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Posted: 9 years ago

here's the nxt update this one is specially dedicated to anu

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waiting all ur likes and coments

pheli baar dance moves likhe hain bata dena kaise hain

Chapter 4

"Kabir uth na kabir uth jaldi kar dar ho jaegi hume" kriti hissed

"Sone dena mujhe" kabir said sleepily

"thik hai tu sota rahe aur teri Nisha kisi aur se sagai kar legi"said kriti sighing

Kabir hurriedly woke up

"accha accha thik hai abb ja reaxdy ho jaa warna venue mein time se nhi pachun paige"

"haan haan jar aha hun" kabir said and went to get freshen up

"nishu beta jaldi kar der ho jaegi" laxhmi called Nisha the hundredth time

"maa aai bas do min" Nisha called from her room

"kabse do min do min kar rhi hai jawla tu yeh pakad mein usse dekh ke aati hun"laxmi said handing jawla few bags

"Nisha itni der kyun lag rhi hai" laxmi said entering nisha's room

"arre yeh kya haal bana rakha hai room ka" laxmi said all horrified to see the mess in the room

"maa woh mujhe ear rings nhi mil rhi" Nisha said worriedly

"haan toh phir koi aur le lena" laxmi said

"nhi maa mujhe whi chahiye" Nisha answered

"accha aisa kya hai uss ear ring mein" laxmi questioned

"maa woh mujhe kabir ne diya tha aur kaha tha ki sagai pew hi pehnu iss liye mujhe whi chahiye" Nisha answered searching every corner of the room

Nisha bent to look under the bed and exclaimed happily "mill gaye"

She pulled it out and held it close to her heart with a beautiful smile on her face

Laxmi smiled seeing her daughter "ab chale waha ja kar tujhe taiyaar bhi hona hai"

"hain maa chalo" and they all sat in the car and headed towards the venue

In nisha's car

"didi bol na app kya pehenogi aaj" jawla asked

"han nishu tu pheli ladki hogi jiss ki maa ko hi yeh nhi pata ki us ski beti apni sagai mein kya pehenegi" laxmi said

"laxmi relax me aap sab ke liye suprise hai and agar bata dungi toh aap mana karoge" Nisha answered

"arre laxmi yeh suprise tumhari beti aur hone wale damad ne plan ki hai toh kuch accha hi hoga" ramesh said

"papa aap ko kaise pata ki kabir bhi mere sath hai" Nisha questioned

"tum dono koi kaam akele karte ho kabhi kya" ramesh answered

"papa aap bhi" Nisha said blushing

In kabir's car

"kabir hume kuch toh bataie yeh kaisa bachpana hai" vj said

" maa bach pana nhi suprise hai" kabir said all smiling and blushing

"kabir tu kitna blush kar raha hai" kriti teased him

Kabir frowned and said "tera sourav nhi aa raha toh mujhe taang karegi"

"woh sagai tak aajaega" kriti said blushing

"abb kyon blush kar raha hai" kabir said laughing

Nisha and her family reached the venue which was a big hall decorated with white and pink roses

"wow kitna sundar decoration hai"jawla exclaimed

"thanks sari meri aur kabir ki choice hai" Nisha said proudly

"haan haan decoration toh bahut acchi hai par tum dono kotaiyaar nhi hona kya"laxmi asked

"Haan chalo maa" Nisha jawla said together

They took the keys for their rooms and headed towards it.

After sometime kabir and his family too reached the venue.

"chalo jaldi karo warna hum late ho jaege"kabir said and hurried out of the car

"kabir aaj sirf sagai hai shadi tak tum kaise tum kaise raho ge" vj laughed seeing her son's excitement

"maa app yeh jaan lo ki aaj aapke beta ki mini shadi hai" kabir said all smiling

"mini shadi kabir tune kya plan kya hai" kriti enquired

"suprise hai yaar suprise" kabir answered while kriti frowned

They took their keys and headed towards their rooms

While going to his room kabir felt Nisha's presence near him and knocked a door

"kaun hai"Nisha called out

Kabir didn't replied and entered the room silently and locked it

Nisha was busy making her hair when she felt his presence near him and looked into the mirror only to find him standing and looking at her. Nisha blushed because of his stare while kabir smiled and signalled though his hands that she is looking beautiful. Kabir slowly walked upto her and hugged her from back resting his chin on her shoulder.

