Nibir TS- Crazy Confession Last part in page 3 (updated)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guyzz!!!!!! 😃 dis is my first TS(2 shots) ...as m missing nibir badly 😭 so it cant stop myself from writing...yr criticizm are most welcm 😎
I my starting my story wid d track wen nisha told rajbir dat dey are brothers & viraj apologize to nibir..n rajbir hug eachother...After breaking der hug...

Kabir- Nisha i m so sorry plz mujhe maaf kar de...maine tujhe bhut hurt kia, mai tujhe chhod kr nhi jana chahta tha nisha...

Nisha- fir kyu gaya mujhe chhod k..bol na..ek baar b tune mere bare me nhi socha ki tere jaane k baad mera kya hoga (wid teary eyes grabbing kabir's collar)

Kabir- Nisha mujhe laga ki tu aaj b bade bhaiya se pyaar karti hai aur mai tum dono k bich me nhi aana chahta tha...mere liye is duniya me agar sabse jyada kuch important h to wo h teri khushi aur teri khushi k liye tera kabira kuch b kr sakta h nisha...

while viraj was standing der n listening der conversation
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Nisha hugs kabir
still remaining in hug kabir said to nisha
Kabir- Nisha ab mai aa gya hu na ab mai sab thk kar dunga tu tentn mat le and he wipe her tears

Nisha- while breaking der hug Ab bhut der ho gyi kabir ab kuch nhi ho sakta..tune bhut der kar di aane me

kabir and viraj were shocked...
Viraj- miss nisha aisa kya hogya abi thodi der pehle to jab aap aai thi...
nisha cuts off viraj

Nisha- kabir dadaji ne meri marriage sourav k sath fix kr di...

Rajbir- WHAT?????

Nisha- kabir jab tu chala gya tha to mera ro ro k bura haal ho gya tha tab saurav ne hi mujhe sambhala tha aur dadaji hmare contract marriage k wajah se humdono se already bhut naaraz the...to unhone mujhse puchhe bina sourav se meri shadi fix kr di n mujhe shaadi krne k liye strictly order de dia

Viraj in mind miss Nisha & Saurav wat d hell is going on...

Kabir- nisha but saurav to dolly ko pyaar krta h na????

Nisha- ha but aaj dolly di ne sab k samne saurav ko thappad maara to saurav ne b gusse me haa kr dia

Kabir- nishu tu tentn mat le mai dadaji se baat karta hu chal yha se
n kabir moves out frm viraj's PH
while viraj was still standing wid shocking expression in his face...asking wid nisha through his eyes " wat d hell is going on"
n in reply nisha just gave him a mischievious smile and viraj understood wat d blunder is going on...



so guyz how iz it...leave yr precious reply

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alisha17 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
Lovely start to ur ts
Can't wait for next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#3
Welcome to forum yaar 🤗
Awesome k nisha 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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You are new to the forum...and u already wrote a ts...!!!you are seriously awesome yaar...!!!👏
Welcome to the forum..!!
Awesome update...!!!
Do continue soon..!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice start.
new shaadi fix...so dadaji style😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#6
Welcome to the forum..🤗
Awoseme start. .k nisha😉
Continue soon. ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#7
Its short nd sweet...loved k nisha 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nisha playing a prank on kabir and woh bhi aise
bechara kabir
Update soon
ritika
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Posted: 10 years ago
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welcome buddy... kya dhansu entry h yaar... dhamakedaar ts k sath vo bhi k nisha...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice beginning...loved nisha's mischief...keep writing

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