NiBir OS: Treasure (Complete..:)...) - Page 3

Originally posted by: Shanaya1526

Awsom cery amezing md thanks for pm lilysisy

Originally posted by: itznimi003

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Lily lily lily...wat an awsm writer u are😊😊
Starting of yr os was superb perfect❤️
Title of yr os was cherry on the top👏
loved d convo of childish kabir n vasu
loved d way nibir think about each other wen dey remember each other in sea shore
d words n der feelings u describe was speechless...
song selection was awsm
nibir reunion was so emotional n touching i hv loss of words to explain it...
loved kness of kabir
loved der nokjhok
at last sea gave dem d treasure which jojo was searching since childhood
do write more...
thnx for pm

Originally posted by: Sarthak0302

Superb..loved it totally...

Originally posted by: Amina...

It was so beautiful Lily ... awesome ... mindblowing ... fantastic...👏👏👏
And the song ... its my favourite ... 😛
And you have written the story very nicely ... really loved it ...😳👏😳
Thanks for the pm 😊😃😊

Originally posted by: Anshi1509

Awesome updates lily
Loved all the parts

Originally posted by: Terra04

Lily!!!! U r back with a bang! ⭐️
This os was different and very beautiful 👏
U should write more!

Originally posted by: naina.majik

wat an awsm writer u are
superb

perfect❤️
convo of childish kabir n vasu 👏
d words n der feelings u describe was speechless...
song selection was awsm
nibir reunion was so emotional n touching i hv loss of words to explain it...
it was a dreamy update 👏 👏

Originally posted by: janvi0513

Awesome

Originally posted by: star.angel

Lovely😳

Loved nibir👏💔

Originally posted by: maniwood

Just perfect... So beautiful

Awesome... Missed your works lily