"jaan aaj tu killer lag rhi hai"

Nisha blushed

"par tu mere room mein kya kar raha hai and tujhe kisne bataya ki mein iss room mein hoon" Nisha questioned

Kabir turned her and pulled her closer by her waist "tere room mein aane ke liye mujhe reason nhi chahiye smjhi aur tu mere aas pas hoti hai yeh mujhe pata chal jata kisi ko batane ki koi zaroorat nhi hai mujhe" kabir said looking straight into her eyes

"itna pyaar karta hai mujhse ki meri presence feel kar leta hai"

"kyun tu nhi karti"

"karti hun" and buried her head in his chest embracing him in her arms kabir too did the same. They stood like this for some time

"kabir tujhe ready nhi hona kya"

"hona hai par tujhe chod ke jane ka maan nhi hai"

"par janna toh hoga na"

"Hain yaar" kabir said breaking the hug

"chal mein jake ready hota hun taki meri angel ka match toh lagu"

Nisha giggled and placed a peck on his cheeks and led him out of her room.

Kabir reached his room got freshened up and went downstairs

The party had already begin and a lot of people had gathered there after all it was the enagement of two popular celebraties.

As soon as kabir came down he was greeted by sourav

"aur saale shahab kaiso ho aap"

"bilkul thik hun jiju"

"haan bhi thik kaise nhi hoge aur aaj toh lag bhi kamal ke rahe ho"

(imagine kabir to be in the same suit as spa)

"thanks jiju"

"thanks mujhe nhi usse kaho jiss ke bheje se hai glow hai tumhare chahere pe waise woh ha kaha"

"woh ..." kabir stopped in the middle and was just staring in a particular direction sourav too followed his gaze and realised that he was staring at the love of his life Nisha was coming down the stairs

The lights got dimmed with only one focusing the angel in white(imagine her to be in the same dress as spa)

Kabir came towards her as she reached the end of the stairs and forwarded his hand towards her. She happily and blushingly took his hand and both they walked towards the stage Nisha climed the stairs of the stage while kabir followed her helping her manage her dress. Everyone was in awe of this couple as they reached the center of the stage.

Sourav took the mike and asked everyone to welcome the couple

They were welcomed with loud clapping.

Their respective families came and gave them the rings to be exchanged.

Vj asked kabir to make Nisha wear the ring.

"ek min mein abhi aaya" saying this kabir went down the stage and came back with the head wear which is worn by girls in Christian weddings(srry mujhe nhi pata ki usse kya bolte hain)

He climbed the stage and made Nisha wear the head gear while she smiled

"oh toh yeh tha suprise" jawla said

"kya baat hai kabir sagai ke naam pe Christian wedding not bad" kriti teased

"bola tha na aaj meri mini wedding hai" kabir said and then the ring exchange ceremony started

Kabir opened his box and took out the ring which had NK craved in it such that it looked one and made Nisha wear it while doing so he kneeled down on his knees and after making her wear the ring kissed her hand.

Now Nisha took the ring out from the box it also hab the same design. She made kabir wear the ring while kabir kept looking at her with the brightest smile on his face

Kabir took Nisha for a hug and kissed her foehead hile Nisha too hugged kabir

Both the families were very happy for these two love birds.

The party was in full swing everyone was enjoying but accept one person that was kabir because he was not able to be with his Nisha as everynow and then someone will come and take her away to meet some guests and then an idea struck him

He went to sourav and whispered something in his hears sourav showed a thumbs up and went

After few min sourav was on the mike requesting everyone to enjoy the star couple on the dance floor for a couple dance as soon as the announcement was made kabir took Nisha to the dance floor

"kabir yeh sab kya hai kaha le jaa raha hai mujhe" Nisha hissed as kabir pulled her towards the dance floor

"dance floor pe aur kaha"

"mujhe nhi karna koi dance"

"aab toh humdance floor pe hain sab hume dekh rahe hain abb tum nhi jaa sakti madam"

"kabir mein jaa rhi hun"

Nisha turned to go but stopped when she heard the music

Khwaab hai tu, neend hoon main, dono milehe, raat banein (Nisha slowly turned and fouc kabir walking towards her lip sync the lines)


Roz yahi, maangu dua, teri meri, baat banein, baat banein (kabir made gestures with his hands mating the words, Nisha smiled and walked towards him)

(Instrument & Vocal Break) (both walked towards each other and kabir forwarded his hand, Nisha held his hand)

Main rang sharbaton ka, tu meethe ghaat ka paani
Main rang sharbaton ka, tu meethe ghaat ka paani

(kabir pulled Nisha towards him she landed on her chest kabir snaked his hands around her waist and Nisha's hand on kabir's shoulder and they swayed to the rhythm)

Mujhe khud mein ghol de toh, mere yaar baat ban jaani

Rang sharbaton ka, tu meethe ghaat ka paani
Main rang sharbaton ka, tu meethe ghaat ka paani

