Nibir TS- Crazy Confession Last part in page 3 (updated) - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ty...so much buddies...as u know m a newbie... i hv limited posts...so i cant thnx...u all individually...i hope u understand n dis is my last post of today...will update next part soon 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Awesome story 😆 😆 😆
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Loved naughty Nisha..
please continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Welcome to forum 🤗
Awesome 👏👏👏
Continue soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
K nisha i loved it yaar😉
Kabiraa tu tho gaya🤣
Nisha aur saurav ki shadi 😆 Dhakkan belived too🤣
nice part nimi
update soon n do PM me when u update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
so guyz...here is d nxt part...

Last Part (in my story RL dont know dat kabir is in jaipur)

Nibir on d way to Gangwaal House...
Nisha text saurav to reach GH

Kabir- Nishu... Singham hmare sath aisa kaise kr sakta h...yr
Nisha-(in angry tone) kabir its Dadaji
Kabir- watever...but ab chahe kuch b ho jaaye...mai tujhe ab khud se dur nhi hone dunga...mai dadaji ko mana k hi rahunga...tu tentn mat le...nishu aur us saurav ki to mai band bja dunga 😡
Nisha-(in mind band to ab tera bajne wala h kabire bs ghar pahuchne ki der h 😉 ) hmm
Nibir reached GH
Kabir enters GH wid loud voice Ma papa dadu kaha h aap sab bahar aaiye...
all were shocked hearing kabir's voice but feeling happy dat kabir is back
all GF gathered in hall widin few min. wid mixed emotions of happy n shock
RL ki khushi ka to jaise koi thikhana hi nhi tha...
Ramesh- (happily)Kabir beta...
Kabir - bas papa(in angry wid sad tone)...
he directly walk towards dadaji
Kabir- Dadu aap aisa kaise kr sakte h mere aur nishu k sath...mai manta hu hmne contract marriage kr k bhut badi galti ki...par us galti ki aap hme itni badi saza kaise de sakte h...
while nisha was standing der laughing inside
Dadu in mind maine indono ko aisi kaunsi saza dedi...
den kabir walk towards RL
kabir-maa papa aap to sab jante the na fir aapne aisa kaise hone dia
ramesh-(confused) ye kya keh rhe ho beta
cousins were standing expressionless dey dont understand wat is going on...
dadaji-kabir tum kis saza ki baat kr rhe ho
before kabir could speak saurav reached GH
saurav-nishu mujhe yha itni jaldi kyu bulaya
and den he sees kabir he runs towards kabir happily saying kabir tu aa gya n he just hug him while kabir jerked him away angrily...all become shocked seeing dis
saurav- kabir...ye kya krra h tu
kabir-aur jo tune kiya...wo kya tha...tu khud ko mera aur nishu ka dost kehta h na aur tune jo hmare sath kia wo to koi apne dushman k sath bhi nhi krta...
Saurav(monologue)-maine aisa kya kr dia yr...
Nisha(monologue)-yeh duffer mujhe marwaayega aaj...
saurav-kabir...(before he could complete his sentence nisha cut him off)
nisha- saurav maine kabir ko sab kuch bta dia
saurav giving questioning look to nisha while kabir staring angrily at saurav
saurav - sab kuch??????
Nisha-ha saurav kabir ye janta h ki jab wo mujhe chhod k chla gya to dadaji ne meri shadi tere se fix kar di...
saurav cousins and all GF including rukmavati- WHAT???????
kabir -(sadly) ha mujhe nishu ne sab bta dia...
nisha gave wicked smile to all of dem...and all GF understood wat blunder she is doing
Dadaji(monologue)-ye ladki kabhi nhi sudhregi...
RL and cousins(monologue)- bechara kabir
saurav(monologue)-ye nishu ki bacchi ko hmesha atom bomb mujhi par girana hota h...kya
kabir- dadu plz...mujhe maaf kr dijiye aap mujhe koi b saza de dijiye par plzzz nisha ko mujhse door mat kijiye...
dadaji -kabir...baat ye h ki... but sukku cut him off
sukku-(dramatically)kabir tera kya bharosa tu fir se hmari nishu ko chhod k chala gya to
kabir -sukku aisi baat nhi h...
saurav- to kaisi baat h kabir...tu to nishu ko rote hue chhod k chala gya tha...tab tune uske baare me nhi socha...dadaji mai aapse wada krta hu mai nishu ko kbhi chhod k nhi jaungi uske aankho me kbhi aansu nhi aane dunga
saurav to nisha(dramatically)-nishu mai hmesha tujhe khush rakhunga
while nisha in mind ye saurav kitni overacting krta h yr...
kabir -(angrily)saurav wat d hell r u saying
while nishu n all GF enjoying d drama
den kabir goes towards nisha and he hold her hand
