nibir ff Humdard ch 13 pg 61 (12/5) - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: mishrialways


Thank u saru
happy to know ki kabir ka attitude best friends wala hi laga
nhi kabir ka kisi se koi chakkar nhi hai and kabir ko realization kaise hota hai usske liye u have to wait



Thank God Riti 😆uska chakkar kisi aur ke sath nahi hai *sighs*🤣🤣🤣

Ya I m waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: angelanju

the update was so cute...😳

loved the nibir part soo much...
tut oh janti hai na ki mujhe tere b'day ke sibae kisi aur ka yaad hi nhi raheta toh as usual mein kriti ke b'day ke baare mein bhul gaya tha (Nisha blushed) awww...☺️
nisha brought gift for kabir...and kabir pretending to know nothing...😉
yeh sab log saurav ke picche kyun pade hain???🤣

thank u
yeh mera khudka likha dialogue hai glad u liked it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: SaruSenan



Thank God Riti 😆uska chakkar kisi aur ke sath nahi hai *sighs*🤣🤣🤣

Ya I m waiting


Yaar I am also a big nibir fan toh unhe alag kaise Kar sakti hun
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: ...Shibu...

NiBir😳
Awesome yaar👏
update soon😊

thank u banji
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: nitika4

Nice update

Ramesh didn't scold nisha to choose kabir even he supported her.he is the best father👍🏼
Nibir meeting
Waiting for the next part
Thanks for pm

thank u so much for liking it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
VERY NICE LUVED IT👏👏CONTINUE SOON N PLS DO BUDDY ME😃😃😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77

A/N i would like to mention that the party is held at kriti's parents farm house which is quite axway frm the main town

Chapter 3

Sourav was shocked and everyone else was laughing on him. He knew who was done it and shouted "kabir " in ager and ran behind him with a big piece of cake. He threw the cake in kabir's direction but he ditched the throw and it landed straight on dolly's face. Umesh who was standing next to dolly started laughing like mad people . dolly was very irritated and smashed a piece of cake on umesh face and soon the entire gang was fighting and smashing cake on each other expect kabir who was standing a little far away and laughing and Nisha who was smiling seeing her gang like this. Kabir is laughing to his heart's fullest when suddenly someone smashes a cake into his face. Kabir shouted "Nisha" everybody stopped hearing thia and turned in the direction of the voice only to find kabir's face totally covered by face, his surprised + irritated expression and Nisha standing in front of him and laughing loudly. Sourav comes to them and gives a high five to Nisha "well done Nisha iss ke sath toh aisa hi hona chahiye" kabir made a whatever wala expression and turned towards Nisha "kya tha yeh hain"

Nisha - sab ke faces pe cake laga hai aur jiske karan yeh sab suru hua usshi ka chare itna blank aur suna suna rahe toh accha nhi lag ta na

Kabir -accha par sabke faces pe cake kaha laga hai

Nisha -nhi yaar koi nhi bacha dekh sab ke faces pe cake hai dolly di, sourav, kriti umesh baiya sab ke faces par (while Nisha was speaking kabir walked towards the table and brought a peice of cake along with him and stood at his original position )

Kabir- Nisha tu kisiko bhul gyi

Nisha - turning towards him kisko????

Kabir- (smashes the cake on her face) khudko duffer

Nisha - kabir tu...( Nisha was cut off in the middle by kabir)

Kabir- Nisha yaar gussa mat ho maine toh ye hiss liye kiya taki hamare grp ki unity na tute

Nisha looked at him in confusion do did the others

Kabir - aree yaar hum sabke faces pe cake aur Nisha ke nhi toh woh hamare grp se alag ho jagegi na

Everybody laughed including Nisha too

Dolly- guys chalo na iss cake wale make ke sath kuch selfie chiche

Evyerone together - sure

They clicked some pics and then went to freshen up inside the house to freshen up. Nisha was the last one to freshen up. She came out of the room and found kabir standing outside the room leaning against the wall waiting for her.

Nisha - chale

Kabir- hain chal. tune kitna time lagaya mujhe laga kit u bahut pretty ban ke aaegi par tut oh ab bhi wohi bandariya hi lag rhi hai

Nisha - tu kitna k hai kabir ( faking anger)

Kabir - aur tu mere k se kitni j hai

Both laughed and stared walking towards the garden

Kabir- pata hai Nisha mein k nhi hu

Nisha looked at him with suspicious eyes

Kabir - nhi sach mein k nhi hu mein woh toh bas jab tu j hoti hai mujhe bahut achhi lagti hai iss liye mujhe k hona padta hai kyunki tut oh j tab hi hoti hai jab mein k hota hun

