NiBir OS: Treasure (Complete..:)...) - Page 5

Originally posted by: do0dleR

Saaru, tumhari UNRES ki list mein is comment ka number kab aayga yaar??...😡🤣🤣

Maine socha tu Offline hai isliye thodi der tak RES hi rakhu...🤣 Aila par Tu toh aaj tapkegi yeh maine sapne bhi nahi socha tha😲😆🤣🤣🤣 Wait karo.. jab padhungi tab UNRES bhi hoga tereko PM bhi aayegi...😈🤣

Originally posted by: do0dleR

Thank you Neha...😳😳

Sorry, maine abhi tak tumhari story pe comment nahi kiya... maine abhi tak pura padha nahi h...pura padh k comment karungi...😊

OK dear... take ur time..
I'll b waiting...

Originally posted by: SaruSenan

Maine socha tu Offline hai isliye thodi der tak RES hi rakhu...🤣 Aila par Tu toh aaj tapkegi yeh maine sapne bhi nahi socha tha🤣 Wait karo.. jab padhungi tab UNRES bhi hoga tereko PM bhi aayegi...😈🤣

Originally posted by: do0dleR

Tujhe bhi STML ho gaya.!...😲.🤣🤣🤣

I said last time ki mai next sunday pe MiShRi post pe comment karne aaungi...🤣🤣

Koi baat nhi dear take your time...😉😆😆

STML mujhe nahi M ko hua hai.. (Refer my Ghajini STML mode dedicated to M🤣)

Maine socha tune yuhi mere mann behlane ke liye bola hogaa Lissy🤣🤣🤣

Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786

OK dear... take ur time..
I'll b waiting...

Originally posted by: SaruSenan

STML mujhe nahi M ko hua hai.. (Refer my Ghajini STML mode dedicated to M🤣)

Maine socha tune yuhi mere mann behlane ke liye bola hogaa Lissy🤣🤣🤣

Originally posted by: SaruSenan

Lissy🤗 Main aa gayi apne comments dene..😆🤣

Tune aaj mere posts par comments dia nah toh socha tujhe RG de du apne comments dekar😈

Toh Tune iss OS ki Post Mortum (PM) karke isse 4 hissom main baat lia hai nah toh Main bhi apni comments 4 Parts main hi dungi...😈Shackedd nah??😲 Isliye I always say EXPECT UNEXPECTED frm SARU🤣

Title se shuru karthi hu😈 First time jab maine padha yeh title den I felt Y u chose this one den after reading first two updates mujhe patha chal gaya ki Nishu is Kabir's TREASURE jisse voh 13 saal se dhoond raha hai...😳 So👏 claps 4 U 4 selecting such a PERFECT title 4 ur OS👍🏼

AB baath karthi hu Updates ki..😉(Lissy I missed U yaar bcz U r the writer who always make PM of NiBir stories..😆🤣 aur bhi bahut saare hai lekin tujh jaisa PM koi nahi kartha 🤣🤣🤣)

Part (a):😳

Honestly bolu mujhe shuru main kuch samaj nahi aaya... I was feeling weired..😕 but jab maine usse do teen baar padha den i realise Wat U want to convey..😃 & Sach bolu toh I really loved the way u said Kabir's state of mind thru Beach Scenario...👏👏👏 Main Daffar thi nah jo pehle samaj nahi payi...🤣🤣🤣

VJ -Little Kabir Convo... Aww... Little Kabir & His cute innocent questionss soo sweett😳

Part (b):

Loved the way U described How Kabir misses his childhood friend Nishu👏👏👏

Their Cute Nok-Jhoks, their fights, their unsaid feelings abt eachother all were excellently presented...👏👏👏

Sometimes he feels like a snail without a shell. It is remarkable how the soft oysters turn their enemy into a gem with their nacre. Or perhaps, the enemy cultures them to develop harder shells and more lustrous shine. He has never come across anybody even remotely like her again. She is such a gem. He wonders how she would have become after growing up and if she would have changed too. Of course, she would not have, he thinks to himself.

@Blue It reflects How much he feel INCOMPLETE without her...😳 Liked how u compared Kabir's State to dat of a Snail without Shell👏👏👏 It indirectly said How Kabira is INCOMPLETE without his Nishu😳👏

The song selection was Excellent again..👏👏👏

Kabir ka Song ki taraf attract hona, Uski feelings while hearing the voice, His intusion, all were superbly penned down👏👏👏

He starts to feel a sudden unusual magnetic pull towards the voice. He feels as if the voice is seeking him - and only him. His life and death and their respective meanings, are only held by the real answer to this torturous game of hide and seek. His heart slowly but steadily catches the rhythm of the song.

The contagious intensity of her voice starts coloring his heart, blood and soul. It begins to drink all his pains away from him that he has carried in his heart for so long. He now feels that he was never separated from his soul-mate - she was always with him. He has to just never let her go. He relives their beautiful innocent memories of childhood, how they met at the colony park, became neighbors-cum-friends, each other's support system, guiding star... And before their innocence could understand their feelings for each other, they became each other's life.

