,

Tere naam pe meri zindagi,

Likhdi mere humdum,

Haan...seekha maine jeena jeena,

Kaise jeena...

Haan seekha maine jeena mere humdum,

Na seekha kabhi jeena jeena,

Kaise jeena...

Na seekha jeena tere bina humdum,

Nisha was feeling very uncomfortable with shivam's continuous gaze..

Ohhooo...to kitaabi keede ko bhi gaane aate hain..."shouted team B. shivam gave a whatever look.

When rohan started with his song..

Tunee maari entriyaan,

Re...dil mein baji ghantiyaan..

Re..tang...tang...tang...

Dil ki sun commentriyan ree,

Pyaar ki guarantiyaan re...

Tang...tang..tang...

Naa...taada taadi karna...

Naa...ab nahi sudharna...

Chootne laga hain ree..

Chahatoo ka jharnaa...

Aaaeee...rukkk ...ye kaisaa romantic song hain...rohan ke bachche...?? Hum nahi manatee...'' shouted shivam.

Nahiinnn...itna romantic to hain...shouted aashiya.

Shivam said no more...he just continued with their own song...

Abb...humaare team ki baari.'" Said shivam.

Tere saath mein ho subah
Tu hi sabse pehle ho haan
Raaton mein baatein teri
Naa neend ko de jagah

Tere paas harpal rahun
Yahi aarzu hai meri
Saanson mein teri mehek
Ho haathon mein haath tera
Mere seene ki dhadkan hai tu bann gaya
Mahiya mere maahi
Jaaniya dil jaani..
Mahiya mere maahi jaaniya dil jaani

Kina sonaa tu sonaa tu haan.

all the girls in the bus were mesmerized with his husky voice...risha kept looking at kabir dreamily...while kabir and nisha were lost in each other.

so , team B again...!!" said shivam looking furiously at nibir who were lost in each other.when suddenly, aashiya sang looking at shivam, for a moment he was lost in her voice, but he came out of that as soon as possible, rubbishing all his thoughts.

Tere haath mein,

Mera haath ho,

Saari jannatein, tere saath ho,

Tu jo paas hain,

Phir kya ye jahaan,

Tere pyaar mein ho jaaun fanaa.

This time without saying, the team A started with their song,..kabir sang again,

Tu hi tu har jagah, aaj kal kyun hai
Tu hi tu har jagah, aaj kal kyun hain

Raaste har dafaa, sirf tera pataa
Mujhse pooche bhala kyun hai
Naa main apna raha, naa kisi aur ka
Aisa mere Khuda kyun hain

O.. o.. o..

Kabir sang this song and nisha was shocked, she blushed, and kabir noticed that, he kept singing the song , nisha started recalling their day's moments. Nisha looked into kabir's eyes with love...she smiled seeing him sing that again...kabir was singing this song intentionally to see her blushing face,nisha turned her face the other way, to hide herself from the continuous gaze of kabir on her.

Team B now..."shouted the team A, the B team was baffled as to what to sing next. They kept scratching their heads thinking about their next song...

Yaar mekoo koyi romantic song yaad hi nahi aaraha... abee koyi to sochoo...kuch to sochoo...aashiya...sissy...kuch to soch.." rohan blurted out.

Nishaa too didn't sing as she was so lost remembering those moments...kabir looked at nisha and giggled.

Kyun madam...??meri awaaz sunkee gaana bhul gayi...?? Said kabir trying to break her trance.nisha started singing as her trance broke, without anyone saying anything.

Kehtee hain khuda ne iss,

Jahaan mein sabhi keliye,

Kisi na kisiko hain,

Banaya har kisi keliye,

Tera milna hain uss,

Rabb ka ishaara maanu,

Mujhko banaaya,

Tere jaise hi kisi keliye,

Kuch to hain tujhsee raabtaa,

Kuch to hain tujhsee raabtaa..

Kaise hum jaane hume kya pataa...

Kuch to hain tujhse raabta..

Tu humsafar hain..

Phir kya fikar hain..

Jeene ki wajah yahin hain,

Marna isi keliye.

She sang this song drown completely in kabir's deep hazel brown eyes. she did not look anywhere else , everyone was so confused with the sign language going on between nisha and kabir, shivam thought of breaking their trance , as he was feeling irked when nisha looked at someone else like that, shivam intentionally threw the ball in his hand, at nisha, that is when nisha looked at him and stopped singing.

w..w..o sorry sorry haath se slip ho gaya...really sorry nisha..!" said shivam showing his fake guilt.

So...guys...last song ab tumhaari taraf se...!! tick tick 1...tick tick 2...tick tick 3...

Kabhi jo baadal barsee...

