nibir ss We are written in stars ch 5 pg 21 - Page 14

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ammu4u

this is so cute riti

mini shadiluved d dance sequence
update nxt part soon

thanks ammu
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Samaira81

So cute loved it 👏👏

thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: star.angel

Omg it was awesome 😳

It was lovely 😳
It was superb 😳
I just enjoyed it too much 😳
Nibir ki engagement 😊
Family ko surprise 😃
And room scene was ☺️
Eng+mirrage 😳
Soon cute
And then dance was awesome 👍🏼😳
Poor kabira kinna mehmat karna pads nidhu k lia 😆
But finally baith he gaya 😉
And that cheek pulling 😳
So cute yaar
Thanks for pm 😳
Update soon

thanks star
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: naucfan

Awesome n thnx ritzi fr dedicating it fr me luved it to the core n luv u dear...

thanks anu
luv u too
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: itznimi003

awsm update ritssy😊

kabir aalsi😉

awweee nishu wo earings search krri😊

nibir ne surprise rakha h apna aatire❤️

kabir feels nisha's presence

der mini wedding

der dance❤️

finally atlast kabir ko nisha k sath time spend krna ka chance mil hi gya😊

beautifully written

thanks nimissy
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry for super duper late comment maine uss time padha tha phir mai bhul gaya sorry again
Awesome update ritika 👏
Nibir dance 😃
Update soon


P.s- Update raabta first please 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sujoyricky

Sorry for super duper late comment maine uss time padha tha phir mai bhul gaya sorry again
Awesome update ritika 👏
Nibir dance 😃
Update soon


P.s- Update raabta first please 😃

thanks dont wrry
i will be updating raabta most probably tom
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Posted: 9 years ago
loved it...wah kya idea hai...
sagai ke naam pe christian wedding...
bht cute tha😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: angelanju

loved it...wah kya idea hai...

sagai ke naam pe christian wedding...
bht cute tha😳



hehe look who commented
anju hw r u
tu hamesha aise chupke se aati hai re
miss u a lot
be back soon
thanks fr commenting
love u
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Posted: 9 years ago
CH 5

Nisha was resting in her room tried from all the engagement proceedings. She was just about to drift to sleep when her phone beeped, she took her phone saw it was a message from kabir asking her to come to the terrace and that too barefoot. Nisha was too tired to even move a leg she replied the same to kabir but kabir being kabir blackmailed all to come if she loves him so finally she gave up as she knew he will not let her to go slepp until she comes to the terrace.

Nisha reached the terrace half asleep, rubbing her eyes to remove the sleep from her eyes and see clearly. She opened the terrace door only to find the terrace completely dark.

Nisha (monologue) what the hell where is kabir he called me and he is not only here.

Nisha stepped a little forward and felt something soft beneath her feet. She bend and touched the floor only to find it beng totally covered with petals. She took few in hand and called kabir.

"kabir where are u"

Just as she called him lights came up laminating the entire terrace. Nisha gasped see the entire terrace decored soo beautifully. The railing were decorated with lights of varied colours and led the path still the centre of the terrace where she could see a huge heart made up of roses she walked towards it, she as walked the carpet of roeses tickled her feet and smile on her face was everlasting.

Finally reaching the center she looked at the heart and a dreamy smile appeared on her lips and eyes dualed with unshed tears, just then roses petals started falling on her, she was elated so much that she regretted arguing with him for not coming to the terrace. She spread her arms wide and closed her eyes revolving in small circles, enjoying the feeling on petals on her. She felt a arm across her waist and a nose inhaled a similar smell, her smile grew wider as she leaned over his chest and kept swaying along with him. Once the petals stopped falling she opened her eyes to look at her world giving her his signature million dollar smile which always takes her breath away. She leaned in and kissed the tip of his nose and wishpered in his ears "i loved it kabir and love you even more for this"

He hugged her even more closer .

"i am happy u liked it my love"

"na not like , i loved it"

"ok"

Kabir rubbed his nose with hers.

"but yeh sab kis liye kabir" asked Nisha getting out of the hug

"tu bhul gyi, i didn't expected that from u" kabir acted hurt

Nisha gave him a smack on his arm

"shut up and let me, do ur nautanki later"

"ok so it happened that last year on the same date i happened to announce my unconditional love for u to the entire world, remembered something" asked kabir knocking her head

"oh ya how can i forget that day when you announced your love for me and that too in front of the entire unit, so shameless you are" said Nisha as she turned red remembering the day

"arre what shameless i loved you so proposed you,abb sabke samne nhi karta toh sabko pata kaise chalta kit u meri hai aur sirf meri hai" kabir pulled her closer and pecked her lips, while Nisha smiled and blushed at the same time.

