NiBir SS || Anokha Safar ||(Chp 6-pg 20)*24/4*COMPLETED - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello everyone back with an update of this story enjoy reading it and please ignore the mistakes as I have not proof read it as always 😆


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Chapter 2

Nisha was standing there infront of the mirror trying to tie the dori of her dress when she felt someone's presence in the room... she looked in the mirror to see the person and as soon as she saw the person her hands stopped moving she stood there getting lost in the eyes of that person..

Kabir's state was no different though he was walking he was not in his senses .. He was lost in Nisha...

Both of them kept looking at eachother through the mirror and none of them realised when they were standing next to eachother...

Kabir's hand involuntarily went on Nisha's hand and he caught the dori making Nisha leave it...

Nisha closed her eyes on his touch while Kabir continued looking at her and tying the dori.. He pulled the string tightly making Nisha step backwards .. Nisha could feel his breath on the back of her neck.. Kabir was making her loose her senses...

Once he tied the knot Kabir wrapped his arms around Nisha's waist and rested his chin on her shoulder...

"Katal karne ka iraada hai kya ?"

He asked in a low husky voice making Nisha blush harder...

"Kabir kya kar raha hai chod .. dekh darwaza khula hai koi dekh lega toh.." Nisha said trying to free herself from his hold...

"Toh kya ? Apni mangeetar ke saath romance kar raha hun.. " Kabir replied making her turn in his arms and tightening his hold on her...

Nisha wrapped her arms around his neck...

"Aur kisi ke saath tu flirt kar bhi nahi sakta ..."

She smirked and Kabir looked at her mischievously asked..

"Kyun.. J feel karti hai ..?"

Nisha hit his arm slightly and replied...

"Haan.. aur yeh mera haq banta hai..."

She gave him a proud smile

"Oho.. haq and all haan.. I like it Wifey.."

He winked at her..

"Humari shadi nahi hui hai abhi tak... 5 din baaki hai abhi..."

She teased him and sat on the bed freeing herself from his hold...

"Sirf 4 din baki hai.. aaj ka din main count nahi karta ..."

Kabir cribbed and came to her , he helped her wear the earnings...

"Kabir... itna kyun saad raha hai.. aaj humari sagai hai.. " Nisha said making him crib more..

"Yaar Nisha.. 5 saal pehle hi sagai kar chukka hun tujh se.. seedha shaadi nahi kar sakte the kya...?"

He sat on the bed while cribbing ...

"Awww... Kabir vo bhi koi sagai thi kya.. ? Na family na koi riti-rivaj..."

"Whatever.. aaj kya special hoga ? Hum sirf rings exchange karenge aur kya ..."

He folded his arms across his chest and made a whatever' face making Nisha giggle at his expressions...

"Aaj ka din special hai Kabir.. aaj hum saamne ek dusre ko ring pehnaneynge..."

Kabir looked at her and then again looked at the other side ...

"Kabir kya hua tujhe kyun itna sadu sa behave kar raha hai ..?"

Nisha was confused at his behaviour...

Yaar Nisha mujhe tujh se shaadi karni hai.. "

"Haan toh hum 5 dino main shaadi kar rahe hai na..."

"Excatly.. 5 din aur.. Nisha ek toh main already 5 saal wait kar chukka hun.. abh aur 5 din.. ?"

Nisha was not surprised to know the reason of his behaviour.. she knew how impatient he was for the marriage but she knew that first they had to settle in their careers only then they could marry eachother...

She placed a hand on his shoulder and said..

"Kabir.. dekh I know ki maine tujhe bohut wait karvaya but mere liye apna career banana zyada zaroori tha...Main..'

Before she could complete Kabir spoke..

"Ek second Nisha.. tune mujhe wait nahi karvaya.. career banana mere liye bhi utna hi important tah.. toh tu please khud ko blame mat kar.."

Nisha smiled at him but then if he knew everything why was he cribbing...

