NIBIR FF : DAASTAAN (Part 7 updated on page no 27)(discontinue) - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
nishu and suarv ki shadi😲
nishu fainted...tho piche janam main she married to Ragav yaani iss janam ka KK
intresing prologue sonu

waitng 4 the first part
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
thanks for the beautiful replies cousins
net is sloe thats why just one post
n saru i read ur comment😃
sorry for not liking some posts...actually my like button in not working...dont know why😕
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: SONAL30

thanks for the beautiful replies cousins

net is sloe thats why just one post
n saru i read ur comment😃
sorry for not liking some posts...actually my like button in not working...dont know why😕



Hehehehehe Sonsi...😉😆🤣 Kaisa laga Comment???😆🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34

DAASTAAN

Part 1

Scene 1

(at gangwal mansion...everybody is waiting outside)

Laxmii-ramesh doctor ko kitna time lagega

Ramesh-laxmii m also tensed na...but doctor is also doing his job

Badi maa-saurav beta tum kisi raghu ko jaantey ho kya

Saurav-nhi badi maa hamarey kisi frd ka naam raghu nhi hai...i don't know whats happening

AJ-shaadi bhi poori nhi hui...ab agla muhurat 8 mahiney baad hai

DJ-its ok Ananya...the most important thing is nisha's health

(doctor came outside)

Saurav-doc...is everything alright

Doctor-yeah Mr Jain...actually she was so excited that's why she fainted

Laxmi-kuch aur toh nhi hai na

Doctor-its okk Mrs gangwal it happens...she will be allright...just give her some time...n u can meet her

(they all entered)

Nisha-m sorry maa...pta nhi kya ho gya tha...kuch dhundhli si yaadein some flashbacks...i don't know what was that

Saurav-its okk nishu...tum bas rest karo...okk

AJ-haan beta u should take rest

(Next Day...at Breakfast Table)

Nishaa-good mrng maa papa n badi maa

Ramesh-good mrng nishu

Badi maa-nishu aaj tu na mere saath guruji ke paas chalna...unhein na tumhari kundali dikhani hai

Ramesh-maa plzz...not again...i mean theses babas n all r fake

Badi maaa-arey hum koi jaadu tona thode hi na kara rhey hain hum bas kundli dikhayenge

Nisha-its okk papa...badi maa m coming

Scene 2

(delhi...at Sharma house)

Dadi-matlab tu na chahve hai Kabir ko

Dolly-nahi dadi...i don't love him...he is just a frd

Dadi-kyun na karey hai pyaar...chora accha hai padha likha hai...kamata bhi accha hai aur uski maa ko tu pasand bhi hai

Dolly-Vasu aunty bohot cute hain but unka beta sadu hai...i don't know dadi but woh na khoya rehta hai kuch toh hai jo woh dundhna chahta hai

Dadi-toh thare ko key pareshani hai

Dolly-dadai i want someone who is caring n fun loving...aur kabir ka pta nhi usey kon sambhaal payegi

Scene 3

(at Kumar Mansion)

Aman-bhai but whats the problem

Vasu-haan tujhe kya problem hai

Kabir-mom plzzz...dolly is a nice girl but i don't love her...we r frds that's it

Arjun-but kabir

Kabir-no dad plzzz...no more discussion i have to go

Aman-where

Kabir-Jaigarh

Vasu-ab jaigarh kyun

Arjun-koi property ka issue hai

Kabir-mujhe do din baad jana hai tab tak no more disturbance

Aman-hum aapko disturb kartey hain

Kabir-yep

Scene 4

(at guruji's place)

Badi maa(BM) n nisha-pranaam guruji(GJ)

GJ-pranaam...nisha beta aapka vivaah nhi ho paya...hamein dukh hai

BM-wohi puchna hai...yeh na iski kundli hai...dekhiye zara

(GJ was studing the kundli...n he smiled)

BM-kya hua sab thik hai na

GJ-Nisha beta aapka vivaah isliye nhi hua kyunki ladka galat tha

Nisha-ji...GJ i know saurav...he is a nice guy

GJ-toh humne kab kaha woh bura hai...bas tumharey liye nhi bna hai...tumharey liye shayad bhagwaan ne kisi aur ko chuna hai

Nisha-matlab

GJ-punar janam mein vishwash karti ho

Nisha-u mean reincarnation

GJ-haan reincarnation rebirth or punar janam

Nisha-no...i mean its so unreal

GJ-i know beta...we r in 21st centuary so its hard to believe but aisa hota hai...infact tumhare saath hua hai

Nisha-no no no no u must be kidding but lemme tell u bohot kharab joke tha

GJ-nisha beta m serious...okk tell me do u love saurav

Nisha-he is my frd

GJ-par mera sawaal pyar se related tha

Nisha-i don't know may be

GJ-or may be not

BM-guruji isney na jab yeh 10th mein thi ek sketching competition mein ek temple ka sketch banaya tha...main dikhati hoon aapko

(BM showed him the sketch)

Nisha-badi maa that was my imagination

BM-tum ruko

GJ-yeh imagination nhi hai...yeh mandir Rajasthan mein kahin hai...humne khud dekha hai bas abhi yaad nhi a rha...hann yeh toh jaigarh ka mandir hai...bohot purana hai