Mujhe khud mein ghol de toh, mere yaar baat ban jaani
Rang sharbaton ka, tu meethe ghaat ka paani
Main rang sharbaton ka, tu meethe ghaat ka paani
(kabir twirled Nisha and pulled her closer he made her bent down and again made her stand straight)

O yaara tujhe pyaar mein, battiyan kya samjhawan
Jaagke ratiyaan roz bitawaan, isse aage ab main kya kahun

O yaara tujhe boldi aakhiyaan, sadke jawaan
Maang le pakiyaan aaj duawaan, isse aage ab main kya kahun
(Nisha did circling around kabir)

(Instrumental Break)

Maine toh dheere se, neendon ke dhaage se,
Bandha hai khwaab ko tere, main na jahaan chahoon,
Na aasmaan chahoon, aaja hisse mein tu mere
(Nisha hugged kabir from behind and they swayed to the rhythm)

Tu dhang chahaton ka, main jaise koi naadani
Tu dhang chahaton ka, main jaise koi naadani
(kabir turned and caressed her face)

Mujhe khud se jod de toh, mere yaar baat ban jaani
Rang sharbaton ka, tu meethe ghaat ka paani
Main rang sharbaton ka, tu meethe ghaat ka paani
(kabir pushed Nisha apart and she ran up to him he picked her up and Nisha raised her arms and kabir took slow circles at his place)

(Instrumental Break)

Tere khayalon se, tere khayalon tak,
Mera toh hai aana jaana

Mera toh jo bhi hai, tu hi tha tu hi hai,
Baaki jahaan hai begana
(slowly slowly kabir put Nisha down Nisha caresses his face she interwinds her fingers with his and raises her hand making him too raise his she turns and puts kabir's hand on her waist and her on his face)

Tum ek musafir ho, main koi raah anjaani
Tum ek musafir ho, main koi raah anjaani
Mann chaah mod de toh, mere yaar baat ban jaa
ni (kabir sways to the music and slowly make her face him)

Rang sharbaton ka, tu meethe ghaat ka paani
Main rang sharbaton ka, tu meethe ghaat ka paani
(Nisha turns wraps her arms around his neck and kabir's hands around her waist and both lost in each others eye)

Mujhe khud mein ghol de toh, mere yaar baat ban jaani
Rang sharbaton ka, tu meethe ghaat ka paani

O yaara tujhe pyaar mein, battiyan kya samjhawan
Jaagke ratiyaan roz bitawaan, isse aage ab main kya kahun

O yaara tujhe boldi aakhiyaan, sadke jawaan
Maang le pakiyaan aaj duawaan, isse aage ab main kya kahun
(both are lost in each other with sweet smiles lingering on their faces making it glow brighter than the stars)



the huge clap from people bring them out of their trance and they thanks everyone and get off the dance floor.

The party goes in full swing and after all the guest and media left both the families sit together for dinner.

Kabir is sits on a chair and keeps his hand on the one next to his preserving it for Nisha . he is searching for her when someone sits on his hand

"aaah kaun hai" kabir hissed in pain . it was saurav

"arre kabir hath hata na yaar"

"hain hainhata raha hun" now kabir decides to keep the chair towards his left safe for Nisha but before he could do so jawla comes and sits their, kabir face palms himself and sees that Nisha is coming she sits on a chair and the chair next to her is empty. Kabir runs to grab it but kriti sits there.

"kriti uth yaha se yeh meri sit hai"

"arre mein nhi hat rhi kahi aur baith ja"

"kriti dekh sourav ke bagal wali sit khali hai waha jaa kar baith na"

"haan thik hai"

Kriti gets up from the sit and kabir quickly sits on it and sighs a relief. Nisha giggles and pulls his cheeks.

They both talk and eat actualy feed each other and the others bless these two lovers.

Edited by mishrialways - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
cho cute update ritzi... luved it ❤️
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Lovely update ❤️
So cute
Loved it ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
So nice superb...nd long also...loved it... aese lmbe lmbe update diaa karo acha lgta h
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awww... it was such a cute update. NIBIR ki sagai ho gayi. Oopssh... sorry not sagai, mini shaadi. Dance seq was fab. N at last the dining table scene was funny. Aise lambe updates bade achhe lagte hai. Thanx for the pm & update nxt part soon!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
omg ritika it was so so so so so cute
kabira nishu se kitna pyaar karta h...awww
loved each n every part of this chapter
cutie pie chapter tha yeh 😳
jaldi jaldi update karna
thank you for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update...
Mini Wedding...
The dance part was also very good... 😳
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update
Their engagement
Their dance
All were beautifully written
Small moments of them in between were very cute
Loved it
Thnks fr d pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
this is so cute riti
mini shadiluved d dance sequence
update nxt part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
So cute loved it 👏👏

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