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Posted: 10 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Shanaya1526


sorry i m really sorry i dont know how to pm link soo but next update i vl surly pm u dont worry😃

AREEE...ITS OKK...
no problem at all
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
Nice start
update soon
pm mil sakta hai
plz pretty plz
ritika
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: SaruSenan

Hello Shanaya🤗
Welcome To K Khandaan 😉😆🤣( As We r talking 4 first time so I welcomed U🤣)
Me Saru😳😆
Can I cal U Shanz??😉(If U dont mind🤣)

Nw Abt Ur FF👏👏👏
Loved the Title & First Part.. Full of NiBir Love☺️😆🤣

Blushing Nisha😲 Frm Start to end..🤣

I was ROFL ng wen I read she was Pink, Red & Blue🤣

Yaar Shanz Maine Blushing main Red & Pink suna hai BLUE pehli baar sun rahi hu🤣🤣🤣
Usually Blue toh tab aathe hai Jab zorr se pitthe hai nah???🤣

So Sorry dr.. But Seriously dat line just Cracked me..🤣

K Kabir Naughty Naughty🤣
Bechara ne Gift Main KYA KYA KYA expect kiya tha 🤣
Par Gift bhi aisa mila ki Mu se "AAA" nikal gayi 🤣

Superb Update with NiBir Nok-jhoks with K ness👏👏👏

Loved it..👍🏼& I m still ROFL ng🤣

Do write More🤗 Q Ki DMM (Dil Maange More)🤣

Do PM me whenevr U update..😳


Ok ...I vl pm u nd yes u really love to hear shanz no problem nd thanks to welcome me in K kaandan 🤗
u m glad u guys like it soo much ...Thanks alot
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24

guys thanks alot so soo much wala pyaar it really means alot for me mujhe jaisi bakwas writer ko itna sara pyaar aur ...nd thanx to suro yaar mujhe K khaandan ka part bana ne ke liye it really means alot...sab ne mujhe 😭roola he diya ...ok ok ok ab main in batoon main tym waste nahi karongi aur yeh raha aap sab ka part 2
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KABIR WAS GETTING READY WITH WHITE T-SHIRT AND IT COVERD WITH BLACK JACKET HE WAS LOOKING STUNNING LIKE HE WAS COLLAGE BOY GOING FOR PARTY
WITH HER GIRL FRIEND AND HE WAS SEEING TO THE MIRROR AND HE WAS SETTING FLUFFY HAIR AND AT THE SAME TIME A GOURGEUS GIRLS WAS SEEING INTO HIS MIRROR REFLACTION KABIRS MOUTH WAS OPEND HE WAS SEEING NISHA HIS EYES WERE TOTTALY IN LOVE HE TURNED AND MOVE MORE CLOUSER TO HER NISHA WAS TOTTALY RED AND PINK SHE WAS VERY SHY AND NERVOUS SHE WERE SUCH TYPE OF DRESS FIRST TIME IN HER LIFE AS WE KNOW THAT SHE IS TOTALLY TOMBOY KABIR CUM MORE CLOUSER TO HER NISHA HAERT BEAT WAS INCREASING SHE WAS NOW TOTALLY MIXED IN COLOUR LOVE OF KABIR

KABIR: Haye koi tho rok lo mujhe (CUMING MORE CLOSER)

NISHA: kabir tu bhi na ...*BLUSHING

KABIR: OOOHOO AB TU BATA DE KI MAIN KAISE CONTROL KAROON EK THO TU PEHELE SAY HE ITNI HOT THI AUR AB ISE DRESS MAIN PATAKA LAGRAHI HAI *EVIL SMILE

NISHA WAS LEAVEING FROM THERE AND KABIR HOLD HER HAND AND TWIRLED AROUND TO HIS ARMS

KABIR: AB KAHAAN JANE KA PLAN HAI

NISHA WAS FEELING SOO SAFE AND SECURED IN KABIR ARMS ...KABIR TAKE HOLD NISHAS PINK CHECKS AND THEY WERE ABOUT TO KISS EACH OTHER AT THE SAME TIME DOOR BELL RANG KABIR WAS NOW VERY UPSET BUT NISHA WAS FELING VERY SHY AND RAN AWAY

KABIR: AREE YAAR KOUN AAGAYA *IRRETED TONE

NISHA OPEN THE DOOR IT WAS NON ATHIOR R VANER SENA THE BIG SAPPORT OF NISHA COUSINS

DOLLY: OO HELLOS NISHA HUM NE TUM LOGO KO DISTURB NAHI KIYA NA...AUR YEH DRESS WO BHI TU THE TOMBOY NISHA AAJ GIRLEE AND ALLS YAAR KABIR KE PYAAR NE TO TUJHE PAGAL KAR DIYA WO BHI KUCH DINO MAIN...*TEASING TONE

AMAN: AREE DOLLY DI WO THO PEHELE SAY HE PAGAL THI BAS REAQTION ABHI DHEAK NE LO MIL RAHE HAI * TEASING TONE

KABIR CUM OUT OF THERE ROOM AND SEE COUSINS TEASING NISHA HE WAS TALKING TO HIM SELF

KABIR: ABEE YAAR YEH LOG HUMARA PICHA KAB CHODENGE AAJ HOGAI MERI ROMANTIC PARTY JO AB FAMAILY MAIN COVERT HONE WALI HAI

SAKKU SEE KABIR STADING IN LIVING ROOM

SUKKU: AREE OO KABIR HERO BAN KE KHAAN JAA RAHE HOO

KABIR COM IN FRONT OF THE DOOR

KABIR ; AREE...WO...MAIN...HUM...PARTY...DISCO...UFF KUCH NAHI BASS ISE HE

NISHA: AREE TUM LOG ITNE READY HOKAR KHAAN JAA RAHE HOO?