"Toh pir tu saad kyun raha hai subah se ?"

"Yaar main issliye saad raha hun ki mujhe 5 din aur wait karna padega.."

"Haan toh theek hai na.. sirf 5 din ki baat hai..."

Kabir got up and started marching in the room while explaining her..

"Dekh Nisha.. aaj sagai hai.. purso mehendi uske baad sangeet phir usske agle din haldi aur uske baad shaadi ... aur Maa ne mujhe bataya ki hum sangeet ke baad mil nahi sakte shadi tak...Main tujhe bina dekhe 3 din kaise rahunga Nisha... "

Nisha facepalmed hearing this..

"Tu iss baat ke liye itna saad raha hai...?"

Kabir nodded his head positively...

"Kabir .. phone naam ki ek cheez invent hui hai jispe hum baat kar sakte hai..."

"Nisha main dekhne ki baat kar raha hun baat karne ki nahi.."

He came and sat on the bed ...and Nisha kept looking at him...

"Chod koi na koi jugaad kar hi lunga main.." he said in a mischievous tone

Nisha nodded her head and all of a sudden she realised something..

"Kabir tu andar kaise aaya..? Kisi ne tujhe roka nahi..?"

Kabir didn't say anything and just pointed towards the balcony making her eyes grow wide in shock...

"Kabir tu pagal hai.. tu gir jata ya tujhe lag jati toh ?"

Nisha panicked hearing that he had climbed the pipe and came through the balcony...

"Nisha relax.. tujhe pata hai na.. mujh se dawaze se nahi aaya jata... " Kabir replied calmly..

"Tu kabhi nahi sudhrega na...?"

"Never"He replied and both of the laughed...

Chal abh main jata hun.. Maa wait kar rahi hogi.."

Sayig so he got up and started walking towards the balcony but he came back and kissed her cheeks before leaving...

Nisha smiled at him and stood in the balcony until he got down safely and climbed the pipe of his own balcony ...

Sicne they were neighbours and their rooms were exactly opposite to eachother Kabir always used the balcony pipes to enter Nisha's room and his own room when he went back home.. This was happening since past 5 years but no had idea about this.. it was Nisha and Kabir's small secret..

Nisha was standing in the balcony when Dolly came there calling her..

"My Gods Nishu.. tu kitni khubsoorat lag rahi hai..."

Dolly said while hugging Nisha..

"Thanks Dolly di.."

"Nishu chale muhraat ka time ho gaya hai..."

Nisha nodded her head and went with her.. they reached the venue and found that Kabir and his mom had already reached there and also the media had reached thee to cover their engagement ceremony..

After all it was Jaipur's best choreographer and the only sharpest shooter's engagement today

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I know its a Ghatiya udpdate still I am Waiting for your likes and comments😆😆


Edited by Niya_789 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
res🤣

UNRES😆

My FIRST COMMENT On The SS which I wanted to be written & I m Unres ng My both comments here as It wl gave me more happiness...😳(U knw the reason Y I didnt unres ed on pg 1😉)

So Sabse Pehle Mammaa A BIG SORRY 4 Late comments😳

Ab Yeh Jhappiss 4 Writing This SS 4 ME🤗🤗🤗

Excellent TITLE...!!!!!!!!!☺️ I said abt this B4😳 & thanks 4 not changing it❤️

Mujhe iska 10 Chapters hi chahiyeee😈 aur zyada mile toh I wl be Double Happy

Read Both parts in a row...😛

Ab Commentss..😳

Chap 1:😳

Cutee & Sweet tha yeh part☺️

I loved it Mammaa😃

NiBir ki Nok-jhok se start huyiii 😉

Phir Sagayi kar li donom ne Akele Akele☺️

Kabira ka K Dialog of Flirting sabke saamne..☺️ Nishu's Blashhh☺️

Ab Phir se Sagayiii☺️ vo bhi 5 saal baad...!!!!!😲☺️

👏👏👏

Chap 2:😳

Hayeee Hayee Mamaaa☺️

NiBir Dori Scenee...☺️

Kabira Kinna Imaptient hai...😲☺️

Bechare ne 5 saal intezaar kia ab 5 din raha nahi jaathaaa🤣

I m loving it Mammmaaa☺️

Kinnaaa Pyaara hai na yeh Engagement to Marriage tak ka Safar...!!!!!☺️ Impatient wali..☺️