kabir- Nishu...Tu janti h na tera kabira kabhi tujhe pareshan nhi dekh sakta kabhi teri aankho me aansu nhi dekh sakta tujhe galti se b kbhi hurt nhi kr sakta...par aaj anjane me hi shi maine tujhe bhut hurt kia h...itna ki mai khud ko kbhi maaf nhi krpaaunga...mai to sirf teri khushi chahta tha...nishu...mujhe lga ki tu aaj b viraj se pyaar krti h aur mai teri khushiyo k bich aa rhaa hu...isliye maine na chahte hue b khud ko tujhse dur kr dia...tu sach kehti h mai bhut bada bevkuf hu gadha hu...jo mai teri aankho me apne liye pyaar nhi dekh paaya...tere pyaar ko samajh nhi paaya...aur jab
samajh aaya to bhut der ho gyi (he smiles sadly)...man to kr raha h ki tujhe yha se bhaga kr kahi dur lejaau itni dur jaha se hme koi alag na kar sake par ab mai tujhe aur teri family ko aur hurt nhi kr sakta meri wajah se sab ko kitna kuch sehna pada shayad tujhse dur rehna teri yaado me tadapna hi meri saza h nishu...mai tujhse bhut bhut bhut pyaar krta hu...i will love uh...till myclast breath...mere saanso me meri dhadkano me bas tera hi naam h i love uh...nishu i love uh verry much
nisha- (emotionally)I luv uh too kabir mai b tujhse bhut pyaar krti hu itna pyaar ki tu soch b nhi sakta
kabir-janta hu nishu(he smiles sadly)...hmesha khush rehna apne kabira k liye and he gives her hand to saurav painfully and said
kabir tu saurav- meri nisha ko hmesha khush rakhna
Saurav-kabir yeh kya keh ra h tu...tera sir dard tujhe hi mubarak ho mujhe baksh de mere bhai...
kabir hell shocked...
den nisha saurav n whole GF burst out laughing
saurav to kabir-avi b nhi samjha duffer is nishu ki bachhi ne tere pyaar ka pura panchnama kr dia mere dost...
kabir shockingly looks towards nisha
Nisha- smiling mischieviously tune kya socha tha tu mujhe itna rulayega aur mai tujhe aise hi chhod dungi and she winks
kabir-wifey?????
nisha-yes hubby...
dadaji n dadiji came towards nibir
dadaji while giving nishas hand to kabir said warningly kabir i hope ki ab tum koi bevkufi nhi kroge
kabir-(smilingly)dont worry dadu meri wajah se ab kisi ko koi prob. nhi hogi
dadaji- kabir aaya to mari nishu k chehre ki ronak wapis aagyi
nisha smiles
jwalu-kabir jiju...finally apne aaj nishu bro ko propose kr hi dia
sukku-par bechare ne sapne me b nhi socha tha ki aaj iska aisa haal hoga
Ramesh-bas kro tum sab bhut pareshan kr lia mere bete ko
laxmi-nishu apne pati k sath koi aisa krta h
nisha-laxmi relax me...is duffer ko sabak sikhana jaruri tha...
while kabir angrily towards nisha n nisha gave him a winning smile
kabir-wifey tu j k sath sath ab k b ho gyi...
nisha- kya kru hubby sari k panti tujhi se to sikhi h maine
kabir-ruk tujhe abhi btata hu mai
Nisha runs n kabir runs behind her n whole family were still laughing by seeing der tom n jerry fight...
nisha went her room and so kabir
kabir-(looking in nishas eyes n holding her hand) nishu mujhe laga tha ki aaj maine tujhe fir se kho dia promise me nishu ki tu aisa mazak kbhi nhi kregi...
nisha-kabir...
kabir-ssshhh(emotinally) promise me ki tu kabhi nhi royegi..
nisha-(emotionally)i promise kabir...
kabir-(naughtily)waise wifey chahe tu kitni b k hoja par tu apne kabire ke k ko kbhi complex nhi de sakti n he smirks
nisha-acchhaa...n she stamped his foot
n in very next sec. she found herself in kabirs arms...

The End...

so guyzzz howz iz it??????



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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was awesome
Just loved k gangwals 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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super duper se uper... mere k n j are fabulous yaar... but saurav cracked me up yaar... " atom bomb bechare m hi girta h hmesha
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Bechra Kabir🤣🤣
Nishu rockzz Kabiraa shockzz😆
loved it yaar
saurav cousins and all GF including rukmavati- WHAT???????🤣 yeh line dekhe muje nibir ka manal trip planning ki yaad aagayi Rukmavathi ko tum bhul gayi🤣
GH also enjyng 🤣 Nishu ke sath sath sab K ban gaya😆😆
leela nahi tho saurav dng over actng😆
Kabiraas proposal👍🏼 n giving nishus hand to saurv🤣
best is saurav's dialog .tera sir dard tujhe hi mubarak ho mujhe baksh de mere bhai.😆 👏
duffer kabiraa🤣


do write more nimi😉
Edited by ammu4u - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Awesome update nimi
Loved nisha's plan and all gangwal supporting her
Saurav saying tera sar dard tujhe hi Mubarak mujhe baksh de was like 🤣 🤣

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