Nisha-no how can it be possible n jaigarh...woh kahaan hai

GJ-India...tumhe apney sawalon ke jawaab dhundhne hindustaan jaana hoga...kyunki saurav tumhara humsafar nhi ban sakta kyunki koi hai jo maut se bhi ladkar tumhare liye lauta hai aur tum par sirf uska haq hai

Scene 5

(AT gangwal mansion)

Ramesh-this is stupid...have u gone mad...India punarjanam...this all is stupid...tu kabhi india nhi gayi...woh jagah bohot alag hai nishu

Nisha-so what papa...i want to go

Laxmi-ramesh is right u r not going anywhere

Laxmi-but maa

Laxmi-go to ur room right now

(after half n hour...in nisha's room)

Saurav-hey nishu

Nisha-saurav...listen mujhe india jana hai

Saurav-what...but why

(nisha narrated him the whole convo)

Saurav-koi aur bna hai tumhare liya

Nisha-i don't know...but i want to know...par woh flashbacks wo naam...Raghu...i want to know...i mean who is this raghu...plzz help me sirf tum mujhe India ki flight mein bitha sakte ho

Saurav-u know we r frds best frds toh main tumhari help karunga...ab jo bhi hoga dekha jayega

Nisha-yayy(n she hugged him)

(After 4 hours...at Airport)

Saurav-dekho maine aunty se kaha hai ki hum bahar time spend karne aye hain...n haan here is ur tickets n visa...yeh mera card hai incase uncle tumhara card block kara dein toh

Nisha-thanks saurav

Saurav-now go

(nisha hugged him again)

Nisha-bye saurav...u r my true frd

saurav-call me okk

nisha-sure

Scene-6

(at jaigarh palace)

(a man in his mid 70's was watching a pic...pic of her only daughter...priyamvada)

Maharaj Vikramaditya Singh Rathore(VK)-priya aapko gayye hue poorey 25 baras honey waaley hain par aaj bhi humein aisa kyun lagta hai ki aap hain

(a 30 year old girl entered)

Suhani-bade papa aap phir yehi photo dekh rahein hain

VK-kya karein hum aaj bhi hamara man nhi manta ki priya nhi hain

(someone entered)

Arjun Singh Shekhawat(AS)-par woh ja chuki hain...woh bhi 25 saal pehle

VK-hum jaantey hai Arjun par hum kitne majboor hain...aap toh unke best frd they na phir aap bhi unhein nhi bacha paaye

AS-aaj bhi humein is baat ka afsoos hai ki hum Priya aur unke Pati Raghu ko nhi bachaa paaye

Shravan singh Shekhawat(SS)(arjun's brother)-uncle aapko nhi lagta ki aap bohot jada soch rahein hain hamara matlab hai woh kabhi nhi lautne waali

AS-shravan

SS-sahi toh keh rahe hain...vaise bhi sahi hua matlab unhone shaadi bhi toh ek non rajput se ki thi...sare samaaj mein humein beijjat kiya tha toh i guess she deserved that

VK-yehi toh rona hai...ki vo apni shaadi ke do mahiney baad hi...woh kuch waqt bhi nhi bita paayi...kaash raghu aur priya ko thoda aur waqt milta...unki zindagi khushaal hoti

SS-ab toh yeh hone se rha...she is gone...ab nhi takraane waaley wo dono...hain jo nhi is duniya mein

Scene 7

(at delhi Airport)

(nisha was in hurry so she was running...while running suddenly she bumped into someone n they both falls on the ground)

Nisha-what the hell...my phone

Kabir-ur fault

(precap-nibir nok jhok)

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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
res me First🤣

UNRES🤣

Superb Sonsi...👏👏👏👏

I loved the FIrst Chap..👏👏👏 Poora ka Poora "ARJUN" + "KUMKUM" + "NiBir" Feels de rahi thi🤗

Voh 10th std ka sketch gave me ARJUN FEELS...☺️🤣

Voh Guruji + Punarjanam gave me KUMKUM feels...😆🤣

NiBir ke ek doosare ke liye baichaini (Esp Kabir jo khoya rehtha hai) gave me NiBir Feels☺️🤣

Toh Nishu was Priya & Kabir was her hubby Raghu in FB😆🤣

Y do I feel Inn donom ki maut MURDER hai aur voh SJ ne kia hai????😉😆🤣 May be I m Guessing too much hai nah Sonsi???😆🤣🤣🤣

So... NiBir takara gayee... aur Nok-Jhok Shuru..😉🤣

Waiting 4 More

Do Write More🤗 Q ki DMM😳😆🤣
Edited by SaruSenan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
res...maasi ke baad bhanji...😉😆
unres

awesome update sonu...👏
nice concept ...reincarnation...
so sweet of saurav to help nisha...frnd ho to aisi...
priya and raghu...
nibir first meeting and precap mein nok jhoks😳
update soon...thanx for pm...😳
Edited by angelanju - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
res😊i read till scene 4😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Res
Unres
Amazing update...and superb concept...
So priya and raghu now nisha and kabir...
There is a murder mystery... Excited for it...
Waiting for Nibir nok jhoks to start...
Edited by Sarthak0302 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Awesome update sonu mausi...loved it..!!
Reincarnation...I am in love with your new ff..!!
So beautifully written...hhaaayeee..!!
N dadi ka language...to thaare ko key pareshaani hain ...he he..!!
N dadi 2 ...kitni achchi memory hain..!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Awsome w8ing for next part but guys what means res plz can u tell me

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