Nisha - ( with a unbelievable wala look) tu kabhi nhi sudre gaya na

Kabir - koi chance nhi

They reach the garden and see everyone on the dance floor. Kabir gets excited and asks Nisha also to dance

Nisha - nhi mein nhi tu ja

Kabir - Nisha chal na yaar

Nisha - kabir meine mana kiya na plz

Kabir faces to Nisha and picks her in his arms . Nisha is shocked

Nisha - kabir mujhe niche utar sab dekh hare hain

Kabir - toh phele maan na chahiye than a

Kabir takes Nisha to the dance floor and join their grp and enjoy dancing

Finally everyone sits all tired. Nisha excuses herself and go to call sakku to pick her as its already 12:30 and its not safe. Sakku doesn't pick up her phone.she gets irritated

Kriti comes to ask her how see will be going home she replies that sukku will be coming. Kriti hugs her and thanks her for coming. Kriti, saurav, dolly ,umesh bid bye to Nisha and kabir and go to their homes in kriti's car. Kabir and Nisha are alone in the venue kabir is too tired so decides to sit for sometime he notices that Nisha is tensed and even shouting on somebody on phone. Kabir walks upto her and asks

Kabir- oye kya hua tu itni tension mein kyun hai

Nisha - yaar kabir dekhna sukku ne bola tha ki woh mujhe pick karega aura bb bol raha hai kin hi aa sakta . ab mein ghar kaise jaungi aur yeh phele nhi bata sakta tha pphir mein kriti ke sath hi chali jati na . ab mein kya karu ( and started biting her nails)

Kabir- pata hai Nisha mujhe aaj meri ek aur khubu pata chali

Nisha (confused) kya

Kabir - yeh ki mein invisible hu

Nisha - what ( hell confused) aur tu yeh kya bakwas kiye jar aha hai ek toh mein itni tension mein hu aur meri tension ka solution nikal ne ki bajae tu yeh bakwas kiye jaa raha hai(angrily)

Kabir- arre oh madam teri problem ka solution toh tere samne hi khada hai phir aur ka solution du

Nisha ( confused) matlab

Kabir - matlab yeh ki mein yaha chalk e nhi aaya aur nhi hi mera yaha puri raat rukhne ka irrada hai toh tu mere sath meri car mein chal sakti hai ...i ll drop u

Nisha- (happily) oh mein toh bhul hi gyi thi kit ere pass bhi toh car hai

Kabir- hmm tabhi toh kaha ki mein invisible hun

Nisha- actually yaar mujhe bahut tension h rhi thi ki ...

Kabir cutsoff her in the middle

Kabir- Nisha tu tension mat le dadaji se mein srry bol dunga thik hai ...ab chal chalet hain.

Nisha- arre ek min rukh( she goes to the table she was sitting earlier)

Kabir - abb kya hua

Nisha - yeh( handing kabir the gift)

Kabir - par yeh kis liye

Nisha- tera birthday present hai

Kabir -par mera birthday toh pichle mahine tha

Nisha - haan aur tab tu mere pass nhi tha par iss ka matlab yeh toh nhi na ki mein tere liye kuch bhi na lau

Kabir- (happily) thnks Nisha u r the best

Nisha - i know ( with attitude) ab chale

Kabir - hain

They go towads the car . kabir opens the passenger door for Nisha and himself sits in the driving seat and start the car. They each a t point and Nisha aks kabir to tk right but kabir says they will go left as that is a shortcut and they will reach home early. Nisha protects as the road is not safe at night. Kabir aks her to relax and trust him. Nisha nods. Kabir takes left but despite kabir giving her assureance she is still scared that smething bad is going to happen...

hope you like it
do comment everythig welcomed juttas chappals tomatoes
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
Cake fight 🤣
Kabir's dilaouge.. "" Tujhe J karne ke liye main K pan karta hun "
The ending 😲
Aisa kya hoga ?😲😕
Cont soon Ritika 🤗
Edited by Niya_789 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
I luv the cake smashing game... kabira ka bday yaad aa gya... aage kya hone wala h... m waiting
Edited by mansi_as18 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
res
unres
ritssy...ritssy...kya update tha yr...
cake ki baarish sab k upar waah waah...
kabir bhut uchak rha tha...nishu ne usko cake lgaya...but nishu bhul gyi ki kabir usse bda wala k h...🤣🤣
unity wala...dialog was total fadu...
kabir washroom k bahr uska wait krra tha...awww
bandaria wala dialog was 🤣🤣
kabir ne nisha...ko apni arms me uthaya...awww der dance...
i love sukku uski wajah se nibir akele tym spend krenge...
kabir ka dialog mast tha...invisible wala...🤣🤣
but ab kya bura hone wala h plz unfold yr mystry fast m too scared
Edited by itznimi003 - 10 years ago

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