"ok now lets cut the day for our first proposal anniversary" declared kabir and he started leading her to the darker portion of the terrace. As the walked lights kept coming up. Nisha was beyond happy seeing the efforts kabir had put to make it special for them. She kissed his cheek making him chuckle.

He lead her towards a table set at the furthest corner on the terrace which had a chocolate cake on it. They both cut the cake together and were about to feed each other when kabir held his hand back and tasted it first from nisha's hand, after eating it completely he moved made her eat saying "it's eatable"

"kabir you made it" Nisha conclude Nisha

Kabir scratched the back of neck and nodded his head in a yes.

"really"

"ya"

"but when"

"after the function got over"

"oh god kabir you.." Nisha was speechless

"what i know its not very good but i promise i will make a better one on our first date anniversary"

"kabir how many anniversaries will we be celebrating" asked a shocked Nisha

"oh see proposal anniversary, then first date anniversary, first kiss anniversary, the day our familes agreed then even our first dance together you remember" Nisha nodded "and then...ya ofcouse our engagement and wedding" completed kabir

"that's all" asked a confused Nisha

"ya for now that's all" said a excited kabir

Nisha was still looking at him with eyes wide open

"what" asked kabir

"honestly i don't remember those dates" said Nisha sighing and feeling guilty "sorry kabir"

"jaanu its ok, main hoon na i will remember all the dates for u"

"but still" said Nisha as she was upset

"offo yaar nishu bola na doesn't matter accha bata u remember these days right"

"hmm"

"toh date zarrori nhi hai now plz smile smile smile" said kabir as he started tickling her

"ok ok par stop plz" said Nisha giggling as she hugged kabir to make him stop tickling her

"may i have the pleasure of dancing with you" said kabir after sometime.

Nisha noddd still being in his embrace.

Kabir played a song from his phone.

Hua hai aaj pehli baar
Jo aise muskuraya hoon
Tumhe dekha toh jaana ye
Ke kyun duniya mein aaya hoon
( kabir made Nisha turn in his embrace and back hugged her swaying with the music)

Ye jaan lekar ke jaa meri
Tumhe jeene main aaya hoon
Main tumse ishq karne ki
Ijaazat Rab se laaya hoon
(kabir made Nisha turn rounds holding his finger and pulled her close to him holding her waist)

Zameen se aasmaan tak hum
Dhoondh aaye jahaan saara
Banaa paaya nahi ab tak
Khuda tumse koi pyaara
(kabir stepped backwards as he spread his arms indiacting the entire world)

Baaton mein teri hain badmashiyan
Sab bewajah ki hain taarifiyaan
( Nisha walked towards kabir and back hugged him as he told held her hands which were on his shoulders)

Main likh doon aasmaan par ye
Ke padh lega jahaan saara
Huaa na hoga ab koi
Yahan hum do sa dobara
(kabir pulled Nisha in front and raised her chin towards the sky making her look at the sky where the fire crackers busted stating "I LOVE U")

Main duniya bhar ki taarifein
Tere sajde mein laaya hoon
Main tumse ishq karne ki
Ijaazat Rab se laaya hoon
(Nisha gaped in aww as kabir closed her mouth and kissed her cheek)

Tu hai jo rubaru mere
Bada mehfooz rehta hoon
Tere milne ka shukrana
Khuda se roz karta hoon
(kabir pulled Nisha close and kept his hands on her waist as she kept hers on his shoulder as they kept swayng with the music )

Nisha kabir kept lying in each others arm as they remembered all their sweet moments. Only when the first ray of sunlight came they realized its morning, both of them looked at each other surprised and then brust out laughing and finally went down hand in hand. Kabir left Nisha near at her room and she had to push him out of the room,sighing kabir too retired to his room.

Nisha was lying on her bed when again her phone beeped again she happily opened it. It was from kabir

Kabir: good night sweet heart

Nisha: sweet dreams

Kabir:oh toh u are coming in my dreams

Nisha: hain kya??

Kabir:arree meri dreams tere aanee se hi sweet hongi na

Nisha: ahh kabir

Kabir:haha good night

Nisha :hmm


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roop niha plz dont kill me for updating it first
i will be updating the other two too soon😆



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