UMESH : AGAR YEH BAAT HUM TUM SAY PUCHE THO *TEASING TONE

NIBIR WAS BLUSHING THEY BOTH AT SAME TIME
HUM BASS PARTY MAIN JAA RAHE THE

COUSINS STARTED LUGHING NIBIR WAS SEEING EACH OTHER

SAURAV:OOO DICO PARTY MAIN WOW NISHA TUJHE PARTIES NAHI PASAND NA AUR AB ITNI READY HOKAR JAA RAHI HAI * TEAASING TONE

NISHA: ABE OYE SAURAV KE BACHHE TERI SAARI GIRL FRIEND KI POL KHUL DOONGI AGAR AGE KUCH BOLA NA

SAURAV WAS SCREAD AND KEEP SHUT HIS MOUTH
DOLLY WAS SEEING HER ANGRELY

AMAN: AARE KABIR TUM DONO JAHAAN JA RAHE HOO HUM WAHAAN ARAEE HAI JO CLUB TUM DONO JANE WALE HO USKE BAJU MAIN JO RESTURANT HAI WAHAN MERI BHEN KI BDAY PARTY HAI AUR USNE HUM SAB KO BOLAYA HAI PAR HUM SAB NE SUCHA KI TUM LOGO NA BULAYE PAR HUMARI GADI KARAB HOGAI AUR ISLIYE TUMHARA GHAR PASS MAIN THA THO ISLIYE KABIR KI GADI KI KEY LENE AAGAYE

DOLLY : AREE CHALO JALDI AAJ GHAR PE 2 BAJE SAY PHELE ANA HAI *HURRIED TONE

KABIR ; EK KAM KARO TUM LOG MERI CAR LEKAR JAAO MAIN AUR NISHA SIRF SUKETU KI BIKE MAIN ATE HAI

NISHA WAS SHOCKE AND IMBARESSED

SUKETU : AREEE SOO SWEET OF U YEH LE MERE GADI KI KEY AUR HAAN DYAAN SAY CHALANA MERI JAAN HAI YEH

AMAN: HAYE O RABBA KITNE CUTE HAI YEH LOG ITNA ACCHA IDEA HAI TIME SPEND KARNE KA

DOLLY; HAA THEY R SOO CUTES

UMESH : ABEY CHALO YAAR LATE HO RAHA HAI HUME BHI AUR IN LOGO KO BHI

NIBIR WAS BLUSHING TOTTALY IN PINK

KABIR ; bye (GUYS KABIR HOLD THEM KEYS )

COUSINS : BYEE ...enjoy *TEASING TONE (THEY LEFT)

KABIR;aacha tho ab hum chale

NISHA : hmm

THEY BOTH KEFT AND MORE TO PARKING KABIR RAMOVE KEYS FROM POKET AND TAKE A SEAT HOLD THE HANDLE

KABIR: Chal yaaar

NISHA : Aby yaar rok

KABIR ; JALDI

NISHA TAKE A SAPPORT OF KABIRS SHOLDER TAKE A SEAT

KABIR ; nyc idea apne pati dev ko chune ka...vase main tujhe pehele he bata deta hoon main bhout speed say bike chaala ta hoon thoo...*attetue

NISHA: AACHA YEH TIPICAL FORMULE KISI AUR KO BATAYOO AB CHAL VARNA MAIN GHAR JAGAU SOTI HOON

KABIR : JAISI TERI MARZI


TBC...
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Edited by Shanaya1526 - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
#25
hiii shanaya...
congo fr becoming a writer 😆
and I found ittt...
I know u r new but plzzz index maintain karna... pm me wen u update... not for link but atleat I will get to know its updated 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
nibir looking stunning 😳
cousins kabaab me haddi 😡
aawesm update dear
excited for next part
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786

hiii shanaya...
congo fr becoming a writer 😆
and I found ittt...
I know u r new but plzzz index maintain karna... pm me wen u update... not for link but atleat I will get to know its updated 😆


THANX RE I VL MAINTAIN IT SURE...W8ING FOR U RNWE STORY RE JALDI AAA ...ND I VL PM U DEAR DONT WORRY 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: itznimi003

nibir looking stunning 😳
cousins kabaab me haddi 😡
aawesm update dear
excited for next part
update soon


THANKS DEAR 😳
Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Read both the parts...
firstly aj se tera naya naam "CAPSLOCK QUEEN" 🤣 🤣
and second thing is...
I wanna tell u best thing in ur story is TYPING MISTAKES 🤣 🤣 I sooo loved it!!! enjoyed... aise hi galatiyan karti raho... padhne me double maza as rha hai!!! 🤣 lol
OK jokes apart... such cute story yar... 😳
my k kabiraaa ... I love this kabir soo much... ❤️ not that emotional fool , sacrifice king Jo bich me bna diye the CV ne show me usko... boring that was...
you know wat mere ko nibir ko dance karane kuch zyada hi interest h isliye meri story me ek mauka nahi chodti 😆
par lagta h tujhe NISHA KO BLUSH KARWANE ME KUCH ZYADA HI INTEREST HAI;!!! 🤣 🤣
aur kitna blush karwaogi?? 😆 blush kar kara k hi mar dalegi usko 🤣
both updates were cute... continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome blossom shanaya... I luved it totally. ... bike ride aehae... mar jawan...

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