5 saal se Kabira Pipe chad raha hai Nishu se milne ke waste?😲 Awwieee☺️☺️

Waiting 4 K kabira 4 his K panti to meet his Nishu after sangeet...☺️

Tooo Much Cutiness...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!☺️☺️☺️

KT ☯️ 4 NiBir☺️

The Best Choreographer + Best Shooter ke Second Engagement ke Liye Saru si Waiting☺️

Thanks 4 PM😳

Sorry 4 Late comments☺️

Mammaa Its not a GHATIYA UPDATE😡 aaj bol dia aaage bola toh Saru se bura koi nahi hogaa😈

Do write More...🤗 Q ki DMM😳☺️


Edited by SaruSenan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
First you unres your comment on chp 1 tab tak I won't update 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Niya_789

First you unres your comment on chp 1 tab tak I won't update 😆



Then U waittt 4 my UNRES jo kab aayega I dont knw🤣🤣🤣 I m just making LIST OF UNRES by reading 45+ PMsss🤣 lemme finish my list & Then Wl go 4 UNRES mission🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: SaruSenan



Then U waittt 4 my UNRES jo kab aayega I dont knw🤣🤣🤣 I m just making LIST OF UNRES by reading 45+ PMsss🤣 lemme finish my list & Then Wl go 4 UNRES mission🤣

Chodo then I am updating it now only 😆
Add another one to you list 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Niya_789

Chodo then I am updating it now only 😆
Add another one to you list 😆



😆 Nice idea🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
wow Nishu sharp shooter and Kabiraa choreographer👏
lovely updte niyu👍🏼'
5 ssal se pipe sechad kar milne aathe hai Nishu ko LOL🤣
loved that dori scene☺️

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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Amazing update niya di 👍🏼
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
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superb update mamma👍🏼

Nisha was standing there infront of
the mirror trying to tie the dori of
her dress when she felt someone's
presence in the room... she looked
in the mirror to see the person and
as soon as she saw the person her
hands stopped moving she stood
there getting lost in the eyes of that
person..
Kabir's state was no different though
he was walking he was not in his
senses .. He was lost in Nisha...
Both of them kept looking at
eachother through the mirror and
none of them realised when they
were standing next to eachother..


@blue wat an amazing romantic starting of dis update...awwee

uske baad blush blush blush😳

iraada kya h tera...apni mangetar k sath romace krra hu🤣

nishu j haq h mera

kabira shadi krne k liye kinna utawla ho ra 🤣🤣

"Dekh Nisha.. aaj sagai hai.. purso
mehendi uske baad sangeet phir
usske agle din haldi aur uske baad
shaadi ... aur Maa ne mujhe bataya
ki hum sangeet ke baad mil nahi
sakte shadi tak...Main tujhe bina
dekhe 3 din kaise rahunga Nisha... "
Nisha facepalmed hearing this..
"Tu iss baat ke liye itna saad raha
hai...?"
Kabir nodded his head positively...


@pink totally loved dis part❤️ awww...my kabira

pipe wala secret nibir ka😳 🤣

bst choreographer n sharpest shooter ki engagement❤️

update nxt part soon mumma😉
Edited by itznimi003 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Olit is not at all ghatia dont say dat nibir k bare me kuch bhi story ho cn nevr. Ghatia...tlking abt update poor kabir 5 more days wait krna hoga ehhh evn i m getting impatient
Thnks for pm nd keep updating

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