Main dekhu tujhe aankhen bharkee..

Tu lage mujhe pehli bearish...ki dua...

(as kabir started singing, it started raining heavily once again)

Tere pehlu mein rehlu...

Main khudko paagal kehluu...

Tu ghum de ya khushiya...sehluu...

oo...saathiyaaa...

as kabir stopped singing,ravish spoke in between, students...lagta hain aage baarish ki wajah se bohot gadhdhe ban gayee hain...to zara dhyaan se baithnaa..."

he was right...in the further road there were a lot of pits, which formed due to the heavy rain.

Bas, half an hour ki aur journey hain n then we will reach there...you people can rest till then, bohot mazaa karliyaa tumlogon ne..!!"said ravish.

It was raining heavily outside, all of them closed their eyes and rested for a while...when some disturbances in the movement of the bus woke them up, the bus was going at a high speed , as well as rashly,

Someone from their class shouted,

"aree...driver bhaiyya ye bus kaise chala rahee hoo...dhyaan se chalaoo warnaa kahin thoknaadoo...!!"

Ravish spoke out too,

"haan...driver ye bus kaise chala rahe ho tum...??!!"

The driver replied,

Sahab jii...bus ke breaks fail ho gayee hain...aur baarish ki wajah se bohot phislan ho rahii hain...aap log chinta mat kijiyee...main kuch karta hun...!!"

There was chaos in the bus hearing the term "breaks failed", all of them started panicking,

"areee ooo bhaiyyya...trip keliye niklee thee...upar phnchaogee kya...??, shouted someone.

Kabir and nishaa panicked seeing the situation, nisha held his hand tightly, but no one noticed that, kabir intertwined his fingers with hers , and assured that everything will be alright! Nisha smiled. Even she doesn't know when she became like this, but she was completely dependent on kabir now . she just couldn't imagine to be without him.

Nothing will happen...you are with me...safe!" whispered kabir.

Nisha blinked her eyes in contentment hearing to his soothing assurance.

The driver was still not able to control the bus...the bus was moving in its own way...waving all around the road...almost three times, about to hit the trees beside...the students started praying for their safety.

Mujhe nahi marnaa ...itni jaldii...abhi to main sirf 23 years, 11 months aur 10 days ki hun...itni jaldi mujhe nahi marnaa...god save me please...!!" cried risha.

Rishaa...for god's sake...don't panic like that...kuch nahi honee waala humee...just stop crying like a kid..!!" said shivam.

Sir...ye bus rukk nahi rahi hain...bus ko kahin thok ke hi rokna padegaa...!!"shouted the driver.

Yee kya bol rahe ho tum..??agar kisiko chot lag gayi to...??"shouted back ravish.

Sir...agar bus aise hi chalti rahi to bada khatraa ho sakta hain...kyunki aage khaai hain...yahan par rokna hi achcha hogaa...!" said the driver.

Students...students...be calm...aur meri baat suniyee dhyaan see...!! Guys...aaplogon ko dhyaan se baithna hogaa kyuinki ...driver bus ko rokne ki koshish karegaa...don't panic...kuch bhi nahi hoga..!!" said ravish.

After hearing which the students started shouting again..

Sir...lekin humee kuch hogaya too...??" said rohan.

Aap logon ko kuch nahi hogaa...I assure that...jaan nahi jaayegi aaplogon ki...now, stop creating fuss like a nursery kid...even they behave well than you people..agar aap log behave nahi karenge..i'll directly throw you out of the bus, phir jo chaahe wo karna!" shouted ravish at the students.

The students became a little calm after ravish's warning, the driver twisted the steering of the bus in a way that it saves itself from the deep pits. The driver pulled the bus in a lower gear ...he turned the bus towards..the junglee...so that he does not hit any vehicle. He raised the speed and hit the bus to the tree infront, the glass windows of the bus broke due to the effect, injuring people in the bus.nisha was about to hit her head to the iron handle of her front seat, but was saved as kabir kept his hand in between to save her, instead kabir got hurt as the iron handle of his seat broke and attacked him directly in his ribs...kabir winced in pain, but it did not create any injury, immediately one of the heavy baggage placed in the cabinet above, fell on nisha, making her head injured, the same was the situation with the other students too...some were injured heavily while some were with less injuries. The bus stayed isolated there hanging between the road and the jungle, in a brutal condition.

TO know more, Be tuned in to those moments with you , keep giving your likes and comments! sorry for a shocking and worst update!😉

Edited by sam_premc - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yeh romantic se tragic kaise ban gaya 😲
Bubu continue soon please I will die of suspense nahi toh😒
Edited by Niya_789 - 9 years ago

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