@RED It says us the truth dat NiBir r destined to be Soul Partners by God😳

Part (c):😳

I loved the way Kabira was admiring His Nishu☺️ U explained it so welll👏👏👏 The detailed explanation U gave of Kabir's thoughts while watching Nishu made me Foresee the whole scenario b4 my PC👏 U wrote it so beautifully Lissy👍🏼

The song was adding more beauty to the scene(I was playing it in BG while reading & I was feeling Mesmerised)

When Kabir sang the rest of the song with her & Those lyrics were just too PERFECT 4 his feelings to open up...👏

After dat When Nishu open her eyes & Admiring Kabir was another worthful scenario to watch...👏 Again I foresee it bcz of ur writing👍🏼 Nishu Blushed ☺️& I smiled...😃

His intense voice bewitches her, the pain evident in it. She begins to feel an intuitive connection but still she couldn't trust her eyes.

@Blue See again its proven dat they r made 4 Eachother..😳 She cud sense the pain in his voice😳 & feels a connection tooo😳

Part (d):😳

NiBir eyelock + Nishu ki Blashhh + Kabir's SOrry for interruption + Nishu's "JOJO" all were soo Overwhelming to read👏

@PINK The Best Part 13 years of waiting finally came to an END😛

Nisha holds his hand and gives a soulful gaze to him.

Jojo!' she whispers.

Kabir's heart skips a beat. Her gaze tells him a million unsaid words. He becomes so overwhelmed with emotions that he can't decide whether to laugh or to cry! He keeps looking with unmoving eyes at the girl who is as beautiful as thirteen years earlier, inside and outside.

Not able to contain herself anymore, Nisha gets up. Her arms spontaneously wrap around his neck and happy tears roll down her eyes.

I am so proud of you Kabir... I missed you so much...'

I missed you too Nisha... so much...' says Kabir hugging her with all his emotional outbursts, ... But you did not even see me once before you left...'

Aren't you happy to see me now?'

So Nishu ne Kabira ke interview sunke aayi thi usse milne...😉😆🤣

Kabir's K panti which I was missing frm start🤣 I m glad dat U included a small part of it at the end👏👏👏

Their Teasing🤣🤣🤣 Jojo & Tickling🤣🤣🤣

Their Chase..😳 Their Fall...😳 Peacefully siiting together...😳

@Brown Wat A Beautiful End...👏

A wave strikes Nisha's hand and something hard touches her hand. She gives her warmest smile to the rarest of the rare sight.

Kabir, I have to show you something...'

Nisha shows him the gift of the sea - an oyster shell that contained two perfectly round shiny white pearls. Kabir has no words to describe this beautiful evening. He says gazing at his precious gem (a.k.a. Nisha).

BEAUTIFUL OS Lissy...!!!!!!👏

Thanks 4 PM😳

Sorry 4 Superlate comments😳

Thank U 4 ur patience in waiting 4 my comments🤗😳

Do Write More🤗 Q ki DMM😳😆🤣

PS:
I wrote my whole comment for the second time😡 as MF crashed🤢 & My Comment got deleted🤔

@Lissy I always COPY PASTE my comments jab se maine comment karna shuru kia par uss din mere Copy paste se pehle MF crashed😆🤣🤣🤣 Shyayad MF was J of ME🤣

Then RG means RETURN GIFT🤣🤣🤣

Main jo bhi apne comments par likhthi hu vo mere mind ka reflection hai while reading updates.. so dnt think dat I m flattering U it was gud so I said.. & Agar acha na lage toh I wud have told U in My comments...😉 as Main kabhi jhoot nahi bolthi😆🤣 toh mere comments kabhi jhoot nahi bolenge..😊 SYS??? 🤣🤣🤣 In short Saru only do TAREEF wen It deserves it.. Otherwise CRITICISM sabse pehle mujhse hi milegi...🤣🤣🤣

aur kuch dbt toh nahi hai nah??😆🤣

Originally posted by: SaruSenan

@Lissy I always COPY PASTE my comments jab se maine comment karna shuru kia par uss din mere Copy paste se pehle MF crashed🤣 Shyayad MF was J of ME🤣

Then RG means RETURN GIFT🤣🤣🤣

Main jo bhi apne comments par likhthi hu vo mere mind ka reflection hai while reading updates.. so dnt think dat I m flattering U it was gud so I said.. & Agar acha na lage toh I wud have told U in My comments...😉 as Main kabhi jhoot nahi bolthi😆🤣 toh mere comments kabhi jhoot nahi bolenge..😊 SYS??? 🤣🤣🤣 In short Saru only do TAREEF wen It deserves it.. Otherwise CRITICISM sabse pehle mujhse hi milegi...🤣🤣🤣

aur kuch dbt toh nahi hai nah??😆🤣

Wow yr superb os
Thanks for pm
Do write more